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| Subject: Cigaro. Thu 06 May 2010, 7:12 pm | |
| Basic Information:
Name: Cocaine Secondary Title: 47 (Alias) The Haitian (revered nickname) Age: 22 Gender: Man. Physical Appearance:
Cocaine stands at depicted height, but makes up for it in sheer bearing alone. His face is too rounded about the chin to have the classical and dangerously sharp features, although he remedies this by the clipping of his pale hair to a decent chin length. His white mask gives much suspicion to strangers as to why he would actually wear this mask. Cocaine looks as if he has something to hide, though much people would not know. Close enough such an assumption may be, but the expression in Cocaine's eyes in one, which few would match to a normal bookworm. If it were not for the fact that he laughs so much-or possibly even despite it-one could imagine him to be enraged by how intense his gaze can be once attracted to a subject, and by just how much it demands to be granted anything and everything on the spot.
His pale dark purple hair is long enough to reach his rounded cheekbones, one thick lock of hair hangs between both of his eyes and the complexion of the man behind the mask is tan, almost olive. His cyan colored pupil void of a visible iris surrounds itself by narrowed eyes almost all the time.
Personality: That the world is a game is an excuse used by more than one soul to explain away precisely -why- they find the ideas of mundane thought to be alternately boring and hysterical, but it is again applied to Cocaine. Take a mind gifted with a proper intellect and give it room to grow, and then introduce to it the lure that all of reality could be understood and controlled-one only had to study it from the proper angle. This mind would belong to a young boy born in the shadow of the towers of others. The key? Water.
Cocaine possesses just enough intellect to see past the games of breakfast, lunch and bed, and not quite enough to know that buckling down and working to control the world was a far safer venue that setting yourself up as a demonic lord. But to hear it from him, the latter itself would be foolishness; there are far greater prizes to be won than kingdoms or even gods. Cocaine has an ambition which burns inside him to possess reality itself, and to those ends there is nothing sacred. All those who would cling to the practice of gaining traditional power or worshiping deities who seem so weak on their own thrones are considered lacking in ambition by the ninja, who tends to see rules and restrictions as challenges for growth. The concepts of dark arts are laughable for Cocaine, who sees no such thing as good or evil. Morality, in his eyes, is set down by the gods to be followed by quaking mortal sheep, and if you need not obey them then why should you abstain? For this reason, it is quite simple for the man to perform deeds which could be considered perversions of nature or of justice-why bother stopping? Who was going to catch you? The police? Well, if you were weak enough or shortsighted enough to be stopped by a -cop-, then you deserved your fate.
Understandably, Cocaine thinks of the divine as being nothing more than overgrown humans who have power that they should keep better watch over lest it be taken from them. There is no reason in his eyes as to why a human cannot attain that level, particularly not when the gods pluck away souls and then bind them to their wants.
By the same token, Cocaine suffers from feeling as if there are no absolutes in the world. He occasionally tires of his own games, knowing by his own logic that reality is only what he is reaching for, and if he should put his side of the playing pieces down then there are no stories of justice or morals to rally him back. He is far too proud to resort to giving into such illusions, however,
What do you do when you see the seams of the world and also see just how frail they truly are? When you can shake out the game of mortal lives and bind it to your own ambition to give it its only worth, what rule is there to command you when the nights are quiet and the rewards not as bright as they had once seemed to be?
You entertain yourself. Cocaine has no intentions yet of giving into the same despair which his own logics have brought him to, and if his laughter is a little too wild and a little too out of control-forgive him, he's only having a long day.
Cocaine also has a noted lack of patience, expecting other people to at least be enrolled in whichever task they claim to be intent on. Those who will not either admit to having no interest or no purpose in being involved with a subject are only wastes of time. When the necromancer has a more relaxed schedule, he does not mind being diverted, but when he is fixed upon a task he demands for it to be completed and to the flames can be resigned any who do not intend to help or get out of his way. Because of this, many can be put off by Cocaine's mannerisms, which swing from utterly playful to ruthlessly in demand for them to perform appropriately. His life in a complete disarray he follows his own.
