Roxas Suterusu

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Basic Information:

Name: Roxas Suterusu
Secondary Title: Hidden Blade of the Mist
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:

Spoiler:

Roxas wears a large thread robe that covers his entire body, excluding the area of his head and the lower portion of his feet. The hooded robe is completely black with a slightly darker tint to it; this is to make sure that he isn't easily seen when trying to hide from an enemy, and a few lines extended down the arms and torso, to meet a rope belt that circles around his waist, slightly tightening the robe, but still gives it movement enough to be ripped off to reveal the clothing that he wears beneath it.

Beneath this hooded robe, which consists of his under-clothing, is a tough sleeveless brown shirt, which is fully padded to avoid harsh damage from physical and melee attacks, which usually comes when fighting taijutsu and weaponry users. This isn't the greatest defense, however, and any skilled shinobi could still deal a fair amount of damage, despite the clothing. Along the abdomen, to the sides, the padding is crinkled and loosened to allow free movement, as to prevent restriction of movement, which the padding would cause if not for this. Below the sleeveless shirt is also a large amount of bandages that cover around his entire upper body; his abdomen, chest, shoulders, as well as his upper and lower back.

Along with his hooded robe and padded under-shirt, Kokaku wears baggy pants that start an inch below his waist, extending downward to a little below four inches above his ankles. Then, around his knee-area, he brandishes a white skull mark, that certainly sticks out against the brown dark-tinted pants. There are also two deep pockets on the two sides of his waist. These two pockets are very deep and open up to hold multiple forms of weaponry. This is not his only means of weaponry, however, and has one pouch to the left of his waist, a strap around his waist, beneath his shirt, that holds it there. This pouch is a match of another, which resides on the back of his waist, both being tan and fairly big enough to hold basic ninja equipment. A small mini pouch is also brandished on the side of his upper calve, this being able to hold a few kunai and explosive tags.

Kokaku has an odd purple streak of face paint across his face, being right above the nose, but still below the eyes. It reaches completely across his face, extending to his two ears. The paint is not very bright, so that it does not stand out in the dark. Besides this streak of paint, there are two smaller claw-shaped streaks extending from the bottom of his right eye, going a centimeter or two below the streak itself. The paint is known as the sign of a great puppeteer, which is why he wears it, for it marks his great skill in puppetry, and warns his enemies to keep their distance.

On his hands, Kokaku wears fingerless black gloves with titanium plates on the back, similar to that of the one seen on his forehead protector, but instead of the leaf symbol, it presents a skull shaped carving, exact to that of the one on his pants leg. These plates are not only for looks however, but are also used to block the blows of swords and other bladed weapons. Kokaku wears black, sturdy, sandals of a rubber-like material, that have been enhanced and compacted to the point where he can jump extremely long distances. This comes in handy when wanting to make a quick movement upward, due to the extreme bounciness of the compacted material. Besides all of his clothing and other wear, he has darkish white spiked hair and blue eyes underneath his shaded glasses.

Around his upper body, below his chest but above his abdomen, Kokaku wears his forehead protector with an extended threading to fit. He never liked the idea of the headband being wrapped around his forehead, so he had decided to place it in this spot instead. The plating on the forehead protector is made of a strong reinforced titanium steel, it's size reaching nearly a foot in width and four inches in height. The clothe itself is a dark brown, far darker than that of his other attire, this being to stand out amongst the other cloth.

Due to his clan's genetic physical appearance, his phenotype, such as his hair and eyes, are exactly like any other member of the Suterusu clan. Roxas has medium length, straight hanging hair of a tinted white color. His eyes, however, are a deep ocean blue color such as the sky, which can pierce the very mind of his enemy; due to his intimidating gaze. Another distinctive part of his looks is that he appears to be around the age of a thirteen year old, but his height being at 5'5", he stands slightly shorter than most of his age.
Personality: When he was only four, Roxas would always smile whenever he was with his mother and he was regularly at her side, holding her hand. Despite crying whenever he lost in karate, he started to smile again as soon as he saw Tenshi, his sister, when she came to pick him up from the dojo. Nowadays, Roxas is a stubborn, short-tempered, occasionally confrontational, spontaneous, determined, outspoken, strong-willed, impulsive young man. Despite being witty and cynical, he is shown to be genuinely compassionate and empathetic about others such as bringing an injured friend flowers or soothing others when they become doubtful. He is also extremely protective of his friends and family. This latter trait is the driving force behind many of his actions.

