Kazura, Saruno [Konoha Jounin]

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Basic Information:

Name: Kazura, Saruno.
Secondary Title: Angel of Existence.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:

Saruno stands at Six feet four inches tall, not including Gheta or regular sandals. He has a full head of white hair, which can inch down just above his shoulders, if pressed all the way down. Although he just usually keeps it fluffed, straight on occasion. Most of his front torso is covered in a thin layer of armor, covering just the top and mid part of his torso. This armor has designs of spikes all around it, with the symbol of his clan on the right shoulder, which is of A right wing with a circle around it. This armor is partially loose and can be torn off of his body when he sees fit. He often wears a midnight black shirt under the armor, along with another layer of a white shirt under it. He wears a set of black cloth gloves that extend up along his arms to cover some of the fore arm and have a small padding for support upon each. Upon his lower half he has a pair of black armored pants with the same material used for his top armor. Easy to tear off or shatter off if impacted by an object, but easily repairable, unless damaged to an extent. He wears a black pair of hard-cloth pants under the armor, and is a little harder to tear due to the durability of such. Although when he wears a set of Gheta, he usually never wears his armor, unless he's going out for some odd reason. He doesn't usually wear socks unless he feels the need to. When he does, the socks cover the ankles and some of the leg just above it. Nothing higher.

Personality: Saruno has a multitude of personalities. Each one has it's own abilities, it's own causes, and it's way of life for him. For a natural sense, outside of his usual nature, he would swear to protect his loved ones, the people who are his friends, the ones who he cares for in all ways around. But, he tends to be get very emotional when he is reminded of his past, his father's death, and about when his clan was faded to nothing but a few of his kin. The natural sense of himself would be to do whatever he can to protect, nurture, and help his family and friends survive, no matter what would happen to himself.

On his normal/everyday life sort of personality, he is a bit formal, or playful for that matter of speaking. When he's around somewhat of his superiors of a higher strength, power, or respect, he tends to kneel, or bow when he speaks, or is just being a bit formal. He doesn't like to be so formal in some cases, but it's a habit of his, especially when he was a small boy. Even though he was a bit spoiled back then, he always tended to do other things in his time, being taught proper manners and such, only for him to be this way. When talking to people in his playful sort of voices, he tends to tell a joke or two, or just being his usual emotionless self, not talking to mainly anyone at all, or just being him, either way, it's just Saruno.

As for his Berserk state, battling style, his mind tends to turn to a more, evil, playing kind of side. He has this urge to turn cannibalistic and attack anything and everyone that wanders into his sight. His attacks are mainly extremely powerful, attacking at any angle his fighting style tends to. While within the control of his blade, Yuui, he will attack with much more force, skill, and precision that most of his main tactics, hitting more of pressure points, or other places that have openings in them. Slashing away at his enemies, Saruno is able to cut down opponents with higher power, but has a distinct weakness, within the Berserk state, he'll kill anyone and everyone that stands in his path, and which includes friends or foes.
Catch Phrase:
- "I'm not going to let you WIN!"

Clan Information:

Clan Name: Kazura
Clan Location: Nomadic - Traveling
Clan Traits: Angelic Wings, Pure Skin, Perfect Features.
Kekkei Genkai: Bakuhaza. - Blasting Wave -

The Bakuhaza is a basic Kekkei Genkai that is based upon explosive power. Utilizing two forms of Elemental Release, Katon and Fuuton, a member can condense such power in order to form explosive properties within it. But using this in great amounts, or in too close of range can cause serious injury if not suicide.

In a Less basic form of the Kekkei Genkai Description, the Condensing arrays of the Kazura ability can utilize the condensation of certain elemental release chakra, such as Katon and Fuuton. Utilizing the properties of Condensation of chakra, they can use of such to make stuff, to simply, explode upon contact of objects, people, etc, or At will. The amount of chakra, in a fully detailed explanation, would be the amount holding the amount of power per charge of condensation. Read the chart below.

