Tafunesu [Finished]

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Clan Name: Tafunesu [Toughness]

Location: N/A

Signature Traits: Clan members have thin bodily frames, developing differently to others as smaller amounts of muscle are still more potent. specializing in Taijutsu is what comes natural to them, like a forced instinct which can't be overridden. They all possess a pale complexion as well as being between 5-5'6 feet tall.

Kekkei Genkai: Muscle Release
Members of this clan possess the inherent ability to be stronger than others of equal rank, although only in the physical sense. Their muscles have much more intricate Chakra pathways than most, causing them to continuously develop even without exercising. Although there are still limits to how strong they can become due to the nature of Chakra, as they gain more of it and become more skilled their physical prowess increases. As such clan members benefit greatly from experience in the field, most would never forgo the chance to do combat either. For every 10CP the clan member possesses they are capable of lifting 75 kg with their whole body's peak strength. They are capable of throwing up to three quarters of what they can lift, also using their entire body's strength. However, when throwing with one hand they can throw up to five eighths of what they can lift. This also affects their ability to strike though, allowing them to deliver powerful punches with the force of 36 kg per 10CP, kicks can deliver a greater force of 45 kg per 10CP, these are their peak striking forces. However there is a drawback to these intricate Chakra pathways within their muscles, and it plagues all members of the Tafunesu including the clan prodigies. Their Chakra is dedicated to the muscles, forming and shaping the clan member's body, depriving 10% of any spendable Chakra they should possess the means to use. It's still inside them, but it's focused toward the continued development of their muscles.

Most Taijutsu techniques regardless of rank benefit from the Tafunesu clan member's KKG, made superior due to their strength. Clan members are usually tested against opponents that counter them, or fellow clan members in close combat, rarely otherwise do they get to fight Taijutsu users of the same rank. There are no standard techniques shared by clan members, more often than not they simply rely on their strength combined with personal techniques, or village techniques. Some even forgo the use of techniques altogether, attempting to survive based on skill alone. When transplanting pieces of a Tafunesu's body onto another, their strength will be passed on but so will the penalties of the clan. That ligament will drain 10% of the person's Chakra permanently, unless it is removed again in which case their Chakra will slowly return to normal. Clan members eat and drink food with high calories as they all possess a high metabolism, it aids their physical prowess to do so regularly. Clan members cannot possess special effects that increase their strength further, this includes special characteristics and techniques. They are also less capable than others with throwing weapons, suffering inaccuracy due to their body's tension. Tafunesu clan members are limited to physical attacks with their body, or weaponry, as well as NinTaijutsu. It's impossible for them to use Medical Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, etc. Academy techniques are still capable of being used due to their simplicity. Tafunesu clan members are mostly dominant with their left hand.

Rank List:

All Measurements in Kilograms:

History: This clan originated from a small village, located on a small island which was self sustained and attached to cloud country. The inhabitants of the island lived quite happily, while members of the Tafunesu clan were accepted as a strong work force for the farms and mines. Looked up to by the ordinary workers and generally friendly, easy going and fun to work with, the Tafunesu were regarded highly by all. Naturally, some people would come and go from the island, but would not take secrets of the location away for any profit. Most simply stumbled upon the island before being greeted by the villagers, invited to have a pint and talk about their adventures. Tafunesu clan members would leave quite often as well, not to seek fame or glory, but to explore the world and discover its mysteries. They are a very curious people, it's within their blood to explore and discover new things. Most Tafunesu clan members outside of the village are unaware of their origins, simply knowing their parents and that they came from somewhere foreign. At the same time, most of them search for their origins at one point in life, and discover the island their clan originates from. Only a few decide to return to it and live peacefully, but those that do are never seen or heard from again due to how comfortable it is. Nowadays the Tafunesu can be found just about anywhere in the world, it's common knowledge they exist and their abilities are well documented.

Clan Jutsu: N/A

Open - 1/4 [One Slot Will Always Be Reserved For Me] (Can only be started at Genin) x]

Code:: [b]Clan Name:[/b] Tafunesu [Toughness]

[b]Location:[/b] N/A

[b]Signature Traits:[/b] Clan members have thin bodily frames, developing differently to others as smaller amounts of muscle are still more potent. specializing in Taijutsu is what comes natural to them, like a forced instinct which can't be overridden. They all possess a pale complexion as well as being between 5-5'6 feet tall.

[b]Kekkei Genkai:[/b] Muscle Release
Members of this clan possess the inherent ability to be stronger than others of equal rank, although only in the physical sense. Their muscles have much more intricate Chakra pathways than most, causing them to continuously develop even without exercising. Although there are still limits to how strong they can become due to the nature of Chakra, as they gain more of it and become more skilled their physical prowess increases. As such clan members benefit greatly from experience in the field, most would never forgo the chance to do combat either. For every 10CP the clan member possesses they are capable of lifting 75 kg with their whole body's peak strength. They are capable of throwing up to three quarters of what they can lift, also using their entire body's strength. However, when throwing with one hand they can throw up to five eighths of what they can lift. This also affects their ability to strike though, allowing them to deliver powerful punches with the force of 36 kg per 10CP, kicks can deliver a greater force of 45 kg per 10CP, these are their peak striking forces. However there is a drawback to these intricate Chakra pathways within their muscles, and it plagues all members of the Tafunesu including the clan prodigies. Their Chakra is dedicated to the muscles, forming and shaping the clan member's body, depriving 10% of any spendable Chakra they should possess the means to use. It's still inside them, but it's focused toward the continued development of their muscles.

