Natsu Hyuga{DONE}

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Name: Natsu Hyuga
Secondary Title:
Age:13

Gender: Male
Appearance:Medium length spiky orange hair. Like all the Hyugas, he has pale skin, and the infamous Byakugan. His eyes have been shown with a gray tint to them. He face is mostly always seem serious. He never had nothing to smile about, so that's his normal face. He doesn't have brushy or too big eyebrows. He doesn't have facial features, just a little scar on his chin. includes a spiked pauldron that covers his left shoulder. He also has small arm-belts adorning his left arm. He has bandages covering his both legs. Black short-pants which cover to a little under his knees.

A red and black cloak is what he's almost always wearing before he's going to battle.

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Personality:
On the surface, Natsu displays an immature sort of personality. He is decidedly stubborn and strong-willed, frequently letting his pettiness and vindictiveness get the better of him. He is somewhat selfish and remarkably self-absorbed, generally acting more out of self-interest, but sometimes he could care for others.
He is largely hostile towards figures of authority and feels little incentive to follow orders with which he disagrees, earning him the distinction of being a loose cannon of sorts, and is also rather quick-tempered, resorting more often to steel-fisted violence rather than calm negotiation to settle disputes. Highly intelligent. When his usual face takes place, he just looks coll and collective which he is.
Almost everytime he's always bored or tired, so he would change everything he is doing to change that state. He would almost always act upon his knowledge of the situation, barely he would rush into dangerous or unknown situations. He would try to talk out it if he's in a hard situation, unless he is sure it won't work.

Catch Phrase:"Money."

Clan Information:
Clan Name: Hyuuga
Clan Location: Konoha
Clan Traits:
The gentle fist - The Gentle Fist style of combat is based on palm strikes and generally aims to damage the body's Chakra Pathway System, thus creating difficulty by inhibiting an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user will forcefully insert a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The chakra can then be used to rupture or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu. Any chakra based substance can be countered/destroyed by using the gentle fist style to force chakra into it. This is done by using the chakra openings in ones hands to shape their own chakra into needles which can cut through chakra itself. It can also be used to attack the opponent's internal organs, to which the chakra pathway system is closely tied. Even the slightest tap from this style can cause major damage, hence the name "gentle fist." Because the chakra pathway system is invisible, the Byakugan is required for this style to be used effectively. Since the Byakugan is unique to the Hyūga clan, it has become their signature style of combat.

*Must have Taijutsu as a specialty, preferably main.

Kekkei Genkai:
The Byakugan is a Dōjutsu Kekkei Genkai, a genetic trait, that is shared amongst the members of the Hyūga Clan. Those that inherit the blood of this clan have almost featureless white eyes. It has two different settings, dormant and activated, both of which take a slightly different appearance from the other form. The normal eye for a Hyuuga clan member differs from a normal human eye. The iris and pupil are barely discernable with both appearing a milky white in color. The pupil itself is larger than a typical humans and it is outlined by a black region. The sclera remains normal except the larger size of the pupil reduces ones ability to view it. Once the eye is fully activated, the hidden iris becomes more apparent. Also when providing blood and chakra for the eyes' bloodline vision, veins will bulge lateral to each eye.

The first ability of the Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra. The second ability is having the ability to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from person to person. This is often determined by both rank and skill. At the genin level it can reach up to 100 meters. At Chunin this increases drastically reaching out to 400 meters. At jounin this goes up even more to 800 meters. A Kage level Hyuuga is capable of seeing up to 2km in all directions. However, the third and one of the greatest uses of the Byakugan is the ability to see chakra, as well as the chakra circulation system inside another's body. It is from this particular ability that they are able to employ their ultimate attack style: Gentle Fist. (see Clan Traits above).

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Chakra Needle Technique
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: After focusing chakra outside the body, the chakra is formed into needles and propelled at the user's target. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used to hit very small targets, such as bees etc. This is also how the user attacks the chakra systems of the body and can destroy substances made of chakra.

Name: Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack. If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.

Name: Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forcibly closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.

Name: Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Hand
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times.

Clan Details: Open

Rank Information:

Rank:Genin
Village Affiliation:Kirigakure

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main:Taijutsu
Sub:Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Earth
Special Characteristics:
He mainly depends on speed and seeing ahead of the oppoenent to make sure to be careful at all times. His endurance also makes him a long lasting ninja. Always carries around a Katana. Has some Kunais, Shurikens, Paper bombs, ninja wire, and demon wing shurikens.

Skill Information:

Name: [The name of your weapon. If the names Japanese please write the english name with it]
Quantity: [The number of this weapon you possess, in total. If you carry a certain amount of your total into each battle, please provide that number as well.]
Rank: [What rank is this weapon E to S]
Appearance: INSERT PICTURE HERE
[What does your weapon look like? a detailed paragragh or more is required. If you have an image please insert it in the area provided.)
Special Abilities/Characteristics:
Origin:

Jutsu Template:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Genjutsu

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Taijutsu

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Earth Jutsus

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Water Jutsus

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Background Information

History: Academy Arc:Brother where are you going now? You've been gone for a week and once you arrive you leaving right away. Is just like you ever since our parents died during a rebellion. If you are going somewhere take me with you. His older brother stopped unpacking and looked up and back around to him. You know if I could, i would take you with me, but you know this is a dangerous mission, is ranked S rank. Listen once you get strong as me you can go on all sort of difficult missions like myself, but until then just behave. All depressed he awaited day after day for his brother's return, he didn't know when he was going to return, but he was sure he was going to come back alive in one piece.