Condensed Fuuton Chakra
Condensing Fuuton Chakra is a basic form of the Kazura's ability to condense such substances. Utilizing a set amount of chakra per condensation, can result in powerful fluxes of wind in one area, if not combined with Katon. These "Pushes" of wind can be caused in many ways.

E Rank: D Rank Push.
D Rank: C Rank Push.
C Rank: B Rank Push.
B Rank: A Rank Push.
A Rank: A Rank Push.
S Rank: S Rank Push.

Condensed Katon Chakra
Condensing Katon Chakra is a more Advanced way of the Kazura's ability to condense such substances. The ability to manipulate the chakra to Condense Katon chakra can create an explosion beneath the fire that is condensed. With enough force of the Condensation, along with Fuuton, can create an explosion with enough power to....You get the rest.

E Rank Chakra: D Rank Burn.
D Rank Chakra: C Rank Burn.
C Rank Chakra: B Rank Burn.
B Rank Chakra: A Rank Burn.
A Rank Chakra: A Rank Burn.
S Rank Chakra: S Rank Burn.

E Rank Combination: D Rank Explosion.
D Rank Combination: C Rank Explosion.
C Rank Combination: B Rank Explosion.
B Rank Combination: A Rank Explosion.
A Rank Combination: S Rank Explosion.
S Rank Combination: S+ Rank Explosion.

Recharging: Although this is a powerful Kekkei Genkai ability to obtain, the drawbacks are as follows. The Ninja, if using an Explosion or Push above B rank, cannot use any Jutsu, due to a lapse in chakra, above C rank. It will require time for the Chakra to settle itself and be able to be usable again. This will take around a Post to Three, depending on the Rank used. And, for an extra drawback, the Ninja cannot use any Jutsu whatsoever for the next two topics if using the S+ Rank, since it makes such a huge explosion.

B Rank: One Post.
A Rank: Two Posts.
S Rank: Three posts.
S+ Rank: Cannot Use Until battle is over. 2 Topic Wait time.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Chakra Condense
Type: -
Rank: -
Element: -
Effects: Utilizing the Clan's KKG, a member is able to condense normal chakra, or elemental types to more powerful forms of it's use. This can only be used when in the First State or second. This chakra is only made to be an explosive, and is to be used in Jutsu of such.

History: The history of the Kazura clan starts with the such, the founder of the clan, Karuno Jazona Kazura, felt the presence of a deep, inner essence with his own chakra, feeling as if it was some explosive power, ready to come out at any time. But attempting this cost at least half of his left wing, blowing up nearly half a boulder the size of a large building. Such devastating power in one being, it was like a trait, and it was. An explosive, dark power. Something of this magnitude needed to be kept on. So, as time went on, Karuno kept discovering ways to perfect the technique of Explosions of Chakra. Burning sensations, dark results on an epic scale, it was nearly impossible to keep down. No matter what it was. So he left his legacy on to let the children of his children figure out a way to perfect all ways of this dark power. Reproducing to make sure, the line kept on.
Clan Details: Open w/ Permission.

Rank Information:

Rank: Jonin.
Village Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato. ~~Getsugakure no Sato~~

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Weaponry [Main; Swords. || Sub; Exotic. ]
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Katon[Fire Release]
Sub: Fuuton[Wind Release]
Special Characteristics: -

Basic Weapon List
x01 Lightweight Armor
x01 Yuui
x20 Shurican
x20 Kunai
x10 Reels of Copper wire.
x20 Shards of Narusu Crystal(In a special pouch).
x10 Explosive Tags.
x2 Summoning scrolls.
x3,000 links of 'Lesser' Amizaru chain.

Note for Other Weapons: The Summoning Scrolls hold most of the Weapons shown above, such as the Kunai, Shurican, etc. The Chain is held in a special scroll held in his Back Ninja pouch, and the two scrolls with it. All other weapons that are not within the scrolls, are with the others that are not, in the pouch. Amizaru chain links can be summoned up via scroll. His pouch may only hold 20 links at a time.

