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PostSubject: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 26 Aug 2012, 6:29 pm



Raimu

THE INFO.

Name: Raimu
Nickname:
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Spoiler:

Forehead Protector: He wears a black forehead protector with the Leaf village's symbol on his waist, over the white cloth that is wrapped around his waist.
Personality:
Spoiler:
Clan:
Nindō: "I just want to fight stronger opponents!"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Hi No Kuni
Affiliation: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Taijutsu | Weaponry
Main: Close-Range
Sub: Mid-Range
Elemental Affinities: Lightning | Wind
Combat Style:
Raimu is naturally an aggressive fighter. He prefers to attack his enemies head on as opposed to using sneak or attacks or strategies. He uses many different styles of fighting creating his own unpredictable style in an attempt to catch his opponents off guard. In addition to being unpredictable, not being very skilled in the arts of ninjutsu or genjutsu, he specializes in taijutsu. Because of this, he trained his body to be strong and quick, and this allows him to overwhelm his enemies with both his speed as well as his power.

When in combat, Raimu has a tendency to hold back. However, if a situation calls for it, he will go all out, and this will be obvious. When he thinks a situation calls for it, he removes his weights from his limbs, making himself feel lighter, and allowing him to move faster, but at the same time, lightening his hits because the weight of the weights is no longer there. The second level of his going all out is when he surrounds his limbs in lightening which increases the strength of his attacks, as well as the piercing power of his attacks.

Special Characteristics:

Name: Improved Speed
Rank: C
Type: Physical Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
-Childhood
Since birth, Raimu had been a rather energetic and happy child. For most of the beginning of his life, he spent his time training with his parents. While he didn't have much natural talents, his parents managed to train him to be quite strong. However, they kept him from getting into serious fights with people besides them. While training him, they tried to teach him that unnecessary fighting wasn't good at all. However, being kept from fighting people for such a long time, only motivated him to want to fight more and more. At the age of 8, when he was enrolled in the academy, he came up with a plan to satisfy his hunger for battle. Being the foolish boy he was, he decided that he would challenge and defeat every single student at the academy on his first day. Of course, he did not complete his goal, he wasn't even close to defeating 10% of the academy's students. Before he reached his third opponent, a teacher intervened and incapacitated him. His parents were informed and from that day on, he began receiving harsh punishment for senseless fighting despite their teaching. Every time he showed signs of wanting to fight, his parent would hang him upside down from a tree and hit him 100 times with with a stick.

-Academy
Because he did not want to be punished, Raimu suppressed his urge to fight. He attended the academy avoiding contact with most of the students. But still, he had quite a few friends. His grades were pretty good, and so was his basic skills. However, he did not show much skill in the arts of ninjutsu or genjutsu. It was to be expected, after all, his parents had only trained his body, and did not teach him any jutsu. They taught him two things only, how to punch, and how to kick. After that, he was on his own in terms of learning techniques. To make up for where he lacked, he was spend his spare time training in the forest. He would practice new techniques on the trees and boulders around him and ended up hurting his self a lot. Often times, he came home with bruised and bloodied knuckles and sprained ankles, but even still, he never gave up. Even when he was injured, he continued to train and his parents allowed it, for they felt pushing himself past his limits was the only way he could succeed, and eventually, he became even more skilled in the art of taijutsu. He was so skilled that rather than holding him back for his inadequacies, he was promoted at the age 10 for excellent grades and skill in hand to hand combat.

-Genin
Raimu was excited to become a genin, he thought of it as an opportunity to get into fights and not get into trouble. However, he was unable to go on any missions because he didn't have a squad. Every time he was placed on a squad, he would end up annoying his allies and many times fighting, so he remained in the village idle, unable to take any missions, having nothing to do but train. Because of this, his father decided to take him outside of the village. They spent two years there, training as hard as each of them could. Raimu also learned to survive on his own for an extended period of time. In that short time, Raimu learned a lot, including how to control his urge to fight(for the most part). When they returned, they discovered Raimu's mother had died. She had a heart attack, and her body was preserved until the two returned. After the funeral of his mother, he decided that he would make her proud. The next squad he was placed on, he would try his hardest not to blow it. Even though his mom died, he remained the happy child he always was, because it was what she would want.

Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.
Academy
Spoiler:

Taijutsu
Spoiler:

Custom Taijutsu
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Weapons
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Kit
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim:N/A
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Chris
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 05 Sep 2012, 10:18 am

Good stuff. I would almost approve you from the get-go, which is impressive.

Here's what needs to be changed:
- Origin to Hi no Kuni (Fire Country, unless your character was born somewhere else)

Quote :
EQUIPMENT AND WEAPONRY:

Weaponry is one of the most diverse specialties besides Ninjutsu. It has a great amount of potential and various possibilities that are available to those who choose to specialize in it. There are of course, a few simple rules one must consider when choosing this specialty:

- Weaponry users on US are combined with Kenjutsu, though you can still have 'Kenjutsu'. With the current system you choose two types of weapons and you then specialize in these types of weaponry. One is your main and the other your sub. Your main can be used up to your own rank, your sub may be used up to 2 ranks below your rank, always being at least D Rank. Other than your two chosen, you're treated as a normal ninja.

You may pick from the following categories:

Long Range: Shuriken, Bows, Bombs, Launchers, etc.
Mid Range: Chains, Fans, Sound-based Weapons, Nodachi, etc.
Close Range: Bats, Blades, Fists, Axes, Whips, etc.

- Please pick two categories, a main and sub, from Long, Mid and Close range.
- Could you please expand (one more paragraph ^_^) your Combat Style
- Also, please separate custom Taijutsu from the ones you found in the encyclopedia - Taijutsu and Custom Taijutsu categories.
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySat 08 Sep 2012, 4:31 pm

Done, I think. I tried to put more into my combat style, but too many distractions.
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 09 Sep 2012, 1:43 pm

You're allowed two elements.

Please read the Weaponry quote more carefully. You specialise in the actual ranges e.g. Main: Short, Sub: Long

As a weaponry user, you may want to take a peek at the weapons currently available to you.
http://www.ultimateshinobi.org/f50-universal-weapons

I'm not too keen on 'Charge'. I will let one of my colleagues take a look at it and tell you what they think.
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 09 Sep 2012, 2:23 pm

I didn't really plan to have many elemental jutsu, because I don't have ninjutsu as a specialty, and I didn't really plan to start off with any weapons but changed. As for the charge thing, I tried looking for an equivalent jutsu, but couldn't find one.
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 09 Sep 2012, 9:16 pm

Since Chris doesn't wanna do his job let's do this. Raimu[Konoha Genin] 287405

Make Iron finger coated in lightning chakra just cause you can't pierce normally like that without some enhancement. I think you got it from one piece or some other shounen manga. Either way nice jutsu.

Finally put N/a in all the face claim fields if you have no picture for your face claim.

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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 09 Sep 2012, 9:22 pm

I got it from Tenjou Tenge, and I made the changes.
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 09 Sep 2012, 9:54 pm

Swaglicious my little amigo. Tenjou Tenge was really good. I personally enjoyed it but some of it was like oh god power levels everywhere.

Approval 1/2
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 09 Sep 2012, 10:18 pm

Lol, yeah, I enjoyed it too, Just wasn't what I expected at first. And thanks for 1st approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Raimu[Konoha Genin] Raimu[Konoha Genin] EmptySun 09 Sep 2012, 10:21 pm

Approved 2/2
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Archived due to User Inactivity
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