musou_shinteki_ginou
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| Subject: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Tue 14 Aug 2012, 9:35 am | |
| Kaguya, Shikaku.THE INFO. Name:Shikaku Kaguya Nickname:N/A Age:14 Gender:Male Appearance:He has an above average muscular build not too strong not to scrawny he is balanced because he was taught to spread his training evenly, hes about 5ft 6in which some people consider short for his age but he manages, he weighs about 150 pounds which like all Kaguyas is a little on the heavy side because the density of his bones though it doesn't affect his speed in the slightest, he has long white hair, his eyes are green in color, he has no facial hair, and his jaw is broad and strong looking, he has no scars and is not missing anything.
His eyes are a Deep green that seem to give him the appearance of someone wise beyond their years; although, you probably would know otherwise after hanging out with him for more than a few minutes.
He usually wears a blue and grey outfit Variation on the standard kaguya uniform and has bandages all over his torso he also sports a white loose fitted long sleeved shirt, sweatpants and normal ninja sandals. He often wears bandages around his hands because he takes Taijutsu training very seriously. This is his normal outfit but can appear with other clothes some times.
Although he has no scars of any visual he does have a scar on his lower left leg to make sure that no one ever sees his shameful training accident he also has long, flowing, ghostly white hair
Forehead Protector:he wears his headband wrapped around the upper half of his left arm Personality: He is a peaceful and laid back sort of person, when he does end up fighting he looks at it as kind of annoying, dispite this he will put his all into the fight, he is usually seen lounging about or working out because even though he is laid back he likes to stay in top physical shape.
He likes to hang out with his friends and he trains for fights just in case he has to face a strong opponent because he believes that he hasn't been alive long enough to die yet, he finds those who constantly search for fights distasteful for the reason that they aren't like his way of life, he respects anybody as long as they are as well.
Keeping his promise true he lives with only happiness in his life though other emotions are still present they are quite hard to bring up.
When those emotions do surface he is in a whirlwind of emotions bringing up all the emotions he really never forgot about when his parents died, He could be crying on the battle field or angry on a sunny day but those emotions can be quelled if he is reminded of his promise to his father.
Shikaku isn't the kindest person who you can find but also isn't the worst. He doesn't make a big deal about some silly mistake so he is quite forgiving. During his free time he often reads something to become smarter or trains. He doesn't like to waste his time and he doesn't like to waste other people's time. Most of Shikau's day to day life consists of taking care of his foster brothers and sisters which makes him a very caring person In a fight never will he attack first, and rarely will he ever attack someone that is neither a shinobi or is completely unguarded and unready. Its like a law that exists inside his mind, going against it means he has to punish himself.
Clan:Kaguya Nindō:"If you Didn't win at first at least your alive to hear me say this."
THE NINJA. Origin:Mizu No Kuni Affiliation:Konoha Specialties:Taijutsu, Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities:Main:Water Sub:Doton Combat Style:Free Flow. Shikaku Doesn't use a style purposely so he can always adapt to the situation which works if surrounded, but this style if you can call it that has a drop back it also hobbles him when it comes to fighting a master this style is useless. He focuses on trying to stay behind his opponent so they can not respond quickly as usual, he can began his series of dance attacks powerful but careless sturdy yet weak Shikaku purposely will leave an area exposed on its body for an opponent to attack, so he can attack a more vital spot on the body. he thinks it is important not to attack reflexively at open spots, and try to hammer away at their weak spots until they give in. Sihkaku thinks a shorter person with a shorter range can defeat a larger person by getting inside his range and attacking him close to his body.