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Jutsu List

The 3 Basic Academy Jutsu

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Other commonly known Techniques

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

[Fuuton Ninjutsu / Kenjutsu • Wind Elemental Release Ninjutsu / Kenjutsu]

Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

Name: Kyuukyoku no Tou Dankai no Kai - Ultimate Blade Gate Release
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Saruno will swish Yuui down in a lower cut motion as he will be able to shoot a long straight-line-like Blast of his own Fuuton chakra down in a straight line for about 30m. This chakra is condensed so when it touches something, it will either cut it to tiny pieces or explode on contact. This can cut through Iron, but not Steel. This is very hard to block from a direct block. Since it's in a direct line, the size is not the problem, it's the speed and the time to dodge is the problem. The full line will take around 15 seconds to fully push down forward. This can only be used in his Second or above Berserk Stage And/Or in his Second or above Natsuin Dankai State.

[Non-Elemental Ninjutsu]

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.

[Additional Jutsu]

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu
Type: General Skill
Rank: E
Element: -
Description: This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible. It is a basic disguise technique which require basically no chakra and is more of a skill than a jutsu overall. Most academy students know this technique.

Name: Shadow Makibishi Technique
Type: General Skill
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: A simple technique where a smoke bomb is used and makibishi spikes are placed under its cover. Or, makibishi are placed at slow rate, so that the enemy will not notice. These spikes are very small and quite sharp so will most likely not be seens and cut into the feet of the opponent if they step on them.

[Katon Ninjutsu + Kenjutsu • Fire Elemental Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu]

Name: Great Fireball • Dai Endan
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Katon
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. The ninja will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.

Name: Fireball • Endan
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows the ninja to emit a jet of fire from his mouth.

Name: Great Fireball Technique • Goukakyuu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Mist Waltz Technique • Kasumi Enbu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Name: Karyuudan - Fire Dragon Projectile
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Karyuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create mud projectiles using the Doryuudan technique. The ninja will then blow a large flame to ignite the mud projectiles.

Name: Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Name: Katon • Kasaihane no Jutsu - Fire Release • Fire Wing Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Description: This is a Decoration Jutsu, and can be used with just one or two hand signs. Forming two hands seals, Saruno is able to make a flowing set of wings, made of a rolling fire from his chakra. The wings do not physically touch his body, nor his clothing, but remain at a distance where it won't harm him from the heat. This can follow him to make him look nice. This may be used as a partial defense if an enemy is behind him, but burns will be minor. Must Maintain C level chakra throughout use. Lasts 3-5 Posts.

Name: Katon • Kasai Hayashi - Fire Release • Fire Forest
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Katon
Description: Using his blade in a downwards motion, he can easily create a massive burst of fire by charging it downwards with his chakra. While, beforehand, channeling chakra into the blade, and then condensing it, he can release a torrent of flames down onto a helpless opponent.

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Background Information

History:

