Sousakara Clan [Finished]

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Clan Name: The Sousakara Clan
Clan Location: Konoha
Clan Traits: The Sumiton Ninpo, Doujutsu, Dermis, Irohenkō and the Kamiiro.
Kekkei Genkai: The Shikisōsa

The Shikisōsa Kekkai Genkai is a unique clan ability which takes form in many different aspects within the body.

Sumiton Ninpo - The Sousakara Clan has the Ninpo ability to manipulate ink and control it at the user's discretion. Every ability of the Sumiton Ninpo element is utilised in the Sousakara Clan. Of course, the Sumiton element requires an active and available source of ink.

Doujutsu - The ocular area of any Sousakara clan member possessing the Shikisōsa in a non-activated statem is colour-blind vision. This vision is unanimous in every Sousakara member, however, when the doujutsu trait is active, the user can see colour in an enhanced iridescent visual-status; which helps to distinguish similar colours. The advantage to this vision is, as stated previously is the ability to view colors of any sort in a brighter, more stand-out way. The user's retina becomes a constantly spinning, iridescent rainbow of colors. This does nothing out of the ordinary, but look awesome. This doujutsu has no inhibitions to visionary distance or detail, and has no advancements to it's distance. This doujutsu does enable the user to distinguish different shades, much like the human eye and henceforth allow a Sousakara member to view 'hidden messages' written in different ink, or view erased messages used with ink or graphite[lead] pencils.

Dermis - The Shikisōsa has a unique dermis transformation which allows the user to changes and alter their pigment at will. They can alter the colourations of any substance placed on their skin to the user's desire, effectively changing the colour of ink tattoos to the exact pigment of the user's skin; making them seem invisible to the naked eye. This helps clan members to have more than 50 different tattoos, with none of them appearing to the visible skin. The Shikisōsa enables the user to use their body to act like a canvas, granting them the ability to write and create seals, draw and create animals, creatures and objects for use.

Irohenkō - The Shikisōsa allows the user to utilise the Irohenkō, which is the ability to transform and change the colour of objects that are in contact with the user. This ability is performed with the expulsion of Shikisōsa chakra from the user's chakra points, which when in contact with the desired object, allows the user to change the color. The particles that consist in the make-up of coloring are mutated to appear differently. Hence, why a member of the Sousakara can alter a surface's color to change.

Kamiiro - A distinctive trait of the Sousakara clan, the Kamiiro is the change in colour of the user's hair. The colour of the hair emitted corresponds with the mood that the user is in. The colour-range to mood goes as follows:

Quote :: Red - Angry, Alarmed
Blue - Calm, Relaxed
Brown - Neutral, Sleeping
Black - Horny, Tense
Yellow/Blonde - Distracted, Imagining
Green - Sensitive, Tender
Purple - Tranquil, Happy, Creative
White - Stunned, Shocked, Confused, Frustrated

History:

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The Sousakara clan originated in Konohagakure no Kuni; the country outside of Hidden Leaf. The Sousakara's clan history dates the clan to be around for 146 years old, with roughly 3 generations of people bearing the Shikisōsa kekkei genkai bloodline trait. Each member of the Sousakara clan whom bear the kekkei genkai all have the distinctive traits of the color-changing hair, the pigment-changeable skin, the colorblindness and furthermore, the adaption to color and ink.

The scriptures suggest that the beginnings of the Sousakara originated with a young a fruitful man who had an amazing talent for art and for finding contrasting colors. The man's name was Toushuu, whom was a Chuunin of the nearby village. Medical records state that this young shinobi had an acute and extremely rare blood disease that a parallel universe refers to as Leukemia. This blood disease, or cancer made him sicker by the passing day and art was his only ambition. Toushuu was guessed to live to be around 10 years old, however, through the willpower and mental guidance of art he had surpassed that age and, being 16 at the time that the scripture state; he was painting in the loft of his family home when he suffered a seizure and collapsed, knocking over his painting easel, canvas, and pots of opened ink. As he lay there convulsing horribly on the floor of his loft, blood seeping out of his nose, ears and mouth; his hopes did not look good. By chance the banner easel fell slightly on his face, whilst 2 full pots of normal ink trickled into his mouth, mixing with his disease-ridden blood.

