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YORUMA HISAKO.

THE INFO.

Name: Yoruma, Hisako
Nickname: Neko – was called so by one of her clan superiors during her test day, he seldom used that nickname while talking with or about Hisako making it catch on among the fellow clan members.
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Appearance: Having been known for her pale white skin, Hisako changed a little over the past few years. Endless training outside made Hisako gain a little tan and complex and stressful life of ninja made the girl‘s slightly darker tone stay. This added a little more charm to the girl as her skin color no longer contrasts that of her hair which hasn‘t changed very much. Hisako‘s night dark hair has gained a little lighter shade over the time though still it‘s core didn‘t change. The young Yoruma‘s face has gained a little rounder form as well giving her a more feminine look and completely destroying her brat-like pointy chin from Hisako‘s childhood.

Hisako‘s trademark carribean blue eyes hasn‘t changed, given her experience on the field it gives people even more creep and her stare, if she is interested enough to look you in the eyes that is, is said to reach to your very core, a feature warming for the few friends the girl has and sending chilly sensations through the spines of those she dislikes. The girl‘s eyes had either diminished their sensational feel of cynism and sarcasm they previously had, leaving a more empty and not caring stare behind, once again a feature that easily instills fear to people facing Hisako. At times when Hisako is triggered or decides to let her emotions loose, her eyes may gain a happy or at times even maniacal look to them.

Hisako never really changed her prefered style of clothing but defined it a little more over her genin years, where before she used to throw anything she found on herself, these days she started finding several combinations of outfits that she feels best in. During her casual days or training she may simply wear a black sleeveless top or a T-shirt, during colder days she may put on one of her leather jackets on. When she is training, Hisako wears somewhat similar clothes but sometimes she can also throw on a boy T-shirt stating that it‘s more comfortable to train in. During more diplomatic or social cases, Hisako may wear something more formal, not being the expert in the field, Hisako has several blouses for the matter yet she rarely uses them.
During her days as genin Hisako oftenly wore belts of knives around her waist, thighs and shins. Having experienced some times where she needed those desperately yet didn‘t have any, Hisako started to always have at least some set of knives hidden, oftenly ticking other people off or looking strange. During her missions however this gives her a more intimidating look with little restraint. Hisako still keeps her silver necklace on at all times, only removing it to wash, it reminds her of more early days when she started her days as a kunoichi yet Hisako can‘t really remember where she got it from.

Forehead Protector: Hisako either wears it around her arm, waist as a belt or thigh depending on her mood.
Personality:
A true child of Yoruma clan Hisako is violent. Violent in her own way, she is not the one to rush, but one to calculate. Her calculations and strategies are considered strange as it often involves her or her friends getting hurt as a key point. She does have a more rash and hot headed side when it comes to killing, or suprise situations. Just as most members of her clan, Hisako does have a tendency to be sadistic, often torturing or enjoying killing people. Having seen some more death and fighting in her early years as a kunoichi, Hisako had grown even more accustomed to fighting and killing yet had developed a strange limitation not to kill when killing would be impractical, something she herself rarely questions. The limits can quickly dissapear when Hisako faces at least remotely challenging situation or if she gets an urge to kill. Almost every second of a battle, the girl is looking for a reason to forget her limit and go with an intent to kill.

During her early days as a genin, Hisako rarely seen violence so she developed a habit of looking for fights or reasons to hurt people. This was caused by the same frequent urges for violence and blood. At times Hisako can‘t sleep or she stays awake due to her frequent nightmares, this causes her to wander aimlessly around the village, seeking for trouble. Whenever Hisako sees a violent act in the village she rushes in but not to help, she views the act itself as a justification for her to let herself go and has oftenly hurt people badly or killed where it wasn‘t entirely necesarry.

As a true trained assasin, her outlook on the world is as close to ninja's as it gets. There is very little honor to her personality as she prefers more assasin-like approach even in life: hiding from problems of her personal life in fighting and death. killing anything to put out her own loneliness and lack of personality. She may get sensitive if someone mentions this though as she is not without feelings just with an iron facade. She mainly likes spicy food and sea food, but will eat just about anything if needed. Her hobbies include learning or collecting all kinds of weapons, mainly swords or knives. Even though Hisako dislikes social life due to relatively small experience in it, the girl has found some people she liked over her days as a genin (or at least didn‘t dream to kill them).