Childhood Arc
Saruno was born at a ninja hospital in the Getsugakure area, with unusual traits in mind, even the medical ninja had problems with that kind of infant. He had a seemingly inhuman amount of chakra, even though he was just born. It was amazing that a member of the Kazura clan had such a trait when they were born, several of the members of the clan had respected Saruno for many years of his life. At the time he was 2 years old, he was already walking and talking, wandering about the streets of his clan's housing ring, only to be picked up by his mother, who took him back to their house. He lived with a lot of his family, including his 3 brothers, 4 sisters, his father and mother, and two of his cousins, they lived in a rarely large house in the center of the clan housing ring, which was the home of the great Leader of the clan, known as Toshiro Kazura, who had mastered hundreds of jutsu in his time as leader of the clan. His wife was known as Sasina Kazura, named after the great heroin of the clan hundreds upon thousands of years before their generation, she had a shy kind of personality around her family and friends, but not so much when she was exposed to a certain kind of crystal, which affected Saruno as well, due to his traits. The crystal was known as 'Narusu', a crystal found deep in the ground under a certain mountain in the Crescent moon country. It affected Sasina and Saruno by turning their emotions to rage and fierce power, it scared most of the members of the clan because of their power, banishing the crystal from the use of the clan, for fear of spread of the trait. At the time of 5, he had a half-set of wings, they had only grown so much as at the point where the feathers are beginning to grow, but not being able to fly yet. He was just starting to learn how to use his chakra as a source of his power, moving it around to move rocks, pebbles, and leaves around the streets of his clan housing area, moving them to make patterns in the dirt like a drawing, which impressed his father, Toshiro, on his use of his chakra. His brother, Kuroyami Kazura, showed him to use a simple technique to use with his chakra, a small sphere, about the size of a marble. He showed him how to play with the marble in games and such, telling him it was a great thing to learn farther in his life. He practiced it a lot in his spare time, out of sleeping and eating, training his power with the fun he has, he used his marble trick to fool around with cats and dogs, laughing with joy as he did that.

Academy
About the age of 7, he had began his days at the academy. It was rough for Saruno in the days of the academy due to his, 'Condition'. His hair was white. This started to happen when he was first exposed to the 'Narusu' mineral when he was 5 years old. During the academy days, he began to train his chakra control to try and master a couple of the jutsu, like Bunshin no jutsu, and E rank jutsu like that. His older brother, who was a Chuunin at the time, taught him to use a couple E rank jutsu to work with great chakra control, and use them to the advantage of his chakra. Days past, then weeks, his chakra levels rose, and so did his chakra control, fulfilling the way of his power. He had learned the ways of his clan's Ayatsuriryoku techniques and began to train them to his advantage. His power was unrelenting to whatever he practiced on, but got tired out too easily, he was still a young boy. His sister, Kairi, his oldest sister was always helping him out with his medical problems, and tried to help him out when he was practicing too advanced moves for his type of level. Even though his chakra was outstanding, he used it mostly up when he was training, but he never gave up on anything he trained on. This impressed his father very much. Around the third year at the Academy, when he was only 10 years of age, they put him to the test of the Bunshin jutsu test. When he came up to do his Bunshin, he was practicing a B Class move for years, even though it was only to call upon a single clone. He performed the Kage Bunshin no jutsu at such a level, even his teachers were impressed by this level of chakra. He had passed his days at the Academy. A person from the Konohagakure no Sato area had been visiting the area for the past few months, and teaching Saruno that technique, since he had the chakra for it, and for what he would and could do. Since this was such a high-level technique for an Academy student, he was rushed to the hospital for a such a number of times, his sensei had trouble teaching him.

Chuunin Exams
At the time of the Chunin exams, a week and a half later, Saruno was ready for anything. It was held in the Konohagakure no Sato Area. At the first part of the Exam, the written part, the proctor of the exam was a tall, dark, and scary looking man, a scar all across his face and arms, a bandage on the man's shoulder, over his shirt. The exam started, pencils against paper, writing words, and drawing diagrams of what shinobi should do in a situation, and how do use a simple shurican, kunai, and what abilities should be used in combat of a high-level opponent. An hour went by, Saruno had finished eight of the nine questions, having checked each one over with all of his intelligence. The bell rang at the proctor's desk, all of the participants of the exam put their pencil's down on the table before them, even Saruno, who had just finished his Ninth question. The Proctor before the class was looking around the room, seeing if anyone had kept writing, but had seen none, nor did the watchers at the ends of the room. Twenty minutes later, thirty people leave the room, dropping out of the Exams, but only twenty remained, all the other teams were emotionless, waiting for the second part of the exam. So the second part came, the forest of death, which Saruno had to get the opposite scroll to be able to go on through the exam. At the start of the Second part, he was immediately caught by a team, from the Rain village, a net. Saruno struggled to get out, and used his 'Raikou Ba-suto' Technique to escape the net and take down his opponents, taking the scroll which was opposite of his own, and vanished towards the center tower, finishing the second part in only the first day. Three days passed, other teams, only half of them showed up, the others were expelled from the area, sent out of the exams. Finally, the third part of the exam began, the combat part of the test. A large arena in the far corner of the village is where it took place, a perfect place to use Saruno's ninjutsu. First up, two opponents, Saruno waiting in the sitting area, watching the two go at it, it ended shortly after. The second match, Saruno was up, against a high-level opponent with abnormal amounts of chakra, which is what he sensed as he stepped down from the area and stood at the center of the arena. The battle began, using many of his basic techniques, that were more unprofessional 'Ranmyaku Shitsunen' and 'Raikou Ba-suto', a couple others were used as well, but it still ended the same, his opponent was unconscious on the ground, the dirt and walls cracked from the use of his chakra, Saruno standing at the center, breathing heavily, he had finished the Chunin exams, and became a full chuunin, at the Age of 9. It was an amazing feat by Saruno himself, using lower-ranked techniques than the usual ones in the brink of battle was genius in his decision, but many others came to his aid, when it happened.

