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| Subject: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Sat 15 May 2010, 10:10 pm | |
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| Subject: The Biography Sun 16 May 2010, 10:53 pm | |
| Basic Information: Name: Nobura Inagumi Secondary Title: *Earned IC* Age: 15 Gender: Male Physical Appearance: Many people take a look at Nobura and immediately mistake him for a little kid aging around 10. This is because Nobura is very short for his age being around 5'1 *5'2 if you include his hair*. Despite this, the boy's body is built like a tank as he constantly eats healthy in hopes that maybe doing so will make him grow taller. He weighs 120 due to the fact his body is increased due to his muscle mass *muscle weighs more than fat*, and as his body as alot of definition even a six pack. He fierce yellow eyes and his hair is dark purple and has a single little spike on the top which for some reason he refuses to cut. He has a tattoo of his clan symbol on his back.
He doesn't particularly have a specific designated clothes as he wears what he wants and often times get scolded for it. Though most times he would wear a open button up shirt and jogging shorts. He wears his headband in several different manners but mostly he wears it through his belt loop in a tight knot making it hard to steal without him noticing it.
Personality: Ambitious and Motivated Nobura is a young man who dreams big, he doesn't believe in taking the easy route nor does he settle for less than what he feels he deserves. He is a relentless when it comes to anything he does and is extremely competitive when it comes to competition of even the most simple nature. He always pushes himself to be better and takes his wins and loses as lesson to better himself.
Arrogant and Trash Talker Nobura is the King of Trash Talk and boasting. He often makes comparison to others by saying things like,"You may be talented, but I am God Gifted." He has the utmost confidence in his self and no matter who the enemy is he believes he will win. He doesn't second guess his opponent or underestimate them, he just simple believe his best is better than others best. He likes to get in his enemies head and use their anger to his benefit. He doesn't care of others will throw insults with him or play into his games because trash talking is what he loves doing. Even when fighting his smart mouth never shuts up as he throws constant insults at the enemy whether winning or losing.
Catch Phrase: "Imbecile" "I am God Gifted"
Rank Information: Rank: Genin Village Affiliation: Kirigakure
Special Information: Character Speciality: Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Weaponry (Main:Kenjutsu, Sub: Exotic) Elemental Affinity: Main: Katon Sub: Suiton Special Characteristics:
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Able Bodied The character is in excellent physical shape. He heals quickly and is seldom ill. He has natural high stamina and can run longer than most average shinobi at his rank without tiring out.
Inventor Nobura is always trying to find ways to make himself better and sometimes coming up with ingenious ideas and plans to make new weapons and arms that can support his fighting as well as even assisting his village.
Endorphins Rush/Adapt The body after taking pain will sometimes create endogenous opioid polypeptide compounds, this serves a pain reliever of sorts that allow the body to almost ignore injury , mental or physical. This provides the user not only the ability to block out the pain, but also adapt to it so that should the pain happen again it would not have the same extreme effect as it did the first time it was used.
History:
Birth - Genin
Nobura Sabure was born in Kirigakure to a loving mother and doting father. They thought the world of their one and only son, for they weer told that his mother would be unable to give birth to a child. And yet here he was a miracle child. His mother named him Nobura after her father who had passed on many years before Nobura's birth. His mother and father, Aezra and Grey, had wanted their son to grow up a happy boy , but as years passed they saw he had potential. Since his birth he showed signs, being born with his eyes open as if he wanted to scan his surroundings being wary of those around him. At age 11 his prowess only increased until his father thought it best if his son went to Ninja Academy. He had only spent a year in academy before he was able to graduate, on that day his father gave him a pet dog, named Repede. The dog itself was a dark blue and white color and kept a bone in its mouth as if it was a pipe. Nobura was happy with his gift though he didnt show it. Upon his return home he was greeted by his clan and family it seems the clan had heard about his accolade, though everyone was shocked and happy Nobura wasnt affected at all. He didnt mind his rank or his standing, he cared little for such things. He only wanted to make his parents proud of him and from the looks of it he had done so. He celebrated with his family a bit longer until he tired of all the fuss over him and went outside. The moon was full and the gentle breeze from the wind comforted him. He sat down and noticed his pet coming from behind him. He rubbed the dogs head and gave a half smile "Well, Repede, we have a entire world in front of us, what say we see whats out there". The dog growled with approval and sat down. This would be the first day of the rest of his life , he thought to himself.
