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| ![Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Artemis-Fowl-II-artemis-fowl-28029822-504-800](https://2img.net/h/i449.photobucket.com/albums/qq218/Wolfsrike02/Artemis-Fowl-II-artemis-fowl-28029822-504-800.jpg) Kohaku, TakumiTHE INFO.
Name: Kohaku, Takumi
Nickname:
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: Takumi is a no nonsense kind of person with an appearance to match. He has never seen the point of looking what many would call "casual" or maybe even "normal", though he doesn't necessarily see it that way. It is a strange thing to see on a thirteen year old boy, but some people find it understandable all things considered. Despite being the assumed size for one his age, he carries himself like a mature adult, and dresses as such. His hair is black and always either kept neat and tidy if not swept back completely. His skin is pale, but in an unhealthy sense. Despite being a shinobi, his build is slightly...lacking. If one were to see his body beneath his attire, they would find little to no muscle mass, indicating his lack of martial prowess, but he is still quite skinny nonetheless. The most captivating part of his appearance however is his face, which often leaves an impression on most people who look upon it. He always has a stern, cold look about him that never changes and never welcomes. It even seems as though he may see himself above those he mingles with, though there is no evidence besides this small amount of body language. His eyes are deep blue, almost glowing sometimes. They are eyes that say he is not afraid to do anything.
As for the attire itself, it is very straight forward. He is almost always found wearing some kind of formal wear. Suits make up a lot of his inventory even though they are not typical to anyone, especially shinobi. They can be simple or complicated depending on the occassion, but he is rarely seen without, even out in the wilderness. These suits are all, of course, black, or at the very least dark blue. Naturally he also wears nice shoes regardless of the occasion, making it very hard to see him as a ninja. Regardless he has even been known to fight like this, but because of his combat style it doesn't hinder him very much. Only when things get serious will he shed some of the less useful articles of his clothing to become a bit more mobile, but nevertheless he has never been seen in traditional ninja garb, nor does he have any intention to do so. The forehead protector of his village honestly looks out of place when pressed against his head, so he refrains from wearing it whenever possible, preferring instead to keep it in a bag perhaps or his suit pocket.
Forehead Protector: Occasionally forehead, but otherwise not on his apparent person
Personality: Takumi's personality is probably the last thing anyone would expect from any kind of thirteen year old. Due to his mannerisms, formality, and maturity, if you were to speak to him without seeing his face you would guess the boy was a well aged adult man with a superiority complex. Still not even hitting puberty in full, the boy acts as though he has been alive for years and understands the world as a whole and is above immature demeanors. But he is very cold as well. Outside of his typical style of speaking and carrying himself, he can be extremely cruel with his words, constantly enforcing his superior intellect on those he speaks too, even if unintentionally. He'll make snide remarks without thinking, or say things technically unrelated to the situation just because he knows them. Naturally this annoys most people with a lesser mind, but he doesn't care, in fact its almost as though he enjoys their discomfort. He knows he's a genius with an IQ off the charts, already accomplishing many intellectual milestones some don't complete well into their 50's, and he has no qualms flaunting it.
Its easy to assume that he likes getting his way, and hates it when he doesn't. He's been known to take drastic measures just to get what he wants, or at least ensure his enemy doesn't get what they want. He is so vain that a failure on his part is not a failure as long as he feels he has "defeated" his opposition in one way or another. He has no regard for life and has been known to manipulate whoever or whatever is required in whatever manner to achieve his goals. These traits are imperitive for his secret profession as leader of a recently crippled criminal empire. He makes the best kind of businessman, generating wealth with all kinds of illegal activities, for they are the most profitable. He has employed murderers, smugglers, infiltrators, you name it. But most of this must remain a secret. On the outside he assumes the role of a reformed shinobi acting to serve his village to ensure that his true intentions are not challanged. He ensures most people do not know about what he really does, but he has a hard time hiding his baser personality traits when he's pretending to be a "good guy". His vanity is obvious, but he has been able to keep his more vile and devious tendencies under control when necessary. He doesn't make friends however, not really. Aside from finding relationships nothing but a distraction, he feels that connecting himself with anyone would only make him weaker and more vulnerable.
