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HAYASHI, CHIYO

THE INFO.

Name: Hayashi, Chiyo

Nickname:
White Raven: Her nickname was bestowed to her by the Jounin she murdered the day she became a criminal. He uttered his last words, "Curse you, white raven" before she brutally ended him. She allowed herself to soak up the title, however, feeling that him adding white before the raven, known for mischief, burden, and despair, was saying in a way that she is pure at heart. That she is able to become what the world calls "good." She dismissed the thought quickly, however, claiming when someone asks that she is called the White Raven because of the white kimono she kills in. Most now believe that is why, and the origins of her nickname are obscured. People now fear her in images of an evil, white spirit seeking vengeance in the form of a bird. She lets the people believe what they want to believe. She doesn't care much either way. She murders for herself, and that's it.

Age: 27

Gender: Female

Appearance: A head of long semi-wavy white hair that descends to her middle back and to both sides of her upper chest in parted bangs covers her head. However, the left bang does come a bit shorter than the other. She also has a solo, slightly curved bang that comes just a bit past her nose and covers a small scar she has there. Her eyes are painted a somewhat sinister silver, that can sometimes give off a purple glint that warn strangers of her danger, however this can be confused and lost in her deceivingly welcoming smile. Her hair has a slight purple tint that she tries to exaggerate with her thin, purple-stained lips. She has a mouth full of pearly white teeth, and slightly sharpened fangs.

Pale and smooth in nature, Chiyo's skin is a natural pearly white. She actually appears to be rather delicate and non-threatening at first glance. She is only 5'10" and weighs 103 lbs. Chiyo has particularly skinny arms and long, thin legs to match. Her feet are small as are her hands (with nails that are always painted purple). The only thing that may seem threatening, as stated above, is her sharp eyes and eyebrows that can give penetrating glares at times. Chiyo has a slightly toned abdomen and some bicep strength, but little. Most of her abilities come from her speed and accuracy anyway, so working out has never been in the forefront of activities to partake in.

Chiyo's attire mainly consists of a simple "schoolgirl" outfit. She wears a collared, navy blue vest with sleeves that end at her wrist. She wears a plain, collared, button-up white shirt underneath that shows just a bit at the ends of the sleeves and plenty around her collar and chest. She wears a peach brown skirt that starts at her waist and ends a tad above her knees. Tall, navy blue socks that come all the way up to her knee match her vest and make her outfit complete, in a way. She wears the basic shinobi sandals, although it's a bit of a variation in color, matching her skirt. When doing paper work or reading, or sometimes when gathering intel, Chiyo will slip on her thin-rimmed, red glasses. She likes this style because it is, for the most part, simple as well as comfortable. It also makes her look like even less of a threat when she's on covert missions.

The Raven Kimono: Her raven kimono was woven by her grandmother and is by far her most prized-possession. Chiyo only wears it when entering an important fight, or filling out a particular mission she finds especially dangerous or important. She wanted to be remembered for something, and the purple, pink, and white kimono that gave Chiyo her infamous criminal name "The White Raven" definitely did the job. It, just as any other kimono, covers her arms completely and the rest of her body. There is a white, pink-tinted band around her waist that can also hold her katana. Underneath she wears only bandages, symbolizing the scarred past the kimono holds. When she moves, the Kimono folds back and flaps behind her as a bird's wings would, thus "The Raven Kimono." Chiyo herself has stated that it is a drape of death and finality, never to be worn other than in times of struggle and strife. Chiyo has also boldly stated that she will never allow herself to die, unless wearing the kimono.

Forehead Protector: Back in her Chunin days Chiyo would wear her headband on her forehead as countless others have. She found it as the most formal and respectful way to do it. When she became a criminal, Chiyo removed her headband and threw it into her bag. She figured she wouldn't find it useful anymore, so why wear it uselessly.