Attempt to Heading back
While turning back towards Konoha, he had visited his Father's main clan housing ring, which held a vast amount of Kazura and a few other races of the Allied clans. He was so joyous to learn that his father was in the ring, and wanted to show him his achievement in becoming a Chuunin at his age. He was so happy, and quickly ran over to the middle house, just to find that his mother was also waiting for Toshiro to arrival. That was his father's name. He was world-renowned for his God-like strength and skill. He wield the legendary Blade of Fate, Hateshi. It was the most powerful blade in all of Existence, next to the other blades that was far superior to even that. But only the greatest of Shinobi may be able to wield such. Although in just an hour of waiting with a game of Shogi with his mother, his father came in the front sliding door, instantly latching onto his leg. He had a big hug from his father as he noticed the headband on Saruno's head. He gave him a nudge towards his Armory, after giving a quick kiss to his wife. He had shown Saruno his entire armory, every last piece of armor, every last shield, sword, chain, whip, exotic weaponry, pole-arms, ranged weapons, all kinds of weapons. Rare weapons, common weapons, even his sheath for Hateshi. It was so pretty to look at, runic writing all around it. He even allowed him to touch it, the runic writing glowing as he did, but felt a little drained. It was obviously something that absorbed chakra just to make it stay put. He was ignoring the overwhelming amount of power Hateshi was letting off, only to stroke the sheath a little. It was so pretty. But then a gong went off three times, alerting Toshiro instantly. He had taken up the Sheath and a pair of his Light armor, leaving Saruno in the Armory. It was like he up and vanished.

