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PostSubject: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptySun 04 Jul 2010, 8:39 pm

Basic Information:

Name: Maya Shihōin
Secondary Title: May~Short for her name. Describes her bright personality in comparison with the warm, Spring month.
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Physical Appearance:
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The beauty of a young girl resides in the heart, mind, and soul. Maya is a young girl who is currently going through her maturing stages. Her petite form is that of an average looking ninja, though she is considered "developed" for her age, giving her the appeal of a matured teen. Beginning from the top of her figure, she is adorned with Long, silhouetting blonde hair that cascades down her back, reaching the start of her butt. Though not perfectly straight, it holds a nice curveture, giving it a bit of body and vibe that creates a look of mysterious beauty. Her most noted feature are her eyes, being large in size. The color is a bold light blue, a mix of dark blue along the edges. The Iris itself is quite large, taking up most of her eye, always a sparkle glistening within them. Her skin, overall, holds a refreshing feel, smooth and tanned from training and hours in the sun. She has a few freckles littering her cheeks, adding to the facade of innocence upon first glance.

The girl's clothes represent her personality, being mostly bright colors. She enjoys blues of all sorts, feeling it brings out her eyes. She usually wears black shorts with a light blue off the shoulder top, which stops at her belly button. Her beige ninja puch resides on her right leg where it rests securely and at a reachable distance from her arms.She adorns her feet with high black boots, easily managable and comfortable, though giving her calves a more defined look. Her favorite feature is one that resides on the forefront of her torso. It is a scar that begins below her left breast, reaching from her belly button down towards her back.

Personality:
Classy. Intelligent. Kind; Some of the words used to describe the bustling teen. Her attitude towards others is polite, among other small characteristics. Maya uses her love for english to enable her way into indepth conversations with her willing peers. Unlike some people, Maya has the ability to judge a person's emotions and harbored feelings through little research and observation. Though a likable person, her nack for her outspoken words tend to get on the nerves of some, though she doesn't always notice, oblivious to the ways others feel about her.

Her love for certain things is abvious, her expression of the said things evident through her actions. Though, her dislikes aren't highly reguarded, she hates people that are known to be rude and arrogant, bringing out her darker side. She dispises those who treat her and her comrades poorly, her bossy side taking hold of her as she stands her ground, refusing to run. When faced with a dangerous situation, natural instinct becomes her dominant trait as she thinks of others before herself. With these traits, it is wrongly perceived from a mere by stander her true personality for she hardly shows all her true feelings, locking away her anger deep within the walls of her stone heart. Though she loves the feeling of friends and the warmth they provide, she fails to feel the common love interest, never finding a person she could truely say she "loved."


Clan Information:
[Asked for Permission and was allowed. ^.^]
https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/approved-clans-f18/shihin-clan-t314.htm

Clan Name: Shihōin
Clan Location: Kumogakure
Clan Traits: Excellent Figure - White Chakra - All female - Tan skin
Kekkei Genkai:
- Tentougan - Heaven's Eye -
Once activated, the clan member's eye glows a bright white. Depending on the user's ability it can be more or less powerful. The most powerful users eyes glow brighter than the beginning users. The abilities of this eye are also dependent on the user. They overall powers are the same, but the overall level of those powers grow exponentially. The abilities of this eye are based on advantages strictly for taijutsu. The ability of this eye is the understanding of movement and the speed of eye movement. The understanding of movement allows for the user to see the type of style and use its weakness against it. The eye movement speed allows for the user to move at any speed without hindering its original vision. Therefore, the user never suffers from high speed tunnel vision.

- Mitsukai On'you - Angel's Visage -

The main clan ability also lies in Taijutsu. The clan member can take their special white chakra and materialize it around their bodies. This materialized chakra is then run back through their bodies and pressurized in their chakra points. This enhances their entire body for hand to hand combat. The chakra itself can be used directly as a weapon, or just as an enhancement for their body, giving them almost inhuman speed and strength. This ability is extremely powerful, and only the masters of the clan may use the full strength of this clan. Their chakra can also be inserted into the opponents body in an alternate rotation of their current chakra, causing the opponent to control of their body for short periods of time.(Must be within taijutsu range and being attacked)
Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A
- Dependent on Fighting Style and varies from character to character -

History:
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Clan Details: The Shihōin Clan originated in a very secluded mountain range in the lightning country. The place was isolated from almost all other groups, so when the others banded together for protection against bandits, the Shihōin were left alone to fend for themselves. They were often attacked in the beginning. Their stores were raided and their women were often taken as slaves. The Shihōin fought back. They trained for years in taijutsu and hand to hand fighting. The skills they learned were very helpful. The raiders started to appear and attack more frequently, but the Shihōin's new skills were too much for the raiders. Even with the small amounts of weapons they carried, the fists of the Shihōin were always more powerful. The raiders gave up on the small clan and decided to get the easier prey of other small towns. They did this for a while, and the Shihōin were peaceful.

