Incoming Jutsu Application

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Name: Manipulation Style: Copy Cat
Type: Medical
Rank: D-C
Element: -
Description: Manipulation Style: Copy Cat is a jutsu in which Kakougan can make the targets body repeat the same move he did after an attack. To do this, Kakougan must make contact with the target, like if there was a clash between two punches. In the instant the fists make contact, Kakougan can use this jutsu and make the opponent punch again in the exact same manner their previous punch was done. Even if the target is restricted from doing a movement that they must copy the body still tries and usually causes itself much pain and damage. If a taijutsu or jutsu that uses chakra along with physical contact is used, Kakougan can still use this jutsu in the same manner. This jutsu does not prevent the target from moving it only forces them to repeat their previous movement. This can be increased even more if a C-rank amount of chakra is put into this. If more chakra is put into the jutsu, the target repeats the action twice in a row instead of only once.

Name: Manipulation Style: Pressure Strike
Type: Medical
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Pressure Strike is a jutsu developed by Kakougan in which he coats his hand with medical chakra and waves it 5 inches or less over the target. Depending on what part of the body the chakra hits, different things will occur due to the chakra striking different pressure points. If the chakra assaults a limb, the pressure points in the limb are all struck, causing immense pain and the limbs joints fold together for an instant. If the chakra hits the torso or stomach, then the targets lungs and stomach will start to cramp and become filled with pain whenever the target moves for 3 posts. If the chakra hits the targets head, the chakra hits the targets temples and causes enough pain to knock the target out cold.

Name: Manipulation Style: Pressure Imbalance
Type: Medical
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: Manipulation Style: Pressure Imbalance is a jutsu that uses the targets pressure points against them with the help of Kakougan's chakra. This chakra must be introduced to the target by physical contact with Kakougan. Once the chakra is introduced to the targets body, it splits up and goes to two limbs on the target and then begins to assault the pressure points on each limb. This causes extreme pain for the target and the inability to use the targeted limbs for 2 posts.

Name: Crush Style: Explosive Strike
Type: -
Rank: D-S
Element: -
Description: Explosive Strike is a simple jutsu that relies on large amounts of chakra rather to completely break walls or armor. Once this jutsu is used, chakra covers Kakougan's knuckles in a small visible layer. When this chakra comes into contact with an object, it explodes with force from Kakougan's fist towards the object it is in contact with, breaking the object. This jutsu must be used at an equal rank to the object it is used to break.

Name: Crush Style: Pulse Kick
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Fuuton
Description: Pulse kick is a very simple jutsu in which Kakougan does a wide round house kick that is charged with fuuton chakra. This chakra blows back incoming attacks and projectiles with ease. This can also be reversed and be used to bring objects in with the kick.

Name: Alert Possum Jutsu
Type: -
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Alert Possum Jutsu is a simple jutsu that causes the user to fall into a deep yet aware sleep. While asleep, the user can still see and wake himself up at will whenever needed. The downfall of the jutsu is that this jutsu prevents the user from falling into a deep sleep and instead maintains their body in the first stages of sleep. This effectively halves the amount of rest the user gets from this half sleep.

Name: Surgeon Style: Cadaver Meld
Type: Medical
Rank: D+
Element: N/A
Description: Cadaver Meld is a surgical jutsu that replaces the patients skin and muscle with a dead bodies skin. Using this source of extra skin makes the jutsu faster and more chakra efficient then other skin repairing jutsu. To use the jutsu, Kakougan removes clumps of skin and muscle from the dead body and then melds them onto the patient. Each hand full of skin and muscle that is implanted uses up a D-Rank amount of chakra.

Name: Surgeon Style: Blood Replacement
Type: Medical
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Surgeon Style: Blood Replacement is a jutsu used to replace the patients blood with another ready supply of blood. To do this Kakougan slashes open both of the targets wrists and then attaches the source of blood via tube to the veins on one wrist and sucks blood out from the other wrist with medical and fuuton chakra. This replaces the users blood thus removing any ailments the old blood would of held. This is a surgical jutsu, meaning it takes time and talent to perform and is not practical for combat since it can take up to 5 posts to do.