He attempts to maintain a detached and "cool" image, despite claiming to not care about what other people think about him. For this reason, he generally keeps his face set in an emotionless look, not showing any in depth feelings. However, despite this "uncaring" image he tries to maintain, he becomes extremely shy and uncomfortable around many women and girls, a thing that a high multitude of his friends have teased him for. He is also rather cocky and has been known to taunt and belittle his opponents when fighting. Conversely, he can also go into a state of deep depression when he loses a major battle or lets a friend down. Another thing that highly distinguishes Roxas from anyone else is his extremely analytical way of viewing things; his primary belief is that the bigs things would not exist without the little details, in which he finds focusing on the minor or minuscule details will always bring forth the 'big picture'.

Although his cocky, hot-headed, and spontaneous nature makes him only appear rather dimwitted to more composed and calculating individuals, Roxas is a highly capable analyst when required, and can instinctively catch on to most things much quicker than those around him. His natural yellow hair and rebellious disposition tend to annoy many intimidating figures, who constantly make the unwittingly stupid decision of picking a fight with him. Roxas claims that he does not care about other people's opinions about him (both in regards to his hair and other subjects), and seems to enjoy fighting people. Similarly, he is also a diligent researcher in the art of science, he constantly takes it upon himself to study the basic compounds and make-up of the atomic and molecular structure of solid materials such as steel or earth, this research helping him in the area of earth-bending.

Due to his constant fights with unintelligent passer-byers and his seemingly emotionless look, many students are rather afraid of him. Despite this, he has a warm and kind heart, defiantly looks out for those placed in his charge, and is, to a degree, quite compassionate once he understands another's point of view or opinion. This trait makes him quite likable to children and younger people. As such, he has almost never threatened or raised his voice to his friends . However, he has some trouble with authority and traditional respect, and is often quite rude and disrespectful when talking to those older than himself. Although he does not intend to be rude, he tends to call elders by nicknames such as 'gramps' and inadvertently disrespect high-ranked benders by referring to them by their first name.

Another tendency found in Roxas is his corrective personality. He tends to restate facts in a more technically correct fashion, which has earned him the title by some as a smart-ass or seen as too determined to be correct. This is not the point, however, Roxas's sole reason for correcting people's technical mistakes is to make sure everyone gets the correct idea, and do not believe what isn't necessarily true. At times, Roxas quite prefers a peaceful life of solitude, without the interference of others. He has an extremely improper social life, but is quite the strategic genius in battle; withholding the ability to conjure up plans at a moments notice, when they are most required - based on his own observations.

A few things that Roxas likes very much are fighting, training, science, and girls. Although he onlys fights if absolutely necessary, he enjoys it quite a lot. He is very well known for utilizing science when in any form of combat, this adding to his technique's lethality - because he will often combine them. What also makes him quite a foe to go up against is his creativity and imagination, which drives his high ability to combine his techniques in just the right way that makes them that much stronger. When he isn't training his butt off at the training ground or sparring a friend, he is deeply emerged in research or studying.

In contradicting of his likes, he also has some dislikes; for he is human, and every human dislikes at least something! Some of the things that he hates, which are the primary ones, would most likely be ignorance, arrogance, and bullies.
Catch Phrase: "The way of the shinobi will always hold true to my clan. Stealth is the way of a true ninja."

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Suterusu (Stealth)
Clan Location: Konohagakure no Sato
Clan Traits: Natural primary affinity of fire, along with their white hair and blue eye'd appearance.
Kekkei Genkai: Stealth and Incredible Speed
Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Shroud of Shadows Technique
Type: Clan Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Element: N/A
Description: Shroud of Shadows Technique gradually absorbs small portions of chakra the longer you use it. Using it in short periods of time will not take too much chakra, though how long you can hold it as well as how effective it is, is determined by the skill level of the user performing it. A Genin level shinobi would be able to hold the technique for around 5 consecutive minutes before requiring a 6 minute recharge time; though they are completely invisible, chakra signature and all, if the user gets within 10 meters of them, they will be able to a minor outline of the user's body, though this is very hard to see if the user is hidden in shadows. If the user is Chuunin level, they're able to hold the technique for 10 consecutive minutes and require a recharge time of around 6 minutes. The distance a person must be from them in order to see their outline, however, is shortened to 8 meters. If the user is Jounin level, they can hold it for 15 minutes, recharge time 5 minutes, and distance to see their outline is shortened to 6 meters. If the user is Kage leveled, they are able to hold this technique for 20 consecutive minutes, require a recharge time of about 5 minutes, and the distance to see their outline is shortened to 5 meters.