This Ninja also enjoys amused whining and being utterly off-balance in his approach to others. At heart, he knows that he would rather be seen in thrall to a baker's cart than actually resist fulfilling one of his plans due to mere complaints, but it's far too entertaining to watch other people react. For a man with such a sense of pride, he gives up a surprising amount in just how silly he can get-incomprehensible to all save those who see just how sensitive he can get when his intellectual capacities, the true root of his vanity, are mocked and assumed lacking.
Catch Phrase: N/A
Clan Information:
Clan Name: N/A Clan Location: N/A Clan Traits: N/A Kekkei Genkai: N/A Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A History: N/A Clan Details: N/A
Rank Information:
Rank: N/A Village Affiliation: N/A
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Weaponry Elemental Affinity:
Main: Water Sub: N/A Special Characteristics: N/A
Skill Information: Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them. Jutsu Name: Etheral Gathering Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: Water
Description:
Using the core body of the demon forced into Cocaines body Body and mixed with his chakra, Cocaine manifests the Body as a being made of water and hydrogen. This body can mix with other Hydrogen and oxygen particles and give the ninja control over that as well. He is then able to condense the water so it can easily become a weapon. Link: N/A For now
Background Information
History: The village this ninja originated from was odd in presence, it existed in the Land of Water, serving as a mercenary village to serve to the Lords personal missions, reaping benefits and rewards for themselves. Times gained on and the Lord of Water and local Mafia gangs saw the Clans accumulation of money was exponentially high. to avoid any trouble the clan broke up and split up. Cocaine being only a child at the time had only received scrolls about his clan and his bloodline. When the clan split up he was discarded as well, at age 11 and for these next 11 years he had been training on his own, activating his bloodline at the age of 16. From then he hones his ninja skills, simply drifting until he found a goal for himself. Absolute contentment.
Role-Play Sample: Cocaine momentarily found himself growing more and more powerful without any incantation to stop. When his spear was launched, Soakudo had withdrew his power from Cocaine making him fight on his own source for now, not as a punishment but as a limit to see exactly how far he would have gone in order to make a substantiate amount of defense for himself. The Bount’s eyes remained close as his body reformed back into its full height that that was originally in., The bent knees he was once bent rose back to its originally position. His knees locked in place and the body of Cocaine’s figure slowly rose one inch up. Rolls of water formed on the soles of the Bount his body being hydrauliced the way his body was propelled up into the air. Cocaine himself loved this feeling this certain defense being used against those who would proclaim themselves egotistical, Cocaine had to stop that way of thinking, his mind re-allocated to reap one reward toward himself. As soon as the Bount’s body was propelled he felt his spear being stopped, though not through an opposing force but from a stationary object of the other. Cocaine waited in the mist he set up , his senses aware and then…..then…..he moved. The test the Bount had laid out was simple enough for someone as dumb as a shinigami could accell on but in this case. The Captain Commander before him was as daft as he looked and there was no way he was going to ever improve himself. The Bount let out a sigh of aspiration against the Captain commander as he performed his shunpo toward him. The mist he blew past I'm as he moved was a clear enough notification of his presence to the Bount as he made his countless succession of attacks against the Bount. Cocaine was in awe while he pondered how the captain commander thought. What he was really thinking when he gave such an attack to the Bount, and what he was thinking when he decided to attack Cocaine in the pesent state he was in. The Bount wasn’t in complete aptitude of what he was going to do, basically the same for any battle wasn’t it? Divide, conquer, and reap the everlasting rewards that the trail had to gain, furbish, self-reflection, all these actions of Cocaine were an everlasting and repetitive sequence he found himself in. All of these millennium he’s been alive and still doing the same things? Cocaine mentally laughed, he needed to desperately find himself a hobby. An enemy, one prized to kill the other was something commonly encountered throughout the time Cocaine would freely rein the streets of Seireitei, and now almost the same situation have been re-formed in the area before him. This captain commander had heaved his sword above him in the intent to harm Cocaine, who had done nothing to him at all but speak. Was it his lack for information? Lack of given respect? No, it was nothing of the sort, Cocaine use found himself…strained on actions he could perform right now. It wasn’t due to the shinigami’s dome, but what he did. What would he perform for this type of deal now? The Bount had to re-analyze the situation.
