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Saiko, Akki.

THE INFO.

Name:Saiko, Akki
Nickname: known to friends and family as Kobito (Translates as dwarf)
Age:15
Gender:Female
Appearance: Akki stands at 4ft and 3 inches in height and has seemed to have stopped growing, Medical Shinobi seem to think that is a birth defect of some sort but are unsure as to what has caused it. She is slim and quite wiry with slight definition, her arms and legs are quite stumpy and her hands very small indeed.

Akki's hair is long and flowing and dyed a light blue to match the sky. Her eyes are a deep hazel or one is, Akki is blind in her left eye which is a milky white mixed with a blood red. She has a scar running from the top of her left eye down to the bottom of her left cheek. Akki looks after her appearance alot, making sure her skin is clean and her hair shiney and straight, she also has a bit of an obsession with her clothes which seems to come from the fact her appreance isn't perfect due to her scarred face.

Akki will be seen in a variety of outfits sometimes changing several times a day, her main outfit isn't much of an outfit at all. A strappy top made from black crossed belts and white lace which drops down low in the back stretching to her feet. She wears flowing sleeves on her arms connected to her top by straps. Her boots are white with black tips. On her lower torso she wears white shorts that come to just above the thigh. From time to time Akki will be seen wearing a black hood which covers her eyes, this only happens on days when she is feeling very self conscious. Akki can also be seen wearing an eye patch over her blind eyes also on days when she is self conscious. Akki tends to focus on her clothing to take the focus away from her face.

If someone was to look closely at Akki's blind eye the would see that the iris has turned a milky white and around the iris are flecks of red, in the bottom of the eyes is a deep red from where blood had pooled and left a permenant mark on her eye. The scar that runs down her face isn't a clean straight line is is jagged and swoops slightly to the left at the top.

Forehead Protector: Worn around the top of right thigh.
Personality:Akki is quite a nervous person who stuggles to socialize with others . She likes to keep herself to herself mostly and when she talks it is normally quiet and few words are said.This is mainly because she is self conscious of her appearance her blind eye and scar disgust her. so she goes to great lengths to make everything else look perfect, it almost borders on obsession. What makes it worse is people staring at her, she withdraws and bearly speaks above a whisper in these situations.

There are a few situations where Akki will come across confident and proud. Akki loves to sing, never in public but those have overheard her say that she seems like a different person. She is also like a new Akki when it comes to learning and training, because of her lack of height she works twice as hard as those who have better reach and more height so that she won't fail, Pushing herself to limits that could quite easily damage her body, she is unwilling to quit even when things get tough and others turn back.

Akki has a deep fear of water as she cannot swim and has never found the confidence to learn, her fear is so bad that when confronted by a pool of water or the thought of being submerged she freezes on the spot and withdraws into her own head. This of course has caused problems with certain jutsu such as being able to walk on water. One of her big worries is how she will react when faced with a water based jutu which is a huge problem being born and raised in a country where water and water based jutsu are every where.

In her spare time Akki loves to curl up with a good book, or spend time with her cats Mr Moggy and Twitch. Akki's goal in life is to become the best Kunoichi she can,and to make as many friends as possible, only if those friends can see past her physical disfigurement and see the true Akki underneath. All in all Akki is a caring person and would love to help as many people as possible, she doesn't really agree with violence but puts up with it because she knows that its part of the Shinobi life style. She knows that if she was more confident she would be a better ninja but some things are easier said than done, she also understands that life is hard and if you just roll over and give up then nothing would get done and everyone would suffer, and though that she is not willing to live with.

Clan:None
Nindō:Everyone deserves help..

THE NINJA.


Origin:Mizu no Kuni
Affiliation:Kirigakure
Rank:Genin
Specialties: Main: Eijutsu Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: First: Katon Second:Doton
Combat Style: Akki likes to work in a support role using her jutsu to protect others on the battlefield, Akki would rather heal and help that physically injure someone but if push comes to shove then she will stand tall and hold her own but preferably from a distance, she understands she is weaker than most and her blindness in one eye is a disadvantage.

