Nachirou Akantor
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| ![Kinzoku Clan [Done] Image-39](https://2img.net/h/i1250.photobucket.com/albums/hh522/SIither/Mobile%20Uploads/image-39.jpg) Kinzoku Clan [金属]Location: Konoha Signature Traits: All members of the Kinzoku has white hair, They also have light green eyes or light blue eyes.
- If user picks Nin/Fuin gets a +1 Combat Base Boost
-If user picks Wean/Fuin gets a +1 Social Base Boost
-If user picks Kugu/Fuin gets a +1 Skill Base Boost
Kekkei Genkai: The Steel Release (鋼遁, Kōton; Viz "Steel Style") is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that can be used to make one's body virtually indestructible by turning it into black steel. This advanced nature kekkei genkai is made up of Fuuton and Doton to creat Kōton. To date, this form of nature manipulation has only been used by the Kinzoku Clan. History: The Kinzoku clan was a group of people back 150 year ago that could manipulate the elements of wind and earth, Too creat and manipulate a new element created in the progress is was call steel release also known as kōton. This clan was a great clan all types of legends were born within this clan, like ninjas that posses puppets of steel, ninjas that can seal with steel, people that use there ninjutsu to make even a Kunai as deadly as a katana or even worser. This clan was manly part of Iwagakure, Kumogakure and Konohagakure this three nations fought for possession of the remaining members alive at the time for the ownership of the clan which village truly wanted to hold the power of steel using ninjas. As years fought and Konoha won the right for the members of Kinzoku and the clan to live an fight for them. All members accepted this deal and starte living within Konoha. This clan has member has decreased for years now and only a few remain alive till this era. Clan Jutsu: - Spoiler:
Name: Shape shift Technique
Rank: D Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 Meters
Element: Steel Release
Description: The user can activate this technique by performing his hand signs. After that progress the user releases chakra to the weapon his/her holds Kunai, Shuriken, Kanata, Sword, ect. After that the user can manipulate the weapon at any given time he can toss it and change its form he can make a Kunai turn to a Katana.
Chakra Cost: 5 Cost
Name: Alloy Drill
Rank: C Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5 Meters
Element: Steel Release
Description: After weaving the needed hand signals, the user manipulates steel chakra to form a complex drill that overs their arm from elbow to finger and a short distance beyond. The drill has different parts that spin at different speeds and in different revolutions. This enables the drill to deal progressive and severe damage upon contact. It can also break an opponent's guard, The drill can be left not spinning to use a simple spear.
Chakra Cost: 15 Cost
Name: Spears Impact
Rank: C Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5 Meters
Element: Steel Release
Description: The user applies shape transformation to a basic steel structure, creating spears. These spears are capable of piercing through the human body, however seem to require a force his chakra for thrust.
Chakra Cost:
Name: Steel Chakra Bullets
Rank: C Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 Meters
Element: Steel Release
Description: By this technique the user can fire bullets from his mouth with great speed faster than an actual bullet. The user mastered this technique and can fire bullets from any chakra point in his body. The user can shot 10 bullets at a time, as each bullet carries chakra which hurts more than real bullets.
Chakra Cost: 15 Cost
Name: Double Bind Technique
Rank: C Rank
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: 5 Meters
Element: None
Description: This technique is one of the practical applications of sealing techniques that Tenmei has created. It allows the user to bind two areas of the opponents body from moving. This technique can be broken by either disrupting your chakra flow similar to a genjutsu or by purely overpowering it by force.
Chakra Cost: 15 Cost
Name: Transcription Seal
Rank: C Rank
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: 5 Meters
Element: None
Description: Transcription Seal (転写封印,Tensha Fūin) is a technique that has the ability to seal a technique of the user's arsenal within a designated Host or object. Upon being sealed, the technique is typically, involuntarily activated whenever the Host sees the intended target; which is predetermined by the user at the moment of sealing. While often being used involuntarily, a skilled user is able to activate it a will.
