Deathwind Demonbird - Saya's Summon

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Deathwind Demonbird - Saya's Summon 20401-feathered_velociraptor

Name: Shikaze Onitori - Deathwind Demonbird

Rank: C

Appearance: This horrific beast stands only three feet high at its hips, and typically crouches even lower to the ground. While it may seem short the velociraptor can rise up to a height of almost 5 feet, and has a long and slender body. It is easily seven feet long, including its whip like and feathered tail. Its mottled black hide is covered in thick, tough scales, though the creature gets its bird like name from it's coating of thick downy feathers. The ruddy brown feathers have black highlights, with yellow markings near it’s reptilian mouth. Its teeth are almot an inch long and curved back, serrated to tear through flesh with terrifying ease. Its forward reaching arms are graceful and fast, ending in three fingered hands with two inch claws. Its legs are also bereft of feathers, exposing the dark and solid scaled legs, which end in viciously taloned feet. The inner most toe of each claw has a retractable killer claw that is curved and razor sharp, and a full four inches long on this creature. Its obvious predatory appearance can invoke fear in some, because this animal can, and clearly will, eat you as soon as it has the chance.

Contract Type: Blood Donation

Species: Dinosaur [Velociraptor]

Elemental Affinity: Wind

Special Abilities/Characteristics: Because of the family this animal comes from, it has some obvious advantages. Its light predatory design was mastered over time to be an apex predator, and capable of bringing down foes many time its own size. It has a pack mentality, making it a great partner when working in a team of ninja. This creature is fast, deadly, and not above eating the bodies of those it kills in combat.

Keen Senses: This creature has a large nasal cavity that is packed full of olfactory receptors. This creature can track by sense of smell as well as a well trained ninja hound, and discern specific scents from others.

Grasping Hands: These creatures possess nimble hands that can pick up and hold items. Onitori can pick up items weighing up to 25 pounds, and carry them with them. Both hands are needed to pick something up, and as such raptors can not use their hands in fights while they’re holding things, though he may still employ their feet and mouth. His small hands are capable of complex manipulation and Kouga is able to work simple locks, open doors, and even work a small keypad if needed. His agile fingers are also able to form handseals.

Powerful Build: Though small and light, these creatures have very well designed bodies. These creatures are able to run as fast as a Chuunin ninja, and leap just slightly higher. In spite of their small size, these little monsters can use their claws and fangs to bring down and kill a normal human with unthinkable ease. They are psychically strong and very fast, but a little fragile. The light bones of the raptor are prone to breaking easily when crushed.

Background:

Shikaze is the youngest of the grassland birds, and has yet to even develop his full coat of feathers. In spite of this, he is still an able warrior. Saya was entrusted with protecting the creature during a time when the nest of the dinosaurs had been threatened. After showing valor, skill, and great strength in combat against the large sabretoothed tigers, Saya earned enough respect from the elder Utahraptors to be able to look over and call upon many members of the Shikaze tribe. After signing the summoning contract with the Shikaze tribe, Saya took Shikaze as one of her personal allies.

Shikaze is the youngest son of the tribal leader, and Kusamaru’s youngest brother. He is expected to inherit leadership someday after Kusamaru does, and has already begun his training to be a great and powerful dinosaur. With Saya he is sure to see much action, and get plenty of chances to kill and hone his deadly jutsu skills.

Summons Jutsu:
Name: Spit Acid
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: None
Description: This ability allows the velociraptor to spit out a glob of sticky acid. The acid will corrode any organic substance, however is inert to stones, metals, and glass. This acid will inflict mild chemical burns and irritation to skin it covers. If the acid gets in a victim's eyes, it will cause painful burning and blurring of vision. In either result the acid will continue to burn for 2 posts, at which time it's effects will fade.

Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After forming some simple hand seals and taking a large breath, Shikaze will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. This technique creates winds that will pin down people in it's area of effect. If not able to get a good grip on something bolted to the ground, those in the area will likely be blown backwards by the powerful gust. Airborn creatures can be sent well off course by the winds, and if they are close to the ground or trees or buildings, they might just crash. This attack does damage only in the form of things hitting the victim from the wind, or as a result of being knocked along the ground. Otherwise it just prevents people from approaching Shiaze from the direction it's being used in.

Name: Renkuudan - Drilling Air Projectile
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: Wind
Description: By inhaling a huge amount of wind, Shikaze is able to compress and then fire a dense bullet of air. The pressure bullet spins through the air at great speed until it impacts something, at which time it explode with a shockwave of pressure. This technique deals damage over a small area and can pulverize sections of wall, ground, and forest. The higher rank this jutsu is used at, the more damaging and more range if covers. At C rank the burst is only 3 meters wide, though it doubles in size each rank. 6m at B rank, 12m at A rank, and finally 24m at S rank.

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Sorry wind, but According to summoning rules, Genin can only have 2 summons total, and only 1 of them can be C-rank.

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Good for genin. =P Go look at my chuunin application, then come back here and approve my 2nd c rank dino. And yes, Kusamaru is going byebye. I only intend on having 2 summons.

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Bump..

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Wind wrote:: Name: Spit Acid
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: None
Description: This ability allows the velociraptor to spit out a glob of sticky acid. The acid will corrode any organic substance, however is inert to stones, metals, and glass. This acid will inflict moderate chemical burns and irritation to skin it covers, and blindness if it gets in the eyes. This doesn't cost the dinosaur any chakra, but it only has the fluid reserves to spit six such wads of acid per day.

Blindness seems slightly OP for a D-Rank justu. Edit it to irritation of the eyes which can be distracting. Also state how long this effect lasts.

Other than that this is looking good. :]

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Completed!

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Approved. ;D