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Saito, Seiji

THE INFO.

Name: Saito, Seiji
Nickname: N/A
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Head/Face: Seiji has a chronically unkempt mane of white hair that reaches to the area around the nape of his neck. The hair feathers outward in a multitude of different angles and directions, giving his hair a sort of shaggy appearance. His face is free of most blemishes besides the occasional pimple or cut that might occur in a bout of training. His face has an androgynous set of facial features that would look good on a man or woman, he could easily pass off as either if he truly wanted to. His eyes are a a light shade of brown, and average in shape.

Body: Though he isn’t very large, his body is lean and well balanced when it comes to muscular physique though if he wore tight cloths you probably wouldn’t see his muscles through them. His body is built for stamina, not for large amounts of raw strength. His body tends to be quite flexible when it needs to be, allowing him to perform acrobatics if need be. Due to his young age, his chest isn’t very broad and he may seem quite small to someone a few inches taller than him. He tends to wear a plain white shirt with a blue collar. If it is cold where he is going he will wear a heavy white jacket with a fluffed hood, covered with a few symbols of the leaf village, one being most visible on his left shoulder.

Lower Body: Seiji tends to wear slightly baggy jeans that allow a wide range of movement while also looking somewhat fashionable. The pants are blue in color, similar to his shirt collar. He wears black sandals that allow for easy movement when in combat.

Forehead Protector: He keeps it tied on his forehead.
Personality:

Casual Life: Being a child in the eyes of many, he likes to spend his free time wandering about konohagakure and enjoying the sites. He tends to be gentlemen like in his pursuit for personal enjoyment and will help people with miniscule tasks if they seem to be having trouble. He tends to be quite ecstatic when doing something good, as it pleases him greatly to know that he can be of help to someone. When in a casual setting he really feels as if there is nothing in the world that can stop his enjoyment of life. He is almost always optimistic about situations and will offer words of encouragement if need be. If someone offers him services that are above his expectations, he may reward them with extra money or something that they want.

Professional Life: He is extremely well mannered and will rigidly conform to formalities of a given situation. He addresses all those with higher rank then him by their formal titles, though if told not to he will comply with their demands. Anyone who shows him that they have no care for acting professional will be looked down upon by him. He is fiercely loyal to those he is commanded by and will do as they say, but if the request is too atypical then he may add in his own opinion on the matter.

Mission: When on a mission, Seiji will play by the rules and will try not to stray from them as long as he can. If completing a mission means leaving an ally to die then so be it, he will follow the mission to a tee. He tends to approach missions in unorthodox ways and has no contempt for those he is told are enemies. If he is to assassinate a person then he will do so ruthlessly. If he accidently kills an innocent or he finds out the target he has slain was incorrect he will feel great moral obligations and to sedate them he may ask for some sort of punishment for his incompetence.

Problem Solving: Seiji has a knack for solving issues that can tend to become troublesome He can help put aside the differences of quarreling parties in order to keep order, though he doesn’t exactly like seeing people fight for petty reasons and he feels that it is his obligation to help people who need it.

Awkward: Being the kind of child that would show you his odd collection of rocks before actually getting to know you, Seiji didn’t have too many friends as a child. This lack of human interaction causes him to have issues talking to large amounts of people, or anyone he is attracted to. He has a small stutter in his speech when things like this happen and it can cause those around him to look down at his issues. If he is speaking to an old friend he can normally keep up a conversation fairly well, but if any sort of embarrassment befalls him then he will continue to stutter. When speaking of things that appeal to his interests he will almost never stutter but he tends to increase the speed of his speaking and may become slightly difficult to understand.

Humble: Seiji really doesn’t like to look down on others because he knows how it feels. He doesn’t boast about his abilities to others and tends to praise others even though they may not have done as well as they could. He tries to get everyone he meets to feel better about themselves in some way. He is quite good at making people feel good about themselves and will do whatever he can to ensure one is confident in their abilities.

Clan: N/A
Nindō: All that glitters is not gold

THE NINJA.