Most Taijutsu techniques regardless of rank benefit from the Tafunesu clan member's KKG, made superior due to their strength. Clan members are usually tested against opponents that counter them, or fellow clan members in close combat, rarely otherwise do they get to fight Taijutsu users of the same rank. There are no standard techniques shared by clan members, more often than not they simply rely on their strength combined with personal techniques, or village techniques. Some even forgo the use of techniques altogether, attempting to survive based on skill alone. When transplanting pieces of a Tafunesu's body onto another, their strength will be passed on but so will the penalties of the clan. That ligament will drain 10% of the person's Chakra permanently, unless it is removed again in which case their Chakra will slowly return to normal. Clan members eat and drink food with high calories as they all possess a high metabolism, it aids their physical prowess to do so regularly. Clan members cannot possess special effects that increase their strength further, this includes special characteristics and techniques. They are also less capable than others with throwing weapons, suffering inaccuracy due to their body's tension. Tafunesu clan members are limited to physical attacks with their body, or weaponry, as well as NinTaijutsu. It's impossible for them to use Medical Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, etc. Academy techniques are still capable of being used due to their simplicity. Tafunesu clan members are mostly dominant with their left hand.

Rank List:
[spoiler=All Measurements in Kilograms]Genin: 50 CP = Lifts: 375 - Punching Force: 180 - Kicking Force: 225
Experienced Genin: 60 CP = Lifts: 450 - Punching Force: 216 - Kicking Force: 270
Chūnin: 80 CP = Lifts: 600 - Punching Force: 288 - Kicking Force: 360
Special Jōnin: 100 CP = Lifts: 750 - Punching Force: 360 - Kicking Force: 450
Jōnin: 150 CP = Lifts: 1125 - Punching Force: 540 - Kicking Force: 675
Master Jōnin: 160 CP = Lifts: 1200 - Punching Force: 576 - Kicking Force: 710
Sennin: 170 CP = Lifts: 1275 - Punching Force: 612 - Kicking Force: 765
Kage: 190 CP = Lifts:1425 - Punching Force: 684 - Kicking Force: 855[/spoiler]

[b]History:[/b] This clan originated from a small village, located on a small island which was self sustained and attached to cloud country. The inhabitants of the island lived quite happily, while members of the Tafunesu clan were accepted as a strong work force for the farms and mines. Looked up to by the ordinary workers and generally friendly, easy going and fun to work with, the Tafunesu were regarded highly by all. Naturally, some people would come and go from the island, but would not take secrets of the location away for any profit. Most simply stumbled upon the island before being greeted by the villagers, invited to have a pint and talk about their adventures. Tafunesu clan members would leave quite often as well, not to seek fame or glory, but to explore the world and discover its mysteries. They are a very curious people, it's within their blood to explore and discover new things. Most Tafunesu clan members outside of the village are unaware of their origins, simply knowing their parents and that they came from somewhere foreign. At the same time, most of them search for their origins at one point in life, and discover the island their clan originates from. Only a few decide to return to it and live peacefully, but those that do are never seen or heard from again due to how comfortable it is. Nowadays the Tafunesu can be found just about anywhere in the world, it's common knowledge they exist and their abilities are well documented.

[b]Clan Jutsu:[/b] N/A

Age : 32 Posts : 683

The full strength make sure it says it's like a lift over head or peak strength type deal.
How much can they throw?
I want you to make them less accurate at longer ranges.
Change the stuff to increments of 10CP.
Make it so the per 10 strength of punches is 36kg and kicks are at 45kg.
I want them to be limited to only taijutsu, nintaijutsu, and weaponry.
Where did they originate?

Age : 33 Posts : 254

Done~

Age : 32 Posts : 683

Approved 1/2.

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Approved 2/2

Age : 31 Posts : 1490

Unapproved pending review by Enzo as the head of creation. (Or at the very least until he is on skype and this can be further discussed.)

Firstly clans are not supposed to be created that circumvent the Special Characteristics that are already in place. Yours replaces and even surpasses the usage of the strength SC.

There are stacked limitations that dont make up for the fact that you are measuring in base force when the force derived in all martial arts attacks is not determined by sheer muscle mass and force when you consider that momentum and body snap movements must be taken into account. The strength of a punch or kick doubles and even triples when you input the movement required for boxing or martial arts. Especially when you consider a that a tae kwon do spinning back kick delivered more than 1,500 pounds (680.4 kilograms) of force, while the kung fu flying double kick produced about 1,000 pounds (453.6 kilograms) of force. This is with only standard mastery of martial arts.

