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Unagai, Sousuke

THE INFO.

Name: Sousuke Unagai
Nickname: Pup
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: His physical appearance is as shown in the picture above. He is a lithe male, standing at 5'2” and weighing in at 108 pounds. His skin is an almost ghostly white though not for lack of time spent outside. His hair is silvery white and usually unkempt as he rarely brushes it out. His eyes are a deep, almost pale blue similar to an ice blue.

His body has an unusual quirk to it as well. Due to the demon Houkou being sealed within his body from the time he turned three, he has grown a bushy tail and a pair of wolf ears has replaced his normal ears. While these for nothing special for the boy they have been quite the source of pain for him during his life. He has a set of three scars on his body, given to him at the age of eight, stab wounds have left one scar on his upper left arm and two on his lower back. His clothing is basic. A pair of custom black jeans with a fabric strap that snaps above his tail. He also wears a grey t-shirt with the Konoha leaf symbol on it. His forehead protector is worn on his left arm, tied over the scar.

Along with Sousuke is the inner image of Houkou usually seen within his head. She manifests there as an oversized wolf, roughly twice the height of a grown man. Her body is snow white with swirling patterns of gray thrown into the mix in whistful swirls down her flanks. Her eyes are piercingly blue offset by the ivory fur surrounding them and her tails, five in all, have a different tip per tail. From right to left they are ruby red for the flame, sparkling silver for wind, sapphire blue for water, deep onyx for earth and sunglow yellow for lightning.
Personality: Sousuke himself is more than one personality cramped into the same body. From the time that he was four he had the voice of the deity Houkou, a spirit wolf with five tail, each controlling a different element, sealed away within him. This was considered a blessing by his clan.

Sousuke, the child in which the wolf was sealed has a usual childish demeanor but that demeanor falls under what a withdrawn child's would be. He has an emotional maturity that makes him want to bond with adults over children of his age. His studies became a center of all he wanted to accomplish. Most of all he wanted to prove to the kids of his age and class that if he was going to be labeled different by them for his ears and tail, that he was going to be labeled better than them. For this reason he strives to be better than anyone that might try to compare to him.

In battles and on missions his attitude changes very little. He tries to be tactful, preferring to remain at a distance until he has some sort of grasp on what an opponent's strengths and weaknesses could be before he will risk getting close for an attack. There is one exception to this though. Any time his ears or tail are insulted or something to that effect Sousuke loses any type of tact he may have had. On occasion he can keep himself in line to avoid this but at times it is a necessity for him.

The second personality in his mind is that of Houkou, the spirit wolf. She tends to berate Sousuke at every turn, claiming his predecessors were better than him. She is also a driving force behind one of Sousuke's main quirks, his preference for men.

In her own mind which the boy frequents she is calm and placid, insightful at times even if she does begrudge being placed within a male's body. She can be frightening at times when Sousuke is under duress but for the most part she remains an insightful being that is cool and focused. She loves to tease Sousuke as well, making his tail wag at awkward times to throw him off. Though she does seem to resent him at times for the most part she looks after Sousuke as if he were a pup.
Clan: Unagai
Nindō: “I'll be different because I'm the best. I'll show them all!”

THE NINJA.

Origin: Konohagakure
Affiliation: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Weaponry, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton, Katon
Combat Style: Sousuke's fighting style varies based on two variables that are either used separately or in tandem to produce a wide variety of styles from a few base traits. The first of these traits is his weapon. He has a pair of short swords that interlock at the hand guard. There are two phases to this weapon that can be used, the first being closed style. The closed style of this weapon is that of a short staff with metallic ends for a stronger strike. It is lighter than his larger staff and can be spun about quicker making it his go to weapon for deflecting thrown objects such as shuriken and kunai.

The next style of this weapon is the dual bladed approach which falls off into three sub groups; standard grip, half and half and reverse grip styles. The first style, standard grip holds the handles with the blades protruding from the grip on the side of the thumb. This is a standard grip many use on swords and knives alike and is versatile but can be countered with strong blows. The next grip type is the reverse grip where the blades run backwards, exiting the grip on the side of the pinkie. This makes the user take on a more preying mantis type of look. The stronger grip on this allows more power to be put into strikes while sacrificing the versatile nature of the standard grip. It also allows one to use the full of the energy in extending one's arm to strike an opponent.

