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Idaku
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| Subject: Kenpan Clan Fri 09 Apr 2010, 7:12 am | |
| Clan Name: [Kenpan] Clan Location: [Kumo Clan Traits: All Kenpan clan members have silver or white hair and a natural affinity for fire or earth and all specialize in some form of weaponry.] Kekkei Genkai: [Kenpan clan members have the ability manipulate metal. This manifests itself in one of three ways within clan members. They can either create it from outside their body using the earth and fire chakra they have as a conduit in creating it, they can create it on or out of their body transforming their skin or hair into metal or they have a dojutsu that allows them to see and act upon any weakness in a weapon. It is never a combination of them, each clan member has only one of these abilities although every clan member has the ability to manipulate or change the form of any existing metal around them.
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: metal manipulation Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E-C (depending on how complex the manipulation) Element: earth/ fire Description: the jutsu is pretty self explanatory. Using the clans special ability a Kenpan is able to bend, fold, move and otherwise manipulate existing metal. A piece of metal can only be manipulated within the bounds of its own volume meaning that if you have a cube of metal that is four inches on every side you only have twelve inches of metal to play with. A beginning user (Kenpan children are taught this technique the year before they become genin, sort of a rite of passage) can only use this on metal that he is within a foot of, or is physically touching, and the farther it is from you the more chakra it takes to manipulate the item. As you master the technique you can use it at greater and greater distances though the same restrictions still apply with the best results being direct contact with the item you are manipulating. E-basic manipulation: moving/levitating small items and bending metal for short periods of times(2 posts) (kunai shuriken) D-slightly more advanced: moving levitating medium items and slight reshaping of metal (fifteen cubic feet of metal) C-final level: moving levitating large items and full reshaping and bending of metal (twenty cubic feet of metal)
Name: steel creation Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E-S depending on how large and how stable the item being created is Element: Earth/Fire Description: the user creates steel in different forms and shapes from the earth around them. It is limited to a five foot range for a beginning user. This means that within a five foot sphere of influence around the user’s body any stone around them has the potential to become a metal weapon of some sort. This is limited by the same limits as the manipulation technique, since after the initial creation that is what this technique segways into. As a user advances in power and level they can create larger more powerful and complex items. There is also a second set of limitations to this ability a beginner cannot create stable metal, it will have multiple impurities and can break easily. The strength of these metals increase as a Kenpan gets stronger until they have mastered the technique being able to create completely perfect metal. Though again the size of the item can weaken the item. The only other ability they are able to use is to manipulate metal. E- five foot sphere of influence, hardness tin (think soup can not soda can), complexity kunai, shuriken, basic sword stability one post D-seven foot sphere of influence, hardness nickle, complexity corss bow or war fan stability four posts C-seven foot sphere of influence, hardness cobalt, complexity smoke bomb gun senbon shooter stability six posts B-ten foot sphere of influence, hardness iron, complexity basic puppet with a few mechanisms stability fifteen posts A-fifteen foot sphere of influence. hardness steel complexity small forest of metal trees stability permanent S-twenty foot sphere of influence, hardness diamond, complexity house with plumbing stability permanent (note: sphere of influence refers to the area that can be transfigured from earth to metal and how large the item being created can be in size.)
Name: body armor Type: Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu Rank: E-S depending on the amount of body transformed Element: Earth/ Fire Description: the user can transform his skin into metal at the beginning level and go right down to the bone at the master level. A beginner can only transform parts of the body at a time and can only maintain it for fifteen posts at a time. When they have mastered the technique a Kenpan can also transfigure parts of their body to become weapons of different forms. All of this translates into a style of Taijutsu called the steel fist, which is a blanket statement as every member of the clan develops their own way of fighting based off of this ability. The only other ability a user has is to manipulate metal. (note:stability is the same for the creation techniques) E-one part of body at a time, five post stability D-two body parts five post stabillity or one body part and a weapon transmutation with seven post stability C-three body parts seven post stability or two body parts and weapon transmutation with ten post stability B-full body with ten post stability or three part weapon transmutation with fifteen post transmutation A-full body with fifteen post stability or two part bone deep transformation infinite stability S-full body with infinite stability or gun arm weapon transformation two shots.