Chakra Cost: 15 Cost
Name: Paralysis Seal
Rank: C Rank
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: 10 Meters
Element: None
Description: The user writes a seal on a scroll, or something comparable to a scroll, but the seal itself is a trap. As soon as a person looks upon this seal, the technique activates and sends the target into paralysis. This technique's weakness is that the paralysis can only hold for a short period of time and so long as the target is looking at the seal; If the seal is removed from the target's line of sigh, then the paralysis is broken; If a certain amount of time passes, the seal itself will collapse and release the target.
Chakra Cost: 15 Cost
Name: Steel Guardian
Rank: S Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 Meters
Element: Steel Release
Description: This technique was created by Haru Kinzoku and it allows Haru to make a giant metallic structure shaped as a warrior this warrior is created from tons of steels infused with chakra making it very hard. This technique is made mainly for defensive reasons however, Haru uses it for attack after he mastered the technique completely. This warrior can be as big as the user wants and Haru can even apply more steel to it making it even harder. The warrior has different shape and structure which differs according to the user. The user can grow any body part of the warrior at anytime meaning that it can stretch it's arms and any body part the user wishes. It doesn't matter if a part of the warrior was destroyed because the user can grow it back using steel release. The user can create equipments for the warrior to use at anytime for example: (Swords,Shields,Bows and arrows,Scythe,Katana).
Chakra Cost: 60 Cost
Name: Impervious Armour
Rank: S Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Element: Steel Release
Description: This technique allows the user to turn their body into black steel, making that part invulnerable. Hiruko states that blades do not affect him at all due to this ability. This armor is almost indestructible to any attacks making there body anti-Attacks
Chakra Cost: 60 Cost
Name: Body Steel Materialize
Rank: S Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Element: Steel Release
Description: this allows the user to manipulate there own body with there Advanced Element. The user will perform the needed hand signs after this step is done the user will place both hands on the ground, as his body needs one post to fully prepare. After that the user can manipulate steel release within his body as he can turn his arm into a blade at any given time or creat several blades from his body at will making him/her a walking weapon.
Chakra Cost: 60 Cost
Name: Chain Binding Wall
Rank: S Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 Meters
Element: Steel Release
Description: the user will wave several hand sign to activate this technique. Then place his palms on the ground as he will infuse his steel chakra to the ground after that happens from the ground up chain will come from below forming a wall like structure that will protect the user and attack the opponent by chaining them down.
Chakra Cost: 60 Cost
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Reggie Bell-Bottom Jr.
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| | Subject: Re: Kinzoku Clan [Done] Mon 01 Dec 2014, 11:54 pm | |
| All right, let's get started.
-How should I word the first part, the traits with the boosts? If you looked at our special characteristics, you'll see that these are the boosts that comes with the character. So having a specialty giving a +1 one to a particular category won't fly.
-I get that you copied the steel release from the filler movie, but we don't take p. So you're probably going to rewrite most of this because some of the description includes the character from the movie.
-I'm curious as to how the fuuinjutsu techniques has anything to do with your advance element. From what I read from the description, they don't seem to be linked.
-A majority of your jutsu are HIGHER in cost than normal. This is the standard chakra cost on the site.
E Rank: 1 - 2
D Rank: 3 - 4
C Rank: 5 - 9
B Rank: 10 - 15
A Rank: 20 - 25
S Rank: 35 - 39
E Rank: N/A
D Rank: 1 CP Per Post
C Rank: 2 CP Per Post
B Rank: 3 - 4 CP Per Post
A Rank: 5 - 6 CP Per Post
S Rank: 9 - 10 CP Per Post
Plus a good amount of your abilities need chakra to maintain. Like for example, your alloy drill technique. It'll cost 5-9 chakra to activate but it'll need about 2 chakra per post afterwards.
I'll get into a bit more later. |
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lifeanddeath
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| | Subject: Re: Kinzoku Clan [Done] Fri 12 Dec 2014, 2:41 am | |
| Are you still looking to work on this clan ?
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| | Subject: Re: Kinzoku Clan [Done] Mon 29 Dec 2014, 10:08 pm | |
| Archived due to lack of response and/or progress.
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