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| UZUMAKI, TAKASHI.THE INFO. Name: Uzumaki, Takashi Nickname: N/A Age: 15 Gender: Male Appearance: Takashi is a thin, long-faced child from Konohagakure with short round ears, big green eyes, a small pointy nose, and a sharp smile. The shade of green in his eyes is rather "cute" as one might put it, and makes him seem as if he was a little younger than how old he really is. His hair is a dark chocolate-brown color (a rather off trait for someone who hails from the Uzumaki clan), which is kept in a rather messy fashion and which comes down to the middle of his neck. Takashi likes it this way, for it is better than taking time in the morning to try and make himself look like he was some snobby rich kid. Takashi also always wears a laid-back expression, which makes some people to believe that he is irresponsible and lazy, but he does not mind this to the slightest. Takashi has a lean body, standing at 6 ft. 2 in. and weighing a total of 137 pounds. He is not muscular, it appears that he doesn't have any muscle at all in fact. This is because he does not rely on strength, but rather he relies on speed during battle. One of the most interesting things about his body is a scar that starts at the center of his stomach and ends at the far right side of his stomach. Takashi received this rather intriguing scar from a fight with his drunk and abusive father. He does not like to show people this particular mark, as it brings back many memories of his cruel past, but the people who have seen it think it looks cool, but out of character for someone like Takashi. It is also safe to say that Takashi is a very attractive individual.
As far as clothes go, Takashi likes to wear loose fitting articles of clothing. He prefers to wear a loose fitting orange-red short sleeved T-shirt under a white short-sleeved, hooded, zip-up jacket, loose, but not baggy dark blue jeans a black wristband on his right wrist, a circular gold earring on his right ear, and traditional black ninja sandals. Another outfit that Takashi prefers to wear is a loose fitting white tank top, baggy blue jean shorts, a black wristband on his right wrist, a circular gold earring on his right ear, and traditional black ninja sandals.
Forehead Protector: A blue forehead protector with the symbol of Konoha on a metal plate sewn onto it. Takashi wears his forehead protector around his forehead.
Personality: When he was a kid, Takashi could have been characterized as shy, thoughtful, serene, kind, and very polite, as noted from her always addressing people with proper honorifics. He was also very gentle, a trait that his father had viewed as a flaw, and disliked competing and fighting. He was shown to be incredibly empathetic, and, because of his upbringing, can identify people's emotions relatively easily. Back in his childhood, because of his father's drunkenness and harsh feeling towards him and his mother not ever even sparing a glance at him let alone a word, Takashi had become very timid and lacked self-confidence. However, he was a very hard worker as he continuously strove to change himself for the better, though initially this lack of self-confidence would hinder his wants and would usually leave him in tears and alone.
By the time that Takashi had graduated from the Shinobi Academy, he had himself of his soft spoken, empathetic attitude and replaced it with on that now wields bravery, confidence, and courage. Takashi can now also be described as kind, respectful, and outgoing. However, he can be very serious when the situation calls for it. When Takashi is in battle or on a mission, his personality changes and he becomes brave, confident, serious, and rather thoughtful of the situation at hand. He never underestimates his opponents and always fights at his best, because if he does not he is not living up to his own expectations about his fighting and underestimating his opponents can land him into trouble quickly. He had also developed a strong love for his village.
Takashi had also developed a passion for reading and cloud watching, which makes some people to think of him as lazy and carefree. He had developed his passion for reading during his time in the Shinobi Academy. Because of his father's abuse during his time at the academy, Takashi did not interact that much and did not have many friends if any for his first year there. He turned to books, thinking that he could build a mental bond with the people in the books that he read. It was these books that gave Takashi the confidence to make friends and stick up to his father. He had developed his liking for cloud watching after a long day of training during his days in the academy. He had been training for two whole days and collapsed from exhaustion. He stared into the clouds, imagining that he was up in the sky along with the carefree clouds. He loved that feeling, and now he watches the clouds to rejoice on this feeling.
Clan: Uzumaki Clan Nindō: "I must never give up and I must always give it my all!"