Name: gun arm technique Type: Weaponry Rank: S Element: metal Description: Using bone deep transformation a Kenpan master class Guardian will create a gun out of one of their arms with the ability to fire off two shots. It has to be one right after the other or else you only get one shot. The jutsu is a last resort technique that will render the arm useless and is only taught to the most respected and experienced Guardians by the branch head.
Name: steel fist Emphasis:this style of fighting is based off of the Kuk sool wan form of fighting and uses swords, hammers and ninja claws. Requirements: they must be a member of the Kenpan clan and be part of the guardian branch of the clan, only they know the style no other branch in the clan know the secrets of the steel fist Description: this style of fighting emphasizes punches and fast moving strikes. The weaponry is a combination of the ability to transform parts of their body into weapons and are taught only to members who have achieved such a level, these to focus on fast strikes and power hits, at the advanced levels the style disregards personal safty as the armor of the user gets stronger. History: this style was created by the first master of the body armor technique, it has been used by the guardian branch ever since. At first the rest of the guardian branch was scared to use it since the more advanced levels didn’t really hold much stock in protecting yourself but it eventually caught on and has been taught to the children of the Kenpan guardians ever since
History: clan symbol The Kenpan originated a few years after the founding of Kumo. The clan had always been loyal to the village and its founding members as the weapon smiths and specialists. After a few generations of using chakra to help in the forging the clan members began to naturally exhibit the ability to mold and control metal. It was one not until later years that the clan began to demonstrate the ability to create steel out of the earth surrounding them or to produce metal form their own body this new ability, finally giving them the status of a kekkei genkai clan. The Kenpan used their ability to become world renowned weapon masters and smiths. They still provide most of the weapons for Kumo ninja and for the civilian community on the land of lightning and their normal armies. They each specialize in one or more forms of weaponry techniques or some form of metal manipulation. The downside to this clan is the fact that you are only born to have one aspect of the clans special ability, excluding the ability to manipulate already existing metal. The clan has split into three branches, though each have equal power in clan plastics. The three branches are the smiths, the ninja and the guardians. The members with the ability to just do manipulation became the smiths. The ones with the ability to create metal became the ninja and the ones with the ability to make their skin metal become guardians. just because the ones known as guardians in the clans aren’t specifically called ninja doesn’t mean they aren’t. the reason they are called the guardian branch is because their ability is mainly defensive until they master it, usually at jounin level. All members of the clan participate in smith work but the branch that is most skilled in creating weapons are those in the smith branch. Clan Details: open just tell me which of the abilities you want.
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| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Fri 09 Apr 2010, 8:03 am | |
| The Doujutsu and the clan itself are two different bloodlines. One controls metal, technically an advanced element, and the other is an eye bloodline.
Now, the Metaru clan in Suna manipulates metal also, although this doe it differently. Im going to need an admins opinion on whether or not this will be allowed based upon that before I can review this any more. |
| | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Fri 09 Apr 2010, 8:09 am | |
| oh alright ill take out the doujutsu, and i hadn't even looked at the suna clan i have been using this same blood line for a long time, though the doujutsu is a new addition |
| | | Travis
Posts : 414
| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Fri 09 Apr 2010, 10:40 pm | |
| metal manipulation: Seems more E-S, not E-D, otherwise your very limited.
