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| Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] | |
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| Subject: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Sat 20 Mar 2010, 2:28 am | |
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Name: Torein Otomichi Secondary Title: "The Silver Arachnoid" Age: 20 Gender: Male Physical Appearance: Torein has spider-like traits meant to be main aspects of his character. As such, Torein possesses six arms and a third eye. Torein has straight black hair on the top of his head, however towards the back it divulges in a pony-tail, the hair on this part of the head is spiked, jagged and unkempt. He wears the standard Konoha village head band a purple piece of fabric with a piece of metal, the usual musical note encased upon it. His seems well polished, it almost always shines. His skin is tanner than most, stretching across his entire body. In addition to this he has six, well tanned arms. It appears he has no pupils for his eyes are entirely black. On each of his wrists he has a large black piece of cylindrical fabric that stretches over them. He wears the standard Konoha village uniform, a tan piece of clothing which ends in a small rectangular flap over which is the yin-yang symbol. Underneath which is a black shirt and short black pants. He also wears a piece of purple cloth that encases his entire body, around his waist and ending in a knot in the back. Behind the villages symbol on his forehead Torein hides his third eye and only uses it when he desperatly need to. His shin tone is an unusual darker color of other, Torein takes on a tan, brownish compleshion.
Personality: Torein does not like to beleive he can be beaten in anyway shape or form, anything at all. He beleives himself to be better than most of his opponents. However, he does break this rule when mentioning the Optimus Triad. He enjoys playing with his foes, and has several quotes that go with that such as, "Ah man, I'm really itching to play with you. And we should play slowly, or the game is not as fun." He seems to enjoy fighting and torturing his foes as well as taking on as many as possible. He seems to be the smartest member of the Otomichi clan, seeing as how he is able to figure out the weak point of his and it's exact location and how to use this as an advantage. He also seems to be more cautious, allowing his spiders to distract opponents while he sets up traps and fires ranged weapons at them. Finally, he seems to have a bit of a sense of humor, stale as it is, he has several quotes that show this like, "Ehh, he damaged several of my internal organs, but, I can still move."
Torein is a dark hearted person who has forsaken all others for the survival of themselves and the greater good. He is a double and triple crosser who weilds the ultimate Otomichi's techniques. Born in an age of darkness and violence, the only way he sevived was blending in and not being noticed to strike at the hearts of those who whish him dead. His only two true friends are misery and lonliness. The sometimes have a short temper but is easily resovled at the sight of blood.
Torein is a evil-natured, quiet, and eager shinobi, believing that a person becomes truly strong when they have something truly important to fight for.Torein fully takes advantage of his talent for battle and incredible abilities, he applies these talents where ever possible, using his chakra and abilties for the smallest of tasks. When forced to face an opponent, Torein does all that he can to inflicting great harm, though he would rather make the battle last longer by using smaller, weaker jutsus and attacks to harm. He will only use his more powerful jutsu's when in a tight situation or if he is out matched.
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Clan Information:
Clan Name: Otomichi Clan Clan Location: Konoha Clan Traits:
Kekkei Genkai: "The Otomochi are the spider-like ninja of Konoha; they possess four extra arms, have the ability to make webs, and even possess a third eye. This eye improves the percision of their attacks to the point of being almost unavoidable. It also is used to slighly track the hisghspeed movement slowing it down 10% causing the Otomichi to keep up track with faster shinobi. (Also used it for other things such as spotting a flying kunai,etc.) Immune to most poisons that spiders create. They also produce their own stunning poison they can bite you or spit over a short distance. They can work with medics to help cure spider related injuries. Otomichi's webbing are made of a special type of liquid that is created by infusing body liquid with chakra, making it as strong as steel. These webbings are so strong the clan brags on who they have the ability to suppport 2 elephants. They also use this ability of theirs to create weapons from their mouths. These weapon are made of body poison, slava, and chakra. Once captured by this web holding opponents immoble it's nearly impossible to get away. The Otomichi clan are immune to being captured this because of their special chakra they produce an chakra + oily mixture that keeps them from becoming immoble. The more basic form of this webbing is excreted from his mouth, and he spits it directly from there during combat to capture opponents. The otomichi can create a stronger, golden webbing called Spider Sticky Gold that hardens upon contact with oxygen to metal-like quality. Because of the solid nature of this webbing, the Otomichi can shape it into armor or weapons to aid them in battle."
Secret Clan Jutsu:
History: History:The Otomichi clan is a mysterious family that has an extremely creepy and special ability. The ability to summon and communicate with spiders. They are most noticeable because most of the family members have six arms and a third eye. At birth, some of the babies are chosen by gunkai, or hollowed spiders. The gunkai are the spiders of the newborn is the Otomichi. However, it's a mutualism. They both benefit. The gunkai get a peaceful home and the host body gets a powerful weapon.