Soon after, the Raiders came back. When they arrived the Shihōin were unprepared. They had grown accustomed to the peace, while their eyes evolved into the form they possess now. The raiders brought with them a ninja army. The army gave no warning and easily killed the lookouts without being noticed. The leader of the Shihōin noticed that the lookouts had not reported and sent the women out a secret escape cave with all the teachings of the Shihōin clan. The clan members were killed and the raiders took everything that the clan members owned. The women emerged to find everything destroyed. Over the period of a few years, they rebuilt and prepared themselves. They learned all the original skills of the clan and added onto it. They learned to control their inner energy to increase their power beyond what a human body could possibly do.

Along with that, they started to master materializing that energy into even more useable forms. With these new powers, they sought out the bandits and the ninja clan to destroy them. The women were more powerful than anything the ninja had seen, and they were completely destroyed. Rumors started to spread of the power of their clan. The founders of Kumo asked them to help form the village, and they accepted. As a nobility family in Kumo, the Shihōin developed even more. They mated with males, but kept the secrets of the clan with the females. None of the males were allowed to become true members of the clan. The only female clan flourished in Kumogakure.

Rank Information:

Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation: Kumo

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main:Taijutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Water
Sub: Wind
Special Characteristics:

Strategist- After years of playing chess and checkers with her father, Maya developed a keen sense of mind, allowing her to come up with reliable battle strategies on a whim. This is caused by her father manipulating the board to fit the criteria of war tactics and even man vs. man combat.

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element[/b]: N/A
Description[/b]: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name:Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank:D
Element:Water
Description:This displacement technique is a specialty of the Ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist colored by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.

Name:Water Clone Technique
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power, as stated by Haku. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.

Name: Water Prison Technique
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This jutsu can't be performed without a sufficiently large body of water to supply the water for it. Despite the fact that the prison is made up entirely out of water, it is stronger than steel as stated by Zabuza Momochi. Once trapped the target is unable to move while within it due to the heaviness of the water.

Name:Water Release: Gunshot
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The user kneads chakra, and converts it into water, and then spits it out in the form of condensated balls. The high-speed waterball attack possesses just as much power to kill as an actual gunshot. While this is a water release technique, it can still be employed someplace where no water is available, which is a great advantage. It's also possible to increase the power of destruction of the balls themselves by building up the chakra inside of them. The number of bullets is determined while kneading chakra. By taking advantage of gravity, the bullets can brutally increase in power.

Name: Water Release: Syrup Capture Field
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The user spits out high-viscosity, chakra-mixed water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few meters, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channeling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited.

Name:Water Release: Violent Bubble Wave
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The user spits out a large volume of bubbles. The ground covered by the bubbles looses its friction, considerably limiting the opponent's movements. The bubbles are spit out with violent force that is capable of washing away most attacks, such as oil and fire. This technique can also be used as an effective smokescreen. *If Alie is in the way, it slows them as well*

Name:Water Release: Violent Water Wave
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases. Having many variations, this is a basic Water Release technique.

Name:Wind Release: Great Breakthrough
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down, for example, a tree. The strength of the wind varies from each user. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.



Background Information

History:
Birth Arc

Born a Simple Life; To Die a Complex One
“When we remember we are all mad, the mysteries disappear and life stands explained.” ~Mark Twain

Born in a small hut just within Kumo’s walls, Maya grew up as a well nourished child, her parents spoiling her with whatever they could afford. Seeing as though they bore her no other siblings, she was always the center of attention. She never acted upon the actions expected from someone whom was spoiled. Instead, she was often generous, giving to others whenever she could. Quickly she became known as the “Child of Spring and Happiness.”

Academy Arc

Happiness Comes with Love; Holding Consequences.
“The foolish one seeks happiness in the distance; the wise grow it under their feet.” ~James Openheim

At the age of 8 she entered the Academy, though against her parents wishes, not wanting their only daughter to become involved with such dangerous work. She stayed strong, gaining knowledge of many things along her fateful journey.