Underneath this repulsively evil exterior however is a thirteen year old boy. All the ambitions, knowledge, sinister motivations, and criminal contracts cannot change this. He is a thirteen year old boy who lost his father to mysterious circumnstances and his mother to her own mind. Some will argue his maturity and ruthlessness are required for him to cope with such sudden responsibility, but these are things he will never address. He is lonely at his core, but with such a complicated situation he has never had any desire to address this issue, ignoring it altogether in fact. He has mixed feelings about his father however. On one hand he hates him for disappearing the way he did, throwing their familiy history to the public for all to see, and leaving him in charge of their estate. On the other hand though he misses his father's presence dearly and works to fund expiditions to find him, when he's feeling particularily vulnerable anyway. He will immediately snap at anyone who mentions his father with comments most degrading, but on some nights, behind closed doors, if one listens close enough, he can be heard quietly weeping for his father's return from lands unknown and his mother's from her own mind.
Clan: None
Nindō: Gold is Power
THE NINJA.
Origin: Kirigakure
Affiliation: Kirigakure
Rank: C - Genin
Specialties: Main: Genjutsu / Sub: Medical Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Raiton
Combat Style: Takumi has somewhat of a "hands off" combat style when it comes to conflict. He is extremely skilled for his age with the use of genjutsu, and does not hesitate to use it to its full advantage. When "fighting" he relies mostly on this skill to dispatch his opponents, sometimes not even taking a step away from his starting position. He prefers to control the battlefield by controlling the mind, like a mastermind locked in a control room making his victims squirm. He likes to toy occasionally though, as if to make his enemy regret tangoing with him, playing on their hopes of victory before crushing them outright. He weaves illusions into illusions, taking his opponent in his hand and letting them run a humorously conducted obstacle course before crushing them when he gets bored. Naturally much of his arsenal involves manipulation tactics, playing on emotions or thoughts, sometimes even perception as a whole. His signature though is to instill upon his victims the image he has of himself, an all powerful intellect. However he knows that genjutsu is not enough by itself to dispose of the more clever individuals, few as they may be. He is capable of the most intricate plans to destroy his enemies through guile. Whatever the case may be, he revels in fights where he needs to do little more than lift a finger.
Special Characteristics:
High IQ
- Spoiler:
Name: High IQ
Rank: C
Type: Mental Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The ninja innately possesses a high IQ which gives them great practical and analytical prowess. They have vast knowledge in nearly all forms of combat giving them a upper hand when faced with nearly any attack with being able to execute split second counters. With their high IQ the user can determine weak spots in attacks and defenses and can overcome nearly any obstacle. Like the obvious benefits of being very smart, the ninja is well regarded for their great mathematical and thinking abilities.
Yin Release
- Spoiler:
Name: Yin Release.
Rank: D-S.
Type: Chakra Based.
Physical Requirements: Must have Genjutsu specialty.
Training Requirements: 700.
Description: Genjutsu is a notably skillful specialization that requires great intelligence and chakra control in order to perform. Those who have attained this special characteristic have met those criteria which has allowed them to take their illusions to the next plane. Genjutsu fittingly falls under the broad category of Yin Release and it has been revealed that those with superior talent in Genjutsu likewise have greater mastery in Yin Release. This type of mastery allows them to more accurately manipulate the victim's chakra flow to their brain and stimulate more powerful illusions, making you're illusions more realistic and bypassing a persons perception. Because of your more powerful illusions, it now takes double the chakra cost to perform a Kai Release than it normally would for targets.
The Black Market
- Spoiler:
Name: The Black Market
Rank: C
Type: Miscellaneous Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The ninja gains a reputation in the "Black Market" and is now granted knowledge and privileges due to their status. Lingering through the dark corners of their villages and countrysides, the user is able to interact with secret merchants who imports and sells stolen goods from across the villages. The user gains access to wondrous treasures and even illegal drugs in exchange for Ryo. A person with this who works in the black market can buy nearly anything and always has updated information on underground activity.
THE BACKGROUND.
History: - Spoiler:
Takumi was, naturally, born into the grand Kohaku family. For centuries this family had been in charge of running a massive criminal empire spanning across much of the world. Needless to say the family was rich beyond belief from all their illegal business practices. They owned a huge estate in Kirigakure with the latest security, with tendrils of influence crawling everywhere. A name well known to the underworld, the Kohaku family expertly managed to retain a more or less clean appearance to the law-abiding world. Of course their huge wealth was a little questionable, but nobody thought much of them. It seemed as though they minded their own business after all, and never outwardly appeared to be doing anything evil or selfish.
