Aburame,Klaus(Done)

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Basic Information:

Name:Aburame,Klaus

Secondary Title:The Hive of Konoha.
Age:12

Gender:Male

Physical Appearance:

Aburame OCs sketch by ~Shii7 on deviant ART

Aburame,Klaus wears the normal grey coat most of the memers have on.The only difference is that he has it unzipped and wears a black shirt under it.He also has four pouches two in the front and two on his sides to hold Kunai,Shuriken,Etc.His coat has two pockets and he wears black pants with blue ninja shoes/sandals.His Headband has the leaf symbol on it of course(DUH) and is black just because black headbands are epic.His spikey hair is a blonde color.Also his sunglasses have a diffrent frame then all of the other sunglasses aburame use.His coat has short sleeves so he has a long sleeved shirt.His shirt also goes up a little on the neck aswell as his coat.

Personality:As one of the Aburame members Klaus has grown closer to all kinds of bugs.With being closer to bugs he can get any type of bug on his good side.For instance if there were a horde of bees or poisonous bugs after him except those being controled from others he can easily get them to stop and go back to there business.Also he doesn't like bugs getting hurt or killed.If someone were to almost step on a bug he would stop that person from steping on the bug.

Klaus likes to eat ramen,salad's,fruits and vegetables.Most of Klaus's main foods consist of vegetables or fruits.Klaus is basically a vegetarian because he eats mostly Vegetable and Fruits and salads.If he were to eat Ramen he would pick vegetable Ramen instead of any other type of ramen.Also if he didn't finish all of his food he wouldn't like for it to go to waste so he would allow some of his insects or call any random insects to him and let them eat the meal.

Klaus is a shy person and likes to keep certain things a secret from others.He would only say certain things to people close to him.Such as family,or friends also if someone were to ask him to many personal questions he would just start to ignore the person and go on with what he was or will be doing.Klaus likes the fact that he has the bugs inside of him because it makes him feel special and diffrent from everyone else.

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Aburame

Clan Location: Konoha

Clan Traits: The Aburame clan is a clan characterized by their use of insects as weapons. The insects live in symbiosis within the body of the shinobi. At birth, members of this clan are offered to a special breed of insects called destruction bugs as a nest, residing just under their host's skin. The insects can leave and enter through various pores, apparently by eating their way through the skin. They feed on chakra as a food source, making them quite deadly. The relationship between the shinobi and the insects is mutually beneficial. The host grants the bugs shelter and allows them to feed off their chakra, their body becoming a living hive, and in return the bugs do the user's bidding, allowing the shinobi to perform ninjutsu-like techniques without the use of hand seals or chakra conversion.

A female bug can be left on a target, which then can be tracked by smell by the male bug, or scout bugs can be sent out and return to tell the host information about the area. For this reason, Aburame clan members are experts in espionage; they can communicate with the bugs, and the bugs specialize in stealth because they make no noise or motion during combat. In addition to utilizing insects in battle, the Aburame clan also studies insects. They were rivals of the Kamizuru clan, the bee users, until they defeated them in battle. A major defining trait of the Aburame clan is that all of its known members wear dark sunglasses that hide their eyes as well as jackets that cover part of their face.

*Contract with beetles so can not obtain a summon

Kekkei Genkai: -

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Bug Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Using the Kikaichū bugs living in their body, the user can create a copy of themselves or anyone else they choose. The clone falls apart into its component bugs when struck. Because they're made of bugs, the clones can reform almost instantly.

Name: Bug Gathering Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: By simply touching a surface, the user releases a small web of chakra that draws bugs to their location.

Name: Bug Jar Techniqu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: The user focuses their chakra bugs into a dense swarm which circles their body forming a dome shaped shield that provides protection from a 360 degree angle. They swirl round and round increasing the efficiency of the defense. The dome is penetrable by the usage of a sufficient jutsu.