Body Armor- Time into Posts please. |
| | | Idaku
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Tue 13 Apr 2010, 5:05 pm | |
| bump |
| | | Travis
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Wed 14 Apr 2010, 6:22 am | |
| For each E-S, describe what you can manipulate, how strong the armor is, and what you can create. Give an example for each. |
| | | Idaku
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Wed 14 Apr 2010, 8:31 am | |
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| | | Travis
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Wed 14 Apr 2010, 3:13 pm | |
| What's weapon transmutation. Also does it drain continous chakra when in Body armor? |
| | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Wed 14 Apr 2010, 5:06 pm | |
| - Quote :
- When they have mastered the technique a Kenpan can also transfigure parts of their body to become weapons of different forms
and yes but very minimal hence the post limit that each level has unless it is an S class transformation |
| | | Uchiha Osore
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Thu 15 Apr 2010, 5:31 am | |
| You mention a Taijutsu style, you should provide such a style then using the appropriate template. |
| | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Thu 15 Apr 2010, 7:53 am | |
| - Quote :
- Name: steel fist
Emphasis:this style of fighting is based off of the Kuk sool wan form of fighting and uses swords, hammers and ninja claws. [What type your style uses, out of the various Weaponry types and Taijutsu. Please also list what weapons are used, you may not have more than three per style.] Requirements: they must be a member of the Kenpan clan and be part of the guardian branch of the clan, only they know the style no other branch in the clan know the secrets of the steel fist Description: this style of fighting emphasizes punches and fast moving strikes. The weaponry is a combination of the ability to transform parts of their body into weapons and are taught only to members who have achieved such a level, these to focus on fast strikes and power hits, at the advanced levels the style disregards personal safty as the armor of the user gets stronger. [What does your style emphasis, how does it move, how does it hit, etc. Accurately describe your style's physical, spiritual, or emotional properties that make it unique.]
History: this style was created by the first master of the body armor technique, it has been used by the guardian branch ever since. At first the rest of the guardian branch was scared to use it since the more advanced levels didn’t really hold much stock in protecting yourself but it eventually caught on and has been taught to the children of the Kenpan guardians ever since also added the gun arm jutsu, i am gusing something that strong would want ot be explained |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Sun 18 Apr 2010, 3:31 am | |
| Grammar first off. Capitalization, etc.
Secondly, I HIGHLY doubt that the gun arm will be allowed. Period. We dont do guns. Kunai Launcher, sure, Shuriken Launcher, Senbon launcher, etc. Guns? Highly highly unlikely.
Metal Manipulation, again, would be E-S, not E-C. Being able to create items the magnitude you are talking about for that low of chakra is a no. If anything, your C-Rank would be A-Rank, D would be B, and E would be C.
History needs to be seperate into paragraphs, and given the nature of the KKG, atleast 3.
Steel fist needs to have atleast a full paragraph of description, for it to be accepted as a Taijutsu style in my eyes. Currently it is way too vague.
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- A beginner can only transform parts of the body at a time and can only maintain it for fifteen posts at a time
First off, that needs to start at D. Secondly, no. Being able to transform an arm and D-Ranked amount of chakra for 15 posts would cause the user to collapses just from using this jutsu. MAYBE 3 posts at a beginner level. It makes no sense why someone who just learned it could keep it active for that long.
Next, weapon transmutation would be a seperate technique. This one is body armor, if you wish to make it a weapon, thats something completely different. |
| | | Idaku
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Sun 18 Apr 2010, 3:40 am | |
| alright im going to redo this clan and have it back up by the end of the weekend, since it seems i have screwed up majorly on it. i wasn't really in that creative a mood when i wrote it and i hadn't used the clan in a long time, but as i have been thinking about it i realized i screwed some things up with its format. |
| | | Vegapunk
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Sat 24 Apr 2010, 11:04 am | |
| There is a clan that has a similar ability to control metal (what Hugh has made) which is very good, you might like to join that. I would recommend it, a very well thought out clan. |
| | | Idaku
Posts : 36
| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Sat 24 Apr 2010, 8:02 pm | |
| already joined the alchamy clan this one can be deleted or archived or what ever you want to do with it |
| | | Travis
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| Subject: Re: Kenpan Clan Sat 24 Apr 2010, 8:09 pm | |
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