This was the setting young Takumi was brought into. It is notable that, in order to manage such a huge estate, it would be imperative that knowledge, intellect, and discipline be instilled into every subject of the family. Luckily for the Kohaku line, these were values and talents embedded into their very DNA. Takumi was born a genius, showcasing a high HQ from the earliest of ages. He was raised with a curriculum heavy in logic. Aside from business ethics however, he learned much about art and music, having composed a few scores himself by the age of 8 that quickly took some recognition, as well as becoming a proficient art forger. Whilst growing up he had differing parenting styles from his mother and father. His father, the current head of the business, was very detached and disciplined about it. Teaching him real world issues with a stern but motivating hand. Takumi grew to have the utmost respect for his father, but also knew never to speak out of turn. His mother on the other hand, who married into the family business, was a more tender loving parent, providing him more of the emotional growth a child needed. Unfortunately, though not surprisingly, Takumi took more of an interest to the business side of his family, and was already too stiff and formal to really benefit from this.
By the time he was 6, Takumi had completely many intellectual milestones, and the productivity of his mind was ensured for years to come. By that time he had been by his father's side during many of his business transactions, picking up his more ruthless and arguably evil tendencies. Many people would call this bad parenting, but his father was proud to see these values blossoming. Yes, in the years to come young Takumi would be known to assist his father in some of the more important decisions, sometimes even offering points of view that he hadn't considered. It was a beautifully horrid relationship the two of them had, and he couldn't be more proud, even if he refrained from the more emotional interactions. A pat on the head was one of the most gracious rewards Takumi could be given for his efforts, and it was something he constantly strived for. He loved his father's recognition, which many would see as a bit twisted.
As Takumi got older, his father started to notice some things. He realized that the Kohaku family never really had much...outside experience. At such a young age Takumi had already achieved a mental status that could rival his own, a full grown man. Was there much left for him to grow into? It seemed as though he had already almost reached his full potential as far as being a typical Kohaku went. As impressive as that was, he knew that times were changing and business had to evolve as well. Takumi needed an edge, something that no other Kohaku had done before. Then it occurred to him. What if he admitted Takumi into the ninja academy? It would open him up into an entirely new world, give him more experiences to grow and develop, new avenues of intellect to explore, but most importantly, more connections to abuse as he got older. Not only that, but perhaps he could actually become a competent shinobi, and learn to fend for himself...something that had always been known as a bit of a weakness in their family. His mother was of course excited about the idea. She had been a ninja in her earlier days, and had been known for her exceptional genjutsu skills. It seemed perfect, and so he was admitted as soon as he was able.
Naturally Takumi was something of an oddity in the ninja academy. Unlike all the other kids he was always showing up in formal clothing, carrying himself like an adult who had no time for trivialities. He was always quiet in class, at least at first, because he was actually trying to learn the material. It wasn't until he learned all the material the class was to cover on his own over the course of about two weeks that he began speaking up, though only to correct the teacher or answer complex questions meant to go unanswered, of course doing so in the smuggest of ways. It was for this reason that he eventually became disliked by most people at the academy, though they could not dismiss his talent. When concept became practice however, it was seen that he had a little difficulty actually executing techniques, and everyone reveled in watching him struggle. But it was in a struggle that he excelled the most, training every day to get it down. Despite these things coming the hardest for him, he was still the first in his class to master them, and so the ridicule never lasted long.
So it was that he passed the academy with flying colors. He excelled in all aspects of being a shinobi, or at least so it seemed. Once he became a genin and things got a bit more intense, he realized there were some things he just couldn't grasp. Taijutsu for example was easily his weakest point. He had the basics down, and could fight hand to hand decently, but when extensive physical training came around, he was always behind. Ninjutsu was also a little difficult for him. Not impossible, definitely easier than Taijutsu, but he just always had a hard time executing the techniques as perfectly as he would have preferred. He argued this was because the technique wasn't...intricate enough for him, and that he had a hard time doing things that actually weren't supposed to be hard. A strange concept, but it seemed to make sense to him. Genjutsu on the other hand he immediately took a knack for. When taught some more advanced Genjutsu, he had them down almost instantly. Acknowledging this proficiency, he immediately made it his focus, creating some of his own Genjutsu with ease, with the help of his mother of course. Soon enough he had a healthy arsenal of Genjutsu at his disposal that he loved to use on whoever challenged the wimpy looking rich boy to a fight.
