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Name: Elendril Tokyo
Secondary Title: none
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance: Elendril is almost always seen in his ninja uniform, along with iron guard gloves reminiscent of his father . Another noticeable feature to Elendril.. He is a tall, fit ninja, characterized by his long and black hair, forehead protector regularly covering his scarred left eye, and his chronically visible mask. He is once mistaken by a ninja for his father who he is considered to greatly resemble.

While it has yet to be revealed why, he has, since a young age, always been seen concealing the lower half of his face. What he looks like remains a point of interest for his friend‘s , who try to find out what he looks like in various prank‘s, which is devoted to all of them trying to remove their friend's mask, implies that he is in fact quite handsome from some family member’s seeing his face.

Personality:He is very cheerful and shows greater concern for teammates, placing their safety over the successful completion of a mission , He is also regularly late for appointments. This is because of his frequent time’s of sleeping late name is engraved, where he loses track of time. However, Elendril is still just as carefree and emotionless as he was during his time with family , often speaking bluntly about sensitive topics.
Elendril claims to have lost everyone who was close to him, causing some reluctance to allow others to get close to him. Of the people who are still alive, Elendril is on the best terms with his friend’s. After the formation of a prank he begins taking a special interest in their development, as shown from his regular checking up on his fat friend and his eating habits. He similarly refuses to go on a mission I so that he can stop friend’s from killing each other. Elendril is just as devoted to his friends and the rest of his familly , such that his signature saying, then never give in , has been made on the principle of duty, and perfected on the principle of protecting loved ones. Elendril has a rather solitary and matter-of-fact attitude. His calm and detached demeanor has been called “cool, hip, and trendy” many times by friend’s . Despite his increasingly growing reputation and prowess as a ninja, Elendril has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities. His naturally calm attitude is used to his advantage in battle, as it becomes easier for him to maintain his composure to stay focused on the situation at hand, and ultimately notice everything around him. As a result, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents.
Elendril has an ongoing, albeit one-sided, rivalry with most of his friend’s . Elendril, on the other hand, shows very little interest in their competitions, which only further inspires his friends to defeat Elendril and his "coolness".

Catch Phrase:none

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Tokyo
Clan Location: Suana
Clan Traits: a dark yellow eye collor .
Kekkei Genkai: The Kekkei Genkai is a gene mutation that allows the person to have manipulation over sand and earth. They can use hand motions for example clenched fists to swaying hands to control the sand or earth in differnt directions compacted it etc. The sand or earth does not auto protect the user like gaara as that was a shukaku ability but like him they can chakra infuse it to make it stronger and faster and make stronger sandand earht from the minerals in the earth. The sand and earth can be used to create walls to block attack shells aswell or knives swords etc to attack the opponet or waves for either. The sand and earth varies in strength to how much it can destroy or block the harder you train the stronger it gets.. The user of this cannot create sand or earth from nowhere they must either create it by crushing minerals in the earth which takes a while not insatnt or use sand which is around them or that they carry with them.. Sometechniques do require handseals as they are extremly large and powerfull like the giant sand wave/funeral. Also the more you train the larger amounts of sand you can control if you have not trained it much you cannot manipulate that much sand like covering a whole hiden village you can only control enough to cover three people. The max you can manipulate is the size of a hidden village but this is not without limits the sand will move slower and do less damage and will take up large amounts of your chakra.

Secret Clan Jutsu: none yet
History: A gene mutation that can happen to anyone. This gene is not usuable at birth and is found out that the user can manipulate sand and earth from around the age of 5 to the day they die this happen when the gene if fully develped inside the body. Once the gene is fully develped the person who has the gene must train and practice in order to have full mastery over the sand and earth if they do not when they do hand motions to control it the sand may do something else to what was planned or just do nothing. The more the user trains with sand the higher amount of sand they can use and the stronger and faster it will become, untrained sand will only just be able to block c or less attacks medium sand a or less and very highly trained sand like gaaras is up to s/ss any is able to block amatetsaru like gaara did and move at that speed.

