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MASAAKI, HOTAKA.
"There are times when youth is a curse, not a blessing."


THE INFO.

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NAME: Masaaki, Hotaka
NICKNAME:
  • 'Hopping' Hotaka (Common Title)
  • The Demon-Ape of the Lightning(Renowned Title)
  • Kumo's Dancing Demon(Renowned Title)

AGE: 15
GENDER: Male
APPEARANCE:
  • PHYSICAL:In the most literal sense there’s very little to describe when it comes to Hotaka’s appearance. The young Jinchuriki stands at the height of only 5'5, while weighing roughly 120 pounds. He is quite scrawny and small, his body in such a shape that you could hardly guess he was a ninja. Even if his body is lean then he is stronger than most would guess at first because his ninja training. He wouldn't perhaps be described as being the tallest and most fit genin out there, but give it a year or two and his growth will surely start kicking in, after all, he cant possibly stuck at this puny size forever right? Now being at the age of 15, the young boy is not pleased about having a face that would indicate him being at least a few years younger than his actual age. His smooth, slightly pale skin which doesn't hold any blemishes would make any girl feel jealous of him, and boys often ask if he uses a girls products. His slightly big, round eyes hold a fascinating chocolate brown color, the kind of eye that easily displays his emotions in it’s own chocolate flame . He's got a petite nose over a small mouth with slightly full lips that reveal a row of pearly white and sharp teeth whenever he smiles or speaks. His dark brown hair reaches down his neck at the back and frames his face in messy locks that never seem to be able to stay the way they should be. The comb always has to admit defeat, leaving out only the possibility of using tons of gel. Which might not exactly be his first choice. Physically, Hotaka is far from intimidating, yet few realize he is quite literally a beast trapped in the body of a child. This beast within is only revealed in the unnatural and rather perplexing growth of a tail nearly 4 foot long from his tailbone, this however is often by a henge outside of combat.

  • CLOTHING:Hotaka is far from the type to don the traditional battle gear as he finds it uncomfortable and constricting to his form, yet he clearly cannot wear traditional civilian wear, otherwise he will be lacking in the ability to hold the equipment required for his trade. Instead he substitutes this battle wear with clothing mimicking much of the common civilian wear, yet with unique pouches and pockets to secretly contain his shinobi equipment, it has become his way of keeping his own originality amongst the mass of Shinobi within the village as well as allowing him to blend in with the crowded streets of the village in order to avoid any attention he does not desire. It is most common that Hotaka’s clothing will consist of a typical school uniform. A white shirt that's usually buttoned all the way up, or in a messy way when Hotaka oversleeps and has to be in a hurry, a red tie which seems to be a bit strange on such a young boy and then a dark blue jacket over. His pants are dark green checkered, his socks are colored usually after his mood and then he wears simple brown shoes. Other days he will wear little more than a pair of blue jeans and a jacket of some sort,



PERSONALITY:How does one begin to describe the famed Hotaka? He is such a brave and strong fighter, a genius, both on the battle field and off, never making the wrong choice…or at least that’s what he wishes he was. In truth Hotaka is quite the broad and interesting specimen. He seems to both be unrealistically transparent whilst also being incredibly varied. He is quite difficult to describe in just a few words as he tends to be a genius at one moment and a complete moron in another, he can be kind and cold, observant and oblivious, he is difficult to describe with merely one of these terms. His entire personality seems to most to be one constant flux, ever varying, constantly changing, it can only be said that he contains multitudes. He possesses several personality aspects which seem to be a relative constant and yet there are some times when they may be missing all together. Needless to say, due to the situations under which Hotaka has matured and his bond with the Four-Tailed Bijuu, his personality is difficult to pin down for most people.

[Brave/Stubborn/Prideful]: The easiest part of Hotaka’s personality to pin down is his tendency to be exceedingly [borderline stupidly] brave. This might indeed have something to do with his pig-headed and stubborn nature which he inherited both naturally and from his bond with the Yonbi, the Bijuu being a prideful and stubborn creature itself. Hotaka does not back down from any situation in which he can protect someone or something, such situations seeming to light a fire within him when they occur. And due to his stubborn nature, he cannot back down from them even if they grow out of hand, thus his bravery closely borders stupidity. It has been said that he would be likely to go against a Kage themselves if one [or even more than one] were to threaten something Hotaka cared about. Bearing that in mind, Hotaka also finds it exceedingly difficult to back down from any sort of challenge or dare, no matter how impractical or impossible it seems to be. This has indeed gotten Hotaka into many situations which were far over his head, quite a number of which, he barely managed to talk or fight his way out of [Such as lighting the Raikage’s office ablaze.. albeit unintentionally ].