It was because of his skill with Genjutsu that one medic approached him one day. He explained to Takumi that Genjutsu was a very particular technique and difficult for most people to even grasp, let alone execute. Takumi of course responded in his usual way, but the medic was undeterred. He told the boy that it was a lot like Medical Ninjutsu. He was instantly interested when he learned what medics were capable of and how difficult learning it was supposed to be. Of course he was more interested in the harmful aspects than the helpful one, but he did acknowledge the fact that being able to heal oneself could be beneficial. So, without much more consideration he agreed to receive some training in becoming a medic, learning the techniques with only a little difficulty. Perhaps it was because medics could be equally as irritating, but they didn't seem to dislike Takumi like his other teachers. He didn't hold back on any of his remarks or intellect, they just seemed to be received better. It was an environment he seemed to enjoy quite a bit, though he would never admit it to anyone.
Months went by in this familiar pattern. Father and son would completely various deals and schemes, while mother and son would practice Genjutsu with each other, and son would complete Medical Ninjutsu training on his own. Everything took an almost boring normality streak, but he was happy because he was constantly learning new things which was something he strived for. He was delighted to know that there was a plethora of Genjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu techniques to learn, and therefor his thirst for more and more knowledge would rarely go unsatisfied. Annoying circumstance of this however was his own body. In certain ways he just wasn't physically mature enough to learn some of the more powerful techniques. His didn't have enough chakra in his body to learn the moves that really REALLY interested him, and so he would have to wait...impatiently. But he was also happy it gave him a chance to get closer to his mother, though he didn't really realize this himself until it was too late. All good things must come to an end after all, and an era of pain was about to descend upon Takumi without any kind of warning.
One day Takumi's father told him that he was off to the snow country to deliver a huge shipment of supplies as the beginning of a new chain they were supporting. It was to be one of their biggest deals, and the most profitable for reasons known only between them. Takumi was of course sad that he couldn't accompany him this time, but he was told that mother needed some comfort awhile he was gone. Guilt had recently gotten to her and she had been asking that they go away from their criminal activities and start going more straight. They had enough money after all to live comfortably. He said he would think about it after this deal was complete, and requested that Takumi stay with his mother for some emotional support. He objected of course, and of course it was no use. Later that week, Takumi learned that his father had simply...disappeared, and the shipment along with it. What's worse, now all of a sudden their family's history was revealed to all the world. Everyone and their grandmother knew exactly who the Kohaku's were and exactly what they had done. What happened to his father and how this information got out so rapidly was beyond him, but needless to say everyone who had any connection to them abandoned ship as quickly as possible. The business was in shambles overnight.
Takumi was enraged in more ways than he could count. The news of his father disappearing by itself was enough to break his heart, and it wasn't until he was in the midst of grieving that he learned the rest. What in the world had happened? There was no way to know. The next day everyone in the village gave him strange looks, like they expected him to do something unspeakable. He had nobody but his mother, who was too much of a grieving mess to be of any help. Nobody wanted to talk to him, but the remarks were endless. Fellow students thought him a monster, and adults just sneered at him. Kirigakure was a pool of filth after all for all kinds of criminals, and they all knew what kind of loser he was now. He was distraught at first, but this didn't last long. After a few days of picking himself up, he resolved to fix this issue. He decided he would rebuild the family name from scratch, starting with what little loyal contacts he still had. This went on for a year or so, and at the same time he made the appearance of a reformed shinobi only out to help his village, but it was really hard to convince anybody. Eventually it just got to the point where they basically forgot about him. They didn't care who he was or what his real intentions were, its not like he could do anything. His business was ruined and he was only 10, what harm could he possibly be?