Destruction of the Kazura
The Gong kept being hit, the loud sound of it's bass shaking some of the air from it's loud tone. Although it was just a faint sound from a distance, the gong was on top of his home, which made it loud as hell. He only sighed as his Father went off towards battle, which was meant by three hits of the gong, then a silence. That pattern kept going until the loud yells from the most elite of the Kazura, the Angels of Hell. They were more Demonic looking than most Kazura, which gave them their team name. They held a normal blade each, with vast Determination and pride in their clan. The rush of swords hitting against one another was heard from the front room of his house, staring out at the distance from his window. But as he looked even the slightest second, his eyes went wide with fear. Blood, guts, annihilation, war. He was on the third floor of the tower of his home, blinking with tears at the Horrifying sight. He was still only Nine years old, seeing the destruction of his own clan before his eyes. But before anything would really hit the tower, Toshiro stood in front of it, his blade wielded. He only heard the words from his father, "You won't take my home! Not my family! Not my Son!" from the shouts he made. Blasts of power rippled through the air only to knock him back into his mother's front, which held him while she sobbed. He noticed her mother also didn't like the way things were happening. She only teared instead of wept, fearing for her husband. But only before anything else could happen, Toshiro had come up and set his feet onto the windowsill, his wings folded only a little, but still floating a little, saying to Saruno and Sasina, "It'll be alright, you both will be safe" He said before departing, soundless lips forming in his own words out to his father. Before he could even reach the windowsill, a massive explosion of unexplainable proportions blast nearly half of the entire Kazura housing ring. It annihilated nearly half of the area that blew up, a person being shown just in front of the blast, it being his father, with his blade pointed down from a lower swing. He was absolutely stunned at the power being let off from just one sword. But before anything else could happen, another shinobi came up above Toshiro as the man attempted to strike him, but simply had his sword block against the attackers. An epic battle from a distance. He knew it was for his protection, but he wanted to help someway, but just couldn't. All he could do was watch. Within a few more minutes of action, all of the ninja that had attacked the Kazura ring surrounded Toshiro, armed with the best weapons possible. But it wasn't enough. A swing of his blade caused a ring of massive power strike up from below the attacking Ninja, wiping them all out with just a swing of the blade. But the Victory wouldn't last. A single poisoned Kunai came out of no where behind Toshiro, stabbing just in a hollow area on his back, missing any crucial areas, but injected the poison all the same. A cough of blood came out of his mouth as Toshiro looked around to see who did it. It was a dying member of the attacking faction, growling some as the blade was send down to smash a more massive wave of power at the living person, completely annihilating the land and people in it's way, luckily enough that it was just that one person. Although it did take off a good chunk of the wall that surrounded the ring. He had panted Hard as Hateshi's chakra couldn't eliminate the poison in time, but instead built up too much power in the blade. It exploded the power outwards all around Toshiro in a backfire of it's own destructive power. The dark scream of Toshiro came to be sound all over the entire ring, but only the main family of the Kazura being left, with only his older sister and brother, Kairi and Kuroyami Kazura. His mother was weeping too much as the sight of her husband came to cease to exist, the blade being the only thing left from that explosion as it began to slowly fade from pieces shattering off of it, and vanishing.

Sending him back to Konoha.
After the mass destruction of the clan's main housing ring, The death of his father, and the trauma to go with it. It was almost too much for him to handle, even at his current age. He was always looking around for some kind of danger that might of killed him. He was so cautious for the next few months, before his sister giving him some sort of Advice to calm him down. She said that their father would always be watching over them. He always believed that from then on, it was his keeping of sanity. Every so often he sighed to look up to the clouds, thinking of whether or not he would be watching. He held a chain that his father had given him from his armory. Although some Ninja tried to take it from him just to tease him. But they did a few bad things, like, talking bad about his father. A few Chuunin of higher age got a punch in the face, a kick in the nuts and a bruised body. It pissed him off. His father was known as the second most powerful Ninja in the world, and was being mocked by Chuunin! It was infuriating! He was stuck in Konoha for until he became Jonin, which wouldn't be for another few years.

Konoha
A year or two went by, his age being at 11 now. He was always wandering the streets or on a mission. He didn't really have a place to go but the abandoned areas that once were filled with Kazura. Only to know almost every other Kazura was wiped off the face of the earth. He was left with his Sister and brother to look after him. They were a few years older and had already passed the Jonin exam given to them at their age. He was the youngest of the three, and so they were called the Survivors of the Kazura massacre. It was a humiliating kind of meaning but it always Depressed him. Every time someone called him a "Survivor" he always huddled into a corner and held his knees to his chest. It depressed him to remember the fatal blow to his father that wiped his body out of existence. Only for a nearby Jonin to pick up up from the ground. The Jonin seemed familiar somehow, but he instantly recognized it to be his trainer that taught him the Kage Bunshin Technique. He was almost overjoyed, but also still sad over the events. But after some words about how great his father was from the man, he only to leap into a hug. He missed him so much, his father and his Sensei. It was just too bad he didn't have a team, because he was the only one in the entire Village who was a single-man team. So even with that, his Sensei cheered him up with a bowl of Ichiraku ramen. But soon after he was called away on business, paying for both his and Saruno's ramen. The only thing good about that meeting was he calmed down a little. He was still depressed about the moment, but he was calmed down slightly, so he wouldn't act so Emo-ish.

