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Basic Information:

Name: Mazen Kazura
Secondary Title: The Secret Angel
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:
Mazen Kazura [Kiri Chuunin] Raisuke_Bankai

Additional Picture:

Mazen isn't that different from many other Kazura in the clan. His bodily features are Angelic and handsome in many aspects of his being. Facial facial features are mainly handsome, seeing as the rest of his body is mainly slim and muscular, aside from much of the 'too' muscular being. His arms are slim and trimmed, seeming as he's thin-armed. In the fact, his arms are capable of great feats of strength and speeds. His Mid-Torso and Shoulder areas are the mainly much appreciated areas of his body. They are sternly made to resist much of physical harm, due to strong muscular activity and buildup within these areas, although his neck may seem slim, it has a thick layer of tissue that holds his spine and head in firm place. Posture is almost perfect due to having his back straight and well cared for. His legs and calves are toned down and slim, giving also the appearance of a thin individual. There is a symbol of wings along his back, this looks like a circle in the middle with two wings emblems on each end symmetrical to each other. The bottom is a small bar which extends down a small area of his back.

For clothing purposes, Mazen usually prefers some form of Sleeveless shirt, that involves some sort of Feudal Design on the front and/or back. From a red flowering bloom, to a dragon that comes from one side to another, it would be in his best interest to pick something of his tastes. As for his lower half, he loves to wear a pair of jeans that go down below his ankles that hide it from the unwilling cold. As for Equipment purposes, he likes to wear Sheaths for his weapons on his sides or on his back, never on his waist.

Personality: Mazen has a varied personality, based on a lot of differing types of situations. One personality may conflict with another to create an instability in his emotions and may cause a collapse of his well being. He has to keep all of his bodily functions and emotions in top check before he can do anything at all with them. He has varying ways of checking his emotions and functions, based on his extremely potent uses of his chakra manipulation qualities. Without the Clan trait of Actual wings, he was embedded the Tattoo of Winged Growth from Chakra, since the clan's being was formed around such; Which has affected his sense of thought.

In a battle type situation, he will concentrate solely on winning at any cost, even if it includes self sacrifice. His reflexes are based on the type of opponent, whether as small as a child or a giant such as a Titan. If provoked, he may go into a concentrated rage that may cause damage to both sides of the battle. He won't show any hint of Anger, only may emit a dark and/or murderous aura. His face will show one emotionless stare that may seem intimidating, even to any type of high caliber ninja. No part of his movements can cause the sense of Fatigue or Anger, it will only look the same. Unless he's absolutely exhausted, he may show it.

In a basic situation, such as receiving orders or giving them to himself, he may act chilled out and won't do much to aggravate or intimidate anyone that may come in contact with him. He may wander into various places to attempt to calm his never ending boredom, and may just try and pick up a few bits of information before walking to another place. He doesn't have a schedule. He's basically on his own, having the full knowledge of how to survive on his own. His clan's experience in devastation gave him that knowledge.

In a Love Situation, he won't hesitate in revealing too much of his own emotional standards. Although in a careful situation, he may act shy, and try and hide it. It makes him look almost cute with his white hair.
Catch Phrase: N/A

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Kazura. -Divine Angels-
Clan Location: Kumogakure no Sato. - Traveling.
Clan Traits: Angelic Wings, Pure Skin, Perfect Features.
Kekkei Genkai: Bakuhaza. - Blasting Wave. -

The Bakuhaza is a basic Kekkei Genkai that is based upon explosive power. Utilizing two forms of Elemental Release, Katon and Fuuton, a member can condense such power in order to form explosive properties within it. But using this in great amounts, or in too close of range can cause serious injury if not suicide. In a Less basic form of the Kekkei Genkai Description, the Condensing arrays of the Kazura ability can utilize the condensation of certain elemental release chakra, such as Katon and Fuuton. Utilizing the properties of Condensation of chakra, they can use of such to make stuff, to simply, explode upon contact of objects, people, etc, or At will. The amount of chakra, in a fully detailed explanation, would be the amount holding the amount of power per charge of condensation. Read the chart below.

Condensed Fuuton Chakra
Condensing Fuuton Chakra is a basic form of the Kazura's ability to condense such substances. Utilizing a set amount of chakra per condensation, can result in powerful fluxes of wind in one area, if not combined with Katon. These "Pushes" of wind can be caused in many ways.

E Rank: D Rank Push.
D Rank: C Rank Push.
C Rank: B Rank Push.
B Rank: A Rank Push.
A Rank: A Rank Push.
S Rank: S Rank Push.

Condensed Katon Chakra
Condensing Katon Chakra is a more Advanced way of the Kazura's ability to condense such substances. The ability to manipulate the chakra to Condense Katon chakra can create an explosion beneath the fire that is condensed. With enough force of the Condensation, along with Fuuton, can create an explosion with enough power to....You get the rest.

