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Travis
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptyTue 18 May 2010, 3:59 am

Well you gotta wait, we can't approve Jounin's to other villages.
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptyFri 21 May 2010, 4:59 am

Pat bump
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Tom
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySat 22 May 2010, 2:51 am

Travis & Çγαηide: I know I've been patient and ain't still checking it! I'm starting to get anoyed because he hasn't check it for a while now.. Anyways I'll wait another 72 hours. (3 Days)
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptyThu 27 May 2010, 11:33 pm

approval=] But This internet is slow, would another mod mind locking and moving this app?
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Travis
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptyThu 27 May 2010, 11:37 pm

Locked and moved.
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Tom
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySat 14 Aug 2010, 4:47 am

Long, time now but since I am moving to Kumogakure, due to the evacuation of Konoha, I am joining Kumogakure as a Jounin with Todd's permission. Edited stuff about Konoha, and changed to Kumogakure.
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySat 14 Aug 2010, 11:29 pm

Hello. ^-^ I would prefer to see the jutsu in your clan details in a spoiler to clean it up some, and you need to fix the code error with centering the words Background Information. Otherwise this is all pretty straight forward and I see no problems with this application.

I do have a concern over the D ranked elemental jutsu which I am bringing up in the staff lounge, but otherwise this seems all in order to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySat 14 Aug 2010, 11:49 pm

I would like to add something.

Reppushou is indeed C-Rank.

Kazekiri is too powerful for a C-Rank, it should be at least B-Rank.


Kazegaeshi - Wind Return is a Kenjutsu technique according to Naruto Wiki, remove it.

Atsugai - Pressure Damage is B-Ranked.

Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation is B-Ranked.



Info collected from Naruto Wiki and Leaf Ninja. ^^
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Tom
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySun 15 Aug 2010, 12:01 am

@ Light: Done
@ Wind: Done

Better? Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySun 15 Aug 2010, 1:11 am

Actually, we've been missing one last thing. Please edit the topic of this thread and change Konoha Jounin to Kumo Jounin. XD Not sure how we missed that up till now.
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Lol, done now, I must wait for Todd, when he can post after he comes back from his away.
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Tom
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySun 22 Aug 2010, 2:53 am

Sorry, for double post. Can someone check this especially Todd.
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PostSubject: Re: Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] Nara, Katsu [Kumogakure Jounin] - Page 2 EmptySun 22 Aug 2010, 3:02 am

Over-looking the app it looks more like a chuunin based application to me. Would you be fine with chuunin within the village?

There isn't anything wrong with the application so it would get approval from me now, it is just simple (in a good way). ^^
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Todd wrote:
Over-looking the app it looks more like a chuunin based application to me. Would you be fine with chuunin within the village?

There isn't anything wrong with the application so it would get approval from me now, it is just simple (in a good way). ^^

Umm. Ok. It took me a long time, but since you see it as that. I'll take chuunin.
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Approved. [Don't worry something tells me that ranking up wont be hard soon, just be patient Wink]

Welcome to Kumo we are glad to have you my friend. ^^
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