But these were the questions he played on. Nobody could expect someone so young to be so capable. At the same time though, not many people could take someone so young very seriously. He adopted a few different identities when not dealing with people face to face. His contacts would have no idea who they were dealing with, probably assuming he was just some aspiring tycoon, having no idea they were helping rebuild the empire they has just scoffed at the previous day. But throughout this time, his mother got worse and worse. She never seemed to get over the disappearance of his father, and the search expeditions never helped her at all. Everyday she seemed to slip further into insanity. One day Takumi came home, and she had no idea who he was. She screamed to get the intruder away from her before he hurt her, and nothing he said could help. It was a hard blow for sure, but there was nothing he could do. To this day his mother still lies in bed all day, lost in her own mind. She's watched after by servants of course...but its no doubt a delicate situation. Takumi was on his own, no parents to help the young lad, guide him through life. But it mattered not, he could handle such things, like he handled everything. He had goals, ambitions, and desires. Despite all opposition, the world would come to know Takumi Kohaku.
Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
"Goodnight." The word was silently uttered from her pale lips like the whisper of a ghost just before four senbon, two of steel and two of ice, flew through the air utterly silent except for the quiet "ka-chunk" sound they made upon plowing into the wood of the target dummy's head. After which, the two ice senbon shattered and melted away as Marina quietly walked up to the target, completely alone and silent. Like most days, she had been out in the training field practicing her accuracy, and clearly, it had not faltered at all in recent years. She took a moment to stare at the dummy and all the small holes she had planted all over it from senbon just from today. After that moment passed, she extracted the two senbon from its head, and placed them back in her leg pouch full of them. To her, every senbon was precious and important; none could be forgotten or left behind. It was early morning and surprisingly cold, though she most certainly did not mind, even dressed in her causal clothes of a simple tank top and pants the cold did anything but bother her. Determining that it was time to leave the training area, she promptly turned around and began to walk away, though to where, she was not yet sure.
It mattered not anyway, the day was still just starting and many a things could be done. In truth, she would probably learn later today to continue training, after all it wasn't like she had anything else to do. In truth, she wanted to practice her ice techniques in full, but that training area most certainly wasn't the place to do so. She didn't figure the authorities would appreciate the area being completely frozen. She sighed through her nose as she walked...what to do...what to do. It was about that time that her stomach suddenly grumbled, and she looked down at it curiously. Apparently, she was hungry. As logical as ever, she immediately decided to go get some food, because clearly her body needed it. She did not care that, personally, she was not feeling hungry exactly, but since her body required sustenance, so it shall be.
It took some finding since it was so early in the morning, but she eventually found a nice place to eat that was open early. She stood a couple feet away from the small stall-like shop, looking up at the sign. "Ichiraku Ramen" it said, and she couldn't help but be interested. Ramen was something she had been unable to sample even since moving to Konoha, but the aroma that wafted out from the shop was enough to interest her enough to make her walk over, almost robotically. She sat down at a seat, and being just about the only person there, she was waited on almost instantly. The staff were kind and they all had beaming smiles and bright attitudes, despite the way she just stared at them saying almost nothing. She took a moment to look at the menu, and politely asked for something simple, claiming she hadn't tasted Ramen before.
One staff member in particular complimented her on her politeness, though all she did was nod and thank him quietly, almost as if she didn't care but was continuing to be polite in returning a thanks. She slowly became interested as she watched them move around and cook. Business was slow but they were all happy and kind, something she found to be all the more fascinating. Before long, she had a tasty looking bowl of hot ramen sitting in front of her. She looked at it for awhile before finally starting to eat, and after her first bite she found herself complimenting them on the dish. She was thanked in turn, and before she knew it, they were all having a big conversation while she ate. They seemed to be just as interested in her blank demeanor while she was interested in their cheery demeanor. Perhaps the greatest thing about the entire interaction was the way that, despite the contradicting personalities, they all got along great. They never once questioned her lack of emotion, and she never once questioned their excess of happiness.
By the time she was done eating, she was definitely feeling much better, not even realizing she had felt somewhat empty a few minutes before. They had talked about all sorts of things, exchanged opinions, and basically just had a good time. Even though she never laughed or even smiled when the rest of them did, it was clear they all enjoyed her presence. When she stood up to leave, she bowed, thanked them for a wonderful meal and a good time, and left without a smile. Nevertheless, she began to feel as though she would be going back to that cozy little ramen store quite a few times in the near future.
THE ARSENAL.
Supplementary Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Range: N/A
Medium: Optical
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others.
Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread.
Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed.
Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Canon Genjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: -
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates up to 5 false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it. If these clones leave 5m radius of the caster, they will disappear.
Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Far (0m - 20m)
Element: -
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. The object must be within 20m of the user.
