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Allya
Allya

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PostSubject: Amaya Hikari Char Application.... Amaya Hikari Char Application.... EmptyTue 27 Apr 2010, 9:34 pm

(CORRECTIONS IN PROGRESS)

/...Jutsu used...\
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Caranore
Caranore

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PostSubject: Re: Amaya Hikari Char Application.... Amaya Hikari Char Application.... EmptyTue 27 Apr 2010, 9:50 pm

https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/character-applications-f11/character-creation-guide-t158.htm

I would strongly advise reading this and the actualy template before posting n the character application section.
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Allya
Allya

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PostSubject: Re: Amaya Hikari Char Application.... Amaya Hikari Char Application.... EmptyWed 28 Apr 2010, 4:04 pm

I've read over the guide about oh say... 12 times now? I don't see whats wrong with my applications. It might help not to be so vague and just tell me what I did wrong.
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Caranore
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PostSubject: Re: Amaya Hikari Char Application.... Amaya Hikari Char Application.... EmptyWed 28 Apr 2010, 5:01 pm

Did you look at the character creation guide template?, Because all this is, according to that, is your RP sample. Theres no name, age, cvillage affiliation or rank, your jutsu arent on here, no history, clan, etc. The guide goes over how to utilize the template and gives examples. You have nothing beyond RP/history from that guide.
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Allya
Allya

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PostSubject: Re: Amaya Hikari Char Application.... Amaya Hikari Char Application.... EmptyWed 28 Apr 2010, 9:22 pm

SHOOT SORRY!!!! NOT FINISHED T_________T'' Argh...Sorry Caranore I forget to enter everything else...
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Travis
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PostSubject: Re: Amaya Hikari Char Application.... Amaya Hikari Char Application.... EmptyWed 28 Apr 2010, 11:05 pm

Fix your coding, or please add the coding, it helps greatly for the sections.

Break up your looks and personality, no one likes to read a wall of text.

Chuunin is closed in all villages.

Remove any B rank jutsu or items you may have.
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CYANIDE CANDY
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PostSubject: Re: Amaya Hikari Char Application.... Amaya Hikari Char Application.... EmptyMon 31 May 2010, 6:17 am

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