This clan originate in the village of Konoha. Although very little is known about the Otomichi Clan, they originated from the Aburame Clan in a massive civil war among the clan members. A portion of Aburame within the clan thought it stupid to allow the destruction bugs to harvest their body, calling it unhealthy, and tried to secede from the rest of the clan and form their own Arachaid clan. The Aburame clan put up a large fight, but in the end; the Otomichi clan managed to break away and form a new clan of their own. Clan Details: Closed.
Rank Information:
Rank: Jounin Village Affiliation: Konoha
Special Information: [list]Character Speciality: You may pick 2 skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical, Puppetry, Fuuinjutsu Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Eijutsu (Medical) Elemental Affinity: What element(s) your character possesses, no more than two Main: Raiton Sub: fuuton Special Characteristics: Increased speed/Strength Torein speed is exceedingly quick. This is due to the fact of him being able to move and use the strength of all eight limbs to support his light weight. Torein strength would be increased also due to the fact he has the strength to six arms supporting and stablizing anything he holds on to. This will also affect his speed just a little.
Animal Empathy The character exudes a calming influence on animals. This is parshlybecause Torein clan himself looks like animal. Torein being parshly spider has an able ability to feel, sence, and understand animals due to his animal related genetics. He is seldom bitten or snarled at and animals immediately like him. If he abuses an animal, it will act confused before becoming aggressive.
Light Sleeper The character is very light sleeper. Any noise at all will instantly awaken him to a state of full alert. The character is no easier to sneak up on while asleep than he is when he is awake.
Photographic Memory Torein has photographic memory, he remembers everything he sees and hears with absolute clarity. To represent this extraordinary gift, the player controlling the character should take copious notes throughout play to represent his character's memory.
Excellent Liar Trait The character is extremely good at Lying, no one can read him even with the use of special mind probing jutsu or lie detectors. This unique trait is extremely useful. The only way to uproot a lie created is to prove it wrong; and even then the character may simply play the lie even more
Reputation - Underworld The character is well known to the denizens of the Underground. Provided he does not make trouble, he can generally make his way among the humans and missing ninja tribes that call the tunnels home. Dealing with the feral animals that call the Underground home is an entirely different matter, however.
Lie Detector The Character has an ability to read opponents, habits, quirks and other things will point the character out as a liar. This is useful in and out of battle, though it will sometimes drive men or women insane hearing their sweethearts lie to their faces.
Enhanced agility Torein can switch the chakra lines in his body that connect to his muscles. By diverting all the chakra that would normally go useless to his other areas of the body making it useful thus enhancing his agile ability.
Skill Information: Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.
Jutsu Template:
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Basic jutsu - Spoiler:
E Ranked Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique Rank: E Type: Supplementary Element: N/A Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.
Name: Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of water
Name: Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as need
Personal Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: 15 Blowing Arrow Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: With their special ability the Otomichi can create 15 small yet thin sticky gold arrows connecting them all making it seem as if they are 1 regular sized arrow. (2ft long, 1in thick) Within these arrows are all filled with sticky webbing that disperse out into cobweb 3ft in diameter with the first crack of the sticky gold that its weilded within. The max capacity of this jutsu is 90square ft trapping and holding down everything within hits limits. These arrows have a range of 100 yards and also travel in a strait line. This sticky gold cracks once the arrows reached the speed of 50 mph.
Name: Spider Cobweb Region Type: Ninjutsu RanK: D Element: N/A Description: The user can lay spider thread through all the surrounding area. Unknowing ninja will take the thread as common spider thread, however, it will in fact run all the way back to the user’s finger. Slight movement against a thread will alert them of a nearby presence.
Name: Ninpou Kumo Shibari ((Ninja Law, Spider Med)) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: N/A Description Torein has the ability to mix chakra with his mucus to create a very thin metal-like skin to provide extra stability for open wounds. They frequantly used to stop bleedings. This ability produces a spider-web from Torein's mouth almost instantly, no hand-sings are required and it requires little Chakra to perform. This web is sticky and becomes hard as soon as it hits the wound it touches. Doesn't reqire much chakra at all
Name: Webs balls Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Torein has the ability to shoot powerful web balls at his opponent, the balls can harder and become hard as concrete. These web balls aren't much larger than a solid fist. Though Torein only shoots 1 per use of the jutsu the balls move at a speed nearly untraceable to the shinobi eye. Getiing hit by these ball fells as if you were hit with a extremly hard punch.
Name: Spider Caccoon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: N/A Description: After gathering spider webbing into their mouth, the user will spit it out in a wide cobweb pattern. This wide pattern can envelop the user's body and hardens to provide extra defense. Their chakra will remain in the web even after it has left their body, making the cobweb harden. This jutsu requires an little amount of chara usage meaning the defense is minimal.