Personality: Chiyo’s outward projected persona tends to be little more than a mask, but an effective one. Collected and calm, Chiyo comes across as a very mature person. She is hard-working and studious, and these traits allow her to come off as the picture perfect example of an intelligent individual. This intelligence blesses her with rational thought, understanding, and deductive ability that very few of her comrades are blessed with. With that intelligence, Chiyo has a tendency to use excessively complicated words, words she possibly shouldn’t comprehend, much less use fluently in passing speech. Whether her vernacular exists to make her feel superior to others or simply because an asset that goes unused is worthless, even she does not know. Most likely it is a bit of both. This also sometimes leads to a terrible amount of sarcasm and condescension, if she isn't careful. However, she usually can approach a conversation in a calm and simple enough manner that she won't feel the need to retard her vocabulary, or make the other person feel they are ignorant.

Stoic is the best word to describe the young woman. Chiyo has what seems to be a permanently bored look glued to her face. Very rarely does anyone witness emotion from her. Even when faced with a life threatening situation, a perpetually apathetic mask is donned. Gleaning any form of intent or emotion from Chiyo is terribly difficult because of this demeanor and only in the rarest of occasions is it actually dropped. It is actually very concerning to Chiyo, because she is a very kind person by nature, but it has always been difficult for her to express those feelings through what might be considered a smile. The woman’s voice is heard considerably more often than expression is seen upon her face. Very rarely does Chiyo ever keep her thoughts to herself, regardless of how censored they should most likely be and it is one of the few times that some insight can be gained in to how her mind works.

Manic barely begins to describe the inner workings of Chiyo’s mind. The woman is hyperactive in every sense of the word but those that are actually visibly shown. She processes information at an absurd rate and boasts a completely eidetic memory on top of it. When speaking, she tends to do so rather rapidly, when excited her words almost seem to cease shorten to word as she rambles. The medic's words often seem to run together as if she spoke exactly as the words came to mind. Of course, that is not true, but comparatively to a normal person, she might as well be speaking her thoughts simultaneously. This occasionally makes her difficult to follow and seemingly rather weird, but this is what gives Chiyo her most recognizable strength, not only to herself, but amongst her peers as well. Chiyo has always been especially strong in the field of critical analysis and considering her lineage’s profession, being that of master medical shinobi, she has always been immersed in activities that challenge this facet of her personality and they have only grown exponentially since her childhood. Chiyo’s brain tends to operate far quicker than most people’s just by nature of being naturally talented in the field and her range of observation tends to be absurd for someone of her ranking. Her brain tends to operate more like a computer than like a human brain at times.

Beneath the immediately noticeable quirks of the woman’s personality, she is ultimately a good person with a strong desire to save not only her village, but the entire shinobi world as well and to uphold her sense of justice. Some would consider her ruthless, but to Chiyo there are multiple ways to save people. Putting bodies in the ground saves just as many people as curing the sick or bringing life into the world. Given her already obtained advanced skills with either of the latter two, Chiyo has a renewed vigor and determination when seeking to cut off those cancerous entities in society. This gives Chiyo a strange sense of efficiency when dealing with her victims, often times coming off as merciless. With that in mind, Chiyo has always felt certain romanticism accompanied her in her actions and theatrics were certainly not below her. Monologues, usually terrible ones, often precede any foray into the unknown and the woman almost always has a quote befitting the situation, also often horrible. In addition, she has a tendency to vocally work out problems, often speaking quickly and haphazardly in muffled tones as she tries to work out a scenario.

One more notable characteristic is the woman’s close attachment to her grandmother and her village, their legacy, and their future. Her life is devoted to returning Kumogakure and the world to war. She feels it is the only way to restore its former glory and any insult, intentional or otherwise, is almost always met with hatred and more often than not, violence. The latter of which,  has often been met with rather unfortunate ends for her opponent and it has always been a point of great contemplation for Chiyo… which is probably what lead to the advent of her power in the first place.

Clan: N/A (Deceased)

Nindō: "Kill so that you may live. Obliterate so that you may prosper. Selfishness is the key to victory, and I am bound to win because I have accepted myself."


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THE NINJA.

