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Teion Shiin
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| Subject: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sun 27 Jan 2013, 10:44 am | |
| Kaguya, Teion.THE INFO. Name: Kaguya, Teion Nickname: Kuroi inazuma Age: 17 Gender: Male
Appearance: Teion stands with a silent confidence at 5'8 and a loose frame. His short cut stark white hair spikes to the rear as if he is always moving against the rushing water of life, leaving only a few strands to float over his forehead protector. The forehead protector covers the mark of his clan, two red dots outlined in black. His eye brows, which are also white, are a bit thin with a sharp cornered arch that gives his face an emotionless expression. His eyes are a dull azure with a slight slant, they usually display an uninterest in life. His lips are a bit thin and never curl, displaying neither pleasure or distaste. The skin on his face is smooth, showing his age correctly. It seemed to him that facial hair wouldn't seem to be too much of an inconvenience for years to come. His jaw line is sharp, and strong, with a cleft that wasn't noticeable unless you really looked close. His neck is muscular but thin, it wouldn't seem he was athletically built unless you saw him shirtless. His body is built like a martial artist's that valued self movement and control over strength by pure force. He seems thin while wearing close, but without, you can see the hard work he put into it. Every muscle is clean cut and in good proportion to the others, allowing him to have more control over his body as a whole. His choice in clothes are a bit strange but he can't help but to enjoy them. He wears a ragged long sleeve button up white shirt with grey pin stripes covered with a torn black vest. His shirt is tucked into his dirty black loose fitting suit pants, which have an old leather belt fastened by a brass buckle. The pants cover just a bit of the top of his dull dress shoes. He liked these dress shoes because they had amazing grip, they felt just as good as any traditional ninja sandal he had worn. Covering the large majority of his appearance from the head to just even with his calf is a dirty black trench coat with a large hood and high collar. This was his body mask, it hid his face along with the rest of him. It has worn and sun faded embroidery outlining the inner edge of the coat.
His ninja tool kit is located on the small of his back and rest over his pants somewhat on his buttocks. The main weapon he uses, his ninjato, is sheathed the left side of his hip and is usually unnoticeable due to being covered by his coat. His fingerless glove covered hands never rest on the weapon, due to having a habit of not wanting to be known to have it. Teion looks like what he is, a neat poor man.
Forehead Protector: Worn on his forehead to cover up his clan mark.
Personality: Teion is usually a laid back person who doesn't talk much and would rather observe a room full of people to somewhat figure out the personalities of each. He almost never makes the first move in a fight and likes to analyze his opponent before making any rash decisions. Teion prefers the company of animals than he does people for some reason. He believes that animals are more pure than humans and show their true colors from the start. As much as he hates to show it, he has a kind heart. The final blow is hard for him to make at times, but he will make it if necessary. Teion is a bit dark, he feels little for people in most situations, thinking that emotions are useless in the battlefield as well as in life. He believes that feelings cloud decisions we make and ultimately negatively changing lives. Teion is curious about friends though, happiness always looks good, but he knows that there is no happiness without sorrow, not introduce one or the other keeps away sorrow.
Teion has a strong passion in life, and that is to find his fathers kill and avenge his family's loss. He hopes to one day become part of the Anbu Black Ops in order to gather more information on finding the assassin. He feels as though conversation is not needed most of the time, this does not mean he barely talks. This means he talks when it is needed, and used to change situations. He does not believe in idol or small talk. If someone want's to know about him he will tell them a minimal amount. He isn't a good person to have a good conversation with unless you really know him and he trusts you. He acquires information and feels that things that waste his time waste his life. He can use any information and start to work with it, taking time from that process is rude to him. This introverted view on social life has left him to be unpopular and not talked to. He finds that people usually don't like or really dislike him. He doesn't leave a real impression that lasts on people, so they forget him. Well, this is what he is going for anyway. He has noticed that his introversion helps with his goal. He doesn't need to be known or liked. He feels that this is one of the best steps to take to become a good ninja dedicated to stealth.
However, in the back of his mind he knows that this is lonely. Just like any other human, he does get lonely. He fights this dilemma every so often when he does feel like he is the only person on earth. When he feels like he is all alone in life, he fuels himself with the rage of the loss of his father and remembers his mission in life. Doing this, he powers through those emotions to keep moving on, adding more dullness to his azure eyes.
Teion finds it easy to put himself in another's shoes. This means it is easy for him to understand what another person is going through. He also likes to analyze how people act and talk, noting the personality and the way they live in general. It has helped him in handle disputes and talk through them. He also uses this in battle when going against any opponent, most of the time not knowing he is. He feels that when he analyzes himself, he progresses because he sees his personality weaknesses and strengths to better prepare himself more mentally and physically.