Hisako is very hard to converse to as she is cold, cynical an sarcastic, often mocking and making fun of people, knowing just where to strike both physically and mentally. It is not uncommon for her to flirt to achieve some sociopathic or objective purpose, utilizing her good looks is no big deal for her and she has done it many times successfuly in both missions and life situations. She is not the one to get connected to people, believing everyone is going to die eventually and seeing no point to get any bonds. Despite all of her flaws she is loyal to herself, her clan and her village. Hisako is highly loyal to her own ideal imagining of the village sometimes this might even cause her to question her actual orders but Hisako had never disobeyed her superior whether it was a superior of her clan or the village and during her time as a genin has even learned to put her personality issues aside for the cause of her clan or the village.

Clan: Yoruma Clan

Nindō: "A knife in the right heart solves everything"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Land of Water
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: B-Rank Chuunin
Specialties: Weaponry(Main: Close; Sub: Long)/Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Lightning / Water
Combat Style: Hisako is always an assasin first, lurking in shadows and trying to take her opponent silently, if that fails, she utilises her clan's signature fighting style using two elbow-length knives. Her fighting style uses a lot of acrobacy and spinning motion to get momentum, because of her unussual movement style her strikes aren't as easily predictable as ordinary ninja's. As much as possible she likes to finish her battles quick, using lethal stabs, slashes and cheap killing moves, she has absolutely no skills of leaving her target alive. She has common sense of human anatomy knowing where to slash or stab to kill immediately and which spots will leave the target marked for death.

If target is very resilient, she may get very desperate and try to flee as a target she is unable to take out is one of those things that bring an emotion on her face - fear. She is very likely to utilise her environments, setting traps, if possible, before engaging face-to-face or using any ways to end the fight quick. She favours throat slitting or disemboweling at close distance. She also uses throwing weapons or summons them from a scroll but her preffered fighting distance is close to close-mid.
Special Characteristics:
Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Early Childhood Arc:

Later Years:

The Test:

Roleplay Sample:
Spoiler:


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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptyWed 19 Sep 2012, 5:54 pm

THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu:

Clan Jutsu:
Other:

Weapons and Equipment
Spoiler:

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Katarina (Recolor)
Source: League of Legends
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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptyThu 20 Sep 2012, 10:59 pm

Everything looks good; Well done!

Could you please expand your History by a bit? Look at Winged Blade's Hokage application for inspiration xD (that was a joke. PLEASE do not write as much as him Razz)

Also please use an Official Genin Kit, which can be found here
http://www.ultimateshinobi.org/t3781-ninja-kits

Otherwise, you're pretty much done.

P.S Congrats on getting your Clan approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptyFri 21 Sep 2012, 12:04 am

Switched the kit to Genin's kit, expanded the history slightly. I'm sort of sleepy currently so I can rewrite it if something doesn't make sense or has a lot of grammatical errors.

P.S. Thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptyFri 21 Sep 2012, 6:42 pm

Ah one tiny issue. You can't have the Hidden Cloud Technique seeing as it's only available to Kumo nin. (even if your family is supposed to be from Kumo)

Also your origin - Kirigakure - doesn't seem correct? Did you mean Kumogakure? Either way, it should be a Country rather than a Village.

Please do the above before you get a second approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptySat 22 Sep 2012, 9:29 am

Edited it out, marked Land of Fire as Origin since the life in Kumo thing was very temporary. Switched Hidden Cloud with String Reeling.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptySat 22 Sep 2012, 6:10 pm

Honestly everything is looking fine so far. I know this is going to seem rather nitpicky of me but your history talks about you spending your early childhood in Kiri but your origin is The Fire Country. So could you either edit this to make sense or at least tell me how it was that your character was born in Konoha yet spent her early life in Kiri?

The other issue I have, which is entirely my fault, is the "Dance of the Night" technique. I missed this on your clan application but there needs to be a chakra upkeep for this since it seems like you continue this action for several posts. Edit it here and I'll make a corresponding change to your clan application. I am very sorry about that, it's entirely my fault here.

Do these two things and I will be glad to give you my approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptySat 22 Sep 2012, 7:44 pm

Edited: The character was born in Kiri but spent most of the life in Konoha, added continuous use cost, as well as costs for higher ranks.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptySat 22 Sep 2012, 11:54 pm

Looks fine then. Stay safe and try not to hurt anyone with all them pointy knives and such.

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PostSubject: Re: Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] Yoruma, Hisako [Konoha Chuunin] EmptyWed 31 Jul 2013, 10:38 pm


Archived.
Due to character death.
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