Doctors cannot explain how the shinobi survived, but many believe that the ink mixed with the blood and whilst getting pumped around the heart and bloodstreams, poisoned the cancer out of his blood. The cancer, with nowhere to go, mutated itself with the ink and hence, altered his blood and bloodline. The ink was so potent that it altered his Deoxyribonucleic Acid [DNA], his genes and finally his cells; causing him to possess strange and unfathomable powers which were fused with chakra. This created the Kekkei Genkai known as the Shikisōsa, named after the painting that he was in the process of creating at that time. The young chuunin lived a prosperous and long life, having children and finally grand children by the time he died. The village of Konohagakure regarded his powers and his offsprings and with the process of all things unnaturally cool, registered it as a clan. This is the story of the Shikisōsa and the emergence of the Sousakara clan.
Clan Details: Open, with limitations.

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Secret Clan Jutsu:

Quote :: Name: Colour Vision
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A simple jutsu where the user activates the Shikisōsa's Doujutsu and alters their retinal vision to effectively see through single colors. These colors can only be solid colors, not gradients and can flick through different colors, hence different objects effectively.

Name: Colour Removal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A simple jutsu where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and by being in contact with a solid color, will allow the user to effectively absorb the color onto the body part that is in contact with, and maintain that color for however long the user desires. Must have bare skin

Name: Colour Dispersement
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A simple jutsu where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system into a color and effectively allows the user to evaporate the particles of the color into thin air, thus allowing color to travel through the air and eventually settle in one place. Can effectively combo with a better technique.

Name: Colour Flicker
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst becoming in contact with a solid color, allows the user to effectively 'travel' through that solid color and emerge at that identical color, at will. For example, if there is a purple circle on the floor, the user can 'step into' the color and appear at another purple circle several meters away. Has a range of 1km of travel.

Name: Chameleon Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and using the Kekkei Genkai trait of the Dermis, effectively allows the user to 'blend' into their background by combining the coloration of the pigment changing, along with the Irohenkō. This technique requires the user to stay perfectly still, for maximum effect.

Name: Colour Ink Explosion
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst previously becoming in contact with a solid color, allows the user to effectively cause the chakra particles to vibrate at an extreme rate, causing them to collide within each other vigorously and hence, causing the ink to implode within itself, and explode on the outside. Can only be within a 100meter radius or less. Has the same capacity and power of an explosive tag.

Name: Colour Clone
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst becoming in contact with a solid color, allows the user to create a clone based off that coloring, which becomes liquefied ink and which when taking damage or hits, allows itself to repair itself. It can only be destroyed with explosions or a powerful, consuming jutsu.

Name: Elemental Colour Retribution
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst in contact with an ink-based color in the user's hand, or ink-covered limb or object, effectively allows the user to unlock potential elemental-based attacks. The color-range is based on the elements. So, Red-Fire, Blue-Water, White-Wind, Yellow-Lightning, Brown-Earth. Only the 5 basic elements
may be retributed, and can only remain on the user's limb. For example, the user's hand will be engrossed in fire, spiraling wind or water; which effectively allows the user to make martial-based attacks. Can be changed at the user's free will, for a duration of 3 posts upon activation.

Name: Colour Ink Replacement
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: This is a technique that can only be used in conjunction to a Sousakara member's chakra reserves. This technique is where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst being in contact with some form of color, will cause the color to be saturated and morphed into ink, which will then seep into every possible access in the user's body, being mouth, ears, pores, nostrils; u name it. This ink will then flow in the user's digestive, respiratory, circulatory, muscular, skeletal, dermis, ocular and brain-region which will take suit as a solid liquid form, capable of taking any amount of damage and pain, allowing the user to completely form back into ink; hence making the user's body able to take any form, and converge back on himself. Regardless of how much chakra is remaining in the user's system, using this jutsu will drain any last ounce of chakra; provided that the user has enough chakra for a S ranked technique. However, this jutsu is extremely useful as the user can take any punch, slice or mild explosion and not feel it, whilst being able to converge and reform their body as a whole.

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Quote :: Sumiton Ninpo - The Sousakara Clan has the Ninpo ability to manipulate ink and control it at the user's discretion. Every ability of the Sumiton Ninpo element is utilised in the Sousakara Clan.

I am guessing with this ability you need a readily avaliable source of ink? i.e you can't create from your body correct?

Quote :: when the doujutsu trait is active, the user can see colour in an enhanced iridescent visual-status; which helps to distinguish similar colours. This doujutsu, when combined with a Sousakara's basic jutsu enables a clan member to see-through the selected colour for a 1km range.

You have stated the abilities which the doujutsu offers which is good, but I would like to know what advantages or disadvantages this gives you in general. When describing a KKg especially a doujutsu you should be a little more thorough.

- Regarding Irohenkō. How is this colouration reversed? Does it have to be done manually or does it reverse over time etc etc.

- You will need another decent paragraph for history please, a 2 paragraph minimum is required.