You're circumventing years of training and reaping well past the benefit. Not to mention you only miss out on 5 total chakra points at a standard Genin level. Chakra does not promote muscle growth on its own. Chakra is the combination of stamina (which is gained through muscle growth) and spiritual energy (experience) using that definition the fundamental basis of this clan is quite implausible. You are creating muscle growth without exercise using something that by base definition requires exercise.

Age : 33 Posts : 254

Quote :: Firstly clans are not supposed to be created that circumvent the Special Characteristics that are already in place. Yours replaces and even surpasses the usage of the strength SC.

~ That's why there are downfalls along with the strength, such as only being able to use those three types of specialty.

Quote :: There are stacked limitations that dont make up for the fact that you are measuring in base force when the force derived in all martial arts attacks is not determined by sheer muscle mass and force when you consider that momentum and body snap movements must be taken into account. The strength of a punch or kick doubles and even triples when you input the movement required for boxing or martial arts. Especially when you consider a that a tae kwon do spinning back kick delivered more than 1,500 pounds (680.4 kilograms) of force, while the kung fu flying double kick produced about 1,000 pounds (453.6 kilograms) of force. This is with only standard mastery of martial arts.

~ The measurements for their hitting force and lifting are at their peak, not every strike is going to be as strong as the ones listed, as it is the maximum they can achieve with the types of movements you listed.

Quote :: You're circumventing years of training and reaping well past the benefit. Not to mention you only miss out on 5 total chakra points at a standard Genin level. Chakra does not promote muscle growth on its own. Chakra is the combination of stamina (which is gained through muscle growth) and spiritual energy (experience) using that definition the fundamental basis of this clan is quite implausible. You are creating muscle growth without exercise using something that by base definition requires exercise.

~ Their muscle develops in a special way because it's in their bloodline, just as the Orochimaru bloodline develops like a snake, this is what makes them unique after all. And I believe it's well listed that they fight often in order to better themselves, so they don't completely forgo exercise, they just don't workout as much as others would have to. Which is a moot point when you think about it, because who honestly works out IC? It's just a flare, to add something more unique to them. And once again, they don't only miss out on 10% of their Chakra, but they can only use Taijutsu, Weaponry or NinTaijutsu.

PS: I hope I've covered everything you're disheartened about, because I'd rather not wait for another few days or weeks, I doubt I have it in me.

Age : 33 Posts : 254

KHABOOM

Age : 29 Posts : 1797

Apologies for my delayed response, my laptop charger(s) are both disfunctional, so I'm forced to use some more archaic technology to communicate online. Fortunately this technology has a working keyboard, so this won't be as painful as a task as it could be c:

Anyway, there are a few reasons this clan will not be allowed. Let me list just 3, as they are the most basic.

This violates our "Cannot have a clan based on SC's on the site" rule, whether you limit it or not. Not only that, but you grant abilities superior to the strength SC's to your clan, which is not helping your case any.
The limits to this clan are completely and utterly inadequate. First off; being limited to only weaponry and taijutsu is definitely not a limit to a clan who's sole ability is to amplify the power of both of these specialties. If you were say, limited to specialties OTHER than Tai and Wep, now THAT is a significant disadvantage; even though it basically makes the clan useless. Additionally, 10% cut in chakra is hardly a huge diasdvantage, especially when your clan members are going to be using physical (non chakra exhaustive) combat for the majority of the time. What good is 19 less chakra at S-rank when your single punch can deal S-rank damage without any SC's (Let's not forget, you'd still be able to stack strength SC's onto this clan ultimately making the members godly powerful)?
Finally, the force-impact measurements for the clan don't make much sense. I'm no expert in martial arts, but I'm pretty sure you create more force by punching than you do by pushing. Punching is a quick, powerful, high-energy motion of the arm aimed to produce a lot of damage really quickly. When you push (lifting is basically pushing off the ground), you're exerting a lot of force over time; but not all at once. The reason you can't punch or kick something heavy into the air, is more to do with physics than anything else. A man who can bench press 300lbs can deliver significantly more pounds of force with a punch; I'm almost 100% sure on that. It's the reason a punch can leave a hole in the wall; but pushing at the same wall really hard isn't going to leave a mark.

Even if you did manage to fix the second and third points I made; the first one pretty much sums up the whole reason this clan is denied. We don't allow Special Characteristics to be converted into clans. Especially when there is almost no drawback.

Age : 33 Posts : 254

So basically instead of just getting Trey to say this clan was denied, I was allowed to wait for three-four days for you to tell me that. Thanks for wasting my time.

Age : 31 Posts : 1490

MrMoney wrote:: Firstly clans are not supposed to be created that circumvent the Special Characteristics that are already in place. Yours replaces and even surpasses the usage of the strength SC.

Age : 33 Posts : 254

You're not helping your case simply by rubbing it in, just so you know, jerk.

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