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aztec4789
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PostSubject: Ryu Kendamono Ryu Kendamono EmptyTue 25 May 2010, 4:34 am

Basic Information:


Name: Ryu Kendamono

Secondary Title: Red Dragon

Age: 15

Gender:
male
Physical Appearance:height :5`3 weight :120 pounds.he has grey eyes brown hair a tatooo his right arm .white shirt and brown pants.and a rope all around him.Ryu Kendamono 318-9313

Clan Information:

clan name:kendamono

clan location:unknown

clan traits:a tatto

keikkei genkai:the dragon beast inside

secret clan jutsu: dragon fire strike

history:
Ryu Kendamono Fire10

clan details:closed because ryu is the last of his clan

Rank Information:

Rank:unknown

village afflications:he dosn`t have a village he`s a outlaw and belongs to a group called Infinite

Special Information:

character speciality:

main:his rope on fire

sub:sending fire in wind waves

Elemental Affinity:

main:fire

sub:wind

special characteristicts:only person in his clan to master his dragon beast

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:


Quote:flames bring death

name:Red Dragon

Type:ninjutsu

Rank:B

Element:fire

Description:It turns kendamono into a red dragon by taking his rope`` aka`` and wraping it around himself then doing the jutsu

Weapon Template:

Name:aka , red

Quantity:1

Rank:G

Apperance:

Ryu Kendamono Red_ro10

Special Abilites:it can go on fire and if he want`s to turn into a dragon he wraps it around himself put`s it on fire and does the ninjutsu

Origin:His freind on ``Infinite `` made it for him to control his dragon beast

Background Information:

History:Ryu was a orphan because his clan was at war so his parents casted him away.A man and woman the last of the kendamono.The man:Hayate kendamono The woman:Hinate kendamono raised him.They lived in konoha intill Ryu was eight and a konoha ninja found out.Ryu watched his parent`s get executed then the dragon unleashed inside him. At the time he could not control the dragon and destroyed most of konoha.Then he ran away from Konoha. .He met 2 boy outlaws ken kazuki and Zen Zannymaru.They formed a group called infinite and all of them want to destroy Konoha.Ryu trained intill he was 15 and now the Infinite want to strike Konoha.
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WeaponX
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PostSubject: Re: Ryu Kendamono Ryu Kendamono EmptyWed 26 May 2010, 2:57 pm

is this WiP? if so please put it in the title.

please fix your bolding, as it is for convenience of the moderators.

Use the coding as follows

Code:
[center][size=24][b][u]Basic Information:[/u][/b][/size][/center]

[b]Name:[/b]
Your Characters Full Name. It should be Japanese, and not English.
[b]Secondary Title:[/b]
Do your friends call you anything specific, or are you known and feared by many with a certain name?
[b]Age:[/b]
How old is your character?
[b]Gender:[/b]
Are you male or female?
[b]Physical Appearance:[/b]
[center][table border="1"][tr][td]INSERT CHARACTER IMAGE HERE[/tr][/td][/table][/center] Explain in detail here what your character looks like. It should include such things as height, weight, skin colour, eye colour, hair colour, any distingushing features, and what they wear. The Physical Appearance of your character should be around 2 paragraphs in length.
[b]Personality:[/b]
What is your character like, how do they act? You should include such things as likes and dislikes and your characters philosphy. This should be detailed being around 2 paragraphs in length.
[b]Catch Phrase:[/b]
Does your character have any catch phrases? Optional.

[center][size=24][b][u]Clan Information:[/u][/b][/size][/center]

[b]Clan Name:[/b]
What is the name of your clan?
[b]Clan Location:[/b]
What village or area is your clan located in?
[b]Clan Traits:[/b]
Any special traits that your clan possesses that are not Kekkei Genkai related e.g Yamanaka's blond hair, Uchiha natural affinity with the Fire element.
[b]Kekkei Genkai:[/b]
Does your clan possess a bloodline limit e.g Hyuuga's Byakugan, Uchiha's Sharingan.
[b]Secret Clan Jutsu:[/b]
Jutsu that can only be used by your clan.
[b]History:[/b]
[center][table border="1"][tr][td]INSERT SYMBOL HERE[/tr][/td][/table][/center]
The history of your Clan. Were did they originate? How did they come to be? This part should be very descriptive and at least two paragraphs. Also include a Clan Symbol in space provided if your clan has one.
[b]Clan Details:[/b]
State whether your clan is open to the site, or is closed for your use only. A simple 'Open' or 'Closed' will do.