Special Characteristics:
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Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
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Born on a bright sunny day Shikaku was born to two loving parents his life was a happy one his mom and dad doctors that helped the weak and weary they were stationed between nation as a rest place for the weary travelers. Shikaku helped when he could by the time he was five sorting thing in alphabetical order was how he learned his abc's after helping one particular familier women like some sort of inner radiant glow but by the look on his mom and dad's face she did not bring good news, Over the next few days Shikaku heard his mom and dad talking about how "They were Comming" and "We need to prepare Shikaku" It seemed important so shikaku was determined to do whatever it was to make his parents happy. 3 Years after Shikaku had all but forgotten about those late night conversations then he was reminded of them when he and his dad were training there Bloodline as his mom called it but his dad refered to it as mojo after finally getting the basics down he moved on to the next tier it was always called the dancing tier's, He finally found out why his father had moved so elegantly then his mom joined in and they did the same move together swirling in between each other using each other as stairs to climb higher strike higher he could feel the energy radiating from them "The Chakara" as it was apparently called then he began the dance tier he eventually mastered them when he turned 10. He was now an true kaguya ninja.
---- 2 years later 12:00 Midnight Loud banging noises erupted from the down stairs almost snapping him awake Shikaku threw himself down the stairs just to see 4 men attacking his parents he launched him self toward them already preparing to to the Camellia Dance, they eventually defeated the attackers but not before Shikaku had suffered a fatal blow using a life saving medical ninjutsu his father and mother combined their chakara to not only save him but to strengthen his kekei genkai. In her dying breath his mother explained that they were kaguya hunters rouge ninja from the mist village determined to kill all the surviving kaguya, His Father said under the floor board were the kaguya hidden techniques he said "Don't learn them yet just focus all your rage anger and hate and sorrow and longing for us to be alive, Use it to kill them but once you do leave with them let it die live only with happiness no regrets we've managed to kill all but 12 and four here tonight so you are left to kill 8 Be..Well My..Son." His father grabbed his mother's hand and in unison they exhaled releasing the last of their breath dying with each other in hand. For weeks he trained waiting for the day living emotionless the only thing he felt were the things he had promised to leave on the battle field so he could feel nothing and then at Midnight just as before, They came swords were no match for the bone blades he could sprout at will all the training had paid off he could summoned them at will using a shoulder bone or the long sword as he called it then out of nowhere he had summoned his hand blade which he never pulled out using it as a unexpected attack of some sort. Shikaku had only suffered minor injuries even though The hunters hated the kaguya thier hate didn't even come close to the pure rage Shikaku was feeling that day he truely was a killing machine like the kaguya's of legend after killing them he dumped the bodies into the house he used to call home and lit it ablaze realizing he could never still live here and not feel sad for his parents. After releasing all your pent up emotion who would've guessed Shikaku was exhausted he passed out under a tree and slept for who knows how long.
~~~~~ 1 year later He had been taken into a home by Ms. Valentine her hospitallity made him forget the horrible night he kept his promise and lived with only happiness in his heart he soon became the big brother to over 5 foster kids, but none had a Bloodline no his Mojo He smiled and went on to apply to be a ninja of Konoha, His home Mizu No Kuni that hated his clan was now the nation he could never protect. so he moved to konoha and bcame a protecter of the leaf
~~~~ A week Before his headband arrived
A dim dark evening Shikaku strolled along the walkway, As carefree as can be then he witnessed a sight like no other. A girl dropped a quarter naturally she picked it up blushing he lowered his hat to obstruct his own view after that his day resumed it's usual routine, Breakfast,Walk, Lunch,Sleep. He was at the lunch stage dry bread and hot soup, If only the people knew what Ms.Valentine secret "stuff" was he almost threw up as he thought of it.He resumed his walk wondering where he should sleep today though Ms. Valentine was nice enough to offer him a warm bed he preferred to sleep in the field out in the open not the best choice for a ninja to be, But those who knew him knew he was well enough to be a fitting ninja he finally decided to lay in a particularly out of place bale of hay. Thinking nothing of it he slid his straw hat down and and began to fade away to dreamland, The same dream as usual he was with an entire family like the ones in over packed borading houses but they all had his Mojo although others refer to it as a Bloodline Technique he prefered mojo. Then as his mom gave him his usual hug before going off to the ninja academy she squeezed tighter then usual really really tight like he couldn't breathe, Then he snapped awake there were ropes around him He looked around 4 people who looked like they were starved but their grip on the ropes were tight enough to keep down "SO you guys just got released from solitary confinement?" The tightness of the ropes increased "We Know that you know!" Shikaku Chuckled and responded "So im guessing that you know that i know that you know that i dont know what in the hell your talking about right?" This time when the ropes tightened it was enough to snatch the air from his gut "Stop joking around tell us the recipe!" Shikaku busted out laughing shocking the 4 attackers, "Thats what you want her secret recipe? Ok you let me go and not only will i tell you i'll make you some too deal?" The Attackers began drooling only nodding in response Ms. Valentine's soup is that widely known. After being released Shikaku held his word but made them wait untill after eating saying "You cant remember on an empty stomach." The attackers gobbled the soup down "Ok you wanted to know the secret right? Well it's miso soup pepper salt and 2 pints of bat blood that should be enough for about 6 people." No sooner then when the words bat blood left his mouth the attackers turned light blue and dived over the bushes the sounds of throwing up where all Shikaku heard in the distance, "Now then where was i... Ah yes." he pulled his hat over his eyes and this time when he dozed into dreamland he stayed sleep untill about breakfast time.