At the age of 10, an unfortunate event occurred within her household. Her mother became sickly ill, the sickness killing her within the week of catching it. Greif stricken, her father, Toshito, committed the worse act possible; He had committed suicide, leaving their daughter to fend for herself. Alone and scared, she was brought into the home of her 50 year old uncle, who taught her the way of her clan and helped her become the strong and independent girl she

Genin Arc


Hard work and Determination; The common traits.
How many times must one fight and succeed before being recognized as worthy?~Anonymous

Graduation was the beginning of a new life for the newly found ninja. She passed the academy with flying colors, alongside her friends whom she had known since she was young. Though not assigned a team, Maya will continue to work hard and persevere, hoping to one day fulfill her goal.

Role-Play Sample:
Among the endless sea of people; the faceless crowd. She stood there waiting, watching. Past the laughter of the children, the scoldings of their parents; she listened. Her heart was numb, her feelings, no longer existing. She is a shell; where a person no longer lives. She is the lonely one, among the sea of people. Why did it become this way?

Lies

That’s all they ever tell; all they ever say. So, she swung back and forth, swaying away, letting the undetermined winds lift her off towards the golden sky above. She no longer knew how to listen; to feel. She shrugged off her thoughts, not knowing what she wished to do. She let her bare feet touch the darkened dirt beneath her, skidding behind her as she slowly stopped her momentum, her eyes watching the small marks her feet sketched into the ground. Rising, she walked away from the group of people, her crystal eyes emotionless, her mouth in a thin line.

She let the cool breeze touch her face, caressing it with it’s gentle hands. She was a mere figurine in this vast, overflowing world. She, the small pawn of life, being moved to help those in higher power succeed in their big dreams and accomplishments, while she, is tossed aside. She didn’t care much, she was used to it. Her understandings of the world’s works took its toll on her long ago, her feeling of “surprise” gone like the gentle wind that swept her long hair behind her. She turned her head towards the group of people she just finished evaluating, eyeing each one carefully, allowing her emotionless, porcelain looking face to show slight anger as her eyebrows became furrowed. Fury; a feeling she never showed often but felt boiling within her.

“You are all pawns...Just as I am.” whispering, as that same wind she so wished for to return, swept it away, to the unknown and unhearing ears, above.

Without much thought, the young girl walked silently among the crowd of people, her eyes unmoving as she made her way with ease, hardly touching the filch of others. Without warning, a boy of some sorts accidentally pushed himself into her, causing her to flinch and both of them to fall to the floor.

“I’m Sorry! Here, let me he-” the girl’s gaze became hard as she looked up at the now standing boy. His golden eyes meeting her sapphire ones, his mouth agape as he stared at the girl’s unknown beauty.

“I don’t want your help…” She rose, muttering as she shook the dirt off her small, petite form. “Now if you don’t mind, I’ll be leaving…Watch where you’re going next time.” She stated, her frown becoming contagious as the boy shared the same facial expression as she, those his holding a bit of hurt. I guess a smile wasn’t the only emotion to be spread.

Walking away, the boy merely scoffed. She didn’t mine. She never has, and never will. The thoughts of people were useless, they were only opinions. Does an opinion change the out course of another’s life? Unlikely. She let her blackened hair sway behind her rhythmically as she walked with an even pace towards her emptied lot.

Tap…Tap…Tap…Tap…Tap…

The girl, upon making it to her house, opened the door with a small key she pulled from her pocket, unlocking the door towards her hell on earth; the empty house in which she lives.

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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptySun 04 Jul 2010, 9:22 pm

You need to add more to your background. At the moment you only have Birth and Academy arcs, in which you never described how did you became a Genin. So please add an additional Genin Arc.


RP Sample, it is great. But, just in case, I am going to warn you about something. The RP sample is an sample of your daily work and it shows how your usual posts look like. So, if you plant to RP like that every time, do not change a thing about.


You only picked the Basic Jutsus to start with. I should tell you now that you are allowed to start with D and C Ranked Ninjutsus and Taijutsus of your Clan, Element and any other C or D Ranked Ninjutsu or Taijutsu which requires no element.

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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyMon 05 Jul 2010, 7:06 am

Alright, Fixed.

Bump. :]
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyMon 05 Jul 2010, 7:23 am

Has your clan been approved in Clan Creation yet? If not, you need to post it there as well. If so, post the link in the clan information of your application.

Also, could you fix the codes (bolding) in your jutsu?
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyMon 05 Jul 2010, 7:35 am

It was an already approved clan that I had gotten permission to be apart of :]

Fixed....
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyMon 05 Jul 2010, 7:37 am

I see no further flaws in your application!