[center][size=24][b][u]Rank Information:[/u][/b][/size][/center]

[b]Rank:[/b]
What is the current rank of your character.
[b]Village Affiliation:[/b]
What village your character belongs to, or used to belong to.

[center][size=24][b][u]Special Information:[/u][/b][/size][/center]

[b]Character Speciality:[/b]
You may pick 2 skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical, Puppetry, Fuuinjutsu
[b]Main:[/b]
[b]Sub:[/b]
[b]Elemental Affinity:[/b]
What element(s) your character possesses, no more than two
[b]Main:[/b]
[b]Sub:[/b]
[b]Special Characteristics:[/b]
What things are special about your character and set them apart from others, that isn't related to a Kekkei Genkai or clan trait.

[center][size=24][b][u]Skill Information:[/u][/b][/size]
[size=10]Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.[/size][/center]

[b]Jutsu Template:[/b]

[quote][b]Name:[/b] [Name of jutsu]
[b]Type:[/b] [Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Puppetry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu]
[b]Rank:[/b] [E,D,C,B,A,S]
[b]Element:[/b] [Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire]
[b]Description:[/b] [A well detailed description of your jutsu. Remember to add in such fetures as it's range, chakra cost, drawbacks, etc to give an overall view of the technique.]
[b]Link:[/b] [When making new jutsus you must train them. Read the Training Page in rules. post the link here for admins to check]
[b]Medical use/Bastardized use:[/b] [Only add this if the technique is a Medical jutsu. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.][/quote]

[b]Weapon Template:[/b]

[quote][b]Name:[/b] [The name of your weapon. If the names Japanese please write the english name with it]
[b]Quantity:[/b] [The number of this weapon you possess, in total. If you carry a certain amount of your total into each battle, please provide that number as well.]
[b]Rank:[/b] [What rank is this weapon E to S]
[b]Appearance:[/b] [table border="1"][tr][td]INSERT PICTURE HERE[/tr][/td][/table] [What does your weapon look like? a detailed paragragh or more is required. If you have an image please insert it in the area provided.)
[b]Special Abilities/Characteristics:[/b] [Can your weapon do anything special? Does it have any unique characteristics? if not just write N/A.]
[b]Origin:[/b] [Did you make it? Where did it come from? Why did you make it? This also requires a detailed description.][/quote]

[b]Item Template:[/b]

[quote][b]Name:[/b] [What is the name of your item callled?]
[b]Rank:[/b] [What is the rank of your Item E to S]
[b]Type:[/b] [This is Medicine, Supplement, Enhancer, or Other.]
[b]Natural Abilities:[/b] [What does your Item do? what are the effects? how long does it last?][/quote]

[center][size=24][b][u]Background Information[/u][/b][/size][/center]

[b]History:[/b]
This is what has happened in your life. Please seperate into arcs such as 'Birth Arc', 'Academy Arc', etc.  Even if your history is not known by your character, tell us anyway. 'Unknown' is not an option.

[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]
How do you RP? Please give us your normal, because we will hold you to the quality you show.

You will need more in looks, personality, history and clan.
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Adam
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PostSubject: Re: Ryu Kendamono Ryu Kendamono EmptyWed 26 May 2010, 3:07 pm

I'd suspect this is a WiP, but this needs to be majorly fixed before you continue. Your clans Kekkei Genkai makes no sense whatever, the dragon beast inside? I suggest you observe and read some other people's clan application to get the vibe about making a clan. You need a lot more detail in almost every field. History, Personality, Appearance, Clan History, Kekkei Genkai Description. You need to add a roleplaying sample and everything else required on our actual application which WeaponX has posted above me, the code for the application. It isn't optional, it's compulsory, sorry it's how you have to set it out. Your Village Affiliation, you cannot be a rogue ninja or apart of a custom organisation, Infinite, because being a rogue/missing ninja isn't yet permitted here on Ultimate Shinobi 2.0, as we need to fill our villages, please check the Available Ranks thread to see what is open where before coming to a conclusion of which village you would like to join, I'd suggest you go for Genin, since you don't seem to show enough skill for a higher rank. You need more jutsu, using the right template too, you need the basic academy jutsu and a decent list with your elements. Your weapon is unacceptable since an object cannot transform into a dragon, semi-realism is required.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryu Kendamono Ryu Kendamono EmptyFri 09 Jul 2010, 1:54 pm

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