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Oh dear i can't wait to be rid of these unruly vines i would have broken my hip long ago if i didn't still have at least some of my ninja skills." Shikaku raised his eyebrows in awe he hadn't the mind to think of the old woman as anything but that amazingly the inside though smaller the the backyard had more vines under the chair around lamps couches and even the stove, Shikaku shook his head trying not to think would happen to this small wooden house if she attempted to set the vines afire he looked around wondering just how many freakin vines there were then he noticed two things that seemed extreme in the drab house the wooden rocking chair he had noticed before and another thing a red velvet couch. The old lady slid by him and flopped down in her chair "Ahh that's the stuff would you like some tea before you start on the inside? it would be cold of course since the stove is in the sorry state it's in." Shikaku refused but he frowned and said "Excuse me mam but i don't think you should sit there maybe the couch there are less vines over there." It was amazingly true the vines just seemed to almost stop as soon as they came within a few feet of the red velvet couch the lady silently shuffled across the room stepping carefully over vines to the couch which she as if on cue flopped on, Knowing the woman would be in constant danger of being hit by the spinal whip he decided on something smaller but just as effective Dance of the Camellia! he removed the shoulder bone from his right arm and felt his hand go numb in the moment of removal before regeneration "Ha! a Kaguuya eh? No wonder you finished the backyard so quickly i always liked your clan shame what fear will cause people to do..." Shikaku forced a small smile and continued with the fast cuts and gathering of the vines he figured since he couldn't turn these into mulch he could feed them to some plant eaters in the forest he was finished "At last sweet freedom!" the woman clapped her hands in a applause and said his payment would be waiting for him at the hokage's office she showed him out and shikaku went around the house to quickly dispose of his shoulder bone then shikaku almost fell over in shock all of the vines he had destroyed were back! "What the hell?.." shikaku walked around and felt the vines they were the real deal alright, Confused he walked up to the front door and knocked when the woman pulled back the door shikaku felt the urge to jump off a mountain "Son of a bitch!" the old woman gasped but shikaku ignored her all the vines here were back too shikaku saw no way out but to remove the vines again.
