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| Subject: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Wed 20 Feb 2013, 11:41 pm | |
| Saiko, Akki.THE INFO. Name:Saiko, Akki Nickname: known to friends and family as Kobito (Translates as dwarf) Age:15 Gender:Female Appearance: Akki stands at 4ft and 3 inches in height and has seemed to have stopped growing, Medical Shinobi seem to think that is a birth defect of some sort but are unsure as to what has caused it. She is slim and quite wiry with slight definition, her arms and legs are quite stumpy and her hands very small indeed.
Akki's hair is long and flowing and dyed a light blue to match the sky. Her eyes are a deep hazel or one is, Akki is blind in her left eye which is a milky white mixed with a blood red. She has a scar running from the top of her left eye down to the bottom of her left cheek. Akki looks after her appearance alot, making sure her skin is clean and her hair shiney and straight, she also has a bit of an obsession with her clothes which seems to come from the fact her appreance isn't perfect due to her scarred face.
Akki will be seen in a variety of outfits sometimes changing several times a day, her main outfit isn't much of an outfit at all. A strappy top made from black crossed belts and white lace which drops down low in the back stretching to her feet. She wears flowing sleeves on her arms connected to her top by straps. Her boots are white with black tips. On her lower torso she wears white shorts that come to just above the thigh. From time to time Akki will be seen wearing a black hood which covers her eyes, this only happens on days when she is feeling very self conscious. Akki can also be seen wearing an eye patch over her blind eyes also on days when she is self conscious. Akki tends to focus on her clothing to take the focus away from her face.
If someone was to look closely at Akki's blind eye the would see that the iris has turned a milky white and around the iris are flecks of red, in the bottom of the eyes is a deep red from where blood had pooled and left a permenant mark on her eye. The scar that runs down her face isn't a clean straight line is is jagged and swoops slightly to the left at the top.
Forehead Protector: Worn around the top of right thigh. Personality:Akki is quite a nervous person who stuggles to socialize with others . She likes to keep herself to herself mostly and when she talks it is normally quiet and few words are said.This is mainly because she is self conscious of her appearance her blind eye and scar disgust her. so she goes to great lengths to make everything else look perfect, it almost borders on obsession. What makes it worse is people staring at her, she withdraws and bearly speaks above a whisper in these situations.
There are a few situations where Akki will come across confident and proud. Akki loves to sing, never in public but those have overheard her say that she seems like a different person. She is also like a new Akki when it comes to learning and training, because of her lack of height she works twice as hard as those who have better reach and more height so that she won't fail, Pushing herself to limits that could quite easily damage her body, she is unwilling to quit even when things get tough and others turn back.
Akki has a deep fear of water as she cannot swim and has never found the confidence to learn, her fear is so bad that when confronted by a pool of water or the thought of being submerged she freezes on the spot and withdraws into her own head. This of course has caused problems with certain jutsu such as being able to walk on water. One of her big worries is how she will react when faced with a water based jutu which is a huge problem being born and raised in a country where water and water based jutsu are every where.
In her spare time Akki loves to curl up with a good book, or spend time with her cats Mr Moggy and Twitch. Akki's goal in life is to become the best Kunoichi she can,and to make as many friends as possible, only if those friends can see past her physical disfigurement and see the true Akki underneath. All in all Akki is a caring person and would love to help as many people as possible, she doesn't really agree with violence but puts up with it because she knows that its part of the Shinobi life style. She knows that if she was more confident she would be a better ninja but some things are easier said than done, she also understands that life is hard and if you just roll over and give up then nothing would get done and everyone would suffer, and though that she is not willing to live with.
Clan:None Nindō:Everyone deserves help..
THE NINJA.
Origin:Mizu no Kuni Affiliation:Kirigakure Rank:Genin Specialties: Main: Eijutsu Sub: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: First: Katon Second:Doton Combat Style: Akki likes to work in a support role using her jutsu to protect others on the battlefield, Akki would rather heal and help that physically injure someone but if push comes to shove then she will stand tall and hold her own but preferably from a distance, she understands she is weaker than most and her blindness in one eye is a disadvantage.
When backed into a corner Akki will use her small height to her advantage dodging and weaving. This height also makes her less easy to spot and light on her feet meaning she is good at sneaking and getting around to heal others. Akki can be quite a thinker when she needs to be, scanning the battlefield for an opportunity or a chance to move into a certain position. She is incapable of leading but only because of her lack of confidence if she could over come that she would make a good leader.