THE NINJA. Origin: The Fire Country Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato Rank: Genin Specialties: Fuuinjutsu; Ninjutsu Elemental Affinities: Katon; Suiton Combat Style: Short-to-mid range wins the fight as Takashi would put it. Takashi's strong point when it comes to fighting is hand-to-hand combat. When engaging in hand-to-hand combat, Takahsi likes to execute mediocre, swift attacks that last a few seconds before disappearing and then repeating the process when his next window opens. He does this in attempts to confuse his opponents. Sometimes to make his attacks stronger he activates the jutsu Bureijinguhitto. Because of his way of utilizing hand-to-hand combat, Takashi majors in speed rather than strength. He believes that speed will make up for him not being physically built and his Bureijinguhitto will also somewhat make up for his lack of natural strength. When backed into a corner, fuuinjutsu and ninjutsu become his best friends. He tends to use his family's Chakra Chains (Chakura Kusari) as a means for teamates to advance on the opponent. Sometimes he will use elemental ninjutsu (particularly ones of the fire element) when his fuuinjutsu doesn't work. Also because of his light weight, he is really good at sneaking into territories unnoticed but because of his clan's Kekkei Genkai, he oozes of the presence of chakra. He never underestimates his opponents and always fights at his best. It should also be noted that when going into a battle, Takashi does not think up any strategies, as he makes up for this by learning his opponent's strengths and weaknesses from fighting. Special Characteristics:
- Speed:
Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
THE BACKGROUND. History:
- The Beginning:
Takashi was born into the Uzumaki clan, who are famous for their use of Fuuinjutsu, their amazingly long lifespans, and their powerful chakra. His father was a renowned protector of Konoha who would do just about anything for the stake of the village's safety and his mother was a stripper who had settled down and married Takashi's father a few years before Takashi birth. In hopes of passing on his love and care for the village, Takashi's father and his wife conceived a healthy baby bow to take on his will. This boy was named Takashi by his father, who was in tears of joy when Takashi was born. By the age of four, Takashi's father started to teach him ninjutsu and their clans fuuinjutsu. Takashi learned fairly quickly and he was even able to hold his own against his father for quite some time (about six to eight hours as some remember it). His mother however, barely even looked or talked to him. Takashi believed this to be because his mother did not want him (as this would eventually be true), and this got to him and it gradually lowered his performance during training.
When Takashi was five years old, his mother contracted an STD because of her position as a stripper (and soon before her death a prostitute), and soon died right next to Takashi and her husband. Her last words to Takashi were "You were... A mistake." This sent Takashi over the edge and he nearly committed suicide, but he was stopped by his father. Shortly there after, Takashi's father picked up drinking to relieve the pain of his wife's untimely death. This made him abusive and careless. Takashi was now being beaten on a regular basis by his father (who would normally forget everything that happened during his time being drunk) and being isolated from the kids of the village, who were told to avoid him because of the bruises and scars that were left on his body. The things that Takashi was going through in life made him lower his self-confidence and he also became timid and rather shy, but none of these things stopped Takashi from continuing his quest to keep his father's Will of Fire going, and he soon started training at the Shinobi Academy at the age of 10.
- The Academy:
When Takashi first started learning at the Shinobi Academy, he was teased a lot and beat up for not having anyone who cared for him and loved him. This lowered his self-confidence even more. One day after training however, his father attacked him with a broken beer bottle. Knowing that if he did not do anything he would die, Takashi broke away from his father grip after getting severely cut along his lower abdomen, and used a highly-powered katon ninjutsu on him. This attack landed the both of them in the hospital, and Takashi's father soon stopped drinking and rebuilt the relationship that he once had with his son long ago.
Also during his time at the Shinobi Academy, Takashi took up a passion for reading and cloud watching, which made some people to think of him as lazy and carefree. He had developed his passion for reading during his time at the Academy when his father was abusing him. Reading was a trait found in few of the people in his class. He took to reading because he thought that he could build a mental bond with the people in the books that he read, and this soon gave him the confidence that he needed to actually make some friends. He had developed his liking for cloud watching after a long few days of training. He had been training for two whole days and collapsed from exhaustion. He stared into the clouds, imagining that he was up in the sky along with the carefree clouds. He loved that feeling, and now he watches the clouds to rejoice on this feeling. Five years of training went by fast for Takashi though, and he was pretty much the smartest in his class. He got the best grades in all of his classes and had gained self confidence and bravery. He had also became really happy. In only what seemed like a short time, Takashi was graduating at the top of his class. .
- Genin:
Unfortunately for Takashi, there were way to many ppeople who had graduated from the Academy along with him. He was forced to be put on reserve and to do missions all by himself, but he likes it this way as it gives him more time to read his books, but he still longs for the day to finally be put onto an official team.