Name: Spider Bind jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: N/A Description: After gathering spider webbing into their mouth, the user will spit it out in a wide cobweb pattern. This wide pattern can envelop foes and tie them down to a nearby surface. Their chakra will remain in the web even after it has left their body, making the cobweb sticky. These webs are just big enough to wrap around the average shinobi's body. (1meters in diameter)
Name: Spider Sticky Vomit Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Emitting a stream of spider thread from their mouth, the user will grab onto a nearby opponent like a lasso. If the opponent is in the air, they can move their head and body to sling the opponent wherever they want.
Name: String Webbed Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: This is Torein's natural ability to generate the strings he uses to make spider-webs from his fingers, these strings are sticky and can be used as a weapon like piano-wire or to stick to a given surface, the strings are very strong and can fully support Torein's weight while he uses them.
Name: Ninpu Kumonekin ((Golden Spider Spikes)) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Description:From the Users mouth comes a body web from this six "branches" sprout. Each of these "branches" are shaped like a sickle and are as powerful as a regular weapon. After being emitted from the mouth, seconds later they "freeze" and harden together, allowing it to be used as a weapon. They can also be thrown in a shuriken fashion, spinning through the air as such. these weapons are as as small as kunai and get as large as an bow.
Name: Coat of Web jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: This is Torein's natural ability to excrete the metal he uses to make his webs from his sweat glands. This can be used to cover his entire body and protect him from danger, Other shinobi refers to it as "Golden Skin." However, no such reference is made by Torein and it appears to be more of a natural ability. This justu stays in effect for 3 post unless he's hit by a B rank or above jutsu. (Toein can only used this jutsu 2x per topic)
Name: Hatchlings Rank: B Type: ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Torein can quickly do handsign and release an egg sac full of baby spiders roughly the size of a average house cat. These spider will scurry around all over the place extending webs and setting traps. These webs are much like Torein's himself as the opponent finds it extremly difficult to break free unless they some break the chakra stream running through the webs. The spider will also explode extending out webs as a last sneak attack if hitten any type of wat by an opponent. Only 5 spiders can be hatched at once. If these spiders are struck they dispure into a sticky web sticky oppoent into their current place. The radius of each spider explosion is 2meters.
Name: Ninpou Kumo Soukai ((Ninja Law, Spider Web Opening)) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: This ability creates a large circular spider-web from the user. It is also very sticky and anyone touching it will have be stuck, this effect does not apply to the Otomichi's however, for with his six hands he is easily able to move across it. This consumes a medium amount of Chakra, around 10 percent to perform. The clan brags that it is unbreakable and it could even support two elephants
Name: Kumo-Nenkin ((Spider's Cohesive Bacteria)) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Otomichi clan gathers a large amount of the metal-like web they can produce in his mouth, after they have finished gathering it, their cheeks begin to puff and he opens his mouth, firing it forward in a large cylinder-like pattern, it is spike-like and extends from Otomichi's mouth to the target, or if it does not meet one to the area it ends out, sharp and erect the entire time.
Name: Spider Caged Justu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: N/A Description: Torein will begin this jutsu by forming a large arrow produced by the same material for his other jutsus from his mouth. This arrow will quickly break off into 4 seperate arrows. He will then string the arrows onto his bow and launch them into 4 seperate locations. The arrows will land in a square pattern around a target or opponet. Upon contact these arrows will instantly begin to spew out sticky web 10x10m aorund the opponent. Webbing will create a ring around the opponet first, each web casted will intertwin with the next. Following this webbing will launch upward to create a cage around the target or opponet with no openings. This all happens with in the matter of 2 post. However if the opponent is a Hyuuga they can see the chakra flow and pick away at the webs. Also Beneath the ground is another escape along with dodging and setting flame to the webbing. 1 S ranked or 2 A ranked Taijutsu and 1 S Ranked or 2 A ranked Weapons work also to break free.
Name: Rain of Spiders Rank: A Type: ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Torein jumps into the air and release eggs, causing the rapidly hatched spiders to rain down on his opponent. The spiders will spin a strand of webbing as they fall, circling the opponent in webbing and sticking them to the ground. 10 one foot spiders will be released and dispurse into 1meter of sticky webbing.
Name: Maximum Destructive Impact Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: N/A Description: In this Jutsu, the Otomichi conjures an arrow from his throat for his bow, however, this arrow is specially gifted. Once the arrow releases from the bow and hits the ground it explodes in a small circle, this circle has a six foot diameter. It appears not to take too much Chakra, for the Otomichi seems fine after they uses it once. However, it is a tiring jutsu over time and after three or four uses the clan will begin to wear down.