The third style is the half and half, the user will grip the swords, one in reverse style and one in standard. Usually one's dominant hand will be in standard and the other in reverse, this compensates the submissive hand's grip strength a bit while keeping the dominant hand versatile enough to block incoming blows as needed.

Sousuke also wields a staff, used mainly for middle ranged attacking and blocking. The staff has an agility to it and balance that the swords do not allowing its user to be able to be flexible in blocking. The flexibility in the staff allows for bending and springing in small amounts allowing the user to vault with it into aerial attacking styles with ease.

The second aspect of his style is the element he's attacking with. Depending on the element he uses he will fall into two categories. Ranged and close. Ranged is usually used in flame and wind chakras and close in water and earthen chakras. The distinction in these is slightly blurred in that all of the elements can be used as a charge but only wind and fire can be launched into ranged. Close style is used with weapon changing in tandem with styled weapons.

Ranged falls under two styles, double charging and dual charging. In Double style swords are charged with the same type and launched in tandem. In dual style wind and fire are launched together for explosive results. While this doesn't strengthen the fire style it does cause the fire style to explode when the chakras meet so launching them in tandem can be hazardous to ones health if they detonate within the user's personal space.

Next in the fighting style is pairing. The weapons may be used without charges or with and this combination diversifies the user's arsenal exponentially. By using the earth charge one strengthens and weights a weapon putting more force behind it at the cost of speed or agility. With water nature charges a person could be put into a state where certain pains that would inhibit walking would be ignoreable. Granted this does nothing for cut muscles and tendons or broken bones but if a shallow cut on the back of the leg or knee is inhibiting one's ability to run with pain the numbness provided can allow them to escape. The drawback here is that over exerting a damaged limb could exacerbate a cut into a crippling injury. This is the basic summary covering the different manners of fighting at Sousuke's disposal.
Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Back when the lands were young, when villages were merely a collaboration of a few clans that worked in tandem for a singular goal there was one, situated within the leaf village. The Unagi clan which had begun to develop itself situated around a singular being. The wolf spirit Houkou, a plague upon villages and lands alike was free to roam the world. Feared by many and worshipped by few the Unagi clan took on a philosophy of trying to obtain it's power, centered around the five elemental chakra types.

One element adorned each of its tails and when they swung about calamity and disaster followed. The great beast terrorize many villages, but upon attacking the leaf village the Unagi clan intervened. Through a great battle, costing the clan many of their kin the beast was finally brought to its knees and sealed away within the current head of the clan. It was said that at the time of the sealing the great wolf shared many secrets with the clan's leader, including one that would change the face of the Unagi clan forever. A grouping of five seals placed on the clansmen's body would be able to filter and store four of the chakra natures in an imperfect form.

Taking the step that much closer to their diety's perfection in elemental ninjutsu was not without a price though. A simple miscalculation, an error on the leader's part and a curse from Houkou for sealing her away was that the clan forever held a weakness to lightning ninjutsu. A simple shock to the system was able to bring even the strongest of the clansmen to their knees, paralyzed and unable to move in the heat of a battle.

Over the centuries the clan divided and spread, seeking the other four villages for a way to perfect their ninjutsu. None was ever found. Over the centuries the clan evolved, taking on the name 'Unagai' as it did. Houkou remained within the elders lines, transferred from father to son as she passed through time, leapfrogging from body to body. Somewhere along the line the main head of the Unagai clan disappeared for many years and when he finally surfaced again he had lost the spirit Houkou.

Present day

A boy named Sousuke was born into the clan under the elder Kirik. He was normal for the most part, himself and his brother Tonsui grew up quickly, trained into the elder's position in the off chance that their father would live a shortened life. The clan had settled by now, becoming only a meager clan at best, many believing Houkou had been a myth created by the clan to fuel its power. One day Sousuke was called upon by his father for an urgent matter.

During a remodel of one of the clan's buildings a scroll had been found locked in a pillar. It was bound in seals and had a simple, singular word written on it, 'Houkou'. Upon opening the scroll it was discovered that with the her last hosts will that she'd been sealed away and hidden. For what purpose had been unstated but the elder of the clan saw only the revival of the clan in his mind. To that extent he sealed the beast away within his son with startling results.

When Sousuke had awoke, at the age of four he realized something was different, his ears had migrated, taking on a canine appearance above his eyeline. Behind him a wagging tail had marked the other change. Along with all of this was one more greatly important thing, a new voice guiding the boy's mind and even speaking out at times, the spirit wolf Houkou.