The water that had split once it had hit the man’s sword attached to the outside of it, and had carried over to the area they were at now. Once the blades had tried to cleave downward on the Bount, the water jumped off, the moisture forming a little plate of water which would only last as the sword comedown. Comprised of highly condensed water, all the sword attacks were parried as the sword swiped through the mist and tried to cut at the Bount. The Bount never moved during this situation, his mind still connected with the entity of the mist he had become aware of the disturbance it caused, giving him a visual of what happened around him. After the successive swipes at Cocaine had all been parried, the Captain head back to his original position. The Bount’s lip curled at his actions, a very much cowardly form to attack a sightless opponent and the style of the execution, the pure bases of the attack disgusted the Bount and he then questioned the probability of how this man assimilated to the power he was currently in? Did he do this to the other captains? Blind them, then sucker punch them? Cocaine had a deep sense and urge to try to liberate these dogs who followed the Seireitei with their tails wagging behind their own asses, then feel devastated once something such as this happens. It was a mindless ploy to the vision of the bunt. If it couldn’t get any worse, a limb appeared to erect form the chest of the captain commander toward the Bount. Cocaine simply stood in withdrawn awe as the hand rushed at him. The water on his feet activated and the Bount appeared to glide to the left, moving completely out of range of the man’s hand of energy. Cocaine stood there for a good minute to try to comprehend what just happened. The captain commander of Soul Society attacked him, and all he could do was try to cut and grab him? The Gotei really have fallen. If this was the Captain Commander, the strongest of them all, was there a point for the Bount to try to invade Seireitei and kill the rest? Once their leader was terminated they would flock in frustration and confusion, unknown to themselves that they possess a goddamn brain for themselves. Ah well, the Bount quickly put them aside, their existence, their brainwashed plight, their unfortunate position, the fact that the person in front of him was a captain commander. Cocaine sighed as he opened his eyes once more, his clear vision now turning into completely darkness, Cocaine felt as the hand continued to trail on to the position the man once thought he was in. The plates that had protected Cocaine were re-accumulated toward the Bount. His hand extended and they grouped together, then split off into three different thing condensed plates which revolved around the Bount. Cocaine’s’ hand extended forward and felt one of them with a tinge of curiosity.
The plate shimmered in and to the Bount; he was able to see the faint glare that it was able to exert even though the Commander of Captains was obstructing his vision of sight. Where had the Bount seen this before? Oh yes man long ago named Adauchi, his dome of darkness also proved to do the same thing against him, then once again with Naraka Shirumozan, the pure force he attempted to bring upon the Bount in bum rushed attacks, one the Bount found very familiar in man in front of him. It was...unbecoming to the thought of the sight. Cocaine was joyful, that he was not able to see him right now. The Bount closed his eyes once more and re-gained his focus, the position of the man was till the same before he re-opened his eyes and the face of the Bount drew to a crawl. Cocaine controlled the plates to revolve his body, to be on alert to systematically attain a detection or “break.” The hand of the Bount extended forward and particles of water began to charge indiscriminately to the center of his palm. A small orb was grown and water was continuously fed into the ball, they seemed small and compacted in nature as the ball was ordinarily beginning to rupture he semi-released it, becoming a six foot tall ball of water which the Bount had full grasped off. Cocaine made the middle of his arm the center of his gravity as his feet propelled him forward with a vigorous motion. The rolls on his feet glided the Bount effortlessly, the man himself not using his actual speed to proceed forward, with the bend of his knees, the Bount pushed down on the water, his body being exponentially launched into the air. Cocaine maneuvered the ball around him, his body twirling with the ball as he proceeded to be in the air above The Captain commander. He aimed the ball toward his head in an attempt to ram it into him, although before he had a chance to Cocaine Heard a still voice in his head. Soakudo’s taunt became apparent to the Bount as time slowed down and the conversation with him began. <> Cocaine appeared in the realm his doll resided in, sitting in the chair that his doll sat in while Soakudo himself opted to switch positions with the Bount. Cocaine got up with a slight focus of anger, his hand extending to grab the man in front of him. <> Cocaine returned to his position out in the real world. In the real world, not even a second went by as the Bount continued his assault, form his plummeting position of a six foot ball of water in diameter rushed toward The Captain commander, the doll was bored and intervened.