Quote :: Name: Colour Dispersement
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A simple jutsu where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system into a color and effectively allows the user to evaporate the particles of the color into thin air, thus allowing color to travel through the air and eventually settle in one place. Can effectively combo with a better technique.

When referring to particle of colour, do you mean particles of coloured charka? I don't see how you can get particles of 'colour' just on it's own.

- I like your Colour Flicker tech ^^.

Quote :: Name: Colour Manipulation
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst becoming in contact with a solid color, allows the user to effectively manipulate and control color at the user's free will. This includes controlling it in mid air as a liquid ink color. The greater the amount of color manipulated, the more the amount of ink is being controlled. The color can only be controlled at a distance radius of 100meters or less.

In regards to a base manipulation technique when connected with a clan i.e colour manipulation. It is best to make the rank of the tech C-S and then describe the varies upgraded abilities as the rank goes higher, instead of having it as a B-rank. Please change according, as it gives a better indication to the level of manipulation per rank.

Quote :: Name: Colour Ink Explosion
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst previously becoming in contact with a solid color, allows the user to effectively cause the chakra particles to vibrate at an extreme rate, causing them to collide within each other vigorously and hence, causing the ink to implode within itself, and explode on the outside. Can only be within a 100meter radius or less.

How powerful is the explosion? relate it to a standard explosive tag for easier understanding.

Quote :: Name: Elemental Colour Retribution
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst in contact with an ink-based color in the user's hand, or ink-covered limb or object, effectively allows the user to unlock potential elemental-based attacks. The color-range is based on the elements. So, Red-Fire, Blue-Water, White-Wind, Yellow-Lightning, Brown-Earth. Only the 5 basic elements may be retributed, and can only remain on the user's hand-palm. For example, the user's hand will be engrossed in fire, spiraling wind or water; which effectively allows the user to make martial-based attacks.

This is interesting....Connecting a basic element just to it's colour isn't very realistic. But in combination with your chakra I will let it pass, though there will have to be further limitations. Such things as a limit on how many times it can be used, how many different elements can be used at one time, and the duration of the elements being used.

Quote :: Name: Colour Ink Replacement
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: An extremely dangerous technique that can only be used once, and on only one time, as the consequences are fatal. This is a technique that when used once, and only once causes the users body to slowly eat itself from the inside out. This technique is where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst being in contact with some form of color, will cause the color to be saturated and morphed into ink, which will then seep into every possible access in the user's body, being mouth, ears, pores, nostrils; u name it. This ink will then flow in the user's digestive, respiratory, circulatory, muscular, skeletal, dermis, ocular and brain-region which will take suit as a solid liquid form, capable of taking any amount of damage and pain, allowing the user to completely form back into ink; hence making the user's body able to take any form, and converge back on himself. Once the user activates this rare jutsu, they have exactly 48hours to live; before the ink eats their insides out and they eventually die. A very rare and one-use jutsu, with no known possible cure. However, this jutsu is extremely useful as the user can take any punch, slice or mild explosion and not feel it, whilst being able to converge and reform their body as a whole.

I like this technique, but for what it does I don't think you need to die for it. There should be some major drawback but a 48 hour life limit is a little far in my opinion. But if you want to keep that, its fine. ^^

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Fixed it all. ;D Enjoy reading my history. xD

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*Tear flows from eye* I am proud of your effort on the History, well done.

Everything seems to be in order except for a small thing, once fixed you shall be approved.

Quote :: Name: Colour Manipulation
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and whilst becoming in contact with a solid color, allows the user to effectively manipulate and control color at the user's free will. This includes controlling it in mid air as a liquid ink color. The greater the amount of color manipulated, the more the amount of ink is being controlled. The color can only be controlled at a distance radius of 100meters or less.

Even though you have edited the rank to C-S you still haven't described the different levels of manipulation of colour per rank. Surely at S-rank ones power to manipulate colour would be more advanced than at C-rank? Also a range of 100m for a C-rank is unlikely. Could you please edit the range of the technique with the rank levels as well (I am thinking the 100m would be equivilant to the S-rank). I would like this extended and written down please dan. After that you will be fine for approval.

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Removed that Jutsu and Added this one:

Name: Chameleon Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Kekkei Genkai
Description: A technique where the user activates the Shikisōsa's chakra system and using the Kekkei Genkai trait of the Dermis, effectively allows the user to 'blend' into their background by combining the coloration of the pigment changing, along with the Irohenkō. This technique requires the user to stay perfectly still, for maximum effect.

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Ok, removed and clan approved.

Well Done.