Name: Web Delay Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: N/A Range Description: This is another secret clan jutsu. This jutsu uses a delay effect that catches the opponent off guard. The Otomichi does their handsigns and then slam the palms of their hand into the ground. Resembling as if they did nothing at all this jutsu doesn't take effect until 2 post later. The Otomichi send their webbing into the ground so that it can't be seen when they slam their palms. This web expands like a spider trap reachin out 5m all around the center spot of the slamed palm. When this jutsu actually appears 2 post later it's like a net trap upon the ground that is sticky and captures it's prey from below.
Name: Death Shot Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: N/A Description: When the Otomichi gather a great amount of chakra they conjures a bow made of the metal they make from web from. This jutsu is the ability to make that bow as well as to make the standard arrows of it, arrows equipped with a line of the metal string so that Otomichi can control the arrow as he fires it.
Name: Spider clones Rank: A Type: ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Using the Kyado spiders the user can create a copy of themselves or anyone else they choose. The clone can falls apart into its component bugs at will. If these clones are struck they disperse into a sticky web engulfing his opponent preventng them from moving.
Raiton - Spoiler:
Name: Z Style: Destructive Lightning Thorns ]Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Description: Desctructive Lightning Thorns requires no hand signs and is meant to be used at a moments notice to block oncoming physical attacks. Destructive Lightning Thorns causes 5 foot thorns made of lightning jut from the user’s body and stab anyone nearby. These thorns do not shock the opponent unless the enemy is stabbed into them, thus saving energy and preventing global warming.
Name: Flash Step ]Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning Description: This jutsu allows the user the ability to use small burst of Raiton below their feet to allow the to move short distances in a flash. Usually allowed to only dodge fast incoming weapons and jutsu this jutsu can also be portrayed in other way. This can be used for quick strikes for assassination attempts. the distance for the burst can only be used up to ten feet from the standing position.
Fuuton Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Kaze Ya no Jutsu (Wind Arrow Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Rank Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user’s mouth. The arrow is hard to be blocked but it can also be dodged. Since it is made out of wind the arrow is hard to see. One arrow shot at a time.
Name: Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Rank Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. Because the needles are made of air they cannot be blocked or deflected. The only way to ensure safety is to dodge them.
Name: Fuuton - Daitoppa (Great Breakthrough) Skill: Ninjutsu Rank: C Rank Description: This is a Ninjutsu which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing their hands to their mouth, the user will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way.
Name: Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu (Wind Torpedo) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Rank Description: The user gathers a large amount of wind into his lungs and expels it in a single blow. The wind forms a torpedo that is near invisible that launches towards the opponent. Upon contact it explodes with the force of two exploding tags.
Name: Hikui Tenkuu Assaku no Jutsu (Low Air Pressure Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Rank Description: This technique makes the air pressure in a room drop dramatically, causing anyone inside to fall asleep. It can only work in an enclosed area like a building or room. (This includes me.)
Name:Kaze Kiri no Jutsu (Wind Drill Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Rank Description: The user creates another arrow from his mouth that is fired from the mouth. This time though the arrow is in the shape of a drill, much like the arrow Torein uses. The drill passes through stone and tree but once it hits the ground it dispels. This arrow can drill through a person
Name: Fuuton - Renkuudan (Drilling Air Projectile) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Rank Description: Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into their chest and then expels it in one large explosive burst. To strengthen the attack, they will imbue chakra into the air and then release it in large, spherical projectile shots.
Taijutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Raikoukobushi no jutsu(Lightning fist) Rank: C Jutsu Type: Taijutsu Elemental: Raiton Description: This move is a low rank C move but it could be helpful. If the user has no chakra absorbing weapon in their hands they can mold chakra of lightning into the knuckles of the fist. This will cause currents of electricity to flow between them. This makes a shock punch that could numb the enemy and slow down his reaction time. This move uses about mid level chakra and is very easy to keep going for awhile, if the user can mold and manipulate chakra with easier help.
Raiton Justu
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Name: Static Armor Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Lightning Description: For this jutsu the user enable the entire body with exception of hands and feet with the raiton element. If an opponent was to touch he user while in this form this jutsu will cause them paralysis for 1 post. This form requires good foucus of chakra to sustain but it will only last 2 post. While in this form the user forfeits their ability to use ninjutsu.
Name: Raiton Radiation blast Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Lightning Description: By focusing Raiton chakra throughout the users body the user start to radiate raiton chakra from their them causing a blasting dome feild surrounding their bodies expading out 10meters. This blastexplodes and expands at great speed(5meters per second). Anyone that is between the zone of this raidation becomes paraylized for one post. This justu reqires good chakra consentration and usual take a while (1 post) before performing.
Item Template:
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- Name: Spider Summoning
Rank: A Type: Contract Natural Abilities:The basic form of all summoning technique, this jutsu uses a contract, hand seals, and the user's blood to summon an animal or weapon.
Background Information
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Pre-Academy Academy Student: Born Genius
There once was a clan in the Konohagakure Village, a clan that was very well known and known as one of the best. Otomichi was the clans’ name and this clan was stationed near the forest. Not many could travel through the village without seeing a member of this clan training. The clan was very prosperous up until the time of the nine tailed attack.