A small space opened up in the middle of the ball, and Cocaine landed on the left side of the Captain Commander. The middle of the ball separated it’s water molecules, the oxygen and hydrogen were accumulated in a large space inside the ball as two atoms of the oxygen rubbed against each other, they generated a specific charge of electricity, and with the supporting hydrogen which occurred around them and the initial fuel from the oxygen, the center of the ball of water became similar to an out of control turbine engine. The inside of the ball exploded, because of its confined space, the explosions ferocity multiplied by ten in addition o the energy and amount of fuel it had. The rest of the ball ruptured due to the shockwave and Cocaine controlled the rest from there on. The ball of water exploded from the top of the Captain Commander, the whole ball rupturing to an array of six inch long drills. A rough estimate of over 50 drills of purely condensed water, each one strong enough to rip a hole through the captain commander, exploded alongside the fire explosion in an area of 360 degrees. The Bount himself being just a hair out of the explosion’s range watched on in interest of the outcome of the man. Since this was hydrogen explosion, a large accumulation of pure water was made, as if a five gallon bucket was immediately released with the shock wave of the explosion on top of the man. Cocaine watched this, any by watching he is getting a mental image of what happening due to the parting mist of the actions, his view was more like a wait as his hand fell back to his side he waited n the actions of the Captain Commander. In fact he predicted his next movements. He expected a shunpo out of his situation, a soliloquy of what he wants, a ranged attack then a flee to the corner of this little dome. Better yet he will throw a “shadow” hand that was supposed to give some sort of restraint against the—NO! The Bount had to stop this sundry of destructive hubris. The digression of someone else in battle, the way his doll thought , it was began to infect the mind of the Bount, Cocaine’s body rose with a calm as he took a deep breath his body focused on the response of the Captain Commander, the one man who was determined to follow him and stop him in whatever experiments he wanted. Also the man who wanted to know so much about his little invention he would risk his life for an indefinite amount of time. This dome of darkness, the Bount was reminded of how earlier his plates shined a glare to the Bount, allowing him to know that the darkness is part of the reiatsu around him and a spike of over-powerment can bring a higher form of sight to him. But this knowledge did not need to be known to the man in front of him. Cocaine watched the plates in front of him act and absorb the drills of water that was coming for him, strengthening the plates to a more point of density for the defense he hoped for. Cocaine continued to wait, as his mind began to pinpoint on ever drill that was launched form the balls explosion.
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| | | 47
Posts : 5
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Fri 07 May 2010, 2:32 am | |
| Bump, Does anything ever get checked around here? If not meh, I'll be rping elsewhere till this is checked/approved. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Fri 07 May 2010, 2:39 am | |
| You have had this up 7 hours. Dont bump until 24 hours have passed. I personally wont check anything when its bumped like that, as its just disrespectful.
Secondly. If you read the available ranks, we dont have wanderers or missing nin. Your history is terribly short for someone of your age. We dont have demons, as obvious given the applications. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Fri 07 May 2010, 11:22 pm | |
| More on appearance
Like Cara said, wandering ninja isn't a rank at all. Everyone is in a village.