He is oft criticized or berated by people who claim he has no common sense to keep him out of these situations. Yet this is both true and untrue, he is simply too prideful to back down, it would after all, be an insult to his name and pride if he were to do such a thing. One of the few things Hotaka absolutely cannot stand is an insult, be it to himself or to someone he cares for and often he will answer such an insult with a challenge to battle or some other ridiculous type of game, even if there is very little of a chance that he can win, which is highly likely to get him into a great deal of trouble or personal injury. He is not malicious with these acts though, Hotaka has good intentions, it is just that often these aspects of his personality conflict with his rationale.

[Naïve/Wise/Honor-Bound]During much of his life, Hotaka was raised and trained in a Monastery, which was distinctly devoid of much personal interaction with people close to his own age. Thus, by extension, Hotaka is very naive and inexperienced when it comes to human interaction. Because of this he often fails to understand many important aspects of human conversation, such as sarcasm, body language, a number of jokes and he sometimes has the occasional mishap whilst attempting to interpret tone. This hindrance with human interaction often gets Hotaka into a number of troublesome situations at some times, occasionally leading to a hilarious outcome.

Yet, perhaps because of his lack of interaction, Hotaka lacks many of the stigmas and stipulations given from being raised within society. For example, Hotaka never sees any need to censor himself, thus he always says whatever is on his mind during the conversation, no matter the subject or whether it is appropriate; which in turn can lead to many situations during which he will say something either very wise or very hurtful unknowing. As another side effect of Hotaka’s isolationism, he very idealistic and strong in conviction, never willing to compromise his beliefs, even on orders. Yet perhaps this aspect will be continually chipped down by the harsh world of the Shinobi.


[Curious/Intelligent/Avid-Learner]Perhaps the first things that the people of the Monastery noticed about the young Hotaka is that he is an outrageously curious person, causing the simplest of things to be blown into a full scale fiasco merely because he put his nose in a place it did not belong. As such he greatly enjoys learning new things and living through new and unique experiences. He enjoys doing anything that may increase his knowledge base. He also finds. He finds delight in puzzles, seeking the solutions frantically and even after finishing them; he may do them several more times just to prove mastery over them. Perhaps as a result of his aforementioned curiosity, Hotaka is extremely intelligent. One of the smartest minds within his previous order, he has been called as a genius. But the ever modest one, Hotaka denies it. He knows, what he knows. He does not openly brag about his knowledge, nor does he openly give it away, preferring to only display said knowledge when needed. Largely due to his massive curiosity Hotaka seeks to always increase his knowledge base and because of such it is incredibly rare to find him without a book or scroll of which he will examine every character of in an attempt to gain any and all information from the material.

[Playful/Trickster]Hotaka could only be defined as the trickster. He loves to play games, more so he loves to play games with other beings. A little extra chaos always makes the world a brighter place in his eyes. He has always been the prankster and the practical joker; although many find his jokes to be...less than funny. As such he is very sly and cunning so much so, that he often believes he can talk his way out of anything, but more often he only manages to talk himself into more trouble. Hotaka often enjoys games of any sort, but his stubborn nature often makes him more than unwilling to accept defeat and will often cheat or bewilder his opponent if it means Hotaka can walk away the victor.




CLAN: --
NINDO:
  • "Only in combat do you learn who you truly are."


THE NINJA.



ORIGIN: Lightning Country, Kumogakure no Sato
AFFILIATION: Kumogakure no Sato
RANK: Genin [C-Rank]
SPECIALTIES:
  • MAIN: Ninjutsu
  • SUB:Taijutsu

ELEMENTAL AFFINITIES:
  • MAIN: Katon [Fire Release] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] 18px-Nature_Icon_Fire.svg
  • SUB: Doton [Earth Release] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] 100px-10
  • Advanced: Yoton [Lava Release] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] 70px-n10

COMBAT STYLE:Despite his rather prideful and stubborn nature,Hotaka fights with a unique calm and passive nature. He is never the type to reveal any of his potential and abilities if he can prevent it which is likely to be the leading cause of his pacivity in combat. He will rarely if ever make the first true move in combat he will wait as long as it takes for his opponent to reveal their attack if the situational is favorable. Because of his personallity many may see Hotaka as an easilly won fight, but that could not be farther from the truth. Despite his attitude Hotaka takes to combat remakably well, his mind able to take in every aspect of the situation with little effort as well as being able to think several moves ahead; treating the battle as if it were simply a complicated game of chess. He treats basic and common techniques as pawns; being more likely to reveal those over others and his trump cards or unique techniques as more valuable pieces, being very much less likely to reveal those.

During most fights he does his absolute best to keep his thoughts and actions calm and collected. He attempts to beat his opponents with a minimal expenditure of both energy and equipment for as long as it is reasonable in the combat situation, having been taught to continuously poke and prod to test the weaknesses of his opponents.