Roleplay Sample:
-----This is from the Naruto fanfiction that I am currently writing----- - Roleplay Sample:
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! A blonde haired boy jumped out of bed, a little frightened by the loud noise that his alarm clock had made. It read 6:30. 'Time to get ready for school.' He thought to himself before getting up to get a shower. The boy's name was Naruto Uzumaki and today was going to be his first day at Konoha High School, one of the best schools in all of Japan. Naruto had moved to Konoha City from Ota, Tokyo, where he attended Tokyo High School before the death of his father Minato. After Minato's untimely death, Naurto moved to Konoha City to live with his god-father Jiriya. After Naurto got out of the shower, he threw on a white-T-shirt, baggy blue jeans, black sneakers, and a black and orange jacket. He turned to walk out of the room when he remembered something. He turned around and walked over to the nightstand next to his bed. There was a blue crystal necklace sitting on the edge of the stand. He picked it up, studied it, and started to cry a little. "You remembering your father?" Someone asked. Naruto turned around, wiping the tears away from his face. Jiriya was standing at the doorway leading from the hallway to Naurto's bedroom.
"Yeah." Naurto replied as he threw on the necklace. Jiriya walked into the room and told Naruto to sit next to him on the bed.
"Now Naruto," Jiriya looked a little sad and a little irritated at the same time. "I know what your going through, but you shouldn't cry over Minato's death. He would want it that way."
"I know. It's just really really hard, knowing that Father was killed the way he was." Naruto whipped tears away from his face again. "I will do my best to keep my emotions in check though."
"That's my boy." Jiriya said as he patted Naruto on the back. "Have a good first day of school." Jiriya exited the room, leaving Naruto weeping a little bit. Naruto gazed over at his alarm clock; 7:13. 'Crap! I got to catch the bus in five minutes!' Naruto dived to the edge of his bed and grabbed his school bag and ran out the front door.
Naruto walked onto the bus, looking over the seats towards the back. He found a seat in the very back of the bus, where he could see rats and a little bit of mold growing on the side of the seat. He was used to these types of conditions though. After Minato's death, he was treated like crap and was secluded from everyone and was always given shitty conditions. That all ended when he moved in with Jiriya though. After a few minutes of driving, the bus came to another stop. Naruto eyed the people getting onto the bus; and old man, a finely dressed couple, and a girl with long dark blue hair. Naurto gasped, she was one of the prettiest girls that he had ever seen in his life. He watched as she made her way to the seat next to him. The girl was fine with the crappy conditions. Why would someone as pretty as her sit in the back of a rutty old bus, next to him of all people? Naruto must have been staring at her for sometime because when he came back to his senses, the girl was staring back at him, open mouthed and beat red. "My apologies." He said, taking his eyes off of the girl and turned to look out the window, blushing a little bit. For the rest of the bus ride, Naurto kept taking quick glances at the girl next to him, who had her hands on her legs and looking down at the floor. She was still blushing brightly. Naurto felt like such a creeper. The bus took one final stop at the entrance of Konoha High School. Naruto and the girl who he had stared at were the only two people to get off of the bus before it took off down the road and rounded a corner. 'This place looks preppy.' Naruto thought as he studied the neatly mowed grass and the students. He looked over at the girl that he had saw on the bus. She was running over to two girls, one with short pink hair and the other with long blonde hair tied up into a ponytail. 'I really hope that I see that girl again.' He thought before walking into the huge school ahead of him.
After walking for a few minutes, he found the main office. There were two ladies sitting at a large desk towards the back of the room and three boys sitting in chairs lined up against a big window that showed activity from the entrance hall; one of the boys had red claw marks on both of his cheeks, another had black hair tied up into a weird ponytail, and the last one was morbidly obese and eating a big pack of potato chips.
"Excuse me," Naruto asked one of the ladies at the back desk. The lady looked up, eying him a little suspiciously. "My name is Naurto Uzumaki and this is going to be my first year at Konoha High School."
"Oh yes, you're the Uzumaki kid." She said irritated. She shuffled through some papers on the already cluttered desk and after a moment she pulled out a piece of paper and handed it to Naurto. "This is your class schedule. We are going to have Inuzuka, Kiba show your around. Kiba!" The four boys in the room jumped. The boy that they called Kiba walked over to Naruto and the lady, smirking. "You are going to show Mar. Uzumaki here around the school and show him his classes and so fourth. Think of this as a way to get out of that detention that you almost earned yourself for removing the nails from Mrs. Tsunade's chair."
"Yes, Ma'am." Kiba said. He looked over at Naurto and stuck out his hand, smiling welcomingly. "Hello. My name's Inuzuka, Kiba."