E Rank Chakra: D Rank Burn.
D Rank Chakra: C Rank Burn.
C Rank Chakra: B Rank Burn.
B Rank Chakra: A Rank Burn.
A Rank Chakra: A Rank Burn.
S Rank Chakra: S Rank Burn.

E Rank Combination: D Rank Explosion.
D Rank Combination: C Rank Explosion.
C Rank Combination: B Rank Explosion.
B Rank Combination: A Rank Explosion.
A Rank Combination: S Rank Explosion.
S Rank Combination: S Rank Explosion.

Recharging: Although this is a powerful Kekkei Genkai ability to obtain, the drawbacks are as follows. The Ninja, if using an Explosion or Push above B rank, cannot use any Jutsu, due to a lapse in chakra, above C rank. It will require time for the Chakra to settle itself and be able to be usable again. This will take around a Post to Three, depending on the Rank used. And, for an extra drawback, the Ninja cannot use any Jutsu whatsoever for the next two topics if using the S Rank, since it makes such a huge explosion.

B Rank: One Post.
A Rank: Two Posts.
S Rank: Three posts.
S Rank: Cannot Use Until battle is over. 2 Topic Wait time.

History: The history of the Kazura clan starts with the such, the founder of the clan, Karuno Jazona Kazura, felt the presence of a deep, inner essence with his own chakra, feeling as if it was some explosive power, ready to come out at any time. But attempting this cost at least half of his left wing, blowing up nearly half a boulder the size of a large building. Such devastating power in one being, it was like a trait, and it was. An explosive, dark power. Something of this magnitude needed to be kept on. So, as time went on, Karuno kept discovering ways to perfect the technique of Explosions of Chakra. Burning sensations, dark results on an epic scale, it was nearly impossible to keep down. No matter what it was. So he left his legacy on to let the children of his children figure out a way to perfect all ways of this dark power. Reproducing to make sure, the line kept on.
Clan Details: Open. Must get permission from Owner. RP Sample required.

Rank Information:

Rank: B-Rank Chuunin
Village Affiliation: Getsugakure no Sato Kirigakure no Sato

Special Information:

Character Specialty:
Main: Weaponry -Swords-
Sub: Weaponry -Exotic-
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Katon
Sub: Fuuton
Special Characteristics:

-Larger Chakra Supply. [ 10%]
Due to being within the confines of the Kazura's housing ring, having to train continuously on his chakra reserves; He had to tap into reserves beyond his preferred ability. Attempting to try and surpass his Superior of the clan, he had attempted to try and raise his limits to surpass them. Only his nature to succeed was in check.

-Dark and Murderous Aura
Due to his dark emotions constantly coming through his complexion, he emits this dark and murderous aura in which gives off a tinge of unease to most ninja. This mainly signals that he has high physical ability in battle along with a huge mass of chakra building up. It's mainly because he had trained his body in a way to make sure he was feared.

-Skill in Mechanism Armaments.
Not just having skill in normal and Advanced Kenjutsu, his body is trained in a way to have two Armaments latched onto his arms for a further and more deadly part of battle. Master of his own balance and striking distances, this makes him a worthy adversary for anyone of his rank and one above.

Skill Information:

Weapon Template:

Name: Arm Mechanisms
Quantity: 2 (One on Each Arm)
Rank: C
Appearance: The Mechanisms of the Armaments is a basic layout: The main attraction of the thing is the two spikes within each of the containers at the end, in which the back of the wrist is latched onto. Upon a certain pull of a level with the thumb upon each, the two spikes In each holder is released into the air. It can be pulled back with a secondary pull of the level, but is usually held within it until a right moment. Enough momentum can release the spikes within it. Such as punching someone in the face and the spikes releasing to put in a fatal blow. They are latched by a steel induced carbon fiber braces in which, actually, do not chap the skin. They latch hard onto each of the arms, but enough room where the circulation does not halt. The Material of the things are made of a density steel in which is very hard to break, or crack.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Mazen wields these mechanisms on both of his arms in which can be used for speedy combat that doesn't, or may include a blade. And with such fast paced mechanisms on his arms, they can easily push through even a high level opponent, giving the right opening and base for the thing.
Origin: Made from the greatness of the Top Amizaru mechanist and the steel in which they can mend with their being, the Armaments were created just for Mazen. Upon being measured for the braces and the size of them, they were made purely for combat, and not for usual things to do, such as menial chores.

x02 Summoning Scroll
x01 Case for Armaments
x02 Katana
x10 Shuriken
x10 Kunai
x02 Reels of Iron thread.
X02 Exploding tags.