Torein’s mother, father, uncle, aunt and three cousins were the last of the clan. Torein was the last one born and was only an academy student at the time of the attack. After the attack, Torein lost his father. His mother took over his training, but along with the training began more life learning lessons about women. In the first year of his training he learned a lot about the clan. He was taught that the clan was not only very quick learners, but ninjutsu was their strongest skill. The clan learned ninjutsu that was taught specifically to the clan. Each art mimicked a spider in which they controlled when fighting.
Torein was the youngest clan member to be taught the clan's Ninjutsu. His mother had learned the arts and was the holder of the scrolls, in which the clan jutsu secrets were held. By the age of seven, Torein had begun to learn one of the many art forms of the clan. At the age of seven he had joined the Academy. Torein was made fun of because of his inability to really mold chakra too well. This like all things began to pass as he learned to mold chakra. This was something of a shock to his mother, as the clan wasn’t really built to mold chakra. Torein wasn’t the first, but he was the first Genius in the clan that could mold a bit of chakra. His mother couldn’t teach him anything about molding chakra, but that was what the Academy was for and that’s what he used it for mostly. Projectile weapons were a hardship for Torein. Hand held weapons were nothing to him and came almost like second nature.
Torein was ten years old and had already mastered the basic ninjutsi art styles he was taught in three years. This proved to his mother that he was a pure genius. Torein was going to graduate a year early, but he decided against it since he still had trouble with the chakra molding portion of his training. In the next year he had begun training for the next level of ninjutsu art styles he was beginning to learn.
Torein had grown so much since he was a child; had gotten stronger in his ability to mold chakra and his skills in Weaponry were above the bar for a kid his age. He graduated out of the Academy at the age of eleven. He didn’t get a Genin team until the age of thirteen, by this time Torein had mastered two of the many clan ninjutsu arts.
Genin Ninja: Truly Genius with Ninjutsu
A thirteen year old boy, who up until now had lost his father. He starting training under his mother, learned about his clan, and began to study the clan's ninijutsu. He was revealed to be the first of his clan able to mold chakra at his ability, and is known as a Ninjutsu Genius to many in the village. Torein was the name and he had just joined his Genin team. He has known struggle to show that he is very different from the everyday Genius.
Torein was possibly the strongest on his team in terms of speed, chakra control, and intelligence. These were a couple of the things that he had discovered while training with his team. The first month was very inactive and they spent most of their time training to tune their basic skills. At this time Torein had become something special to his team. He was something of a trapping ninja.
The team developed a strong bond amongst themselves and their sensei. This made them feel like family and their sensei was like a father to them all. Torein had begun to double task between his life at home and his ninja life. Torein was with his team for two years and during this two years time, Torein began to learn more Ninjutsu from his mother. Torein had mastered about five jutsu by the time he had been with his team for three years. In the last year years Torein had relaxed to learning only one style.
In the last year running, the team signed up for the Chuunin Selection Exams. They felt they were ready, although their sensei thought they were ready in the first year. The team had grown so much since they were first a met when the team formed together. Torein had come a long way from being the kid who was born a genius. He was now the strongest of his team and one of the strongest in his genin class.
In the first exam Torein wasn’t hassled to answer the questions, but more not to jeopardize his teams standing. The second exams was more of a game for the team, helping them get some type of live training in before the third exam. They were the fiest team to get to the tower. Even though they were fourth the team was glad to have made it. Having passed the first and second exam, the team began to feel a little confidence within themselves. The third exam proved to be somewhat of challenge. Torein made it to the final round of the tourmanent. He lost more on purpose to prove that winning isn’t everything, to his opponent and his teammates.
Torein was promoted to the rank of Chuunin at the end of the exams. This was something to celebrate he and his mother did just that. She took him and his teammates out to celebrate their promotions.
Chuunin Ninja: Life of a Otomichi
In the first two months of being a Chuunin, Torein had mastered the single art of the Otomichi that he had been training for. He then picked up two more of the clan’s ninjutsu arts. He wasn't one to overload himself with jutsu training but he stayed in the field to keep one step ahead of anything other shinobi.Though he was a hard worker Torein didn't do this to impress anybody but he did to avengre his clan.
Torein decided to stay with his team for the next two years. In that two years Torein had mastered another 3 jutsu, giving him a grand total of 10 jutsu. He was truly a genius and his personality made him a very likable person. He had spent most of his time as a Chuunin doing missions to become a Jounin ranked ninja.
Torein was a Chuunin for two years, and he spent this time training and doing missions. Mastering another three styles and giving him a grand total of thirteen ninjtsu. Torein was the strongest of his clan at his present age of eighteen. Each art he learned was named after an animal and mimicked something about that animal. Torein had begun to invent new styles based on animals.