Name: Human Cocoon Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: The user creates a cocoon around themselves most likely to spy or hide from the enemy. The user can also use the cocoon as a "sleeping bag".

Name: Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This unique jutsu is a secret technique that allows the user to increase the speed of insects' development. As the user's body is already a hive of sorts for the insects, the user will encase himself in an actual cocoon to further aid the insects. This is an extremely useful move for Aburame clan members, since their attacks mainly focus on the usage of bugs. However, using this in the midst of a battle can be potentially dangerous as it leaves the user static and vulnerable.

Name: Secret Technique: Insect Sphere
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: By using the destruction bugs, members of the Aburame clan surround their opponent with thousands of bugs, making a globe of bugs around the opponent beforehand to completely trap them. Once trapped, the bugs would normally drain the chakra and swallow their victim. The bugs covering the victims body prevent movement, but should they escape the bugs will follow them.

History:

Once a small clan, the Aburame grew over the years and can now be seen with signature sunglasses and bulky clothing to hide their clan’s Kekkai Genkai. At birth, the Aburame are introduced and infused with the Kikai, small destructive bugs that feed off Chakra. Covering their bodies to keep their enemies clueless to the bugs, the Aburame can use the Kikai Mushi to attack or track enemies, even steal their Chakra. The clan has been noted for hailing from not only Konohagakure no Sato, but from Sunagakure as well, now, however, they’re a country-wide clan.

Rank Information:

Rank:Genin

Village Affiliation:Konoha no Sato

Special Information:

Character Speciality:

Main:Ninjutsu
Sub:Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity:

Main:Fire
Sub:Lightning

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:

Name: Bug Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Using the Kikaichū bugs living in their body, the user can create a copy of themselves or anyone else they choose. The clone falls apart into its component bugs when struck. Because they're made of bugs, the clones can reform almost instantly.

Name: Bug Gathering Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: By simply touching a surface, the user releases a small web of chakra that draws bugs to their location.

Name: Human Cocoon Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: The user creates a cocoon around themselves most likely to spy or hide from the enemy. The user can also use the cocoon as a "sleeping bag".

Name: Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This unique jutsu is a secret technique that allows the user to increase the speed of insects' development. As the user's body is already a hive of sorts for the insects, the user will encase himself in an actual cocoon to further aid the insects. This is an extremely useful move for Aburame clan members, since their attacks mainly focus on the usage of bugs. However, using this in the midst of a battle can be potentially dangerous as it leaves the user static and vulnerable.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Endan-Fireball
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Name:Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description:Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Name:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: None
Description:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name:Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: D
Element: None
Description:Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Name:Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Type:Genjutsu
Rank: C
Element: None
Description:Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

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Background Information

History:Birth Arc:Aburame,Klaus was born when his dad Aburame,Shizio was off on a mission and his mom was also an aburame so hes a fullfledged aburame clan member.As Klaus was being born Shizio was on his mission to stop some kind of commotion in another country.After the birth of Klaus they started the operation that happens to all of the aburame clan members.They used a special kind of drill like tool and made a hole in the body of Klaus.While putting the drill in and makeing a hole Klaus was already out cold.After putting the hole in they took out what is known to be a Queen Kikai which is a certain bug that feeds off chakra that only the aburame clan members what the power to control.They took it and put it in the hole they made.They had the family wait a week or two so they can see if the kikai can reproduce correctly and to see if it is going to accept this host.2 weeks after his birth he was rapped in a blanket and brought home.
Infant Arc:It has been 4 years after the birth of Aburame,Klaus.At this age he was already accepted into the academy.He enrolled at such a young age but he already learned so much from his parents.At this age he was already able to control his bugs and use some of the basic jutsus that he learned from his parents.He was a social outcast at this age everyone was two or one year older then he was.He never made alot of friends and was diffrent from all the others because most of the kids in his class were not of any kind of clan.This made him feel special and made him feel diffrent among the rest of the class.He also felt special because he was the youngest and one of the smartest ones.After 6 years of being a academy he graduated best of his class.The genin test had mostly to do with the understanding of the basic jutsus and shuriken,kunai and senbon throwing.Also you had to show that you could do atleast three of the basic 8 jutsus.