"My name's Uzumaki, Naruto." Naurto replied as he took Kiba's hand. He was shocked that someone other than Jiriya was being nice to him after so long.
"Come one, lets get going." Kiba said as he waved his hand, guiding Naurto to follow him. Naruto was finally happy that he found someone who was willing to be kind to him after so long.
THE ARSENAL. Jutsu:
- Academy Jutsu:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank:E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description:This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
- Clan Jutsu:
Name: Chakura Kusari [Chakra Chains]. Rank: C-S Type: Bloodline Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10m - 20m) Description: Chakura Kusari is a technique used by members of the Uzumaki Clan. The clan member using their, "special chakra", can release powerful chakra chains from their palms which they can freely control with their hand gestures. The strength of these chains is directly proportionate to the rank of the technique. A C-Ranked chain is as strong as a rusty iron chain; B-Ranked chains are as strong as regular iron chains; A-rank chains are as strong as durable steel chains; S-ranked chains are as strong as Titanium Alloy. These blue angelic cords are very versatile, they are capable of binding, throwing, whipping, grappling and performing various other maneuvers the user may see fit. The number of chains an Uzumaki can product is in proportion to their skill. A C-Ranked Uzumaki is able to create a single chains, B-Ranked two chains and A-Ranked Uzumaki is able create three chakra chains, and S-Ranked Uzumaki is able to create four chakra chains. More chains may be created using various exclusive jutsu. Chakra Cost: 4 per chain[1 per post for every chain]
Name: Kusari Inban [Chain Seals] Rank: D-S Type: Bloodline/Fuuinjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: - Description: This technique allows members of the Uzumaki clan to place seals on surfaces and targets at a distance; by sacrificing an additional chakra cost. By concentrating the seal on their chain, they can project a visual representation of the seal using chakra. Then, by controlling the chains to make contact with the surface or target, the seal can be placed on it at a distance. The end of the chain must make direct contact, and thus grappling a target will negate this ability entirely. The chakra cost for this technique varies based on the rank of the seal used. The user may only have 1 readied seal per active chain. Chakra Cost: D-rank Fuuinjutsu | Chakra Cost + 1CP C-rank Fuuinjutsu | Chakra Cost + 2CP B-rank Fuuinjutsu | Chakra Cost + 3CP A-rank Fuuinjutsu | Chakra Cost + 4CP S-rank Fuuinjutsu | Chakra Cost + 5CP
Name: Kuchiyose Gyakuten no Fūin | Summoning Reversal Seal Rank: C-S Type: Fūinjutsu Range: - Element: - Description: Kuchiyose Gyakuten no Fūin is a technique used by members of the Uzumaki Clan. This technique requires the user to have chakra chains released for it utilizes their ability to summon seals upon contact. he user commands their chakra chains to touch their target, for when that happens a seal will be instantly placed upon their body. When this seal is placed on a summon, the user will sacrifice chakra equal to the summons rank and trigger the seals effects. The seal begins to glow with blue color and emit chakra chains from its markings. These chains grow in numbers and completely bind the summon no matter how large. The summon will then disperse back into their world and the summoner is unable to summon them again until 5 posts have passed. Chakra Cost: C-rank: 10CP; B-rank: 20CP; A-rank: 30CP; S-rank: 40CP
Name: Ekusupuro-Jon no Fūin | Explosion Seal Rank: C Type: Fūinjutsu Range: - Element: - Description: Ekusupuro-Jon no Fūin is a technique used by members of the Uzumaki Clan. This technique requires the user to have chakra chains released for it utilizes their ability to summon seals upon contact. From this technique, essentially the more chakra chains one can produce the more powerful it will be. The user commands their chakra chains to touch any surface for when that happens each chain places a small red seal on the surface. This seal detonates after three seconds with power equal to that of 2 explosive tags. This can be used to encase a target in a explosion or even detonate the person in hole, killing them. This technique is canceled once each chakra chains creates a explosion seal. This seal cannot be performed on chakra producing entities; such as humans, summons or pets. Chakra Cost: 6CP per explosive seal
- Fuuinjutsu:
Name: Shikoku Fuuin - Finger Engraving Seal Rank: C Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user concentrates chakra into their finger and using the heat from that can apply writing on whatever they want. This allows them to write on the skin of animals, iron plates, or a wide range of things. Must be delicate with chakra control when using this technique. If used on flesh; will scar. Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
- Katon Jutsu:
Name: Endan - Fireball Rank: D-A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m – 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After doing the necessary hand seals, the ninja draws chakra to their lungs before swiftly exhaling it, allowing them to blow a jet of fire from their mouth. Depending on the rank at which it is performed, Endan ranges in size and heat. Starting at a moderate level of heat and a reach of up to 3m, at D rank, and increasing in temperature to an intense heat and up to a 10m reach, when performed at A rank. Chakra Cost: D: 4 (1 per post), C: 5 (2 per post), B: 12 (3 per post), A: 23 (5 per post)