Chakra Cost: 4 (1 per post)
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Single-Target
Range: Line of Sight
Element: -
Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. If the target sees these leaves, the Gen jutsu will be cast. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.
Chakra Cost:4 (1 per post)
Name: Flower Petal Escape
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: -
Description: If the user comes under attack, she or he can use this technique to cover her or his escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the user's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her or his opponent while she or he escapes or hides. This technique works very similarly to substitution, but can also be used to delude the enemy with more flower petal based Genjutsu.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Multi-Target
Range: Far (0m - 25m)
Element: -
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over. The caster must remain in the shadows, or within 25m of the targets to maintain this Genjutsu. Only 3 people may be influenced by this Genjutsu at one time.
Chakra Cost: 7 (2 per post)
Name: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Far (0m - 30m)
Element: -
Description: After the user forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his or her target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety. The fireball cannot reach further than 30m.
Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Ninpou; Kuroi Kiri - Black Mist Nightmare
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical Illusion
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Med (5m ~ 10m)
Element: --
Description: This jutsu is developed and trained within Kirigakure as a village specific jutsu. After the formation of the needed hand seals, the user will expel a large amount of black mist from their mouths. The effective range of this genjutsu is ten meters, which is soon covered by the black mist. This genjutsu works in a way to enter the target(s) head and find their darknest fears before creating them and having them emerge from the black mist. Basically, this jutsu is a jutsu that does nothing more than create optical illusions of what the target(s) fears the most in order to pray on their weaknesses and fears during combat.
Chakra Cost: 10 (3 per post)
Custom Genjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Butler
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Single-Target
Range: Line of Sight (0-20m)
Element: N/A
Description: This is one of the first genjutsu Takumi will pull out from his arsenal, as he feels it sends a message for the rest of the fight, not to mention it is easy to initiate while the typical pre-fight banter occurs. After performing the required hand seals, the effect is released when the enemy looks upon a shadow cast by the environment, where the immediately realize that this "Butler" character could be hiding anywhere. Following this they adopt an understanding that he is a force to be reckoned with and will soon arrive. They feel as though "Butler" is hunting them for their harmful intentions towards Takumi. One post later, "Butler", a massive mountain of a man 7 feet tall will appear to the enemy, and begin to guard Takumi. With such a massive guardian, intimidation is the intended goal of this jutsu, however whether or not the visage of such a huge man has any effect solely depends on the enemy themselves. After appearing, "Butler" charges the enemy with intent to fight them, in which they will either flee or fight back depending on their mental inclination. The visage of Butler itself is intangible, and incapable of actually inflicting harm upon the enemy.
Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Over Here
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Optical
Range: Short (0-5m)
Element: N/A
Description: An optical illusion best used when Takumi is hidden from sight, it requires but a single hand seal and is perfect for toying with the enemy. It creates an image of Takumi, standing, away from where Takumi is actually located within the range of its effect. Upon being hit, this image will disappear harmlessly. It is possible for the genjutsu to end there, but Takumi can swiftly take hold of the disappearing illusion and recreate it in another location for 4 cp however many times he wants.
Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Behold my Intellect
Rank: C-A
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Area of Effect
Range: Medium (0-10m)
Element: N/A
Description: Takumi enjoys using this genjutsu as a means of intimidation, as if he could actually manifest his intellect. After a string of hand seals, anyone in the indicated area will feel a crushing weight applied to them, increasing with proximity to Takumi. It will feel as though gravity has intensified more and more the closer they get to him. As a genjutsu, only organic minds are affected, and any form of projectile, weapon or jutsu, would naturally be unaffected. The higher rank the enemy is to Takumi, the less effective each interval is by 1 per increasing rank, however it does not get more effective the lower ranked the enemy is to Takumi.
0-1m: The force peaks to make the enemy struggle with most of their strength to stay on their feet, however with enough concentration one can do so easily enough and still make obviously labored attacks. Fighting the gravity at this proximity for prolonged periods of time can easily lead to a feeling of exhaustion.
2-5m: A medium force, the enemy will feel weighted in everything they do, finding it hard to breath and move fluidly. It will not drag them down, but doing things such as raising arms or moving feet will take noticeably more effort.
6-10m: The weakest force, the enemy will mostly just be aware of the increased gravity.They will feel it, but it will be slight and not strong enough to truly hinder them. At the most they will find they cannot jump quite as high as they are used to.