Academy Arc:
Dureing the academy arc Klaus has no friends at all and never talks to anyone but the teacher and his family or when hes asked a question at a shop.He's kind of shy but hes smart aswell.Klaus is one of those problem solveing ninja that dont come around to often in a life time.Klaus just finished perfecting Bunshin no Jutsu the last of the basics he needed to perfect.His dad came outside where Klaus was and this is when he started to learn the secret jutsus of the Aburame clan.The first jutsu that Klaus is going to be taught is the bug gathering jutsu.His father would demonstrate by placeing his hand on the ground and by forceing chakra down to his hand a white spider like web comes out of his hand and then a whole bunch of bugs start to gather by Sinzio's hand.Sinzio would then stop doing this the bugs started to scatter back into the forest that was there backyard.Klaus would then attempt to copy what his father had just showed him.He would put his hand to the ground and allow chakra to scatter around his hand and caused bugs to come to his hand but only one came to him.He would try this again over and over until the number of bugs he caused to surround his hand had been more then his father.At then end of the day he was passed out on the ground from trying to accomplish this jutsu.He did gradually start mastering it but it wasn't fully mastered.When he is finally out of the academy and a genin he would then beable to get the entire grasp of this jutsu.

RP Sample:Footsteps can be heard from behind Klaus as he ran through the forest with a special rare bug in a container that he was supposed to get to beable to make a certain medicine.This was a tough mission seeing as someone else was also after the bug and couldn't find it without the help of others.He found where his Human Cocoon was at and he put the bug in there with the container and then confronted the enemy.At that moment he saw two kunai comeing towards him.He easily deflected them with his own kunai.He then started to do some hand signs then he said"Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique!"Then a bunch of small but moderately sized fire balls hurled out of it.The opposeing ninja saw these and dodged by jumping back.Then small shuriken came out of the fire balls and went around him.The opposeing Ninja simply chuckled and said "What is that supposed to do it missed."Then all of a sudden he got tangled in wire.Klaus then said "Who said i was trying to hit you with the shuriken?"Then he formed a couple more handsigns before yelling out "Ryuuka no Jutsu Dragon Fire!"Then a large torrent of flames engulfed the wire that was bitten by him and guided itself to the target.The attack was a succes and then the enemy fell to the ground with a thump.Aburame,Klaus had won the battle against the enemy ninja.He then walked back to his Human Cocoon and took the container with the insect out.The insect seemed to have laid eggs it was a Female he then said "We should beable to get aloot of medicine now."As he then walked out of the forest into a wide field where the sun finally was shown.This was a timed mission that he was supposed to accomplish in a day.He accomplished it a little bit over 13 hours.He was a hero to the man who was supposed to get the medicine.If he didn't get this medicine that man would have died he felt proud of himself.

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

History needs to be a bit longer, make an academy arc if need be and detail it some, you need a RP sample.

Posts : 1084

Mm...

You don't need to fix it in your app, but in the future it is asked of you to put a space after your periods when you start as new sentence...

Like this - Blahblahblah. Blahblah.
Not - Blahblahblah.Blahblah.

It's just easier to read and looks nicer.

Also, are you sure you don't want to squeeze in some Lightning based jutsu in your app? Genin are allowed to use two elements at this site.

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I know but i cant find any lightning jutsus that are C rank so im just going to make my own

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Try and make the RP sample a post you would make with this character, not the history.

Posts : 8

come on caranore

Posts : 1044

Fix the coding, its sloppy, if you don't intend to use the list code then remove it.

Make a real RP Sample.

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I made a real rp sample sloppyness now fixed

Age : 31 Posts : 2547

I'm gonna go ahead and approve, but in the future make sure to use a spell checker of some kind and also space after periods.

Approved, though.

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