Jutsu


Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.



Background Information

History:

Birth Arc
Being born upon the blue moon in the dead of night, his entrance into the world being healthy and well grown, a normal child for the Kazura clan. Upon through his first two years of life, it was either of two things, being cared for or being mentally tested in his pure youth. Which didn't work for someone of his age. Day after day he would do the usual routine until the age of Five, in which his basic training came to be a daily part of his life. Every other hour of the daylight hours, he would train on compressing his chakra through his body, but did fail a few times over on this. On other sessions, the five year old trained on using a sword, having proceeded his age expectations on that.

Next was fast-paced fighting at the age of six. Having small daggers in his hands, he was instructed to attack small targets in a certain amount of time, if not less. He did in fact do of such, having great marks in the tests. Although he was young, his skill in combat was exceptional, even for a halfbreed Kazura. He never knew his father, or where he was, he might of died when he couldn't remember anything or when he was still inside of his mother's stomach.


Childhood Arc
Upon finishing his basic courses, his childhood finally began at age Six, having only two years to enjoy it before the Academy. Daily routines were always met with his teacher upon actually doing them, having cut down nearly five trees at such a young age. All he could say for the trees were, 'Free Firewood' with a simple chuckle. Much of the couple years he had gone through as a young child was quickly come by because of his constant training he was instructed to do every day, eery other hour. H didn't have time to make friends, nor the time to do much else. After a couple more days of the stuff, it wouldn't be too long before her was of age to go to the Academy, at Age Eight.

Academy Arc
At the first day of the Academy, it was a joyous time for him, able to make friends for the first time in ever. Meeting some new people every so often in his time as an Academy Student, he was built up with Schoolwork and the also need to train even more. Power was increasing, even with the high marks he was getting. Classes were easy to him, battle practices and aim markers were particularly the cause for his ease. Many of times his white hair was the cause to a lot of screams in the school yard, due to girls having a certain liking to it. He didn't particularly like having fan girls, but it was school, can't do anything about it.

Every so often the tests were a bit difficult, but got the grade for them. After the Academy everyday, he practiced with his daggers, trying to perfect some sort of talent in which he had for them. When he wasn't practicing with daggers, he was using a Katana nearly as tall as he was. Failing at actually handling it properly, he accidentally cut something too much and caused it to fall hard. He was in trouble because of that and wasn't allowed to train with a Katana for a good few weeks. During the Academy, he was allowed to do the normal stuff, even some of the advanced, but couldn't do anything with a Katana for a long time.

After the grounding was over, he was trying to make up for the time with the Katana practices, testing himself on trees instead of buildings. With a few styles of hitting things with it, he was starting back on daggers, then back to Katana, and so forth. Unfortunately, he made Firewood with his practices in the middle of summer, and had to haul back his training with a couple of his friends. Exercise was nice with him. Except when he had to go away to a Kazura Military training area just when he Graduated and became a Genin.

Boot Camp
A Kazura Military Training Camp wasn't a walk in the park, especially for a Ten year old Mazen. Being given certain duties on camp, he was made tired every time he went to sleep. Routines were harsh, he couldn't leave camp unless there was an emergency. The Annihilation of the Kazura didn't help his cause, leaving barely anyone left besides the ones that ran the camp. It left him feeling a bit down, yet didn't affect his duty as a Kazura warrior. Day after day, everything was the same, feeling like a rut. Even if he did make one, he'd have to make sure it was filled in. Daily Training and harsh conditions made his aging body a bit more toned. A couple years have passed since day one, Twelve years old and already a Corporal in the Kazura Military. This wasn't like a normal set of Shinobi, the Kazura military was a highly skilled and elite set of Ninja warriors who are trained at a young age to make sure they were ready for the world.

Days were the same to him, having to clean the Latrines until they were spotless, almost being sick from the smell. Out in the wild of the forest, hot climate of the jungle, out on a large area in the sea. The things differed, but the bathrooms didn't. He had to take a shower every so often to try and wipe the smell off of him, but his resistance to smell was getting better at the least. Days passed and days passed, his work at the Camp was almost done with. He had until he was age fifteen until he could be released.

Upon such an age, he was a strong, hating of cleaning bathrooms fifteen year old elite Shinobi. And was released from Duty at the Kazura Camp.

Moved to Yuki
Since Konoha wasn't a main option for him, he wanted somewhere where some harsh conditions were good for him. Moving to Yukigakure no Sato as an Elite Genin would be easy for him, since the Chuunin exams were right around the corner. A day and a half in fact. Upon entering into the ranks of Kiri, he was able to take the Chuunin exams by himself. Unorthodox maybe but it was the only way he could take the exams in such a short time for being there.