When backed into a corner Akki will use her small height to her advantage dodging and weaving. This height also makes her less easy to spot and light on her feet meaning she is good at sneaking and getting around to heal others. Akki can be quite a thinker when she needs to be, scanning the battlefield for an opportunity or a chance to move into a certain position. She is incapable of leading but only because of her lack of confidence if she could over come that she would make a good leader.

Akki tries not to use Ninjutsu where possible trying to find a more peaceful outcome to a fight. Violence only gets more violence so she belives that any situation can be solved without the need of beating on the next person
Special Characteristics:N/A

THE BACKGROUND.


History: Birth
Akki was born into a modest family with modest belongings, her father was a wood worker and tradesman, her mother ran a small nursery for the local children so that their parents could get things done. When Akki was born it was the greatest day of her parents life, they had been trying for a child for many years with no luck.

Akki's birth was fairly complex, her mother hemoraged during birth while Akki's umbilical chord was wrapped around her neck, Medical ninja were called in to help out, saving Akki and her mother, due to the damage done Akki's mother was layed up in bed constantly from then on leaving Akki's father to look after the new born baby.

Younger years
Things quickly became hard for the Saiko family, with Akki's mother unable to do anything and her father looking after her, the family started to struggle, money stopped coming in and food was getting hard to afford, Akki's father had to start bringing young Akki to any handyman jobs that he could get but his reputation was waning and jobs going to anyone who was more available. Times were tough but this wouldn't stop the Saiko family.

From and early age it was obvious that Akki was going to be a bright. She was walking and talking quickly and constantly asking questions from the moment it was possible. Accompanying her father around was teaching her a little of crafting things, and learning of her mothers ailments is what made Akki decide from a very young age that she wanted to help people.

As Akki grew she read book upon book and at the age of 5 had already decided she was going to become a Medical Kunoichi one of the best there was, but fate was about to throw a spanner into the works and bring a double dose of trouble for the Saiko's. Akki's mother never did recover and slowly faded away dying in the night, Akki's father fell into a deep depression and money stopped coming in meaning Akki had to do something. At the age of 6 she started helping out neighbours and family friends for food or money. While helping a good friend of her fathers by delivering some vegetables, Akki was stopped by 4 boys twice her age they wanted to take what she had. Akki stood her ground and refused which gained her a beating, just when she thought that it was all over the leader of the group came and stood over her an evil look in his eye and a sharp shard of glass in his hand, without a second thought he plunged it deep into Akki's left eye and just left her to bleed. Akki screamed at the top of her lungs in pain, it wasn't long until someone found her and took her to hospital. Her wound was treated but the sight in her eye would never return she would be forever scarred and left with a milky white eye with flecks of red through it.

After this Akki was a changed person, she would jump at the slightest noise, she had also grown very timid and withdrawn talking to no one but the two cats that her father had given her after she came home from the hospital and had started to recover. Even through all this Akki still had a dream she still wanted to help other and become the Kunoichi she had always dreamed, so after much begging her father allowed her to join the Shinobi Academy, even if she was a little older than most of the new starts.

Academy Days
To say that for Akki the academy was no walk in the park was an understatement, it was a nightmare not only was she older than most of the other people in her class, her timid nature and sheer nervousness made it hell for her to be around other people. It wasn't until a certain friendly teacher decided to give Akki help after class that she started to grow and improve. Granted her ninjutsu wasn't the strongest but it wasn't the dangerous stuff she wanted to learn, so instead she focused her time on learning the human anatomy from books and learning of Chakra points and Chakra flow and how best to apply Ninjutsu for support and healing. She knew from speaking to her father that it was Medical Ninja that saved her mother and her during her birth and it was this thought that spurred her on.

Akki worked day and night to learn what she could taking her private after class lessons and loving it. It was during normal acadamy times that she was having problems. She wasn't mixing with other children or socialising in the slightest.