Books are a part of his very being. He loves to read and learn. Most of the time he will have his nose in a book that is filled with a new subject or genre. Sometimes he feels as though there isn't enough information in the world to satisfy his constant hunger for knowledge. He loves to be able to think like other people and put himself in the state of mind of as many people as possible, and books are one of the easiest ways to do this.
Clan: Kaguya Nindō: Know, don't be known.
THE NINJA. Origin: Mizu no Kuni Affiliation: Kirigakure Rank: Gennin Specialties: Ninjutsu, Weaponry (close-range/mid-range) Elemental Affinities: Raiton, Suiton
Combat Style: Observe, test, calculate, set up, strike, repeat. Teion likes to find the fastest and efficient way to take down his target. He would rather use as little resources as possible. Teion will analyze his opponent(s) and gather as much information from them before, during, and after a confrontation. Opponents may find themselves being treated as though they are not a threat, when in fact they are the biggest threat in his mind. He takes no chances and thinks of people as bigger threats then they may be.
If the battle is serious and posses a real threat, even from the beginning, then his style is of no style. He only fights acting, reacting, memorizing, adapting, and exploiting through out the battle. He becomes precise, not making mistakes and punishing those made.
Special Characteristics:
- Spoiler:
Name: Improved Perception Rank: C Type: Mental Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Most physical motions are identified and picked up by the ninja whether its a movement in a leaf or a change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with Genjutsu as it makes the user capable in identifying an illusion of C-Rank or lower. However although they can sense the Genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell. The ninja also becomes extremely perceptive and observant when it comes to people, being able to pick out mood changes or better understand character. In addition, this skill becomes useful in combat, where the Ninja grows to understand the patterns, habits and the 'rhythm' of the opponent over periods of time.
Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
- birth and childhood:
Teion was born of pure kaguya clan blood. His father was quite a distant man, and so was his mother. They barely showed Teion any affection as a child and may have caused him to grow up more seclusive than usual, becoming an introvert. They loved him in the sense that he was their only son, a blessing to most. However, his mother suffered from postpartum stress disorder when having Teion, and his father secretly despised his son for dramatically changing the woman he loved. Teion would do all he could as a child to impress his father and mother, even straining himself to the max everyday to become a great ninja like his father. It seemed like nothing he did mattered to his parents, and this lead to him secluding himself and his emotions from the rest of the world. If one did not have emotions, then on could never feel emotional pain. He learned this from an early age. Teion grew faster mentally than he should have, being able to completely take care of himself at an early age. Even as a child he had a cold look on his face, never smiling.
- academy:
The lack luster years of the academy forced Teion to become more reclusive than usual. Most of the time he was by himself, observing his fellow classmates and learning more about them. He would never pick fights, but was fully capable of ending them. He learned quite quickly, usually only having to watch someone do something to be able to learn it. He also only used what was needed to win a fight, revealing as little about himself as possible. Teion never really had any friends and liked to keep it that way, seeing them as ways to get to him, a type of weakness to be exploited in battle.
As he progressed though the grades he found it easier and easier to use his clan's jutsu. Teion loved his clan, even though they didn't really notice him. His father began to show more interest in him the more he watch his son grow and show more interest in the clans abilities. Teion's father started to mentor him through out his time in the academy. Teion's blood boiled with the power his father showed him, and loved it. He was finally getting his fathers affection and attention, something that all kids want, no matter how much they deny it. Teion's time with his father was cut short after his assassination. Teion still does not know who killed his father or why, but he will not stop until he finds out. This motive spurred him on to become even better than he was to begin with and helped him to graduate the academy with flying colors. Till this day, Teion looks for his fathers killer while taking care of the shell of a human his mother now is from all the tragedy.
Roleplay Sample:
- RP SAMPLE:
Groggy, oh so groggy. Teion sat up from his warm loving, embracing daily companion, his bed. It was probably the best thing in the world. He looked over at the clock and realized that it was also the WORST THING IN THE WORLD! He had over slept, and that was an understatement. The sun was all high and mighty in the sky, shining through his window and reminding him just how much of an idiot he was. He jumped up and began rustling all his clothes on, multitasking putting on a his shirt and shoes as he grabbed his coat and tools, putting everything on seemingly at once. Teion Jumped out the window, still putting an arm though his coat, flipping in mid air, kicking off of an adjacent building, and then landing with a roll. He emerged immediately from his roll with a dead sprint. What Teion didn't realize, due to his ADHD, was that he left his butterfly knives and armor at home. Yeah, ADHD was ok for multitasking, but he seemed to always forget thing.