If the user uses any form of technique utilizing the slightlest bit of chakra, or swift movements, their chakra will be slightly disrupted and this technique will end. Due to the fact that they can not remain invisible in combat, this technique is used strictly for recon and spying. If the user uses any form of technique utilizing the slightlest bit of chakra, or swift movements, their chakra will be slightly disrupted and this technique will end. Due to the fact that they can not remain invisible in combat, this technique is used strictly for recon and spying.

Name: Blasting Strike
Type: Ninjutsu - Clan Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: The user will require at least two seconds of free time to charge up this attack by building up large amounts of chakra throughout keypoints in his body. Once built up, they will then push the chakra in a booming wave outward to repel surrounding objects, people, and creatures. Though, it does not repel any attacks or jutsu.
History: The Suterusu clan is a near ancient clan, actually originating long before most clans these days. This was back when Kirigakure was first being founded by the Uchiha and Senju clans. Around such a time, the clan was extremely weak and not a single member possessed the bloodline that would soon proceed their time. The bloodline that would make their clan the ideal choice for the picking and choosing of Kirigakure's ANBU members and captains. A few decades after the development of the clan, a few members began to possess an odd darkness symbol on their right palm, the mark that they possessed the clan's bloodline. There were very few of these, however, there being only one or two alive at a given time.

Soon enough, it was decreed amongst the clan that only a bloodline holder could become the leader of the clan, this becoming their newest and most sacred tradition. They spoke of it as if the bloodline limit was bestowed upon only the most worthy by the gods. Though, this proved wrong when few leaders showed any expertise in leading their new clan, but the tradition held intact, in fear that the council must face shame if such a tradition be destroyed. Currently, Roxas is next up for the position as Clan Leader, once he becomes a Chuunin of two years he will be eligible.
Clan Details: Open to one or two others.

Rank Information:

Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation: Kirigakure no Sato

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Weaponry - Ranged
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Katon - Fire
Sub: Fuuton - Wind
Special Characteristics: Very high IQ (over 200) and extreme strategic intelligence.

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:

Basic Techniques:
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Type: Weaponry
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Type:[Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fuuton - Wind
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Roxas will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Endan - Fireball
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon - Fire
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Roxas to emit a jet of fire from his mouth.

Name: Fukumi Hari - Hidden Needles
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Fukumi Hari is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Roxas. Roxas is able to call forth needles into his mouth and then spit them at his opponent with great speed and accuracy. He often uses this technique as a form of assassination.

Name: Fuubaku Houjin - Exploding Seal Method Formation
Type: Weaponry
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Fuubaku Houjin is a Ninjutsu technique used by Roxas. Arranging the seals in a square formation, Roxas will draw his target within the array. He can then form handseals to activate the tags and prep them for explosion.

Name: Gamayudan - Toad Oil Projectile
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Gamayudan is a Ninjutsu technique used by Roxas. After gathering oil in his mouth, Roxas can spit the oil at his opponent. The consistency of the oil can then hinder the movement of some materials, such as paper, as well as make the target highly flammable.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon - Fire
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

Name: Goukuuhou - Great Air Cannon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fuuton - Wind
Description: Goukuuhou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing two of the users kunai or two other bladed weapons such as katanas. The user will then form two fair-sized spheres of wind at the tips of each blade before firing them at their opponent or an incoming attack.

Name: Gyorai Shin - Torpedo Needle
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou • Gyorai Shin is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Genin Roxas. Removing nails from his pocket, Roxas will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his chakra, the nails will travel into the ground. Then at his discretion, he can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his target to nail them in place. He can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou - Hitei Mushou is Ninjutsu technique used by Roxas. After forming the needed handseal, Roxas will emit a flying mist of small nails from his mouth. These small nails can travel towards his opponent at quite a distance.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon - Fire
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Hyakkasaihou - One Hundred Blossoming Flowers
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Hana Ninpou • Hyakkasaihou is a Ninjutsu technique used by Roxas. After using his sword to launch flowers into the air, he will turn them into explosive bombs which will rain down on their target.