Origin: Kumogakure (Hidden Cloud)

Affiliation: Rogue (Tenei)

Rank: B

Specialities:
• Eijutsu (Medical Techniques)
• Weaponry (Weapon Techniques)

Elemental Affinities:
Raiton (Lightning)
Doton (Earth)

Combat Style: Chiyo's fighting style is one that people might recognize as almost relaxed. She never gets overworked nor does she let her emotions rule over the decisions she makes. Once she's in battle, she only sees her opponent as prey that she must eliminate. She treats battle as a very necessary part of being a shinobi, treating it as a formal matter, and usually spews some unnecessary speech before actually fighting. Chiyo knows death, battle, and war are all very necessary towards a better world, so she also realizes that battle is not special, nor are her opponents. They're just like every other shinobi she would engage; they are going to kill you if you do not kill them. With that thought in mind, Chiyo realizes that she'd much rather not get worked up over something as trivial as a fight, even is she is very formal in her efforts. She's a calm and relaxed fighter. Condescension and lectures are always a part of her fighting style, whether she plans the speeches exactly or not.

The young medical nin is calm and comfortable in battle. Her muscles are loose but prepared to leap at any sudden threat, though her body is at ease and her expression is nonchalant. A fight to Chiyo is just another way for her to show off her strength, and a way to convince herself that she is one more step closer to reaching her ultimate goal. It doesn't mean she'll go easy, by all means no. But it does add to her confidence and refined arrogance (if that's possible).

Chiyo has had a fortunate history that provided her with several opportunities to study combat in general. She is highly trained in the arts of swordsmanship as well as a couple basic types of martial arts. However, she has also been exposed to the more rough, merciless battle style of her grandmother's when she's seen her take on opponents. She learned how to defend herself well, and when it came to fist fights, the first thing she taught herself was how to dodge wild hooks and uppercuts thrown by angry men who's coordination has been clouded by alcohol. She later learned to apply those dodging techniques into fights against more sober opponents with more control of themselves in battle. But one can't dodge forever, and not only did those bare fights act as lessons in how to block a punch and take a punch, but her sword training showed her how to block a stroke of other weapons. Overall, she knows how to play the game of battle: Defensively.

Chiyo's primary combat styles revolve around her swordsmanship. Due to the large amount of time she had been a disciple under her grandmother, she has obtained very decent skill and control in her training with the blade. Due to Chiyo's exposure to such a variety of skills, she has formulated her own adjustable style that suits her in her strategies for combat, a style that is reserved but quite deadly.

Sword play in Chiyo's eyes is not about strength as much as it has to do with speed and precision. The result of one putting his whole weight into a stroke would have the same effect of one lightly jabbing the pointed tip into their opponent. For that reason, the kunoichi is fond of rapid, repeated jabs and slashes with the intention of thrusting the tip of the blade through her opponent's armor. It is much faster than a wide slash, and causes severely fatal damage if it punctures any vital organs. In addition, although it doesn't cover quite as much area as a slash, it cuts deeper into the skin and causes more bleeding. Chiyo is an experienced medical ninja, and therefore can identify vitals and weak spots in an opponent fairly easily from just moments of fighting.

Chiyo specializes with a light, short-mid length sword or even a katana. First of all, their feather weight give the blades much faster speed and more maneuverability. Each stroke of the sword hisses in the air, slicing through the wind as it travels at her enemy. Although the swords don't pack quite the same punch as heavier weapons, they really don't need to. The beauty of the sword is that despite the strength behind the slash or stab, it will cut the skin in the same way. Strength is irrelevant. Speed is all that matters, and when speed and a sword meet, the ultimate weapon is created.

However, although the traits of a short sword provide many advantages, they have several disadvantages as well. The first one being their lack of strength relative to other heavier weapons. Therefore, a smaller blade must always rely on its superior speed. If a sword stroke is blocked, Chiyo will, if he can see a clear opening, launch another controlled, yet rapid attack. That way, the heavier weapon or defense would have less of a chance of responding quickly enough to block it effectively. That way, Chiyo might be able to land a nice blow on her opponent.

Chiyo's battle styles tend to revolve mostly around defense. Therefore, when she is confronting an opponent in close combat, she must definitely know how to properly protect herself from opposing attacks. It is said that a good defense is the best attack. Likewise, people also believe that a good attack is the best defense. In Chiyo's eyes, she knows that the real key to unlocking true power realizes in not just good but the best attack and the best defense.