When forced to fight Hotaka relies on his Taijutsu training to preform quick precise strikes to take down an opponent first, whilst using his skill in ninjutsu to control the battlefield as well as counter his opponent.

SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS:
The Monkey Demon:

THE BACKGROUND.



    HISTORY:
    Spoiler:

    ROLEPLAY SAMPLE:
    Spoiler:


THE ARSENAL.



    STYLES:

    EQUIPMENT:
    Spoiler:



    JUTSU:
    Academy Jutsu:

    Approved Taijutsu(1):

    Doton Ninjutsu(7):

    Katon Ninjutsu(4):

    Yoton Jutsu(3):





FACE CLAIM.


    CHARACTER CLAIM: Shi-Woon Yi
    SOURCE: The Breaker/ The Breaker : New Waves
    IMAGE URL: Here


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PostSubject: Re: Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] EmptySun 18 Mar 2012, 1:02 pm

How's this app coming along?
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PostSubject: Re: Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] EmptySun 25 Mar 2012, 8:45 pm

It's nearly finish just hit a really busy patch of life
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PostSubject: Re: Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] EmptyThu 29 Mar 2012, 8:21 am

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PostSubject: Re: Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] EmptySat 31 Mar 2012, 1:10 am

Quote :
Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 3
Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.

Name: Giant Shuriken
Rank: C
Type: Main - Secondary/Ranged
Quantity: 2
Description: Although there is nothing special about these enlarged creation, they are nonetheless deadly. These large shuriken are hurled by the user at an opponent, as their large size increases the damage they inflict on the target as they fly through the air and gain momentum.

Name: Senbon Launcher
Rank: C
Type: Main - Secondary/Ranged
Quantity: 2 (10)
Description: Usually hidden on either of the user's forearm under loose cloth, this launcher can be used to send needles at their opponents at higher speeds with better accuracy. Up to five needles can be launched at once, resulting in deadly surprise
I'm sorry, but you do not have Weaponry as a specialty. You can only have C-rank weapons at S-rank, unless you get Weaponry as a specialty. Please either remove these, or change your specialty to Weaponry. If you'd like more information, please read this.
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b]Name:[/b] Kurotchishotto - Crotch Shot
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m)
Element: -
Description: Kurotchishotto is a humiliating taijutsu technique. By appearing in front of the opponent, the user will charge a small amount of chakra towards their dominant leg. Performing an upward kick at the opponents crotch area, they will be able to force them up into the air by a metre where a second attack could take place. If the victim was a male, a great deal of pain will be dealt after the kick has been made.
Chakra Cost: 3
Fix the broken bold tag. Thankies.
Quote :
Name: Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Fish Projection
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Dochuu Eigyo is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. Using the Bunshins, the user will use the clones to confuse their enemies and then hide within the earth. From the shadows of the clones, the actual ninja can then attack their target.
Chakra Cost: 5
This jutsu is used in correlation with a Genjutsu which you don't have. The Bunshin a regular genin can summon are not the same as the Bunshin used in this jutsu. I realize this is an Encyclopedia jutsu, but please remove it. The encyclopedia is currently being worked on.
Quote :
Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth.
Chakra Cost: 6
Add "(2 per post)" to Chakra Cost.
Quote :
Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.
Chakra Cost: 5
Same thing as Submarine Voyage, please remove. Again, I realize it's an Encyclopedia jutsu.
Quote :
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Chakra Cost: 5
Add "(2 per post)" to Chakra Cost.

There's a broken bold tag in one of your Yoton techniques. It'll be easy to find.

Just fix these few things, and you'll be fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] EmptySat 31 Mar 2012, 1:53 am

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PostSubject: Re: Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] EmptySat 31 Mar 2012, 3:49 pm

Great! Everything looks fine to me. Adam says you should add something in your appearance about a forehead protector though.

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PostSubject: Re: Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] Masaaki, Hotaka [Kumo Genin // Four-Tails Jinchuuriki] EmptySat 31 Mar 2012, 4:48 pm

Enzo wrote:
Quote :
Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 3
Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.
I'm sorry, but you do not have Weaponry as a specialty. You can only have C-rank weapons at S-rank, unless you get Weaponry as a specialty. Please either remove these, or change your specialty to Weaponry. If you'd like more information, please read this.
I am sorry to interfere, but this is not a weapon so it does not require the Weaponry Specialty.
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Equipment and Weaponry follow the same rules. If you check here you can see that the title says 'Equipment and Weaponry'. That clearly implies that the rules apply for equipment as well as weaponry, along with the fact that equipment is used several times in correspondence with weaponry in the rules. Next time you feel the need to offer some advice, please PM a mod instead of posting in the topic.
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Clean cut and simple, great job.

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