Akki tries not to use Ninjutsu where possible trying to find a more peaceful outcome to a fight. Violence only gets more violence so she belives that any situation can be solved without the need of beating on the next person Special Characteristics:N/A
THE BACKGROUND.
History: Birth Akki was born into a modest family with modest belongings, her father was a wood worker and tradesman, her mother ran a small nursery for the local children so that their parents could get things done. When Akki was born it was the greatest day of her parents life, they had been trying for a child for many years with no luck.
Akki's birth was fairly complex, her mother hemoraged during birth while Akki's umbilical chord was wrapped around her neck, Medical ninja were called in to help out, saving Akki and her mother, due to the damage done Akki's mother was layed up in bed constantly from then on leaving Akki's father to look after the new born baby.
Younger years Things quickly became hard for the Saiko family, with Akki's mother unable to do anything and her father looking after her, the family started to struggle, money stopped coming in and food was getting hard to afford, Akki's father had to start bringing young Akki to any handyman jobs that he could get but his reputation was waning and jobs going to anyone who was more available. Times were tough but this wouldn't stop the Saiko family.
From and early age it was obvious that Akki was going to be a bright. She was walking and talking quickly and constantly asking questions from the moment it was possible. Accompanying her father around was teaching her a little of crafting things, and learning of her mothers ailments is what made Akki decide from a very young age that she wanted to help people.
As Akki grew she read book upon book and at the age of 5 had already decided she was going to become a Medical Kunoichi one of the best there was, but fate was about to throw a spanner into the works and bring a double dose of trouble for the Saiko's. Akki's mother never did recover and slowly faded away dying in the night, Akki's father fell into a deep depression and money stopped coming in meaning Akki had to do something. At the age of 6 she started helping out neighbours and family friends for food or money. While helping a good friend of her fathers by delivering some vegetables, Akki was stopped by 4 boys twice her age they wanted to take what she had. Akki stood her ground and refused which gained her a beating, just when she thought that it was all over the leader of the group came and stood over her an evil look in his eye and a sharp shard of glass in his hand, without a second thought he plunged it deep into Akki's left eye and just left her to bleed. Akki screamed at the top of her lungs in pain, it wasn't long until someone found her and took her to hospital. Her wound was treated but the sight in her eye would never return she would be forever scarred and left with a milky white eye with flecks of red through it.
After this Akki was a changed person, she would jump at the slightest noise, she had also grown very timid and withdrawn talking to no one but the two cats that her father had given her after she came home from the hospital and had started to recover. Even through all this Akki still had a dream she still wanted to help other and become the Kunoichi she had always dreamed, so after much begging her father allowed her to join the Shinobi Academy, even if she was a little older than most of the new starts.
Academy Days To say that for Akki the academy was no walk in the park was an understatement, it was a nightmare not only was she older than most of the other people in her class, her timid nature and sheer nervousness made it hell for her to be around other people. It wasn't until a certain friendly teacher decided to give Akki help after class that she started to grow and improve. Granted her ninjutsu wasn't the strongest but it wasn't the dangerous stuff she wanted to learn, so instead she focused her time on learning the human anatomy from books and learning of Chakra points and Chakra flow and how best to apply Ninjutsu for support and healing. She knew from speaking to her father that it was Medical Ninja that saved her mother and her during her birth and it was this thought that spurred her on.
Akki worked day and night to learn what she could taking her private after class lessons and loving it. It was during normal acadamy times that she was having problems. She wasn't mixing with other children or socialising in the slightest.
One day things got a little rough a group of children in Akki's class surrounded her and started to push her around and make fun of the blind eye. One of them thought it would be funny to throw her into a pool of water near by. They grabbed her arms and legs all the while Akki squirmed and screamed. They heaved her into the pool and even though it didnt even come up to her knees Akki panicked and froze. Fear had taken her and she just couldn't move and she started to hyper ventilate sucking in mouthfuls of water. A passing teacher found her black out face down in this pool. Things didn't get much better after the episode Akki with drew into her self even more and was scared of going to the academy every day, Thats when the Genin exams were announced. Akki knew she had no chance.
In the evenings Akki would study and practice and study and practice for she knew if she passed these exams she could start to work on her dream, even her fears were nothing compared to her final goal in life to become the greatest medical ninja ever known.
Genin Exams The day of the exams came far to quickly and Akki wasn't sure if she was ready, she walked into the class room after being called on by the instructor a lump in her throat and a knot in her stomach. There she stood her palms sweaty he eyes wide. The instructor looked her up and down a grim smile playing on his lips.