Weaponry needs to be edited to fit with the US 2.0 weapon rules.
Etheral Gathering: Remove it or work on it, because as it is it is OP and its just crazy either way with the being made of two elements.
Once again, longer history. And what bloodline is the history talking about? Because it says you have no clan.
Also, we hold people by there RP samples here, so unless your gonna post 2,000 words every post, get a more realistic RP sample. |
| | | 47
Posts : 5
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Mon 10 May 2010, 12:07 am | |
| More on appearance? Everything that needs to be explained is in there. The only thing that isn't added is my Dick size but some readers might find that inappropriate.
Wandering nin isn't a rank, it is a title that isn't placed in your long list of titles. So I took the liberty of telling it like it is. But if I am required to make it say "Missing" Then so be it.
What weaponry? I have none.
Made of two elements? Looking clearly I stated it is a water technique, the fact that two elements on the elemental chart makes the technique altogether shouldn't even matter, do you actually know how many elements make Fire? And I can understand exactly what you mean by a bit OP since I failed to elaborate just how far this technique can stretch. (Not literal.)
I said "Clans" ; Plural, I was speaking in general about Clans.
Do you need me to post a link to all my posts on all the other RP forums I rped on? My posts are usually longer than that if I am the starter/creator of the Topic.
Please do not make me edit my history, otherwise I will become long winded and write a few thousand words to replace this substantial amount of info already here.
- Caranore wrote:
- You have had this up 7 hours. Dont bump until 24 hours
have passed. I personally wont check anything when its bumped like that, as its just disrespectful.
Sorry but I found nothing disrespectful about my bump, but if I hurt your feelings in some way, then I am sorry. I had no idea some people felt so strongly about a bumped topic.
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| | | 47
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| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Mon 10 May 2010, 12:10 am | |
| Sorry for the double post.
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| | | Pattycakes
Age : 30 Posts : 1701
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Mon 10 May 2010, 12:11 am | |
| Some do =/ Just a friendly reminder, try to wait at least a day before bumping =] |
| | | Pattycakes
Age : 30 Posts : 1701
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Mon 10 May 2010, 12:14 am | |
| It's a site standard, appearance is to be 2 paragraphs minimum. This shouldn't be difficult, considering the personality you wrote.
for now, you must belong to a village, even if you openly state in your app that you hate your village and plan on leaving.
Depending on your rank, you need to have a few arcs of history, each arc being two paragraphs long. No exceptions.
you're probably going to want more than just one technique. |
| | | 47
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| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Mon 10 May 2010, 12:17 am | |
| - Pattycakes wrote:
- It's a site standard, appearance is to be 2 paragraphs minimum. This shouldn't be difficult, considering the personality you wrote.
for now, you must belong to a village, even if you openly state in your app that you hate your village and plan on leaving.
Depending on your rank, you need to have a few arcs of history, each arc being two paragraphs long. No exceptions.
you're probably going to want more than just one technique. Well well, a firm hand that gets to the point.
Well everything you stated up till the last thing seems fair enough and it will be edited accordingly. The last thing you stated isn't true, with the technique I already requested use for; It is almost similar to Gaaras Sand technique shit except with him he can kill people just by clenching his fist. |
| | | Pattycakes
Age : 30 Posts : 1701
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Mon 10 May 2010, 12:34 am | |
| However, Gaara's sand technique had sub technique, I.e, Dessert coffin, sand burial, etc. You'll also want the basic academy jutsu, such as walk on water, tree climbing, etc.
^_^' |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Thu 20 May 2010, 10:20 am | |
| Eternal Gathering Unacceptable, I have dibs on those abilities. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Fri 21 May 2010, 5:04 am | |
| He could just be part of your clan? |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Cigaro. Sat 12 Jun 2010, 3:35 am | |
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