~Approved!
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyMon 05 Jul 2010, 7:47 am

Oops! Unapproved, I was notified of a flaw in your application that I looked over!

Quote :
Name:Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank:D
Element:Water

Name:Water Clone Technique
Rank:C
Element:Water

Name: Water Prison Technique
Rank:C
Element:Water

Name:Water Release: Gunshot
Rank:C
Element:Water

Name: Water Release: Syrup Capture Field
Rank:C
Element:Water

Name:Water Release: Violent Bubble Wave
Rank:C
Element:Water

Name:Water Release: Violent Water Wave
Rank:C
Element:Water

Name:Wind Release: Great Breakthrough
Rank:C
Element:Wind



No descriptions! Fix please!
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyMon 05 Jul 2010, 8:32 am

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyMon 05 Jul 2010, 9:14 am

Quote :
Strategist- After years of playing chess and checkers with her father, Maya developed a keen sense of mind, allowing her to come up with reliable battle strategies on a whim.

You might want to add further detail into this, and perhaps explain what this does. While it is nice to be bright, and good at strategy, does it have a practical application that can be applied while posting in a topic? If not, feel free to note that. It needs another liner or two of detail anyway.


- Your RP sample is 569 words, and quite pretty I must say. I mention this only so that you are aware you will be held to the standard present in your RP sample. If you don't intend on posting that much, or close too it, with your posts, you should edit it. however, if you feel it is an adequate measure of your writing habit, then by all means leave it as it is. ^-^

Quote :
Name:Wind Release: Great Breakthrough
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the users line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
This technique says it blows away everything in sight, or that it knocks over one tree when used by a skilled user. Please chose only one of those options. If you chose to blow away everything in sight, then please increase the rank and add more detail. Everything is a lot of stuff.

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Name:Water Release: Violent Bubble Wave
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The user spits out a large volume of bubbles. The ground covered by the bubbles looses its friction, considerably limiting the opponent's movements. The bubbles are spit out with violent force that is capable of washing away most attacks, such as oil and fire. This technique can also be used as an effective smokescreen.
It should be noted that this slows anyone who is in its effect radius. Friend or foe, unless you wish to provide a way out for each. As this is similiar to the Syrup trap, I'd recommend adding something about being able to focus chakra to walk on it, or note that no one ca walk on it.


Quote :
Name:Water Release: Gunshot
Rank:C
Element:Water
Description:The user kneads chakra, and converts it into water, and then spits it out in the form of condensated balls. The high-speed waterball attack possesses just as much power to kill as an actual gunshot. While this is a water release technique, it can still be employed someplace where no water is available, which is a great advantage. It's also possible to increase the power of destruction of the balls themselves by building up the chakra inside of them. The number of bullets is determined while kneading chakra. By taking advantage of gravity, the bullets can brutally increase in power.

Let me start off by saying.. No. Nu-uh, no way, that's just not happening. I'm sorry, you can't spit bullets at will. Understand that a jutsu that creates a ball of water and shoots it at someone will do C rank damage. I know it may seem unfair, but in reality, spitting bullets is unfair. So, this will either need to be drasticaly toned down, or simply removed. I would suggest full removal, as it will just be a Water Ball jutsu after alteration. If this were an S ranked technique I could see it capable of blowing people's heads off. But it's not.


-- Mkay, that's about all I saw with my initial scan over this, but I have a few other notes. Most notably, you do not have a single Taijutsu technique. While this is all well and good, you are allowed too add all you can manage before approval. After approval you will have to train each one. So, this is your chance to get them for free while you still can. I just thought I'd throw that out there. You are not required to have any Taijutsu techniques on your sheet. Leafninja.com has a small section with some you can look at if you choose too.

Your sheet looks quite nice, though your jutsu lack the embellishing bold print, and such. I'm not sure if that's a big deal, but if you'd like to fix that, feel free.
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptyFri 23 Jul 2010, 4:31 pm

Bump & Fixed.

*Note: I understand that my Rp sample demonstrates how I will have to post. I do plan on posting like this. :] As for adding any more jutsus, I don't wish to start out knowing anything else.* :]
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptySun 25 Jul 2010, 4:59 am

Bump...
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PostSubject: Re: Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] Shihōin, Maya [Kumo Genin] EmptySun 25 Jul 2010, 11:32 pm

It doesn't appear that you changed anything regarding to Water Release: Gunshot.

Please add some more to your history, too. Maybe another paragraph or two.
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I will archive this in 24 hours if there is no renewed interest.
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