Teion sped through the town, jumping and climbing over fences and any other obstetrical in his way as to make the fastest and most straight rout to the training area that was designated for his team. He knew about the posting as soon as it was up, his impatience was to blame for this. He was always excited to meet and work with new people, and learn from new teachers. The world was his water, and he the sponge. The bad feeling welling in his gut of being a disappointment knocked out his erratic line of thought. He raced though the woods now, jumping and flipping from limb to limb, never meaning to show off, it was just so damn fun. He decided that regular running would be the best choice once he saw the path though, and jumped onto it. Right before Teion jumped off the tree he was on at the moment, he saw a faint glistening on the path and under jumped as to not land on it, this made him misjudge the entire line of movement, causing him to trip and fall. Teion hit the ground hard, but tucked in his appendages and rolled from sheer second nature. He sprawled and got up at the sometime, sliding across the ground on his feet as he looked at what he had made himself look like an idiot for. It was broken glass, all over the path. Who would do something like that? He hated litter, he wanted to pick it up so bad, but decided against it, remembering he was soooo late to begin with.
Teion ran as fast as he could, he could now see the clearing and hoped that this was the right spot. There was a rather large boulder in front of him, above and a bit after this was a branch. The dirty white haired kid picked up speed, scaled the rock with a few step, jumped off and grabbed the branch to swing off of. Teion flew through the air as he let go of the branch, time seemed to go a bit slower as he soared though the air. This freedom, this is the feeling he loved more than anything. It always uplifted his heart and cleared his mind of everything. The feeling didn't last, it never did. His descent came now, along with reality and the reminder of the whole situation at hand. He met the ground with a light thud as he lowered his weight enough to be able to roll into the fall. The height from which he had "flew" was a bit more than he thought. Teion didn't mind the little bit of pain he felt from the whole ordeal as he stood up and Begin to apologize without even knowing who was around him. "I'm so sorry I'm late!" he said with a bit of nervousness in his voice and a polite bow. His chest moved up and down a bit more than normal, the whole run there had taken a bit out of him, seeing as he was going balls to the wall. Teion looked up to see a kid about his age, but shorter, with white hair and a nice lookin' sword, and another with short black hair and a look of "God I don't want to be here." on his face. "Well, I think I have already made a fool of myself, screw it, question time."
"So uh" he said as he rubbed the back of his neck and addressed the two other teammates, "Where is our team lead? I know I'm late, but dang." He didn't know what to say know. All his witty humor and quick thoughts served to naught now. Then he realized, oh god no, he had forgotten his butterfly knives and armor art home. He didn't let it show, but he was beating himself up inside. How could he say he is a ninja when he had forgotten his prized armor an knives his father had MADE for him. He HATED having this stupid "disorder" sometimes. Good thing he had his usual pack of ninja tools, maybe he could play it off and say he was too good to have a main weapon. He was damn good with knives in general, and believed that anything was a weapon, but his babies, the things he loved more than anything else, was right there, on his night stand. HOW COULD I FORGET ! ! !
The moment of inner rage passed and so to did his slightly heavy breathing. He just waited a bit for some kind of answer to the question he had asked earlier. Then his mind began to wander on what their teacher would look like. It ventured into forming the image of an old man, grizzled from combat, maybe with a huge sword or something, his mind slipped from this into the thoughts of all the types of training they would be doing, and into a fantasy of being tortured into becoming tougher. The Idea didn't please him, but then he snapped back to his company at hand.
THE ARSENAL.
- Academy Jutsu:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Kaguya clan Jutsu:
Name: Tsubaki no Mai | Dance of the Camellia Rank: D Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Tsubaki no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user performs this jutsu by modifying the humerus (upper arm bone) of either their right or left arm to create a short, hilt-less bone sword. Since they can increase and compress the density of their bones, they can make the sword harder than steel. The user then uses the sword to fight; their style uses quick cuts and thrusts to disable opponents quickly. They is extremely proficient with this sword and can, not only deflect shuriken, but also dispatch a large number of Shadow Clones with this technique. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru | Dance of the Clematis: Vine Rank: D Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user can modify and pull out their own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebrae are modified to make them stronger and sharper. Chakra Cost: 4CP
Name: Karamatsu no Mai | Dance of the Larch Rank: C Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Clan: Kaguya Description: Karamatsu no Mai is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. The user uses this jutsu to create a mass of razor-sharp bone spikes all over their body. These spines appear to be branches off their pre-existing skeletal structure rather than completely new bones. The user is even able to grow these bones at an extremely rapid rate so they can stab an opponent even as they are growing. They can even use them to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes them basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to them, they would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body. Chakra Cost: 6CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Teshi Sendan | Drilling Finger Bullets Rank: C Type: Weaponry - Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Clan: Kaguya Description: Teshi Sendani is a technique used by the members of the Kaguya clan. Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones regenerate after release, this technique can be used in succession. Chakra Cost: 5CP per 5 fingers.