One day things got a little rough a group of children in Akki's class surrounded her and started to push her around and make fun of the blind eye. One of them thought it would be funny to throw her into a pool of water near by. They grabbed her arms and legs all the while Akki squirmed and screamed. They heaved her into the pool and even though it didnt even come up to her knees Akki panicked and froze. Fear had taken her and she just couldn't move and she started to hyper ventilate sucking in mouthfuls of water. A passing teacher found her black out face down in this pool. Things didn't get much better after the episode Akki with drew into her self even more and was scared of going to the academy every day, Thats when the Genin exams were announced. Akki knew she had no chance.

In the evenings Akki would study and practice and study and practice for she knew if she passed these exams she could start to work on her dream, even her fears were nothing compared to her final goal in life to become the greatest medical ninja ever known.

Genin Exams
The day of the exams came far to quickly and Akki wasn't sure if she was ready, she walked into the class room after being called on by the instructor a lump in her throat and a knot in her stomach. There she stood her palms sweaty he eyes wide. The instructor looked her up and down a grim smile playing on his lips.

"Ok miss Saiko if you could show me the clone jutsu please"

Akki gulped and done as she was asked, her clone wasn't perfect put it was enough, the instructor then looked at her and something glinted in his eye.

"Thank you now I need for you to show me something impressive please something I will find interesting."

Akki's eyes shot open wide this wasn't part of the exam not what she had heard or even studied. Akki stood fear in her face, the shakes starting to take hold, then she took a deep breath, drew a Kunai and cut her arm. Blood started to flow like the very water Akki was afraid of. Akki placed her hand over the wound and let her chakra flow through it, the wound started to heal.

The instructors jaw dropped one thing he didn't count on was Akki's wide knowledge of the medical arts, after all it was her dream and she sure wasn't going to slack when it came to that.

The instructor motioned to the door and nodded his head.

"Thank you Miss Saiko you have passed, you will receive your headband shortly.
With that Akki left a smile on her face she had finally done it, she had start on her path in life

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THE ARSENAL.


Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.

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Note from the Creator.

I'm going to appologise now about any spelling or grammar mistakes, I am dislexic just thought I should let you know.


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PostSubject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] EmptyThu 21 Feb 2013, 10:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] EmptyFri 22 Feb 2013, 2:27 am

So,

  • You have some messed up coding going on here. There's a broken spoiler at the top, and perhaps also centering? Also please, bold the template for the application.

  • I'd like to see a bit longer appearance and personality written. Also, try to have them in neat paragraphs. Instead of 2 sentences here and 3 there. Better to have 2 or 3 paragraphs that are similar in size.

  • Are you sure you don't want to start with an SC?

  • Add a bit to your combat style, it already looks good; you tell us what is your weakness and strength. But we still require just a tad bit more detail.

  • Can you give some explanation as to why she's so small? Did she stop growing because of the difficult birth? Does she have some illness? Add that into your history please.

  • Can you please bold the templates for the academy jutsu? You are also missing one of them:
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    [b]Name:[/b] Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
    [b]Rank:[/b] D
    [b]Type:[/b] N/A
    [b]Range:[/b] N/A
    [b]Element:[/b] NA
    [b]Description:[/b] This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
    [b]Chakra Cost:[/b] 1 (1 per post)

  • You only have 7 jutsu but you can start with 15. It's not something mandatory, but just a reminder.

  • You are also missing your faceclaim. Even if you don't know where the character is from, we still need a link to her image and you fill the rest of the template out with Unknown.
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Akki
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PostSubject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] EmptySat 23 Feb 2013, 4:43 pm

Ok i think i've fixed what you have asked for, except for one thing, The water walking jutsu which was missing from the academy jutsu has been removed for a reason and that is Akki's major fear of water has disallowed her from learning it since she cannot get close enough to a body of water without freezing up.

I'm happy with the amount of jutsu I have and the Special characteristic i didnt feel any of them related to Akki in anyway.

Hope that things are better ^_^
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(1/2) approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] Saiko, Akki [Kiri Genin] EmptyTue 12 Mar 2013, 2:03 am

I looked it over, and I dont see anything that I would not approve.
I'll give this the second stamp.
Approved 2/2

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