Upon the first task of the Exams, he took a complicated test, in which he didn't know half the answers. He couldn't really cheat in the condition he was in, Genjutsu, Ninjutsu, he didn't know squat about. Guessing on a few of them, having to make back to his harsh training, he had to think of a few stupid things. And upon the end of the test, he passed by one point. He kept quiet through the testing area, until he got to the secondary test. A scroll test, the usual kind of thing, he saw his cousin take it, and could take it himself finally. Having a Heaven Scroll in his possession, he had to wait until the thing started before he could do much else.

Upon the Start of the second test, a fast-paced victory came to him from two other teams falling prey to his powerful Weaponry and Kenjutsu style tactics. He had an Extra Earth scroll. Putting It where another team could get it, he just took himself to the middle of the testing area, and to relax until the test was over two days from then. It was too easy for him, none of the other ninja were as disciplined and hardcore trained as he was, not one bit.

The final part of the testing was more difficult for him, having to be pitched against other ninja of his skill, narrowly defeating his opponents with so much time to spare. They had skill he could admit, but at the final battle of the test, he quickly became the rank of Chuunin, as he had hoped to be.

Time Skip

At the end of hell in which he was known to have, Many years have passed since he was Chuunin, never hoping to pass the Jonin exams until he was of an age in which he could. He didn't want attention being drawn to him, maybe at a certain age he could do it and no one could care. But daily life around Kirigakure no Sato was hell boring to him, even with barely a thing to do. The village went through Kage like he went through bread at home. Having a little Chuunin-style home made it all so nice. He rarely got orders to do anything, so it would be nice.

RP Sample: His left palm came upwards to brush back his snow white hair, a light yawn coming through his pale lips while his crimson hues stared outwards into the glory of the Yukigakure area, the snow drifting downwards from the white clouds all above him. Ah how he admired such beauty of nature, his right hand holding down on the wooden structure of the roof below him, a hot cup of cocoa on a level tray beside him. A cold day, as usual, here in Yuki, and yet Mazen had yet to do anything. He was a mere Chuunin, eagerly waiting for the Jonin exams to come forth to allow him a ranking of Jonin. His slim being, wearing just a vest that covered his torso, not his arms. It held more room for movement, a light yawn coming through his pale lips upon just leaning back upon the area in which he was at, being careful of his Cocoa. Something told him something was going on, due to random noises out in the distance, yet only when a few other people came before him with cloaks upon them. It irritated him to have people before him, invade his home for no reason, but it didn't matter, a wrong move and he was done for.

"What do you want?"

"Yuki's under attack."

"And?"

"W-what?"

Within a few moments of time, while they all were baffled at his response, his being was trailing down slowly to the ground, his chakra wings floating for a moment before vanishing slowly. They looked back at him before their bodies were split into five pieces each, his blade neatly tucked into the sheath into his side, blood seeping down the side to drip down onto the frozen ground. It quickly coagulated down enough to just make him let off another sigh, staring back at the village of Yuki to see the smoke. He didn't particularly care in the least, he just wanted to get this over with. But seeing a blood stained paper fall from one of the parts of the people he killed, he tilted his head at the note, reading it over by the couple lines that were written on it from the distance. 'Something something, kill all that look suspicious, something something, code red.' He thought within his head a few times over. Man this guy had bad handwriting. He only shook his head enough to start to step up to the roof slowly past the bloody messes, dull eyes showing while his lids were halfway down over them. He took a grip of his cocoa and took a small sip, and then just another few to finish it off. Setting it gently back down along the tray that was previous holding it, he just started off towards Yuki, intent on trying to get this over with as quickly as possible so he could relax once more.


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PostSubject: Re: Mazen Kazura [Kiri Chuunin] Mazen Kazura [Kiri Chuunin] EmptyWed 10 Nov 2010, 8:18 pm

Mechanisms template isnt finished, and you have no RP sample. The app isnt done.
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Bumpification.
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PostSubject: Re: Mazen Kazura [Kiri Chuunin] Mazen Kazura [Kiri Chuunin] EmptyTue 16 Nov 2010, 1:49 pm

According to the Available Ranks topic, Kiri Chuunin is full. However, I'm it might be wrong so you might want to talk to Adam about it before I start modding.
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Awww...

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The spot is full because Zane is occupying it. Approval has been given. Z, if you have any doubts regarding ranks, have a look at approved applications and completed ones. Smile
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Just making sure.

You need to elaborate on your weaponry specialty and fix your kenjutsu specialty (see weapon rules).

Also, you don't have any jutsu?
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I suppose I could put in the basics. >> But other than that. No.
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You have a messed up underline code on you bolded jutsu thing. Besides that this app is fine, so fix it and I'll zapprove.
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