But oddly enough the vines grew back again "Holy hell in a handbasket! This doesn't make any sense!" he sat down angrily on the red velvet couch and thought then yawned he was exhausted and it was almost 7 Pm then a few minutes later he got up weakly he was drained for some odd reason the he looked at the ugly couch and realized it was right up against the wall as if it was attached to it then he came to a realization. Earlier having nothing better to he listen to the old lady's story the rocking chair never rocked in fact it never moved an inch both the chair had been given to her by the vine removal company the only company she had ever used, pleading with the universe he looked behind the couch and sure enough there were viens coming out of the back the chair had vines coming from under it aswell "Only one more test then." he made the tiger seal and summoned a clone using Clone Technique he summoned it right on top of the couch and to the shock of the old woman the clone instantly vanished, Shikaku turned to the old woman and sorrowfully said "It's the furniture there's a seal on it this chair and couch sucks chakra from whoever sits on them, Since your a former ninja it's easy to suck chakra from your body this chakra feeds the vines which is why they grow so strong and constantly." Shikaku then proceeded to throw the furniture into a fire he started once again he sliced the vines to shreds and sure enough they grew back no more the woman was happy yet sad "I'll make it through today on my bed but what about-". Before she could finish shikaku stopped her "I'll tell you what use the money you were going to pay me to go buy new furniture ok?" the old woman had tears in her eyes as she led him out and shikaku began his journey home
THE ARSENAL. Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Type: Supplementary Quantity: 1 Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Academy Techniques
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Kaguya Techniques
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Name: Tsubaki no Mai | Dance of the Camellia Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Tsubaki no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user performs this jutsu by modifying the humerus (upper arm bone) of either their right or left arm to create a short, hilt-less bone sword. Since they can increase and compress the density of their bones, they can make the sword harder than steel. The user then uses the sword to fight; their style uses quick cuts and thrusts to disable opponents quickly. They is extremely proficient with this sword and can, not only deflect shuriken, but also dispatch a large number of Shadow Clones with this technique. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru | Dance of the Clematis: Vine Rank: D Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user can modify and pull out their own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebrae are modified to make them stronger and sharper. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Karamatsu no Mai | Dance of the Larch Rank: C Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Karamatsu no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user uses this jutsu to create a mass of razor-sharp bone spikes all over their body. These spines appear to be branches off their pre-existing skeletal structure rather than completely new bones. The user is even able to grow these bones at an extremely rapid rate so they can stab an opponent even as they are growing. They can even use them to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes them basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to them, they would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body. Chakra Cost: 6CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Teshi Sendan | Drilling Finger Bullets Rank: C Type: Kekkei Genkai - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Clan: Kaguya Description: Teshi Sendani is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones regenerate after release, this technique can be used in succession. Chakra Cost: 5CP
Taijutsu
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Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Senpuu - Leaf Whirlwind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo". Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Dynamic • Action (Dainamikku • Akushon) Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user flips towards the opponent and attacks with a series of punches and kicks. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will spin his or her opponent away. This technique can certainly cause a head ache. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Konoha Raiken - Leaf Thunder Fist Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user will spin to gain momentum and then lay a powerful strike into his or her opponent via punch. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Konoha Shoufuu - Leaf Rising Wind Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: This jump uses the entire body as a spring by amassing power in the legs before kicking upwards. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky. Chakra Cost: 5
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Kiseki
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Tue 14 Aug 2012, 9:44 am | |
| The name is Kimimaro for the face claim.
You need to add more to personality and a bit more to appearance wouldn't hurt. |
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musou_shinteki_ginou
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Thu 16 Aug 2012, 2:50 am | |
| Bumpity Bump Bump |
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Kiseki
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Thu 16 Aug 2012, 4:15 am | |
| Everything is looking good. I'd run this through microsoft word or so to get a feel for any spelling and grammar mistakes you made as I see a few. I'd like about half a paragraph added to your roleplay sample and a bit more to personality. Maybe three or more sentences added to it. Other than that it looks good. |
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musou_shinteki_ginou
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Thu 16 Aug 2012, 5:44 am | |
| We cool? |
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Kiseki
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Fri 17 Aug 2012, 2:31 am | |
| Approval 1/2 |
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musou_shinteki_ginou
Age : 29 Posts : 36
| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Sat 18 Aug 2012, 4:32 am | |
| Bump-tastic |
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Kiseki
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Sat 18 Aug 2012, 6:22 am | |
| Do not bump your topics. Post here if it has been two days with no reply to one. Click |
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Cookie Monster
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Sun 19 Aug 2012, 10:48 pm | |
| There are only a couple of matters that need attending to in your application. Things like your grammar and punctuation slip up in some places, such as your Combat Style, these can be easily fixed by placing your application within a Word document or if you have a Gmail account, try placing it inside Google Documents. Both will be able to help you find any mistakes.
My only other comment is that your application would look a lot better if you had your techniques, kit and special characteristic bolded where needed. Which is basically Name, Rank, Element etc... These all require bolding and it's odd that you haven't managed to bold them the first time around since they should be code format. Have these fixed up please and I'll give my approval.
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MsMoney
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| Archived due to user's inactivity. |
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