Genin Test
It had been 3 years since he had become a genin, time and time again Nobura challenged himself with missions, giving himself personal goals to accomplish so that he would always have to work harder. With his companion , Repede, beside him they successfully completed every mission given to him whether it big or small. Nobura jumped at every chance he could have to leave the village just to see the outside world and all its wonders. More than once his curiosity cost him nearly his life and the eye of his faithful friend they never back down. He had just returned from a mission when was approached by a member from his clan. "Nobura you have to coem with me quick." he stated. "What is wrong"? he asked. "NO time to explain just hurry" he said as he rushed off with Nobura behind him. He arrived at a open field and stopped. "Where are you taking me" he demanded. The boy snickered and vanished in a puff of smoke. Repede growled as his fur on his neck stood up. He had been fooled and from the looks of it, it was by a intruder. Out of the smoke stepped a man about 6 ft tall and well built he had a Rain headband on. "Do you have proper regulation to be here"he asked. He felt dumb it was obvious he didnt but he was dumbfounded to think a enemy would target him of all people. "I know who you are or rather who you belong to" the ninja said. Nobura had no idea what this guy was talking about but he couldnt let him get away. Unfortunately though he was nearly out of chakra after coming from his last mission, and Repede wouldnt be much help either due to his slight injury he suffered earlier. This wasnt looking good he couldnt call for help this ninja would kill him before he got a peep out. He had to play this smart.
"What do you mean you know who I belong to" he asked still trying to think of a plan. The ninja smiled "You are a member of the Sabure clan"" he said. Nobura was clueless to this he had know i dea who the clan descended from and really didnt care , but he had to play this out just right. "How did you know" he said astonished. The ninja pulled out a kunai " It wont matter soon I will kill you and send a message to that entire clan of your". Nobura had no idea how his death would be a message , but he had no intention on dying here. Nobura and Repede glanced at one another they had been in a similar situation before and Repede lost his eye from it. Nobura gave a slight nod and Repede growled they knew what the consequence would be, if this didnt work and it wont be just another eye. The ninja charge at Nobura , his killing intent thick in his eyes. Predictable, Nobura thought this guy wasnt to smart charging head first. He waited until the ninja's got closer and let Repede jump at the mans arm. Repede sunk his teeth into the mans flesh and yanked as if to pull it off. The ninja trying to get Repede off him took his eyes off Nobura , a fatal mistake. Nobura gripped his sword and swung it right at the ninjas neck. He felt the sword cut through flesh then in a instant nothing. The ninja had vanished in a cloud of smoke, Repede seemed to be confused as well as he looked around. "Pass" a voiced said behind him. Nobura turned to see his father and a Proctor. "Excuse me," Nobura said still wondering what the hell is going on. "You were being tested son, though a bit reckless, but you did well" his father said. Nobura was still in disbelief, he had just got home from a mission and he had to go through this. "So all that was fake", he asked. His father nodded and grinned. "Great what a complete and utter waste of my time. I thank you father now if you excuse me" he was about to walk off when the proctor stopped him. "Nobura Sabure, i have graded your performance and i must say you did well for a genin. You used your wits to carefully prepare for a attack and counter it."he said. "Your point sir", Nobura asked. The proctor wrote something on a sheet of paper as he spoke obviously not affected by Nobura's disrespectful tone "You did well I will report this to the to the Mizukage you have been approved and allowed to retain your rank". Nobura didnt care much but he did see this as a chance for more mission that would let him travel further away from village. The proctor told him his appointment would be tomorrow and he should take the time to rest. Nobura graciously accepted and headed him with Repede at his side, his father had left with the proctor. This day was a full one indeed, he would be happy to get some much needed rest.