Chakra Cost:
C rank - 8 (2 per post)
B rank - 13 (3 per post)
A rank - 23 (6 per post)
Name: Bad Idea
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Single Target
Range: Medium (0-10m)
Element: N/A
Description: This is a Genjutsu Takumi likes to use to more directly toy with the mind of his opponent. After a single seal, a seed is placed upon his smug face. Triggering if the enemy looks at his grin, the genjutsu plants a voice inside their head. While obviously foreign, it insists to be the voice of reason. Whenever the enemy comes up with a plan of action or thinks of an attack, the voice will pipe up and declare that decision foolish or useless. It will essentially work to tell the enemy that there is nothing they can do to defeat Takumi, attempting to trick them into indecision or inaction. However it is nothing but a voice, and can be ignored if one concentrates, though it will certainly remain annoying at the least. Because of its nature, Takumi generally will have no way to know if the jutsu has succeeded unless they somehow reveal it to him.
Chakra Cost: C - 7 (2 per post)
Name: Friends in Small Places
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Medium: Area of Effect
Range: Medium (0-15m)
Element: N/A
Description: A genjutsu Takumi likes to employ when dealing with more than one enemy, it works well due to the potential for hysteria is involves. A string of hand seals covers the area of effect in the genjutsu. After such, up to three enemies within the range of the genjutsu will hear cackling coming from all directions, followed by the formation of half a dozen small men with red beards and green clothes. At first all of these men will be hunched over, as if munching on something. After a few moments they turn to face the enemies and reveal that they had been eating human eyes. They will then begin converging on a random target, and attempt to jump upon their face and claw at their eyes. Should they succeed in appearing to latch onto them and scoop out their eyes, a small pain is felt in them and the idea of blindness is implanted into them for a single post, whereas they believe themselves to be blind even though after the panic passes they see that they are not. After the first target is affected, the men will all charge towards the next enemy, and eventually the third, in order and at once. After all enemies have been affected, the genjutsu may be continued to keep the illusions on the battlefield perhaps for psychological effect, but otherwise chakra equal to the cost of the jutsu must be reapplied to have them repeat their systematic attack.
Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Medical Ninjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Shousen no Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique
Rank: C-A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the higher the medical ninja's rank is the quicker they are able to heal more critical and serious injuries. Injuries of equal rank may be healed in 1 post, and completely restored in 2. If choosing to heal a wound higher than the rank of the Shousen used, it requires 2 extra posts per rank. Thus C-rank Shousen healing an A-rank wound would require 5 posts to fully heal, while a B-rank wound would require 3 posts for instance. If healing a lower-ranked wound with a higher-ranked Shousen, the wound is fully healed in one post as opposed to two.
Chakra Cost: C: 8CP (2 per post), B: 12CP (4 per post), A: 20CP (6 per post)
Name: Karada Kuchidashi - Body Interference
Rank: C-B
Type: Medical Jutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton
Description: After the user charges their hand with Raiton chakra they strike the body part of the desired target. At B-rank once struck it causes a muscle spasm to where the target can't control that body part for one post and can't effectively use it for one more. At C-rank it causes the afflicted body part to be less responsive to the commands from the brain for one post. For the second post, the body part is number before turning back to normal.
Chakra Cost: C: 8, B: 13.
Name: Ningen Sukiningu Shuhou - Human Skinning Technique
Rank: C-A
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: A medical technique used to cause external harm on the victim’s body. The user will charge chakra into their hands and will release it on the enemy’s skin upon touch. The technique will send out a wave of chakra, the damage of which depends on the user’s skill. At C Rank, the wave can cause minor cuts of a twenty centimeter radius on the target’s body. At B Rank, the victim will suffer more serious cuts and wounds (such wounds would cause no serious damage, merely require a minor case of stitches to repair) over 40 cm area of contact of their body. At A Rank, the wave is able to inflict severe cuts and flesh wounds (these wounds are serious if not treated within 10 posts and with a great deal of accuracy can damage internal organs) at a 60cm area of contact on the victim’s body, or even nearly amputate an arm through extremely deep cuts.
Chakra Cost: C: 8, B: 13, A: 25.