Origin: Land of Iron
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Fuuinjutsu, Eijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Doton, Suiton
Combat Style: Seiji is not one to jump into the fray of combat without a very good reason to do so. Being that his role in combat is mostly to support his team, he will not put himself in the line of fire, or deliberately attempt an act of faux heroism. Though he will put himself at risk should he need to reach an injured member of his squad, in order to heal any injuries. That being said, he will still offer suppressing fire and attempt to coax an enemy into a trap that he has set in advance, or made on the fly. Though he is weak at close combat situations, he is more likely to back out of a fight and come back in when the enemy is least expecting it.
Special Characteristics:
Perception:
Stealth:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Birth: Seiji was born to a small family of samurai in the Land of Iron. His father was an average ranking samurai under the command of a kind Shogun. His mother had no formal training in being a samurai but knew of the techniques and training regime’s. At an early age he began learning to fight with weapons. Though he was also taught finer arts, such as pottery, but more importantly he was taught calligraphy. Even though he was quite young he was already quite good at calligraphy and began to excel at it more and more as he got older. By the time he was 5 he was almost a master at calligraphy. His ability to fight with weapons increased at a steady rate but not as much as his ability to write. Many people were amazed with his mastery of a brush being that he was so young.

Childhood: As time went on Seiji was being trained on how to be a samurai by his father. He was taught how to block projectiles with a blade and how to use it with ease. He really didn’t enjoy using a sword but he wanted to make his father happy. At around the age of 8 he and his mother got word that his father had been killed in battle and they were to evacuate as quickly as possible, due to a possible attack. As they were packing their things the attack had begun and their house was set ablaze by flaming arrows. The searing heat scorched the back of his mother causing her to fall to the ground in pain. She yelled for Seiji to run away but he was awestruck at what was going on. Men closed in on the home and for the first time, he saw a ninja. The ninja’s had been sent on a mission to destroy this village as it had been hiding rogue ninja. Being only a child, he was not killed, his mother was not so lucky. They took Seiji from the home and brought him to Konoha, his eyes glazed with horror the whole way.

Ninja Training: When he arrived in Konoha he was given foster parents and a place to live. These foster parents were horrible to him and beat him profusely when he did anything wrong or disrespected them. He quickly learned to respect authority and call people by formal names. He was enrolled in the Ninja Academy after showing his knack for calligraphy. As he learned the basics in the academy he also discovered books that talked about an art of drawing called Fuuinjutsu. In the books it taught him about how one could channel chakra into certain symbols in order to have certain effects. To pass his Academy Graduation Exam he showed the teachers his ability to seal a weak jutsu inside a seal and then use the seal a second time in order to use the jutsu from before. He was passed and then made a genin.

Abuse: As his time being a genin went on, so did the abuse he got from his parents. One day, while his parents were beating him he grabbed a kunai and murdered his parent’s ruthlessly. He fell asleep and awoke to ninja inside his home the next morning. Being only 11 they didn’t accuse him of anything and he was set free and allowed to live on his own. Living on his own allowed him to mature quicker than most children his age and left him somewhat awkward when it came to social situations as he was somewhat recluse like. Though as time progressed he went on missions and helped his village, though he harbored a small amount of hate for the village because they had taken him from his home and put him the hands of such horrible people.