RP Sample:
Here is my work if I am really into the topic
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Karakura Town. Club Freaknik. Friday Night
The streets of Karakura were always active this time of night. Most of the young people are either just getting off work or just leaving class and usually look for a means to have a good time. Club Freaknik being one of the many nightclubs in the city for the moment was one of the most popular due to location and prestige. It was the largest in the city having up to 3 floors the first being the bar, the second being the dance floor and the third being for employees only. The club was ran by a man named Bumpy Jones, a rather hideous looking man but a genius when it comes to dealing with money. Bumpy is very strict about who he deals with in terms of money so the process of who he hires is one he takes seriously. The reason Bastian getting a job as a bouncer was Bumpy happened to catch him while he was fighting off a gang from trying to rob him. Shortly after he offered Bastian the job and guaranteed if he stuck with him he would be richer than he ever dreamed. Thus from then on Bastian had been working at this place for a total of a year.
Bastian stood inside the club with a drink in his hand and flirting with a pretty little red head. Though most would frown on this Bastian knack for kicking ass made up for his unprofessional mannerisms. As he and the young woman's conversations heated up to the point of almost immediate fornication a loud crash came from across the bar area. Bastian looked up seeing what was going on through the slit in his mask to see another fight had broken out and they had totaled a table in the process. Bastian looked up to see Bumpy with large stacks of money in his hand and a Cuban cigar in his mouth looking back at him. Bumpy gave Bastian a nod to handle it as he turned away still counting his money as he went back to the second floor. Bastian put a single finger to the young woman's lips,"Hold that thought beautiful, gotta put in some work," he said as he walked away from the girl and toward the problem starters. Those who had been here before knew Bastian well as he tends to end problems rather quickly and often times it best to give him space. The people all stepped aside so Bastian had a clear path to the two idiots fighting and arguing,"Gentlemen I would have to ask you to leave the club now," he said in a almost laughing tone. One of the men knew of Bastian and backed off wanting no trouble, the other person however was less docile and approached Bastian in a rather aggressive manner. Bastian looked up as the man towered over him, easily being 6'10 or 7'0 and was considerably more built than he was,"Damn dude do you eat steroids as a snack," Bastian said with a huge grin. The man however didn't take a liking to his jokes and showed as much by slamming his fist into the face a Bastian knocking him to the floor. The pain was hardly noticeable but the damage was as blood trickled from the bottom of his mask, despite this however Bastian smiled remained. Bastian flipped from the ground to on his feet laughing as he did so,"That was a nice punch dude, I think my kids are gonna be feeling that one." "ENOUGH JOKES," he yelled as he made a attempt to punch Bastian again. Side stepping slightly, Bastian grabbed the man's arm and use the man's own weight to through off his balance sending him to the floor. With a swift yank Bastian popped the man's arm out of place causing him to yelp in pain,"You come in here again starting trouble and I will take the entire arm," Bastian whispered to the man so no one else could hear. The man nodded and Bastian released him letting the man leave the club to lick his wounds. The people in the club clapped for Bastian as he made his way back to his seat only to find the young woman had left. "Damn just my luck, I save the day but don't get the girl," he said as he sat down and kicked his feet up on the table. The night was still young and hopefully something good would drop in his lap.