"Ok miss Saiko if you could show me the clone jutsu please"
Akki gulped and done as she was asked, her clone wasn't perfect put it was enough, the instructor then looked at her and something glinted in his eye.
"Thank you now I need for you to show me something impressive please something I will find interesting."
Akki's eyes shot open wide this wasn't part of the exam not what she had heard or even studied. Akki stood fear in her face, the shakes starting to take hold, then she took a deep breath, drew a Kunai and cut her arm. Blood started to flow like the very water Akki was afraid of. Akki placed her hand over the wound and let her chakra flow through it, the wound started to heal.
The instructors jaw dropped one thing he didn't count on was Akki's wide knowledge of the medical arts, after all it was her dream and she sure wasn't going to slack when it came to that.
The instructor motioned to the door and nodded his head.
"Thank you Miss Saiko you have passed, you will receive your headband shortly. With that Akki left a smile on her face she had finally done it, she had start on her path in life
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The sun was high in the sky and not a breeze could be felt, the streets were full of people going about their normal daily business, any normal person would say that it was a great day to be alive, but that wasn't so for Akki. She looked at herself in the mirror and a shudder shot right through her body, today was not going to be a good day and she knew it, she was fully dressed her hood pulled up tight over her head and her eye patch covering her blind eye. Akki wasn't feeling to confident this day.
She turned and walked down stair stroking her two cats as she went past them. As she entered the Kitchen her dad sat at the table, his face in his hands, he had never been the same since the death of his Wife, Akki's mother. Akki walked up to him and gave him a squeeze, he half squeezed back. Akki sighed and Grabbed a few things from the counter top and stepped outside. The streets were packed and it gave Akki a feeling in her a gut, a feeling to just run back to her room and hide under the bed, she swallowed this feeling and continued on, if she wanted to eat she had things that she needed to do. Her first stop was an old lady that lived a couple of doors down from her, the little old lady needed help clearing her garden and clear Akki did. The lady payed her with a fresh loaf of bread, Akki popped it into her a little backpack and headed to her next location, The day started to fly by, carry shopping, walk dogs, clean clothes, find a lost cat. Akki's day was busy. As the sun started to dip in the sky she wandered home tired and soar from her day.
She was almost home when she heard a scream for help. A little voice in her head said ignore it, go home to where it's safe, no one can harm you at home. But Akki's need to help other over wrote the voice in her head and she knew if it was to dangerous a situation she would look for a chuunin or Jounin to help instead.
As Akki neared the screaming she could see a little girl, she only looked about 8. Akki ran over to her and found out that the girl had fallen and gashed her leg. Akki smiled at the girl and told her not to worry she would help. Akki took a deep breath and placed her hands over the gash and let her chakra flow out, the gash slowly started to heal. The little girls eyes went wide, it was the first time she had ever seen medical ninjutsu in practice. Akki smiled at her and helped her to her feet. The girl Thanked Akki for everything and walked off back to her home.
The sun was very low and Akki knew she needed to get home, her father would be worried about her and she needed to start to make dinner for them both so she ran back as fast as possible, the whole while hoping that the days to come would be easier.
THE ARSENAL.
Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.