In his fourth year, Torein was promoted to the rank of Jounin for his dedication to his village. He had completed various missions and was promoted for this. Torein was proving his skills to his mother and the rest of his clan.
Jounin Ninja: The Jounin Life
Torien has been spending most of his time as Jounin training and going on the occasional mission. His motivation is his mother, who inspires him to live for many years and be strong while doing it. Atfer a while he got his own little squad. Not having a Otomichi that he could train on his own for some reason, and this made him just a little angry. He wanted to train some of his family like only he could, but the Otomichi was a dieing clan. He decided to take what he had and make them as good as they could be. He wasnt the gloomy, dead inside person he is now, so he was fun but kept the genin on a good track. They grew fast and Torein went on many missions with them. He grw to love his genin and trained them into the best squad in konoha. Even his ex-squad mates squads envied this squad. They were quite powerful and did very well. The chuunin exams were comming up soon and Torein decided to give them a slight edge. He taught all of them to create shadow clones. The two boys could create two clones safely and the girl was a natural. She created 4 and could have probably gone to 5. They entered the chuunin exams and started the battles. They breezed through the forest area and destroyed two other squads before making it to the checkpoint.
Once finished with that they began the tournament section of the chuunin exams. There were 16 genin in this tournament and it started off well the squad defeated their first two opponents easily, but there were other powerful genin in this tournament. Both boys were eliminated in the semi-finals and one was beat by his own clan member. The lone girl faced down a crazy looking genin from the cloud village. He had a wide variety of strange lightning jutsu. She got cornered at the end of the match but surprised everyone when she made 2 shadow clones and defeated the cloud genin while he was still surprised that the clones accually had substance. She won the chuunin exams and the whole squad was promoted to chuunin together.
Turning Point Torein was given the title of "The Silver Arachnoid" at the age of 20. He didn’t really want to be though, and abandoned his squad for another squad. Torein started to his study, experiment, and test new jutsu’s and toxins. However he was using people as test subjects instead of animals. Noises of death and suffering sounded from his home and not before long people began to investigate, the Council of Konohagakure found him guilty of torture and homicide. Torein refused to move, and so they decided on one thing. Kill him. After several failed assassination attempts, they swarmed him from his home when he went out to shop. Leaving some of his things at the doorway for him to keep everything else was gone. Role-Play Sample:
- Spoiler:
A cool breeze blew past Torein as he scaled along the side of the mountain. Torein usually trained high up in this area where the minerals were rich. The mountains were harsh and gave off the silence that he often longed for. Torein was not wearing his usual attire but a long white Yuki cloak that shined in the light.
With a single graceful movement, his senbon pierced into the tree and flew out the other end. As he danced his way in circular motions, the surrounding forest became littered with senbon; each sticking out of the trees. The Otomichi had been hard at work preparing to take down the Uchiha shinobi. The Uchiha ninja would soon be on the move, with the Otomichi trailing right behind them.
Even as he continued to train, nothing quite was like fighting an actual person. He needed someone to train against. you could do a jutsu a thousand times and it would still not work out exactly how you wanted it. Only when fighting a real person could you prepare for the unexpected.
As Torein's dance came to an end, he let his arms hang by his side and is hair fall over her face. At this that moment, Torein heard someone nearby. He would then analyze his complete surroundings. Seeing that their was nothing but a few rocks and a mountain made of stone. It was also pitch black out as if the moon didn't exist to give any light. The land was an exact square 30 meters wide and long without one place to hide. Other than that it was a long fall to the bottom.
With a sneaky suspension that someone was around watching, Torein would pull out a scroll from his ninja pouch a summon two puppets. This puppet looked as if it were an exact replica of himself from head to toe. Torein would then return his puppets for he was only seeing if he was properly prepared. Torein would then boast to get his opponent to reveal themselves
Humph, Just like an Uchiha shinobi always learking in the dark trying to sneak up on an opponent. Why don't you come out and fight like a true shinobi. Stop sneaking around in the dark like sime kind of shadow. What are you? Scared! You little jabroni, I bet I can beat you without even using my puppets. The simpilistic style of your clan is all but tasking to someone of the likes of me. That's why I know that you will be no match for me and I will surley win this fight. Oh yea, and I will kill you. I promise, let's fight.
(this post is kinda short for me but W/E)
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Sun 21 Mar 2010, 4:11 am | |
| - Two paragraphs for looks and personality at least (they are good length though ^^)
- Whats the situation with clan? is it spider based? If so then the jutsu etc would make sense. If not, then they would all have to come under a clan ability.
- Please change rank to either konoha or kiri, they need more genin positions.