Name: Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit Rank: D Type: Nin / Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: Katon Description: Bureijinguhitto is a ninjutsu and taijutsu combination utilizing the fire element. By charging a small amount of chakra to the dominant fist, the user is able to ignite their hand so that it's enveloped in a glove of fire. By delivering a punch to their opponent, the user is able to add on a burning effect equivalent to that of a scalding tea kettle to the location that has been hit. The fire will only be visible on the top of the hand, covering the top of the fingers, knuckles and hand. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Chakra Cost: 8
- Suiton Jutsu:
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: In order to use this technique, the user must first be on top of water (lake, sea, etc). Then, after preforming the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below. This can possibly drown the opponent. Chakra Cost: 6 (1 per post)
Name: Haran Banshou - Stormy Upheaval Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: This technique allows the user to summon a large volume of water; roughly the size of a waterfall, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in just an instant. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: A jutsu that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade. This sword can also go through most fire jutsu of equal rank and below. Chakra Cost: 8 (2 per post)
Name: Water Release: Water Drowning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Suiton (Water) Description: The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles. Chakra Cost: 5 (1 per post)
Kits/Weapons/Tools:
- Kits:
Name: Genin Kit Rank: C Quantity: 1 Contents: 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].
- Tools:
Name: Small Scroll Rank: D Type: Supplementary Quantity: 10 Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimeters in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimeters. Storage:
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| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sat 27 Jul 2013, 3:40 am | |
| Hello~ Sorry for the wait
This is a generally good application; well done. I would however like you to expand your personality (one more paragraph) as well as combat style (a little) and history (make each 'chapter' a bit longer) . Combat Style is also currently written in the Special Characteristics section D:
Also some advice: the Uzumaki Clan uses Fuuinjutsu, but you don't have Fuuinjutsu as a speciality which means you won't be able to use any Clan Jutsu :/ You might want to consider changing to a different one. |
| | | mtnpepsi1
Age : 26 Posts : 57
| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sat 27 Jul 2013, 5:45 am | |
| Ok, will change those few things as soon as possible, thanks. |
| | | mtnpepsi1
Age : 26 Posts : 57
| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sun 28 Jul 2013, 9:37 am | |
| Edited and ready for approval. |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sun 28 Jul 2013, 12:40 pm | |
| Hey there, I just have two final things to point out. You have two more Jutsu slots open, so you should consider adding two more to your arsenal since adding jutsu and equipment won't be free after your character is approved. And your SC Improved Speed is nice, but you won't be able to train it to B Rank when you become a Chuunin because the B rank version requires Taijutsu or Weaponry. That means you want a SC that you will be able to upgrade, but you can keep this one if you wish to and replace it by training for a new one after you get approved. I will give you my firsst approval if you don't want to make any changes. Final note, you need two approvals. |
| | | mtnpepsi1
Age : 26 Posts : 57
| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sun 28 Jul 2013, 4:56 pm | |
| - Panda wrote:
- Hey there, I just have two final things to point out. You have two more Jutsu slots open, so you should consider adding two more to your arsenal since adding jutsu and equipment won't be free after your character is approved. And your SC Improved Speed is nice, but you won't be able to train it to B Rank when you become a Chuunin because the B rank version requires Taijutsu or Weaponry. That means you want a SC that you will be able to upgrade, but you can keep this one if you wish to and replace it by training for a new one after you get approved. I will give you my firsst approval if you don't want to make any changes. Final note, you need two approvals.
I added the last two jutsu but I think I will leave my SC thank you for telling me though Panda. Ready for approval again. |
| | | Sörä♀
Age : 32 Posts : 750
| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sun 28 Jul 2013, 6:36 pm | |
| Approved 1/2 |
| | | Keos
Age : 29 Posts : 1585
| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sun 28 Jul 2013, 7:15 pm | |
| Character Approved! [2/2]
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| | | Flare
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| Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Takashi [Konoha Genin] Sun 10 Nov 2013, 1:21 am | |
| Archived due to inactivity. |
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