Here is some of my work when I am either not caring, rushing, or am simple responding to a bad post
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Bastian made his way through the "black portal thing" and landed in what he assumed was Hueco Mundo. "That was a hell of a trip you arrancar sure know how to travel in style," he said taking in the sights around him. The place had a melancholy and dull look about it which was greatly disappointing. "Where the hell is everything else, no clubs, parks, not even a damn bookstore. You know for ancient beings you guys sure act as if your living in the dark ages." Scratching his head he looked around ignoring Drake and Valentina as she gave her orders. His visual exploring of the land stopped when he heard the term meat-boy yet again, but before he could turn around and respond with a witty remark of his own she was gone. "Great I am stuck with the yes man, lets just get to this place or whatever I been working all night and rather unwind a bit," he said plainly still exploring the land with his eyes. In fact he could feel directly the way Valentina went and could easily get there on his own, but he preferred to leave these two in the dark about his abilities. Still facing away from Drake, Bastian took off his mask and gave it a quick wipe down. Despite wanting to bang the Arrancar woman he had to keep in mind his purpose for wanting to come to this place. His smile returning as he put on his mask and turned back toward Drake waiting waited for him to lead the way. "By the way boy scout, what exactly do you get out of all that boot licking you do for Valentina," Bastian said laughing again. He enjoyed messing with Drake just to see if he could ever get a reaction from him, as far as Bastian was concerned he didn't have a opinion about much unless Valentina was involved. He began to wonder if the guy could think for himself at all.
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| Subject: Pet and Special Equipment Sun 16 May 2010, 10:56 pm | |
| Pet Application Name: Repede Age: 4 Species:Dog Element: Fire Appearance: Repede is a blue and white dog, that isnt much bigger than a average dog. It is well built (as far as a dog built goes) and weighs about as much as a average dog. His left is was cut during a mission resulting in a permanent scar on his face. His eyes are blue and grey. He keeps a pipe in his mouth though he doesnt smoke it he likes to keep it there, he also wears a big chain around his neck though it is never used to keep him tied down. He has a belt that goes around his upper half of his body which holds dagger which he uses on occasion. He has a very rough disposition and often times he is mistaken as a mean dog. He has alot of wolf like features but he is 100% dog. Personality: Repede acts like a old man at times then sometimes he can seem juvenile. He never barks he only growls which often gives people the idea he means them harm. When not with his friend, Albel, he is sleeping and relaxing the day away. He doesnt play fetch or the typical thing a normal dog does. Often times he acts human in nature when he growls about what he agrees or disagrees with. He fears nothing feeling that such things are beneath him. Background: Repede was born in a good home. Not being able to take care of their dogs new litter, the master gave the dogs away to a pet shop. He had spent half a year of his life in that place. He had issue with the other animals and was often left by himself, he was later picked up by Grey Noctis, Albel's father. He was given to Albel as a gift for passing the Ninja Academy. Repede doesnt remember much of his mother nor did he care much. His new concern was to watch out for his new best friend Albel.
As times passed and Albel worked to hone his skills, so too did Repede progress. Albel, with the help of his father, trained Repede to be able to sense chakra. The process required that Repede learn to sense the drastic change in atmosphere. Being not able to speak he is able to measure the amount that is used and with certain growls can tell Albel whether it is strong or weak.
Name: Chakra Sense Rank: C Element: N/A Description: (This isnt so much as a jutsu it is more a passive skill i just thought i should describe how it works thats all) This jutsu allows Repede to sense when chakra is being used if its in the vicinity of 20ft. He can also sense the level of chakra helping determine if the enemy in front is a threat or not to Nobura and himself.
Weaponry
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| Subject: Character Jutsu, Styles, and Weapons Sun 16 May 2010, 10:59 pm | |
| Skill Information: Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them. Academy Ranked Jutsu - Quote :
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.
Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. Katon Jutsu - Quote :
- Name: Endan - Fireball
Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.
Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.
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Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: None Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.
Name:Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Water Description:Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.
Name: Mizu Shuugou no Jutsu Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton This jutsu allows the user to gather water from the environment around him, like from the air, soil, etc. However, if in dry lands, this jutsu is useless.
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Name: Taihoudan - Large Projectile Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Taihoudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Elements. Amachi will generate water in his mouth and spit it as a stream at his target.
