The Struggle-Part 3.

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Mission Title: The Struggle-Part 3.
Mission Type: Custom
Mission Location: Kumogakure
Shinobi Requirement: B
Mission Rank: B
Mission Objective: Following a series of unfortunate events that led you to become an undercover Yukigakure shinobi you are to capture the enemy squad that you have been assigned to and return them safely to Kumogakure. The squad is an enemy squad consisting on two other enemy chunin. The interrogation squad will handle them from there, report to the Raikage as soon as they shinobi have properly been restrained and you are relieved of their care.
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Age : 31 Posts : 471

A few things about this mission;
It'd assume you mean that you are going undercover, disguised as a Yukigakure Shinobi (nothing to do with yuki's kage), to retrieve your captured comrades. As it is written, however, it infers your allegiance is reversed and you're doing the capturing, so a little rewording may be in order. This mission is also lacking in a lot of detail, like how your squad was captured, how many of your allies need your help, who exactly has them in captivity (one enemy squad? Two? The whole village?) and where they are being held (a camp? A minor village? Yukigakure's own prison?). This kind of information is important and may affect the requirements of the mission.

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Thanks, but these are not comrades. They are other yuki nin and are in the same squad as AM I.

Sury fur da wurding Dolan

Age : 31 Posts : 471

So you're posing as a Yuki Nin to kidnap other Yuki Nin? Why? And why do they trust you so easily to assign you a team? Or are you infiltrating an existing squad under the guise of an existing Yuki Nin? How will you single-handedly capture three other Chuunin, who will likely struggle when they realize you're an imposter? Sorry if it sounds like I'm being picky, I just need to understand what your objective is and why. And an entire team of Chuunin might be a bit much for one other Chuunin to handle alone.

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I am in this situation IC. The struggle topic will show you but I am confident against 3 other chunin.

Age : 31 Posts : 471

Sorry for the delay on this, if you're already in that situation, then that's all good. Just change that first line to say "After a series of events that lead to you being an undercover Yukigakure Shinobi ..." Etc, so that it's clear you got to that point logically c: And three Chuunin is a bit much to not only fight but capture on a B ranked mission, drop that down to two and you're good to go

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Edittsd

Age : 31 Posts : 471

Approved for missioning!
Thanks for your cooperation <3