Roleplay Sample: A pity of pities! A plague of posterity! Oh how the woes of combat shown forth like the brightness that was the sun, the creeping darkness that was death coming up to claim those who’s attempts to survive were all but null and void. The fact of the matter was, though the fishwomen was attempting to save her new comrades, she failed to realize that the large edge of the dock that had fallen into the water was still there, now floating in the waters in the direction of which she moved, and as a result of the negligence, was the cause of her demise. The large wooden pole and wooden corner weighed quite a hefty sum, enough for one moving at her speed to have their skull caved in upon impact with the large hunk of wood, causing instant black out and soon after, death. This moment of accidental peril set the playing field for the destruction of two more foes, as the fish woman was unable to save them due to her untimely demise. The two devil fruit users would sink like stones in the ocean waters, touching the bottom in mere moments, thus the movement of the sand would not happen at all. Oddly enough, there happened to be a cliff, far off into the distance, about thirty miles away to be exact and upon that cliff stood an odd bee creature, though Noh would be unable to see her, she would be unable to see him, even with the scope upon her weapon. The distance was much too far for anyone to see, even with the aid of machinery and tomfoolery. Nonetheless, that fool was not of much matter to Noh at this point in time, as right before the man had jumped upon the beach, Noh had decided to jump upon the stone walkway that was right next to their location, standing about two feet away from where the stone met the sand, which lead into the city. The stone walkway was about five feet high, and quite sturdy. Where Noh once stood, a doppelganger took form at that place, as the man began his odd monologue, most likely trying to be righteous and all, though that was of no importance to Noh, as this man was hostile. Oddly enough the man would slash downwards, but so far and with such force, that the blade cleaved straight through his own right foot. The way this was possible, was as a six foot, one inch tall man, his arms would easily be more than two feet long, and in combination with his sword, the length of the blade would easily reach down to his feet, allowing for the aforementioned occurrence to occur. The shockwave of wind that was shot forth from the sword happen to fly towards Noh and using his superior speed, and the fact that the shockwave was fired vertically, Noh would side step to his right for about a meter and a half in an almost instantaneous movement. The fact that the man was now strafing diagonally his left towards where Noh currently stood, Noh still happened to have the hilt of his sword grasped within his hand, and with an extremely fast cut at a diagonal angle, aiming from the cyborg’s right shoulder to his left hip, attempt to cut the man’s body in half, along with his head. This cut fired forth a wind blade at the same angle as the slash, creating a blade that was three meters in length, fired at an arc. The angle at which Noh stood and the current movement towards Noh would make it almost impossible for the man to dodge with his average speed, not to mention the fact that the man’s blade was now lodged within his foot as he did this strafing motion. This ‘battle’ was shaping up to be quite a one sided affair.


THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu
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Medical Jutsu
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Fuuinjutsu
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Name: Senbon Kit
Rank: C
Quantity: 1
Contents: 72 Senbon [24], 8 Exploding Notes [8]
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Character Claim: N/A
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PostSubject: Re: Saito, Seiji [Konoha, Genin] Saito, Seiji [Konoha, Genin] EmptySat 16 Feb 2013, 7:30 am

Things to look at:
  • Your "Affiliation" is the village, not another land. The origin is correct, though. Easy fix.
  • Your combat style could be longer, although I dont think that it's vital. Just know that another mod may want that to be the case; if you are bored and have time, you could elaborate on it - talking about your character's weaknesses in combat are always something that is looked well upon.
  • As a genin at creation, you're allowed to have 15 starting jutsu, and you dont have that or even near that. So, although it is not required, it is recommended that you fill out that jutsu max.
  • Chozou no Jutsu (Storage Technique): this jutsu is included in your academy jutsu as a free academy jutsu already. Please remove it from fuuinjutsu. Other then that, it looks fine Smile
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You cannot start with custom kits. Please use one of the already made kits, thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Saito, Seiji [Konoha, Genin] Saito, Seiji [Konoha, Genin] EmptySat 16 Feb 2013, 7:52 am

I think that everything is fine here. The face claim may need a bit of clarification and specification, seeing as there is almost no info given there. But other then that, it's fine from what I've seen. I'll give the first approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Saito, Seiji [Konoha, Genin] Saito, Seiji [Konoha, Genin] EmptySun 17 Feb 2013, 5:46 pm

So,


  • Your appearance could use a tiny bit more. You don't mention his eyes at all, and I am a big fan of eyes x) so give a good description of them.

  • In your combat style, please add his strongest point and weakest point.



[Also, I would like to point out that you -can- start out with a custom kit. It's a rule that was recently changed.]
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(2/2) approved.

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