Name: Juha: Reppushou - Beast Wave: Gale Wind Palm
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fuuton - Wind
Description: Juha: Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique used by Roxas. Using his Wind nature, Roxas will create a burst of charka in shape of a claw from his right hand which can strike out against his enemy. Should the claw lose cohesiveness, the Wind chakra will explode in a concussive blast.

Name: Juha: Shou - Beast Wave: Palm
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fuuton - Wind
Description: Juha: Shou is a Ninjutsu technique used by Roxas. Using his Wind nature, Sora will create a blades of wind which he can launch towards his opponent. Roxas can control the path of the blades and because they are made of Wind chakra, they can easily cut through Kage Bunshin.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Type: Weaponry
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Name: Kagonome - Mesh Cage
Type: Weaponry
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Ninpou: Kagonome is a Ninjutsu technique used by Roxas. Roxas uses wire which is said to be stronger than steel. After forming the needed hand seals, he can manipulate his string into an interlocking dome for protection. This dome can repel most basic Taijutsu attacks. Monju can reshape the wire within the dome as needed, changing it from a defensive structure to a binding string with ease.

Name: Kai - Release
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-A
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon - Fire
Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Steel Katana
Quantity: 2
Rank: C
Appearance:

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A power steel-bladed dual-edged katana used for swift combat. The blade itself is coated in diamond in order to give it a superb cutting effect when up against other swords. The handle, however, is a compacted, unknown, soft material that can easily be gripped by the user. At the top of the handle, a blue ribbon wraps around it, signifying it's value to Roxas himself. The ribbon belonged to his mother and he takes it with him into combat as a good luck charm of sorts.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: The swords were handed down in his clan through those who possess the clan's bloodline. The former owner was his father, whom gave him the katanas when Roxas reached the age of 13.[/quote]

Item Template:

Quote :: Shuriken x 15
Kunai x 5
Senbon x 10
Explosive Tags x 20
Ninja Wire

Background Information

History: Todler Arc:

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Academy Arc:

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Genin Arc:

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Role-Play Sample: The room was near silent, the only sound being the pitter patter of rain outside. Everything seemed motionless at first, not even a bug crept through the small box-like room, until the slightest of movement showed at least a single sign of life. The young jounin known only as Pendo awoke by his own hand, as he always did. He tended to wake himself up at the perfect time, because as he looked at his soundless clock he realized what time it was. Yes, time for the beginning of a very dreary day, as well as a funeral. He pulled his legs over the side of the bed and sat up to prop his head on his arms. As his hands met his face, he relaxed his neck and thought about life, death, and how the two met in battle so many times in the ninja world. Death would often fight off life and claim it's victim, but sometimes when life cared about a certain individual, it would fight even harder to save it from death, but even so - death had it's own feelings as well about who it wished to claim.

He retained his hands to their placements within his pockets before moving to his closet. He pulled the two panels of wood aside to reveal an encampment of clothes of his own choosing. Different kinds were there: suits, heavy training gear, light training gear, armor, robes, all kinds of clothing. He slowly pulled out a black suit hung on a single hanger, and glanced over it before nodding to himself. It was a very nice and formal attire that would slightly fit in, being black, but also stand out from the usual visual of gray. Pendo closed his closet once more before laying the silk suit on his bed. He then proceeded to remove his current clothes that were of casual sleeping attire, before slipping on his pants, shirt, and then suit jacket. When he was completely set he moved to the kitchen to get a bowl of cereal to eat, careful not to spill a single drop on his new silk suit.

"Fellow citizens and shinobi of Konoha. We are gathered here today, to celebrate, honor and remember one of our greatest young hero’s ever to come from not only our village, but our country. Over time, many noble sacrifices have been made to keep our village safe from dangerous enemies and devastating forces. Just over a week ago, Ayumu Peinto, one of Konoha’s young and most skilled ANBU members, died at age seventeen. Ayumu was one of the unique young fighters I had ever met, and surely managed to progress quickly, making co-leader of the black op’s squad by the age of sixteen. Reaching what some of you would call the top, elite of the elite." Orito spoke confidently, and his sorrow could be clearly felt by many in the audience of the funeral. Pendo himself felt the coldness that lingered in the air, the coldness of death.

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Quote :: Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

You're missing these basic jutsu.

Pendo wrote:: Name: Soushuuha - Manipulate Advancing Blades
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Soushuuha is a Ninjutsu technique used by the leaf shinobi Roixas. Using this technique, he will make multiple kunai hover in mid-air in front of him. Once ready, he will launch the kunai in the form of a thick torrental attack.