During some times a few years later, when he turned 14 years of age, he was given a practice exam for his Upcoming Jonin exam when he turns 16. He was more than Qualified for it. But when it came to Physical parts, he was almost too terrible at it. He failed the Physical parts, which was a good portion of his grade, which made him fail. Every time he picked up some sort of sharp object, he always remembered his father's blade, and how it annihilated those enemies. It flashed in his head every other time before it came back to haunt him. He couldn't shake off any other feeling in his head, all he had to do was try and ignore it. Which failed a multitude of times. Every practice exam he had up to his 15th Birthday failed. He didn't know why! It was scared the hell out of him as he touched a sharp object.

Mission to Kirigakure on his 16th Birthday.
He was sent to Kirigakure on a mission for the head of a bounty hunter. He had unusual features for the mission briefing. Tall. Black hair. It was almost creepy. Sounded like some weird-ass Vampire. So he set out to Kiri on his own, as usual. He had the Physique, Muscle, Chakra levels, and Control of a Jonin, and yet he was still a Chuunin. He wondered why it was scary for him to wield a sharp weapon, so blunt weapons was his way to go, for now. But on his way 'To' the village, he had already finished up the mission by annihilating the Ninja before his tall annoying figure would even touch him. He cut off his head by tearing it off, stuffing it in a bag he was given to put it in. Although the bag was a bit big, he tied it up anyway, tossing it in his mission bag. He still had a lot of time before he was expected back to Konoha, so he looked around the Lake of Kirigakure, seeing only a small light at the bottom of the frozen lake. It was winter, he was wearing his warmest piece of Ninja clothing he had in his closet, only to take it off. He would risk it still, but only to see down at the bottom from the ice, he saw a blade, that looked a little like the blade his father had in his Armory, before it exploded. It was a straight longsword, shining a little. He smashed some of the ice for it to fall into the waters below, to swirl off under the rest of the ice. He didn't have a lot of time before all the rest of the ice shattered. So he dove in the water with just pants on, leaving all the rest of his clothes back on shore. He needed to do this quick and without anything hindering his speed. He grabbed the hilt of the blade only to find it stuck, holding the bottom of the lake until the blade let go of the rock that was holding it's blade. It was irritating to find the blade stuck in the ground of the waters of Kirigakure. He moved up from the water quickly, even with the weight of the sword hindering his movements, only to make it in time to throw the sword up and into the ground before he made it on shore. He coughed some with water coming out of his lips in the harsh coughs. He didn't know he obtained a blade of chaos, not yet anyway. But he knew Runic writing to see that the side of the blade wrote, "God of Lightning may send it's divine thunder to you" or something like that. He knew the Divine, God, and Lightning part of the Runic writing, but couldn't make out anything else on it. He simply put it in a makeshift sheath and walked off back towards the village.