- Quote :
- Torein is the spider-like member of the Chaotic Three; he possesses four extra arms, has the ability to make webs, and even possesses a third eye. This eye improves the accuracy of his attacks to the point of being almost unavoidable. It also is used to slighly slow down the speed of faster shinobi. Torien's webbing is made of a special type of liquid that is created by infusing body liquid with chakra, making it as strong as steel. The more basic form of this webbing is excreted from his mouth, and he spits it directly from there during combat to capture opponents. Torein can create a stronger, golden webbing called Spider Sticky Gold that hardens upon contact with oxygen to metal-like quality. Because of the solid nature of this webbing, Torein can shape it into armor or weapons to aid him in battle.
Chaotic Three? Also, if you are having this only as a special characteristic then it will need to be edited into a clan ability. Have a spider hybrid character would warrant a KKG.
Web Balls - How many can be produced per psot, and what is their relative size?
Ninja Laws Spider Chain - You can create metal from your skin? I dont think so. Please remove or edit. Also, edit it from any other jutsu that it has that skill with as well. Creating metal is a seperate skill/KKG. |
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Sun 21 Mar 2010, 5:34 am | |
| Hold on a second.
Is this a new character you're making? Because if so, then we need to know so we may move your previous character application into the Archives.
Edit; Situation has been resolved. |
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Sun 21 Mar 2010, 7:16 am | |
| - ImaNewbie wrote:
Clan Information:
Clan Name: Otomichi Clan Clan Location: Konoha Clan Traits: The Otomochi are the spider-like member of Konoha; they possesses four extra arms, has the ability to make webs, and even possesses a third eye. This eye improves the accuracy of their attacks to the point of being almost unavoidable. It also is used to slighly slow down the speed of shinobi by 10%. Otomichi's webbing are made of a special type of liquid that is created by infusing body liquid with chakra, making it as strong as steel. The more basic form of this webbing is excreted from his mouth, and he spits it directly from there during combat to capture opponents. Torein can create a stronger, golden webbing called Spider Sticky Gold that hardens upon contact with oxygen to metal-like quality. Because of the solid nature of this webbing, Torein can shape it into armor or weapons to aid him in battle. Kekkei Genkai: Does your clan possess a bloodline limit e.g Hyuuga's Byakugan, Uchiha's Sharingan.
Kekkei Genkai needs to be filled in. Infusing body liquid with chakra, making web is certainly Kekkei Genkai material. |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Sun 21 Mar 2010, 2:04 pm | |
| The clan will need to undergo separate approval if it is not already approved. |
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Tue 23 Mar 2010, 8:52 pm | |
| Fix everything that others have stated first. |
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Sun 28 Mar 2010, 1:30 am | |
| - Aries. wrote:
Physical Appearance: Torein has spider-like traits meant to be main aspects of his character. As such, Torein possesses six arms and a third eye. Torein has straight black hair on the top of his head, however towards the back it divulges in a pony-tail, the hair on this part of the head is spiked, jagged and unkempt. He wears the standard Konoha village head band a purple piece of fabric with a piece of metal, the usual musical note encased upon it. His seems well polished, it almost always shines. His skin is tanner than most, stretching across his entire body. In addition to this he has six, well tanned arms. It appears he has no pupils for his eyes are entirely black. On each of his wrists he has a large black piece of cylindrical fabric that stretches over them. He wears the standard Konoha village uniform, a tan piece of clothing which ends in a small rectangular flap over which is the yin-yang symbol. Underneath which is a black shirt and short black pants. He also wears a piece of purple cloth that encases his entire body, around his waist and ending in a knot in the back. Behind the villages symbol on his forehead Torein hides his third eye and only uses it when he desperatly need to. His shin tone is an unusual darker color of other, Torein takes on a tan, brownish compleshion. Torein is a evil-natured, quiet, and eager shinobi, believing that a person becomes truly strong when they have something truly important to fight for.Torein fully takes advantage of his talent for battle and incredible abilities, he applies these talents where ever possible, using his chakra and abilties for the smallest of tasks. When forced to face an opponent, Torein does all that he can to inflicting great harm, though he would rather make the battle last longer by using smaller, weaker jutsus and attacks to harm. He will only use his more powerful jutsu's when in a tight situation or if he is out matched. That whole red bit is more like personality than appearance. Remove or put it in personality.
- Aries. wrote:
Chakra Manipulation Jutsu Name: Yari no Chakra Type: Ninjutsu Rank: S Description: The user will gather chakra into their hands and once they have enough, they will form it into a rather large spear. This spear is completely made of chakra and as such, has the ability to cut through just about anything. The spear itself is very dangerous, even to hold and as such, it must be used rather quickly, usually within 2-5 seconds after making it (1 post afterward at the most). The spears greatest ability is that once it is stabbed into the enemy, it will explode into a massive amount of microscopic blades that will cut the enemy on a cellular level, causing damage to even the chakra points. Unfortunately, it has not yet been perfected, so it causes similar damage to the users arm, rendering the user unable to use handseals after continued usage. One cannot fire more than one a day unless able to do so through special means such as chakra boosts that are well over average. This technique is uncopyable by even the sharingan, making it nearly impossible to be seen in battle. Jounin aren't allowed 'S' rank jutsu.