Name: Growth Pocket (Flash bomb) Rank: D Type: Clan Range: close (0-5m) Element: N/A Description: This is a jutsu used by Kagua clan members. The has created a pocket within their body out of bone that holds a flash bomb. The flash bomb is in the torso and can be moved around int the body to be used, but must be stipulated where it is at the beginning of the topic. The user must have at least one flash bomb in their inventory to utilize this jutsu. The pocket containing the flash bomb will emerge from the user to be used on an unsuspecting opponent. The pocket will protect the user from the main blast of the flash in a fashion that will direct the light at the target of the jutsu. The light will only blind the target for a split second, not long enough to keep them from acting in any way other than a split loss of sight or an opening due to reaction i.e. eye closing. Chakra Cost: 3cp
- Raiton jutsu:
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Rank: C-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Name: Kangekiha - Inspiration Wave Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Raiton (Lightning) Description: The user will first create a protective wall of water (must be done with a water technique, it is not included with just this technique). They will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through. The electricity only affects the water for the post it is used, and the stunning effect only lasts as long as the user is making contact with the water. Chakra Cost: 6
- Suiton Jutsu:
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)
Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu of equal rank and below. Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles. Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)
b]Name:[/b] Suiben - Water Whip Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: The ninja will create a whip of water which can strike and bind an opponent. The user can also funnel lightning chakra to shock anyone wrapped in it. Can only affect one target at a time. Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
- Non-Elemental Jutsu:
Name: Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu - Chakra Absorption Technique Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After activitating the technique, the user's hand will glow with chakra. When he or she touches his or her palm on his or her opponents body, the user can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases the user’s advantage over his or her opponent. Chakra Cost: Costs the User: C (5) | Takes From Target: D (4) Costs the User: B (10) | Takes From Target: C (9) Costs the User: A (20) | Takes From Target: B (15) Costs the User: S (35) | Takes From Target: A (25)
- Weapon Jutsu:
Name: Youji - Toothpick Rank: E Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: Though the toothpick looks like it might be a quirk of user’s, it actually functions as a weapon in battle. Similar to a senbon, the user can spit the toothpick at his/her opponents to injure them. He/she can also spit it at incoming projectiles to knock them away. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The properties of the wire also allows the user to guide fire down it with any number of Katon Jutsu. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Gyorai Shin - Torpedo Needle Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Removing nails from his or her pocket, the user will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his or her chakra the nails will travel into the ground. Then at his or her discretion, he or she can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his or her target to nail them in place. He or she can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Description: After forming the needed handseal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from his or her mouth. These small nails can travel towards his or her opponent at quite a distance and are capable of dealing minor puncture wounds. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Battōjutsu Rank: C-A (C) Type: Weapon Range: Close (0-5m) Element: N/A Description: The user focuses chakra into the sword arm and legs while holding the hilt of his/her sword and observing the opponent. As the opponent attacks or prepares to, the user unleashes his/her sword from the scabbard and attempts to counter attacks with 5%/10%/15% more speed than a regular blow before being returned to the scabbard. Chakra is stored in the legs in case the user has to jump out of the way, or forward toward the target of the attack. The user can choose to cancel this action any time before the sword is drawn; however, the chakra used is still spent since the user already focused the chakra into the arm and legs. This only allows for one attempted counter strike, more come with more rank.
C- One strike + 5% increase of speed B- Two strikes + 10% increase of speed A-Three strike + 15% increase of speed
Chakra Cost: C rank= 7cp, B rank = 11cp, A rank = 21cp
- Weapons:
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Quantity: 1 Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
Name: Ninjato Rank: D Type: Primary/Close Range Quantity: 1 Description: Short and straight, this blade takes a similar form of a katana, but without the curvature in the blade. With the blade measuring no more than one and a half feet, and a square guard on top, this weapon has been popularized by many ninja, especially the ANBU, hence the name.