After doing his morning routine and stared outside to see nothing but rain. A strange figured showed up at the front of his house. It was one of his Brother's leaders. After he let him in and he was told about the whole mission and what he brother did, Natsu started feeling awkward. Once he left the house Natsu stayed in his room for hours. After a long day he came to a conclusion to begin his ninja training, first to attend the academy and graduate to a Genin. Like many of his age and who's parents were ninjas, Natsu attended Kirikage's Academy. He was going to do his best as soon as possible to get out of that horrible academy. There he wasn't so great a first failing class.

Watching his classmates pass, he didn't want to be left back to take another long time to become a Genin. Someone who put good attention to him was going to be his future teacher. Every time school got out he didn't just go to the park and fool around like some of the others, just take the path to his house and study more than what he needed. He took more time learning the material and jutsus. Once the exams came he would passed without being nervous. That was the only time he didn't return right away to his house, just...... relax and enjoy the ceremony.

Genin Arc:After his proud moment at the Academy he was put into a squad. There he met his wise sensei. The other two members were Monsu and Deria. Their squad was the one who went on the most mission, completing every mission handed to them. The only time they had to do a mission without their sensei didn't seem that difficult at first, but it rose far from what they imagined. Good thing their sensei was on the way to insure their safety. That's one thing that drives Natsu to train more than anybody else.

Like every Genin squad were to go to the Chunnin Exams if ready. One thing that will make him go smoothly through the exams will be his bloodline. He possesed the Byakugan which had come from his mom's side before she became a missing-nin. His father first married her, but she became a rouge-nin from Konoha, he had married someone else.

Chunnin Arc:

Role-Play Sample:Impatiently Natsu watches through his opponent's eyes the move he was waiting to show. The only thing he could do was prepare for the attack with percussion. As the enemy launches attacks, Natsu dodges them with easy then what he really thought. If you were going to be this easy i would of finish you a long time ago. Ed said while doing handsigns for his favorite jutsu, gathering chakra on his right hand and forming a dark dragon with dark flames that could easily burn anyone.

Too bad for you I'm a water type. He had his own favorite and launched water vortex it straight at Natsu, since this was a mission Natsu had to make less disaster as possible,so each attack colided against each other leaving nothing but mess in their path.to win this round ill need to use some of my other power, Natsu thought to himself and starts looking stranger with eyes appearing almost taking his whole bodyHis powers seemed to have exploded.The enemy's hard breathing went through Natsu's ear over and over again.

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Okay. I'm donez. :O

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First, despite having a picture for your shinobi, you need at least two paragraphs of appearance with it.

Second, need a longer personality. Maybe five or six sentences more.

Third, your last name is 'Kaguya' but you say your in the 'Hyuuga' clan.

Fourth, Kiri Chuunin is closed.

Fifth, all justu need to be in the correct template which should have been in the character template.

Sixth, you need an rp sample.

Seventh,

Quote :: Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

You're missing these basic jutsu.

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okay, edited everything.

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Appearance still needs a few more sentences.

Leaf Whirlwind is Konoha based and since you are Kiri, you may not have it.

Also, some of your jutsu only have a sentence in the description area. All jutsu need at least three sentences even if they are canon techniques.

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There, edited all that.

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Bump. :O

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Almost done. 8]

Natsu wrote:: Name:Earth Release: Wheel of Fortune
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Description:This jutsu is a combination of the Summoning Technique and Earth Release jutsu; the user summons a large amount of rock form a giant canyon to be used for other jutsu. Fudo can channel his chakra into the earth to alter the formation, aiding him in sneak attacks.

If you want that jutsu, you'll need the Summoning Technique -

Quote :: Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.

Natsu wrote:: Name:Earth Release: Rock Trail
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Description:Kakuzu slams his hand on the ground and giant rocks jag the opponent from underneath.

Add a longer description. Like, how large are they? What's the radius of it? That stuff.

Natsu wrote:: Name:Earth Release: Rock Staff
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Description:This jutsu allows the user to take a small chunk of rock and turn it into the shape of a staff. The user can then use it as a weapon or throw it with pinpoint accuracy at their opponent. A variation of this jutsu allows the user to create several staffs and launch them at the target, but with less accuracy.

How large is the staff? Should the user use the variation of the jutsu to make multiple staffs, how many would be formed?

Natsu wrote:: Name:Earth Release: Hidden Among Rocks Technique
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Description:It allows the user to blend into rocks and then move in and out of other rocks.

If you go to Leafninja and search up 'Rock Hiding Technique' they have a larger and more accurate description you can use.

Natsu wrote:: Name:Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element;Earth
Description:This jutsu can transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud to throw them off balance.

A longer description is needed. Like, how large is the radius of this move?

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More on appearance

You have water jutsu yet you information says you have lightning, which is it?

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