He was sent to school the same as his brother Tonsui. He had excelled more than his brother at clan techniques and was the next intended as the clan's head, more so for his new affiliation with Houkou. He was still a child though, playful as a pup and innocent for the most part. All that was to be shattered though. He was teased and jeered at for his ears and tail, something he resented greatly. Apart from his brother he had no one within the classes that he could speak with as he had been outcast for being different. This spurned his new Nindo; “If I'm so different then fine. I'll be different because I'll be the best! I'll show them all!”

In the coming years he was trained vigorously by his father, forced to pick up tricks and tactics in battle and trained to better understand his abilities. His brother Tonsui, a childhood rival was left behind to be replaced with thoughts of politics within the clan, though he still fails to grasp many things within these frames.

His innocence had been shattered during one trip with his father, at the age of eight he was brought along to the lightning village. On the way there they had been ambushed, Sousuke was struck with three kunai, one in the left arm, two in the back. His father, furious that a child would be a target, let alone his child, dispatched their attackers, leaving them bloody corpses lying on the side of the road. Sousuke was carried into the lightning village and tended to but all the while long Houkou's whispers were filling his mind.

When he awoke the next day his eyes had lost their luster, replaced with the duller shine of realization. He wasn't always going to be safe simply by his father's strength. When he returned to the village again he had become hardened, the playful demeanor of his youth replaced with one of a ninja. He had seen death, he had felt pain, and had come within inches of losing his life had his father not intervened. Even his brother had not understood how Sousuke could have changed so drastically. As such they grew apart, until Sousuke had graduated the academy at the age of ten. Now he stands on the cusp of the ninja world, gradually advancing towards his goal of being the best ninja there could be.

Roleplay Sample:
Sousuke sighed softly as he settled into his bedroom, sitting down with the gracefulness of a squirrel falling from a tree. His legs drew into the usual crossed stated as he folded his hands into a tiger seal and exhaled slowly. He could feel his chakra slowly draining through the seal on his stomach, causing a subtle glow through the thin fabric of his shirt. “You're focusing too hard pup.” came a soft voice echoing in his mind.

“It's not my fault.” he retorted aloud, still remaining in the same position.

“You look silly when you talk to yourself you know? Besides something is messing with your concentration again. Was it those boys from earlier?” Houkou echoed again, addressing her host within his mind.

“Like I care what they think.” he shot back quickly, his seal's glow wavering slightly.

“Mhmm keep telling yourself that pup.” she whispered again.

Sousuke's ears splayed as he frowned. “It's not like it matters. They say it all the time.” Sousuke growled.

“Okay okay fine, it doesn't matter.” Houkou echoed a bit quieter. Sousuke's hands shifted, forming a bird seal now, the seal on his left hand beginning to glow now. The silence in the room was almost graspable before Sousuke finally spoke again.

“Why'd you have to go and give me ears like this?” the boy muttered, his seal retaining its glow.

“I would have thought the tail would have been a more pressing issue.” she replied, forcing the boy's tail to swish back and forth against the floor.

“You didn't answer my question.” Sousuke said softly.

“Call it a personal preference.” she replied.

“Your preferences suck.” the boy shot back with a small smirk.

“Yeah so I've been told.” the wolf muttered within his mind.

THE ARSENAL.

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Clan Ninjutsu

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Hey Dew, this is my first time moderating on a character application, so I will try and do my best about it.

So to start, you have to state Weaponry and Ninjutsu as your specialties, not only Kenjutsu, as your arsenal equipment includes a staff and a club. However, you can only specialize in two fields of weaponry and you already fill in Swords, Polearms/Staffs and Blunt weapons. I am afraid you have to be restricted to only two of them. As for the next one, you have already posted your weapons in Custom Equipment Registration and have them under debate. So I will wait until they can get approved in that topic. Finally, you can add Special Characteristics to your character, out of this list if you wish to of course.

Generally speaking, you provide enough information about your character in all parts of the application and I cannot see any glaring errors. Please fix the only think I stated above and you will be fine.

UPDATE: I mistook your Combat Style for the Specialties. So I have to say that you need to provide a whole paragraph of about four to five sentences, describing your character's way of fighting. You can mention the strategy he follows or the way he prefers to face the different situations in battle.
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Thank you for your time given in to it. I can see no further errors, so from my part,

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