It was agreed with the admins and mods that this is actually more of a Puppetry technique, despite what LeafNinja says.

Pendo wrote:

Name: Steel Katana
Quantity: 2
Rank: C
Appearance:

INSERT PICTURE HERE

A power steel-bladed dual-edged katana used for swift combat. The blade itself is coated in diamond in order to give it a superb cutting effect when up against other swords. The handle, however, is a compacted, unknown, soft material that can easily be gripped by the user. At the top of the handle, a blue ribbon wraps around it, signifying it's value to Roxas himself. The ribbon belonged to his mother and he takes it with him into combat as a good luck charm of sorts.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Roxas can utilize wind and fire techniques by simply slashing or making a similar motion with the katana.
Origin: The swords were handed down in his clan through those who possess the clan's bloodline. The former owner was his father, whom gave him the katanas when Roxas reached the age of 13.

Chakra conductive weapons are at least 'B' ranked.

Pendo wrote:: Role-Play Sample: The room was near silent, the only sound being the pitter patter of rain outside. Everything seemed motionless at first, not even a bug crept through the small box-like room, until the slightest of movement showed at least a single sign of life. The young jounin known only as Pendo awoke by his own hand, as he always did. He tended to wake himself up at the perfect time, because as he looked at his soundless clock he realized what time it was. Yes, time for the beginning of a very dreary day, as well as a funeral. He pulled his legs over the side of the bed and sat up to prop his head on his arms. As his hands met his face, he relaxed his neck and thought about life, death, and how the two met in battle so many times in the ninja world. Death would often fight off life and claim it's victim, but sometimes when life cared about a certain individual, it would fight even harder to save it from death, but even so - death had it's own feelings as well about who it wished to claim.

It was a fairly good analogy, Pendo thought it was anyway. It fit well, and he knew that the day that Ayumu had died, there must've been a tremendous clash between the two forces of life and death. Both wanting to save or claim a common victim. Pendo was sure that death was reluctant to take Ayumu's opponent, but even something as dark and sinister as death lived by a set of rules that it must follow. The rain began to grow much louder as the sound thickened into a thumping on his roof. He would be required to attend the funeral, not that he would've attended it anyway, but he had inquired the idea of everyone being punctual and he would not be the one to displace his own ideas. He wasn't tired though, he never was despite the fact that he attained only four hours of sleep at a time. He did this to save time and to be ready if anything new comes up.

He retained his hands to their placements within his pockets before moving to his closet. He pulled the two panels of wood aside to reveal an encampment of clothes of his own choosing. Different kinds were there: suits, heavy training gear, light training gear, armor, robes, all kinds of clothing. He slowly pulled out a black suit hung on a single hanger, and glanced over it before nodding to himself. It was a very nice and formal attire that would slightly fit in, being black, but also stand out from the usual visual of gray. Pendo closed his closet once more before laying the silk suit on his bed. He then proceeded to remove his current clothes that were of casual sleeping attire, before slipping on his pants, shirt, and then suit jacket. When he was completely set he moved to the kitchen to get a bowl of cereal to eat, careful not to spill a single drop on his new silk suit.

After finishing his breakfast he placed the bowl and spoon in the sink, noting to wash the dishes when he returned from this important event. He sighed, looking out his window into the wet darkness beyond the paned glass window. His eye wandered back to his hand which had began to shake, clenching to the counter as if for dear life. Another important life lost in Konoha...Someone who had killed one to save a thousand. Pendo felt a large pang of guilt that he hadn't been there to help, he could've done something, something to have stopped the tragedy that sat in the corner of everyone's mind, that was even unnoticed in the minds of some. How could he just sit here in his nice suit, with his nice cereal, and yet not feel the pain that the young ANBU leader had felt?

Pendo's mind whirled as it processed it all, he had always thought that Konoha wasn't at war when they were, at war with missing ninja...with Akatsuki. Both were a grand and monstrous threat to the currently sorrowful village. Remorse and sadness lingered around him, as if it were the very oxygen he was breathing in. Every second, he realized, was just as important as the one before it. Pendo once again let out a sigh, as he released his now whitening grip on the counter. He turned to face the western wall of the kitchen before walking out the side door that led into the alley way. It was a good exit because it led out into a clear path, where there were no villagers or anyone else in the way. The rain felt gently down, taking the risk of getting close to the master of water, but seemed to bounce off of thin air as it came within a centimeter of him. He was repelling the water from his suit so that it would not get soaked.