FACE CLAIM. Character Claim: Vergil the demon slayer, son of Sparda, brother of Dante. Source: Devil May Cry 3 (white haired) Image URL: https://i.servimg.com/u/f39/17/66/15/52/virgil13.jpg
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| | | Emperor of Rock
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sun 27 Jan 2013, 1:07 pm | |
| Is your application done? If not, put the WiP on the Title of the topic. Once you complete everything just remove it.
But since I'm here, appearance, personality, combat style, history need to be much, much longer. RP Sample will need to be at least 250 words for a genin. Origin is from which country you originate, in your case, Mizu no Kuni, while the village is Kirigakure. Also, you have to have the Kaguya physical traits, so white hair is neccessary, same as pale skin. Also, you are allowed to start with 15 jutsus, not counting the academy ones. |
| | | Teion Shiin
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| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 12:11 am | |
| sorry i didn't put wip on here, nost of whats on here are just notes while i study your site more. thanks for the tips and pointers. can I use a RP sample from another site and char I had? |
| | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32 Posts : 869
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 1:17 am | |
| Sure, you can use them. But the word count has to be at least 250 words min since you're starting as a genin. |
| | | Teion Shiin
Age : 34 Posts : 64
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 7:29 am | |
| Completion bump |
| | | CleverYamanaka
Age : 29 Posts : 1688
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 8:14 am | |
| What needs more length:- Personality
- Appearance
- Combat Style
- Possibly your history, although I am not going to be a bitch about that. I have seen numerous bullet point histories around here, so I think yours should be fine. Just something to think about.
Other then that, please copy/paste your RP sample, if that's how you're going to do it, instead of just posting a link there. Thanks. |
| | | Teion Shiin
Age : 34 Posts : 64
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 9:37 am | |
| added to all. notha bumpy |
| | | CleverYamanaka
Age : 29 Posts : 1688
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 10:16 am | |
| You need to fill out your face claim area. |
| | | CleverYamanaka
Age : 29 Posts : 1688
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 10:57 am | |
| I dont see anything wrong here. Approved. 1/2 |
| | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32 Posts : 869
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 11:07 am | |
| BAM! Approved 2/2 |
| | | CleverYamanaka
Age : 29 Posts : 1688
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Tue 29 Jan 2013, 11:14 am | |
| Set up an account here: http://www.ultimateshinobi.org/f199-accounts |
| | | Sloth
Age : 31 Posts : 683
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Thu 04 Apr 2013, 9:48 am | |
| Archived due to user inactivity. |
| | | Chris
Age : 28 Posts : 3145
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Fri 02 Aug 2013, 1:09 am | |
| Unarchived. |
| | | Teion Shiin
Age : 34 Posts : 64
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Fri 02 Aug 2013, 8:46 pm | |
| Yup, I'm ready to try again. Can I get a "BUMP" lawd? |
| | | Chris
Age : 28 Posts : 3145
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sat 03 Aug 2013, 1:49 am | |
| This is a generally solid app. I do have a qualm however - please please please fix some of the spelling, grammar, capitalisation and so forth. It's very disheartening when you start off a paragraph with a lower-case letter.
Also, if you don't mind, I would love if you could expand your Appearance and Personality a little bit, and maybe add a paragraph to the History as well ^^
It's always good to have lengthy apps: it helps in attracting roleplaying partners. |
| | | Teion Shiin
Age : 34 Posts : 64
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sat 03 Aug 2013, 2:54 am | |
| Thank you thank you thank you. I feel like I rushed myself when I did this. I just wasn't sure if I was really allowed to go through it again. |
| | | Teion Shiin
Age : 34 Posts : 64
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sat 03 Aug 2013, 5:31 am | |
| Completion Bump |
| | | Chris
Age : 28 Posts : 3145
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sat 03 Aug 2013, 4:03 pm | |
| Much better. Could you also, lastly, go over your Combat Style (capitalise pleaushs xD) and your Jutsu (capitalise pleauuuuuush)? My OCD will go all haywire otherwise
After you've done that, I would consider this application 'Approved 1/2' :3 |
| | | Teion Shiin
Age : 34 Posts : 64
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sat 03 Aug 2013, 6:27 pm | |
| Alright, I cleaned it up some more. Thanks for all the help. :3 |
| | | Aaron
Age : 27 Posts : 2538
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Sat 03 Aug 2013, 7:02 pm | |
| Approved 2.2 |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Kaguya, Teion [Kiri Genin] Thu 02 Jan 2014, 7:36 pm | |
| Archived due to inactivity. |
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