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Kris
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PostSubject: Damare [COMPLETE] Damare [COMPLETE] EmptySat 22 May 2010, 3:32 pm

Name: Damare
Rank: A-S
Appearance:
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Damare, like his brother, is an A rank summoning. His backside, and topsides of his arms, and legs are a dark blue. His underbelly is a tint of yellow. Damare also his eyes are a light, pale blue, which like all frogs, have a special lens that allows them to open their eyes underwater. Damare is approximately 100 feet, tall and wide.

Contract Type: Blood Donation
Species: Amphibian/Frog
Elemental Affinity: Katon
Special Abilities/Characteristics:

Damare has the unique ability to speak just as well as his brother Akasan can. He also is very different compared to his brother. Like most frogs, their skin is smooth and slimy. However, Damare's isn't because of his special use of it. Damare has the ability to make his skin rough, thick, and tear proof; as his lungs are big enough to give him enough oxygen, however, this requires a C-rank amount of chakra for each time he hardens his skin., he can use it once per post and it will hold for about twenty seconds. So, if there were to be any ariel attacks, or as such a summon, he would be protected from claws, talons, beaks, projectiles, kunai, ect. This makes him a useful summon for both land, water, and sky. Unlike his brother, he has the ability to use hand seals.

Background:

Back Story:

One day, Demo was training in Kiri and he discovered a pond. He saw that Lily Pads covered this pond as well. You could hear the sounds of frogs everywhere and the water of this pond was clear. A scroll, which was green and black, was at the bottom of this pond, which this caught Demo's eye. He stripped himself down to his boxers and took a dive into the pond. He kept swimming deeper until he hit about the bottom which was about ten feet from the surface, there he saw four statues of Frogs surrounding this scroll, Demo pulled it out and swam to the surface; only to find that frogs were following and gathering around his towards the surface. When he broke through the surface he got up on shore and the frogs came and surrounded him. One of the frogs explained that it was a summoning contract and that they wanted him to be there one and only summoner. Demo accepted immediatley and signed the contract in his blood. From that day forth he has been able to have the ability to summon the frogs and soon be known as, "The Pond Sage".

Meeting Damare:


However, he first had to find a frog that would accept him as his summoner. The frog he signed on with told him to go to the shores of Kiri to find a frog to summon. So, Demo headed out towards the shores of Kiri. At first, he did not find a thing, and just a few hours turned into a few days. It had been seven days since he signed the contract, and on the seventh day, he found Akasan. Akasan, a lonely frog, quickly accepted him as a summoner, and together they completed the contract.

After learning how to summon these magnificent creatures, Demo searched for an even more powerful summoning that would accompany him and Akasan. Demo one day asked Akasan to have one of his friends to sign Demo's contract, so that he could summon a frog that was of equal power of Akasan, in case Akasan could not be contacted. So, after about five days of waiting, a new signature had appeared on his scroll and having found this to be his new summoning, he journeyed to the shores of Water Country.

After arriving there, Demo set the scroll down and bit his thumb. Following the bite, he did the proper hand seals for the kuchiyose no jutsu and put his hand on the ground. In a matter of seconds, a large blueish frog appeared on the shore, standing at 100 ft. tall, just as large as Akasan. Demo and the large frog spoke, learning thats his name was Damare. Soon, they came to an agreement, and Demo obtained his 2nd summoning.

Summons Jutsu:

Quote :
Name: Fire Art: Firefly Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A-S
Element: Katon
Description: Fire Art: Firefly Technique utilizes the katon element. Damare will do the necessary hand seals. Then, he will expel/shoot/aim hundreds of flames that burn intensely. At A rank, this justu can release up to five hundred of these small flames. At S rank, this jutsu can release up to one thousand of these small flames. They travel at very high speed, as their impact is powerful.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing
the Fire Element. The summon does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the will will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.


Name: Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the
Fire Element. The summon does the necessary hand seals and gather katon chakra in its chest and expels a jet of fire.



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PostSubject: Re: Damare [COMPLETE] Damare [COMPLETE] EmptyFri 09 Jul 2010, 8:47 pm

Completion Bump!
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PostSubject: Re: Damare [COMPLETE] Damare [COMPLETE] EmptyFri 09 Jul 2010, 9:00 pm

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Damare has the ability to make his skin rough, thick, and tear proof; as his lungs are big enough to give him enough oxygen.

In order to make your summon seem less OP, I think this ability should require chakra.

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he does not need to use hand seals to utilize jutsu, just gather chakra.


Please explain how your summon can utilized all jutsu without handseals, and how he "gathers chakra".

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PostSubject: Re: Damare [COMPLETE] Damare [COMPLETE] EmptyFri 09 Jul 2010, 9:08 pm

Edited. I just thought since most animals can't use their hands like that, except for mammals. I guess frogs could though. I was just thinking that because in Naruto, the woman who summoned Bee for example. The Bee could use jutsu without handseals. So, I presumed my summons could, but I just edited that they could.


Edited the skin.
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PostSubject: Re: Damare [COMPLETE] Damare [COMPLETE] EmptyFri 09 Jul 2010, 10:41 pm

I'm sorry to nag, but:

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this requires a B-rank amount of chakra

I don't think this is detailed enough. I'd say it costs a C-Ranked amount of chakra per attack it defends from. So, if the skin hardens to block a burst of projectiles, that counts as one block and one C-Rank of chakra. Also, I'd say the ability can only be used once per post. The skin hardens for ? seconds.

Also, you have a coding break; you might wanna fix that. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Damare [COMPLETE] Damare [COMPLETE] EmptyFri 09 Jul 2010, 10:44 pm

Edited!

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PostSubject: Re: Damare [COMPLETE] Damare [COMPLETE] EmptySat 10 Jul 2010, 5:37 pm

Aapproved for training.
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