She will typically aim to end fights quickly. An important rule that her grandmother taught her when she was first establishing herself as a shinobi is to go for easy victories. There is no glory in dying needlessly after all. So Chiyo tends to strike important areas of the body such as the femoral or brachial arteries. She does not want to extend battles by avoiding lethal blows. Instead, she will use her size to dive under her opponents guard and inflict damaging blows. Again, just to reiterate, she tries to end battles quickly. Although she has a pretty well-trained endurance level, she nonetheless can get tired if the battle drags on for too long. However, most experienced fighters aren’t that easy to pick off, so Chiyo will change her tactics if this is the case.

In case of emergencies when she must retreat to heal herself or others, Chiyo is very agile on her feet and can easily retreat. Considering she travels by herself she has no use for typical medical-nin tactics, as to where she would hold back while her comrades fight. She does her own fighting, of course, so Chiyo has adapted and learned to be able to parry and space between her opponent when she needs to recuperate.

Special Characteristics:

COMBAT

Quote :
Name: [Tier II] Enhanced Acrobatics
Rank: B
Type: Physical
Prerequisites: Character must have the “Improved Acrobatics” Special Characteristic.
Training: A 1200 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: The Character must have either Taijutsu, Weaponry, or Medical as one of their specialties.
Description: Through further training the ninja has become even more proficient in the arts of aerialism to the point that they are now more flexible than their peers. They are able to not only do incredible feats using aerial manoeuvres such as flips and corkscrews, but they can also bend and rotate their bodies in ways their peers wouldn’t be able to do.

Quote :
Name: Experienced Medic Nin
Rank: B
Type: Chakra Based
Prerequisites: Must Specialize in Eijutsu
Training: A 1200 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: -
Description: A trait possessed by medical ninja whose wishes to improve their healing ability with further Training and acquiring more knowledge in the medical field. After much Training the medical ninja becomes more experienced and gains greater knowledge in the art of eijutsu. The potency of their eijutsu control means that the cost of each Eijutsu technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as allowing them to heal at a quicker rate and more efficiently. They gain a skill which allows them to identify a persons illness from a general observation which makes them good in determining what parts of the body must be healed to ensure patient survivability. From continuous knowledge in poisons and pathogens the medic also can instantly identify and create medicine for B-Rank Poisons with proper supplies.


SOCIAL

Quote :
Name: Street Smarts
Rank: C
Type: Social Based
Prerequisites: -
Training: A 600 word training is required to gain this special characteristic.
Restrictions: -
Description: Being raised in a era of battle and war the ninja has sometimes faced instances where they must gain natural street smarts in order to survive in various situations. Those with this characteristic gains a natural ability of self-preservation which allows them to survive in nearly any society or community by any means necessary. They can hustle Ryo quicker than one could imagine and can hold their own in times of struggle. Ninja with street smarts tend to have a heightened sense of intuition, honor, and fear in their respective communities.


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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Prologue:

Grandmother:

Becoming a Shinobi:

Rebirth:

Roleplay Sample:
Spoiler:


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THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.

JUTSU
____________________________


Academy Jutsu:


Doton (Earth Techniques):


Raiton (Lighting Release):

Weaponry/Kenjutsu:

Eijutsu (Medical Technique):


WEAPONS
____________________________

Grandmother:


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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Bleach - Sode no Shirayuki
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Bumping for completion. Finally.  pale 
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Do you have permission from an admin to have a Tenei?

If not, then it is required that you PM one and ask for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayashi, Chiyo [Tenei] [complete] Hayashi, Chiyo [Tenei] [complete] EmptySat 02 Aug 2014, 6:58 am

    Given that I've given you approval for both Nukenin and the Rank, I might as well run down the first moderation as well.

  • Your image is broken, you cannot direct link from Zerochan as they have restrictions on it which results in the broken image, you need to host it in another fashion.

  • The weaponry specialty requires you to select a dominant and secondary range for your character to specialize towards from the three following ranges, Close, Mid and Far. Your dominant range can utilize weapons up to your rank and your secondary range can utilize weapons one rank below your level.

  • In regards to special characteristics, you need to start with the lowest rank available to those that you choose, this means that your Acrobatics SC will need to be replaced with the C - rank Evasion SC as they have been updated and Acrobatics has been changed to Evasion.

  • In regards to the rest, I'll moderate them once the weaponry changes have been made.


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Is this application still being worked on?
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