Name: Surgeon Style: Real Chakra Scalpel
Type: Medical
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Surgeon Style: Real Chakra Scalpel is a jutsu Kakougan uses in ordeto make small incision in a patient that he wouldn’t be able to do with his large hands. This jutsu creates a small blade on Kakougan’s pointer finger that can make very accurate cuts in a patient.

Name: Shed Skin
Type: KKG
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: Shed Skin is a jutsu in which Kakougan rapidly grows a new layer of skin under his skin as the original layer prepares to come off. When this jutsu is used, nothing that is happening can be seen by the naked eye, during this time however, Kakougan’s body is replicating more skin underneath his previous skin to use the jutsu. On the second turn this jutsu is used, the skin snaps off like one piece of armor and falls behind Kakougan. This change of skin removes any ailments or damage that may have been on the previous skin and leaves Kakougan healthy and with a new suit of super skin. The shedding skin can be used for further jutsu.

Name: Shed Skin Clone Armor
Type: KKG
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu becomes available for use after Kakougan has used the jutsu Shed Skin and has his old suit of skin in his hands. This jutsu is used along with a clone jutsu to equip the clone with the old suit of skin. This gives the clone all of the abilities the skin had when it was shed from Kakougan, making the clone much more durable.

Name: Chakra Coat
Type: -
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Chakra Coat is a very simple jutsu that Kakougan uses to prevent damage to his skin for a brief moment by coating his body in a small layer of chakra. This chakra defends the skin against elemental effects such as burning and makes the skin selectively permeable to poisons while the jutsu is active. Chakra Coat does not prevent any blunt force from hitting Kakougan and only last for one post before it dissipates.

Name: Crush Style: Water Absorbing Dirt
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S
Element: Doton
Description: Crush Style: Water Absorbing Dirt is a jutsu Kakougan made to protect himself from suiton jutsu by using doton. To use this jutsu, Kakougan must grab dirt from the ground and infuse it with his own chakra that must be equal to the rank of the suiton jutsu that is the target. Once this is done he then throws the dirt into the suiton jutsu. Once the dirt is in the water it begins to absorb the water rapidly, turning itself into a large pile of mud and completely neutralizing the jutsu. This mud pit that is created from the jutsu can be dangerous depending on how large it is. For example, if a whole lake of water is turned into mud, ninja standing on it would sink into it if they stood on it. Doton users however, can travel through it with jutsu as they would with regular earth.

Name: Crush Style: Grasping Mud Hand
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: Grasping Mud Hand is a jutsu that is very similar to the elemental dragon jutsus in the sense that it maintains a form and can lock onto a target, but there are many differences too. One of the most obvious differences is the shape of the jutsu. Even though it is about the same size as an elemental dragon, this jutsu takes the form of a giant hand of mud. Another difference is the length of the jutsu. To use this jutsu, the user has to be underneath a supply of mud using Underground Mole Hiding. Once underneath the mud, the user sticks his hand upwards into the mud above and channels chakra into the mud. On the surface, the mud bubbles and a giant mud hand emerges. The hand locks onto a target and chases it until the owner of the jutsus hand moves from the mud. If the mud hand is destroys, it simply reforms from the mud after one post and continues to attack. This jutsu can be immediately dispelled by being hit by any level of raiton jutsu, if this is done, the user of Grasping Mud Hand will receive all of the shock from the raiton jutsu.

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Completion Bump

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Should probably take out the 'WIP' if you want it to be checked there bro.

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Touche....

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Your Copycat jutsu is iffy.. does it apply to jutsu as well? I mean, it seems like this could pretty easily be an insta kill technique.

Explosive Strike's downfall should be the amount of force you're exerting, it could damage your bones and muscles

Pressure imbalance should be 2 posts, and require contact with that pressure point.