He walked down the cement-paved area with a perfect execution of steps that showed his skill and swiftness with each strident step. Any on-lookers would never even think about coming too close at first glance, but he also had a hint of humbleness to his look, his face was only slightly stern but also kind and comforting. Pendo enjoyed the rain though, and if he weren't wearing such an ancient family heirloom he would've let it fall freely upon his skin, and even drench his clothes. Soon, within only seconds, the large-scale funeral came into view. Although only one person had died, nearly the entire village had taken time from their daily tasks to accompany each other in this dark hour. The young jounin silently took a seat in the front row to listen to the wise words of the Hokage.

"Fellow citizens and shinobi of Konoha. We are gathered here today, to celebrate, honor and remember one of our greatest young hero’s ever to come from not only our village, but our country. Over time, many noble sacrifices have been made to keep our village safe from dangerous enemies and devastating forces. Just over a week ago, Ayumu Peinto, one of Konoha’s young and most skilled ANBU members, died at age seventeen. Ayumu was one of the unique young fighters I had ever met, and surely managed to progress quickly, making co-leader of the black op’s squad by the age of sixteen. Reaching what some of you would call the top, elite of the elite." Orito spoke confidently, and his sorrow could be clearly felt by many in the audience of the funeral. Pendo himself felt the coldness that lingered in the air, the coldness of death.

The Hokage was only silent for a brief moment before once again speaking. "This hero, died, to ensure we could all continue to live peacefully and with help from his partner, he managed to kill the one of the most dangerous figures ever too oppose Konoha. Unfortunately, this man, managed to get the best of Ayumu and eventually defeat him, bringing him to an early death. But his sacrifice was one that will never be forgotten and therefore I hope you all can join me in a one minute’s silence, not only to honor Ayumu, but all who have had made the ultimate sacrifice to protect us and make sure we can live in peace" those were the final words spoken before a long silence shrouded the area. Everyone, including Pendo, dipped their heads in silence. His eyes were closed for the seemingly-eternal moment before they once again peeled open at the sound of a new voice.

A few tears escaped Pendo's eyes, streaming gently down his cheeks as Ayumu's partner began yet another speech. "Ayumu Peinto was my co-ANBU leader, a fellow konoha shinobi but furthermore, my best friend. I stuck by him until his ast moments, fighting the former Akatsuki Leader and Ayumu destroying him; however to a cost. Ayumu also fell in the battle and i would give anything to trade places of our fates. I cannot describe what I saw, nor what I felt as I watched him fall prey to the unavoidable fate. As you know I am the leader of the ANBU and I am not the leader because of public speaking. So I apologise for being so short with my speech, but he was truly the closest thing I had to my real brother, He truly was the closest thing I had. And all I can say is that I know he is at peace and i know that he is looking down, on all of us. So as Ayumu said in his final moments; Long...Live...Konoha." Pendo listened intently, his mind and thoughts tending to every word as if he were on a remote island, and the words were his only sources of food.

He continued to sit in silence as the speeches ended. Nothing else mattered to the Konoha shinobi at the moment. He was only focused on the hopes that the young ANBU leader had made safe-passage to a happy eternity in the spirit world. Even after everyone had left, and Pendo was left alone in the dim area, he sat there in silence. Ignoring everything else that went on, but simply focusing on one thing. That one hope alone combined with the hundreds of others that sat in the hearts of the villagers of Konoha would swade destiny into allowing the ninja safe-passage, and hopefully it worked like that. With one last glance at the black coffin, Pendo slowly left the area as the coffin would now be buried since the funeral was officially over. Although there was a death in Konoha, the great village would continue to live as mighty and strong as it always had for decades prior to today...

Your rp sample is exactly 1645 words long. If you don't plan on rping at least 1450-1600 words, then you need to greatly decrease the size of your rp sample.

Also, you need a main and sub for Weaponry. Example -

Weaponry. [Main; Ranged. Sub; Swords.]

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Thank you for taking the time to check my application. I've fixed the errors you stated and shortened my RP Sample to what will probably be more of my average posting length.

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Bumpers?

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Waiting on clan. When that gets edited and approved Ill give it a thorough look over. Of course, that doesnt stop other staff from going over it but I like doing everything at once

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Thank you, just let me get my other clan approved.

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