Jutsu
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Academy Jutsu Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
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Medical Jutsu Name: Oshi Tezawari - Pressure Touch Rank: D Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By emitting a pulse of chakra through the finger tips on the patient’s head pressure points, the user is able to relieve the headaches of any person, regardless of cause (stress, migraine, other ailments, alcohol consumption, etc.) The technique can have an offensive use as well, by altering the effects of the pressure exerted. The pressure will cause a severe headache at the target. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Onnetsusei Nami - Thermal Wave Rank: D Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The purpose of this technique is to return needed heat to the patient's body. The user sends a chakra wave to the patient’s chest to increase the blood flow, thus increasing the body temperature. The offensive use of this technique would be the heat wave causing the effects of a hot flash on the target. The sensation of heat usually begins in the face or chest, although it may appear elsewhere such as the back of the neck, and it can spread throughout the whole body. The heat can cause the target to feel light headed accompanied by a rapid heartbeat and sweating. The effect can last for 2-3 posts without interference. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Seiryou Nami - Cool Wave Rank: D Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The purpose of this technique is to cool down the temperature of an overheated body. The user sends a chakra pulse to the patient’s body, in order to open up the skin pores, pump up blood to the skin and widen the blood vessels nearest to the skin, or increase sweat production at the said area. All these effects cool down the body and make it return to normal temperatures. The offensive use of this technique would be of the similar origins, through contact the pulse emits a wave which cools the body where contacted. This effected area is no more than 40 cm in size and the affected area reacts much like any part of the body when cooled. Initial or brief contact merely cools the area, numbing it slightly to pain and reducing its speed of movement by 10%(in the case of limbs). If contact is maintained for more than one post, the limb or affected area will be further numbed and become slightly more brittle, making bones easier to break. The effects last for 2 posts after contact is broken. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Shindan Shuhou - Diagnosis Technique Rank: C Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: After performing the needed handseals, the user releases a pulse of chakra through the patient’s body. The pulse then returns through their chakra network back into the user’s palms, giving them a mental image of where the chakra network seems to be flaring or lowering. This can give the user a better idea of the location and injury type that has been inflicted. For use in offense, this technique is capable to present a map of the opponent’s chakra network on contact which can be used to determine chakra natures and levels. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Shousen no Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique Rank: C-A Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the higher the medical ninja's rank is the quicker they are able to heal more critical and serious injuries. Injuries of equal rank may be healed in 1 post, and completely restored in 2. If choosing to heal a wound higher than the rank of the Shousen used, it requires 2 extra posts per rank. Thus C-rank Shousen healing an A-rank wound would require 5 posts to fully heal, while a B-rank wound would require 3 posts for instance. If healing a lower-ranked wound with a higher-ranked Shousen, the wound is fully healed in one post as opposed to two. Chakra Cost: C: 8CP (2 per post), B: 12CP (4 per post), A: 20CP (6 per post)
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Ninjutsu Name: Endan - Fireball Rank: D-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m – 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After doing the necessary hand seals, the ninja draws chakra to their lungs before swiftly exhaling it, allowing them to blow a jet of fire from their mouth. Depending on the rank at which it is performed, Endan ranges in size and heat. Starting at a moderate level of heat and a reach of up to 3m, at D rank, and increasing in temperature to an intense heat and up to a 10m reach, when performed at A rank. Chakra Cost: D: 4 (1 per post), C: 5 (2 per post), B: 12 (3 per post), A: 23 (5 per post)
Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it. Chakra Cost: 9
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Note from the Creator.
I'm going to appologise now about any spelling or grammar mistakes, I am dislexic just thought I should let you know.
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| Subject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Thu 21 Feb 2013, 10:15 pm | |
| Completion bump |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Fri 22 Feb 2013, 2:27 am | |
| So,
- You have some messed up coding going on here. There's a broken spoiler at the top, and perhaps also centering? Also please, bold the template for the application.
- I'd like to see a bit longer appearance and personality written. Also, try to have them in neat paragraphs. Instead of 2 sentences here and 3 there. Better to have 2 or 3 paragraphs that are similar in size.
- Are you sure you don't want to start with an SC?
- Add a bit to your combat style, it already looks good; you tell us what is your weakness and strength. But we still require just a tad bit more detail.
- Can you give some explanation as to why she's so small? Did she stop growing because of the difficult birth? Does she have some illness? Add that into your history please.
- Can you please bold the templates for the academy jutsu? You are also missing one of them:
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[b]Name:[/b] Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Type:[/b] N/A [b]Range:[/b] N/A [b]Element:[/b] NA [b]Description:[/b] This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. [b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1 (1 per post)
- You only have 7 jutsu but you can start with 15. It's not something mandatory, but just a reminder.
- You are also missing your faceclaim. Even if you don't know where the character is from, we still need a link to her image and you fill the rest of the template out with Unknown.
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| | | Akki
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| Subject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Sat 23 Feb 2013, 4:43 pm | |
| Ok i think i've fixed what you have asked for, except for one thing, The water walking jutsu which was missing from the academy jutsu has been removed for a reason and that is Akki's major fear of water has disallowed her from learning it since she cannot get close enough to a body of water without freezing up.
I'm happy with the amount of jutsu I have and the Special characteristic i didnt feel any of them related to Akki in anyway.
Hope that things are better ^_^ |
| | | MsMoney
Age : 37 Posts : 2201
| Subject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Feb 2013, 11:57 pm | |
| (1/2) approved. |
| | | Akki
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| Subject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Mon 11 Mar 2013, 11:09 pm | |
| bump |
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| Subject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Tue 12 Mar 2013, 2:03 am | |
| I looked it over, and I dont see anything that I would not approve. I'll give this the second stamp. Approved 2/2
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