Clan Details:
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Rank Information:

Rank:Jounin

Village Affiliation:Suna

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main:Nijutsu
Sub:Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity:
What element(s)
Main: Fire
Sub: Earth
Special Characteristics:
That he has a photographic memory and that he learn’s Jutsu’s faster then most people

Background Information

History:at a young age Elendril was a well ninja better than most kid's so he got special training to master his kekkei genkai he was then thrown into the wood's to see if he could really survive like his parent's said so while in the wood's he got a scar by a pack of wolves so he uses his headband to cover it up so now one No's as his father trained him to be a great ninja a war happened and his younger brother was killed in the war after that his parent's kind of kept to them self's so elendril wint to the acadamy to train and left his parent's to grieve over the lose of his little brother he then met one of the greatest shinobi of all time he showed elendril how to truly use his kekkei genkai. So then Elendril finished his year’s at the academy the set out to be a genin. After being a genin for a few month's Elendril and his swad got there first mission. They did pritty good and where startingto have fun. After being genin for a year. There sinsay thought that they where ready to become chunin. Each and every one of there sqwad past whth flying color's. After being a chiunin for a year Elendril did the Jounin exam and past

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Jutsu List
1 ire dragon missle:
2 balsam spread fire
3 : fire dragon flame missile
4 : grand fireball jutsu
5 : dragon fire technique
6: flame dragon jutsu: blazing fireball jutsu
7: phoenix flower jutsu:
8 phoenix jutsu
9: flame blowing jutsu:
10 double black dragon blizzard
11: earth landslide jutsu:
12 clone jutsu
13: transformation jutsu:
14 reversal jutsu
15: substitution jutsu:
16 water prison jutsu: water dragonjutsu
17: Dance of the Camellia
18 Dance of the Clematis
19 : Flower Dance of the Clematis
20: Vine Dance of the Larch
21 Dance of the Seedling Fern
22 Dance of the Willow
23 Drilling Finger Bullets
24 wind relese rasenshuriken
25 rasngon
26 chidori
27 mystical palm
28 twin snake mutal death
29 great waterfall technigue
30 chidori current
31 chidori sharp spear
32 fire relese dragon flame missile
33 chidori katana
34 fire relese big flame bullet
35 water relese water fang bullet
36 poison mist
37 earth relese spear
38 flying swallow
39 Frog Kata
40 Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
41 Fire Release: Flame Bullet

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Elendril wrote:: Name: Elendril Tokyo
Secondary Title: none
Age: 14

A jounin cannot be fourteen years old.

Elendril wrote:: Special Characteristics:
That he has a photographic memory and that he learn’s Jutsu’s faster then most people

The ability to learn jutsu faster needs to be explained. Details.

Elendril wrote:: Jutsu List
1 ire dragon missle:
2 balsam spread fire
3 : fire dragon flame missile
4 : grand fireball jutsu
5 : dragon fire technique
6: flame dragon jutsu: blazing fireball jutsu
7: phoenix flower jutsu:
8 phoenix jutsu
9: flame blowing jutsu:
10 double black dragon blizzard
11: earth landslide jutsu:
12 clone jutsu
13: transformation jutsu:
14 reversal jutsu
15: substitution jutsu:
16 water prison jutsu: water dragonjutsu
17: Dance of the Camellia
18 Dance of the Clematis
19 : Flower Dance of the Clematis
20: Vine Dance of the Larch
21 Dance of the Seedling Fern
22 Dance of the Willow
23 Drilling Finger Bullets
24 wind relese rasenshuriken
25 rasngon
26 chidori
27 mystical palm
28 twin snake mutal death
29 great waterfall technigue
30 chidori current
31 chidori sharp spear
32 fire relese dragon flame missile
33 chidori katana
34 fire relese big flame bullet
35 water relese water fang bullet
36 poison mist
37 earth relese spear
38 flying swallow
39 Frog Kata
40 Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
41 Fire Release: Flame Bullet

All jutsu need to be in a jutsu template. Chidori and Rasengan aren't allowed here. Mystical Palm is also reserved for the Medical Ninjutsu specialty, which you do not have. Poison Mist would need the poison template and Twin Snake Mutal Death as well as Frog Kata, would need a creature template. You also have a numerous amount of jutsu with elements which you do not have.

A longer history is needed, as well as rp sample. You'll need the Kazekage's approval for Jounin rank, too.

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More on appearance

We already have a sand clan, Sabura

Suna Jounin will need Hugh's approval

History needs to be divided into arcs and have two paragraphs per arc

Refer to what CC said, because it hasn't been fixed

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