Pressure strike is awefully powerful for not requiring contact

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Copycat: Well, of course it wouldn't apply for jutsu... unless you count taijutsu or close range medical, because then this jutsu could make contact. And yes I thought about that and then added in the fact that they can move but just the limb that is hit by the jutsu has to repeat its action. Meaning that if someone was forced to punch twice, they could still backstep or jump to avoid being hurt in most cases.

Explosive Strike: Hmmmm, I'll have to think about that... that is true but I would really like to find a way around it. If that were the case, the jutsu would be more trouble then its worth.

Pressure Imbalance: The thing about that is that pressure points are not very large or target able with a physical strike, thats what the medical chakra is for.

Pressure Strike: What rank do you think it should be? Because I see now that C-Rank isn't a very appropriate rank for it.

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Note: Added some jutsu I made today

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Note: Added more

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7 Eijutsu

2 KKG

3 Nin

3 No Type

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Copy Cat; does this cause repetition if chakra would be consumed? What if the action cannot be repeated due to certain circumstances, does the body make an attempt all the same, I'd assume so but its not mentioned. Does the action take the same amount of time, for example, if a powerful punch took a whole post could you cause them waste two more posts performing it?

Pressure Strike; whats the range of this technique? How far? How wide?

Pressure Imbalance; I assume you meant 'extreme pain' the justu says it causes 'extreme' which would be a pretty cool jutsu, assuming it granted you a pair of sunglasses, a skateboard, a leather jacket, and a cocky attitude.

Blood Replacement; this sort of technique couldn't be used in a combat situation, the time and precision would more likely result in killing the target than aiding them, so pleases add a note about the time taken, probably two or three full posts since you're replacing a complete blood system. Also, this would carry some heavy side-effects with foreign blood, this is a highly unorthodox jutsu to relieve ailments.

Internal Powerclock, 25% increase per post and D Rank amount of chakra per post.

I'll get to the rest...

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Copy Cat: In what instance would they have to use chakra to copy a physical strike? Added that the body attempts to move even if it can't. And correct, but hitting someone with a 2 post post is almost impossible.

Pressure Strike: Fixed

Pressure Imbalance: Sunglasses, skateboards and leather jackets are listed under BYO for this jutsu, sorry xD. Anyhow, added "pain".

Blood Replacement: Well, I didn't intend on using it in battle considering it would take a while to do, but I'll put it in the description. And as long as your using the same blood type it should be coo' beans.

Internal Powerclock: Fixed

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Copy Cat; Chakra Scalpel, for example. Some Taijutsu involves chakra, such as Cherry Blossom Collision, there are other examples I could pull up (like every Weaponry jutsu that isnt a technical jutsu) but I think its unnecessary, you should get it.

Blood Replacement; You're cutting open people just to replace bad blood, I'm just gonna say this is a ridiculous technique when you could easily do the same thing by replicating their current blood cells to overpower something presently invasive and, ya know, not threaten their lives?

Chakra Coat; Selectively permeable to poisons?

Grasping Mud Hand; if you're forced out of the mud, or if you suffer attack, does the jutsu persist?

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Copy Cat: Fix'd

Blood Replacement: Because there are some things that can't be overpowered, such as things that take over blood cells and use them against each other.

Chakra Coat: Yes

Grasping Mud Hand: Nope, it is dispelled.

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Someone else will need to check this due to Hage's resignation

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'Internal Power Clock' - I think this technique would take up quite the amount of chakra to keep up an entire fight. How long can it be used exactly and what are the effects it has on the user's muscles after it's used?

Other than that it all looks good.

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For the sake of simplicity and the fact that I'll probably never use Power Clock, I'll just remove it.

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Okie dokie. Approved for training. Have fun with that lol. ^^

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Note: Do not archive, user is in an away of absence due to a busy lifestyle. Please avoid this application as the user, "Z" is going to train the jutsu posted when he resumes his activity. Thank you.

-Kris

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HUGE delay on training these and I still have even more to train. Phew, what a load of jutsu I've create.

https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/tea-country-f115/training-field-theater-wip-t2093.htm#24594

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Bump, training done for three of the jutsu in the above link