Name: Teppoudama - Bullet Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however; it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
Name: Hahonryuu - Destruction Torrent Rank: C - S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Hahonryuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. To use this technique Yamato will generate water to use against his opponent. Depending on the amount of chakra put into the technique is how much water will be generated .
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Sun 16 May 2010, 11:05 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Tue 18 May 2010, 5:38 am | |
| More detail on able bodied
and since everything else is cannon/pre-approved we should be set |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Tue 18 May 2010, 5:45 am | |
| Oh yeah, your clan can not make sand with their chakra, they have to have a source. Seeing as your a kiri genin, there is no desert areas to use sand from. I suggest carrying a pack of sand or something because without it you can't use your KKG. |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Tue 18 May 2010, 6:28 am | |
| edited and changed my element from fire to earth and added a jutsu for doton |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Tue 18 May 2010, 1:47 pm | |
| Convert: How much earth can be converted in one use? |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Tue 18 May 2010, 3:34 pm | |
| edited |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Wed 19 May 2010, 2:35 am | |
| Kenjutsu is not an option.
It falls under weaponry which has a main and a sub. |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Wed 19 May 2010, 3:43 am | |
| Just stating real quick that you're missing these two basic ninjutsu moves -
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- Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds. |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Wed 19 May 2010, 4:13 am | |
| oh thanks i didnt notice lol |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Wed 19 May 2010, 6:33 am | |
| Shocker, I'm ignored...THANKS LAUREN!
Once again, Kenjutsu falls under Weaponry and you're allowed a main and sub.
I'd suggest Main: Kenjutsu, Sub: Exotic for your gourd and everything. |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Wed 19 May 2010, 6:46 am | |
| I am gonna be completely honest when i say your confusing me If i make kenjutsu my main I wont be able to perform ninjutsu. Can you elaborate or give me a example of what exactly your trying to say because I dont get it. |
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Wed 19 May 2010, 7:43 am | |
| Read this bad boy: Read Me |
| | | Tim
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Wed 19 May 2010, 7:56 am | |
| I think i got it, but idk edited anyway |
| | | ₡amisado
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 4:56 am | |
| Your gourd can't have the ability to lower its weight for two reasons. First, well, its D-rank. Second, it just doesn't make sense. |
| | | Tim
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 8:06 am | |
| i edited it, I hope I am done all these post is making my app look cluttered and bad lmao |
| | | Travis
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 11:50 pm | |
| How much sand is in the gourd and approximately how heavy is it on you? |
| | | Tim
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 10:17 am | |
| Can you elaborate on exactly how the unit of measurement will determine how much sand I can use. Not to be funny but I fail to see the point in knowing the size and weight is it will not really be practical in a fight. The way I see it if I can manipulate sand even in the gourd thus making the weight less of a issue. Also as far as how much, I dont see the point as in the amount because regardless if the there is a certain amount I will manipulate or even make more with my jutsu. I really don't want to sound like a ass or rude but I seriously fail to see the usefulness of such information. |
| | | Travis
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 10:31 am | |
| You have a pound of sand, you could make maybe 2 sand shuriken.
You have 80 pounds of sand, sand burial.
Enough said. |
| | | Tim
Posts : 76
| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Sat 22 May 2010, 6:27 pm | |
| Honestly is seems a bit more unnecessary and seems like a way just so my char can be much slower than others, I mean if there are so many stipulations for this clan they should have been posted in the clan info as well as the number of pounds of sand it takes to use these jutsu. Had i known I wouldnt have picked the clan but then again I am a just a member on the site so I will shut the hell up and edit now lol but for the sake of knowledge how much sand does each rank jutsu require in terms of pounds? |
| | | Travis
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Sun 23 May 2010, 10:38 am | |
| No, I just need you to edit how much sand you carry around. THat was just an example. |
| | | Tim
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| Subject: Re: Inagumi, Nobura [Kiri Genin] Sun 23 May 2010, 10:48 am | |
| i did it says 100lbs worth of sand |
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