- Aries. wrote:
Weapon Template:
- Quote :
- Name: [The name of your weapon. If the names Japanese please write the english name with it]
Quantity: [The number of this weapon you possess, in total. If you carry a certain amount of your total into each battle, please provide that number as well.] Rank: [What rank is this weapon E to S] Appearance: [What does your weapon look like? a detailed paragragh or more is required. If you have an image please insert it in the area provided.) Special Abilities/Characteristics: [Can your weapon do anything special? Does it have any unique characteristics? if not just write N/A.] Origin: [Did you make it? Where did it come from? Why did you make it? This also requires a detailed description.] Item Template:
- Quote :
- Name: [What is the name of your item callled?]
Rank: [What is the rank of your Item E to S] Type: [This is Medicine, Supplement, Enhancer, or Other.] Natural Abilities: [What does your Item do? what are the effects? how long does it last?] [/list] If you don't have any, just put 'N/A' on all of them. |
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Mon 29 Mar 2010, 8:22 pm | |
| Insane Speed/Strength -Ok first off, i get its probably jsut a way to describe it which is fine but keep in mind that your character should not display "insane" speed or strength IC wise. Please give us a description of just how fast he can go at his max.
High Chakra Control - Either remove or give a more adequate reasoning. All jounins go through many years of training. I see not why this would give you better control then average. More Detail please. Id also very much consider removing this as you have a clan with a kkg and this trait isnt KKG related at all. Typically this trait is awarded to those wtih kkgs who relate to this or to those with out a kkg.
animal empathy - why?
Wind arrow -C rank
Wind needles -again, C ranke
Wind Drill - this seems to be even more effective and devestating then Wind blade which is A ranked, make this A ranked as well please.
Wind Blade - there is a canon tech that creates blades out of wind, it is used by Baki, it is A ranked. Even if this is just a varriant, its still going to have to be A ranked. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Tue 30 Mar 2010, 11:54 pm | |
| Bam!!!!!!!! complete |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Wed 31 Mar 2010, 11:33 pm | |
| You have a sub in puppetry, but you have no actual puppets in your app. I'm just curious as to why that is. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Wed 31 Mar 2010, 11:36 pm | |
| I was told by Hugh and Adam(I think it was Adam) that puppets were like equiptment and i can make them after this app is approved. |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Wed 31 Mar 2010, 11:44 pm | |
| Alright then...
What about your sub with Doton? You don't have any Doton jutsu on your app. Do you want to add any? |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Wed 31 Mar 2010, 11:45 pm | |
| You may want to make atleast one puppet anyways, just to have it. You may be told that you need to train any puppets you make after this is approved before being able to use them. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Wed 31 Mar 2010, 11:46 pm | |
| ok cara.....But about the doton I don't want any I want to train for those jutsu |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Thu 01 Apr 2010, 12:16 am | |
| Well, if you plan on having a puppet in the future, you should know this jutsu. It's non-elemental.
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- Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu - [Puppetry Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: Kugutsu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to use a puppet to attack from afar. Using their body's chakra, the ninja emits strings of chakra that run from their fingers to the puppet. The puppet itself can be loaded with many weapons and tools, allowing the puppet master to remain hidden while the puppet moves and attacks the target. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Thu 01 Apr 2010, 2:16 am | |
| ok puppets complete |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Thu 01 Apr 2010, 3:51 am | |
| Where? I mean, I cant read spoilers on this computer, but I can see the titles above them. There are no puppets on this app like I suggested. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Thu 01 Apr 2010, 4:41 am | |
| puppets posted |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Thu 01 Apr 2010, 5:25 am | |
| You cant have S-Rank as a Jounin. |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Thu 01 Apr 2010, 5:53 am | |
| Your puppets are posted incorrectly, each weapon uses the provided template, the slots just show where the weapons are, so please edit your puppet(s) accordingly. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Thu 01 Apr 2010, 11:05 pm | |
| done changed pupperty to kenjutsu |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Fri 02 Apr 2010, 4:26 pm | |
| Read the weaponry guide. Weaponry encompasses Kenutsu and alows you to have a sub weapon specialty. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Fri 02 Apr 2010, 4:28 pm | |
| Don't want sub |
| | | Caranore
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Fri 02 Apr 2010, 6:27 pm | |
| Doesnt matter. You still need to put weaponry, with Kenjutsu. Kenjutsu is not an applicable specialty, as its a division of weaponry. |
| | | Aries
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| Subject: Re: Otomichi, Torein [Konoha Jounin] Fri 02 Apr 2010, 6:42 pm | |
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