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|  | | Hollow Allegory
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 4:27 am | |
| | Ready for checkering |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 4:32 am | |
| | You can't have triggers over B rank but other than it looks good. So fix your first genjutsu and the last one so they aren't triggers. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 4:35 am | |
| | Edited, I believe. I might have completely misunderstood however, heh |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 4:59 am | |
| | Make sure it is clear that the A rank versions of the genjutsu only seem real but aren't actually real. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 5:03 am | |
| | Done |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 5:06 am | |
| Approved 1/2
Whoever looks at this next please take a good look at Behold my Intellect not because I have a big issue with it but because I've been given permission to use it should it be approved and I want it to be signed off on by someone else for professionalism's sake. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 8:04 am | |
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Things:- Name: Butler -- Only members of Shiro's Joushi clan are allowed to use their voice as a focus. What is more, I am not stoked on the idea of a C rank genjutsu being able to literally manipulate someone's emotions like that with such ease.
- Name: Over Here -- This sounds like a B or even A rank genjutsu. Not only does it hide you, like what is done with the A rank camouflage ninjutsu, but it creates an image as well, furthering the confusion of the jutsu. Lastly, the image disappears and reappears, making it more advanced in that sense as well. Denied as it is.
- Name: Behold my Intellect -- LOVE this jutsu, but take out the bit about voice activation for the same reasons as the first comment here.
- The whole point of an approval system is to decide what is allowable and what isn't and you being able to conjure up anything imaginable isn't something I consider to be acceptable. I had a genjutsu like this, and I had to change it to state that I could only use jutsu that I had seen, and that were already approved, such as the jutsu in the encyclopedia.
- Name: Friends in Small Places -- Dont like the change in medium that your genjutsu go through from Multi target to focus. Remove that. Genjutsu should remain one medium all the way up the ranks. What is more, the way this jutsu is set up is more of an area of effect, seeing as you'd have to do something that would snare all three people, not just have one person look at something (which sounds like a focus, which you cannot make until your character is B rank anyway) and then snare three people "in range." I just have issues with how the jutsu is used to catch others, and how it changes mediums, not the small gnome people. Fix all of this please, and we'll be well on our way.
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 8:59 am | |
| | Done |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 11:57 am | |
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Things:- Name: Over Here -- Reduce the range to five meters. I did not see this before, but 20 meters is way way way too high for a C rank with this ability. Also, specify that by "half the chakra cost" you mean 4 CP; or just say "4 cp" instead of "half the chakra cost" to make it very clear.
- Name: Behold my Intellect -- Am I to assume that the rank which this genjutsu is used at changes nothing other than the kai-ing cost, correct?
- Name: Behold my Intellect -- This jutsu, despite loving it, needs to be toned down. Basically, this jutsu single handedly condemns taijutsu users, or close ranged weaponry users. So, because of that, it needs to be made a little weeker. I dont think that, at any point, the user should be dropped to their knees. That, or, you need to sky rocket the chakra cost of this like hell. Like. A lot. Like. Incredibly. Understand? What is more, and lastly, please make sure to add in that thrown weapons/attacks/jutsu do not also suffer from this gravity.
- Name: Bad Idea -- The trigger for this genjutsu does not work as it is. You cannot have the trigger for your genjutsu be someone else's thought, seeing as that makes no sense to the process YOU go through to cast the jutsu. What is more, it can open up to metagame if you can track when the opponent is making plans. So change that, please.
- Name: Friends in Small Places -- Make sure to add in that the feeling of being blind would only happen if the gnomes actually manage to get your target's eyes and pull them out, hmm?
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 6:10 pm | |
| -The increasing rank serves to make it continually useful into higher ranks. In the jutsu it states that a higher ranked opponent would be affected less. For example, using the jutsu as a C rank genin, a B rank enemy would feel the effects of the 2-5m range gravity at the 0-1m range, an A rank would feel the weakest gravity at the closest range, and so on. Once achieving say B rank as a Chuunin, he could still use the B rank version of the jutsu so it would be more effective against other B rank opponents. It doesn't work backwards though, as in it won't increase the intensity to lower ranked opponents. Other than that, an increased kai cost is true, yes.
-Other than that, I believe I have edited everything accordingly. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kohaku, Takumi [Kiri Genin] Mon 25 Mar 2013, 10:54 pm | |
| Alright. This looks fine to me.
Approved: 2/2
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