Research and Exam
While he reached the base of his Makeshift home, books all around him as the sword he found was on a decoration stand on the wall. He needed to know more about, where it came from, what made it. The material of the sword was nearly unknown to him until he came across the same coloration of the blade as the mineral he found in the book. It was called, "Materite" a heavily intense strength mineral that couldn't be broken or melted by normal means. It had to be absolutely supernatural in order for it to be of such. But the runic markings that faced him he could read, "Yuui shall grant you strength." So he found out Yuui was the name of the blade. It was kinda obvious that it was a special blade, it having a name. But finding the book called, "Blades of Destiny." and searching through the section of "Blades of Chaos" he found Yuui's name in it, along with the history and what it was. The appearance completely matched what was before him. He couldn't believe he came across a blade of chaos. His emotions were a mix of amazement and confusion. He was happy he found a blade of chaos, but the fear of blades.. Was a problem. He only took the blade out of Curiosity, but now that he knew what it was, it was going to be something. But when a certain moment only a few hours before the start of his Jonin exam startled him. It was the Voice of Yuui. While he was putting on his Lightweight armor, he heard the voice in his head, looking over at the blade on the wall. He heard it was a female voice, nagging for the want to be let down from the accursed wall. It was definitely female, an obnoxious one, but a female. He had picked the blade up from the wall while it began to slowly gather up Saruno's own chakra, a little at a time. And the blade wanted to go with him to the Exam he was talking to himself so much about, so, he did. He brought the blade with him to the exam, only for a few other Jonin that were Administering the test to ask about it. He told them he found it in a lake, so he brought it with him. Although they were questioning that fact, the test began. He aced the Written part of it with the greatest ease in the world. A perfect score on it. But when the Physical part came into action, he passed it in under a minute. He cut down nearly half of ground before him with just five swings. The first four being heavy as hell, but the fifth time Yuui helped him out, power wise. He passed his exam with flying colors. By the time he was 17 years old. He had become a Jonin.

Daily Life in Konoha
Being now Nineteen years of age, a full-fledged Jonin, he could wield Yuui without a lot of problems. Although the occasional bickering between the two would cause them to look silly, as if he were talking to himself. It was a little funny to befriend a blade. Although when Yuui got offended, she shocked Saruno on the neck to try and tease him. She had far too much fun doing that, so it would be random to her. It was pissing him off that she did that so much, but being stuck in Konoha might not be so bad. His siblings were always off on missions. And his fear of blades and the depression of his clan being annihilated were gone, he was starting his new life, a new life in Konoha.

-> Working on a US version of it.

Age : 32 Posts : 276

RP sample: Recent Post.

[Being set his own bowl of ramen only a minute or so after the girl's, he let a small nod appear along the motions of his head towards the cook. "Idatakimasu."* he said, putting his hands together with a pair of chopsticks between them. Pulling them apart, his digits took apart the chopsticks, placing them in the required area of his left hand, beginning to take a few strands of noodles at a time. Ah, the godly ramen, always so delicious, no matter how many times he tasted it's glory. The taste was divine, the noodles cooked right and the sauce giving that extra kick, taking up a small fish cake to nibble on softly. Taking his gaze over to the girl at the corner of his left eye, he stared at the unsheathing and sheathing of the scythe, the bloodstains being a bit more of interest towards him. He had killed an army of high elite ninja with one swing of his sword, blood was a common thing for him, but interested him.]

[His gaze back down to his food, he simply wanted to savor every moment of this divine meal. Cheap food, divine taste. The Kazura way. The Kazura meant, "Divine Angels" So divine was his word. A small smile slid more warmly onto his lips as he took up a few noodles and curled it around the tip of the chopsticks, in his bowl only. "So miss... Have I seen you before?" He said in only soft words, parted through his pale lips, with his digits twitching at the question he had just asked her. The noodles fell off of the thing and slowly began to be put back on it with a twist of the chopsticks. His hair covered most of the sides of his skull, the black shade being because the color was stuck after a small subside with his illness. He was positively better looking than before with black hair, that was a fact and a half. Picking the sticks of wood up from the bowl, the strands of noodles and the sauce that covered them up, he slowly took them between his lips and suckled them from the sticks and between his lips with a suction motion of air.]

[It was all just Familiar was all, as if part of his memory wanted him to remember the girl. But it never did realize itself. A partial purple flame started to come off the hilt of the blade, setting it back along the wall. The flame was just a manifestation of Yuui's chakra built within the blade. It caused no real harm or anything, it was just for show. Setting it in a position in which it wouldn't fall, he went back to his noodles, occasionally looking towards the girl and back at his noodles. "S.. Sorry for asking that, I'd just like to know.." His face almost went to a black red, pushing his head down a bit to allow more hair to cover the side of his face where the darkened areas started to appear. Damn such a question! It was so annoying being so shy around girls. It was a bit embarrassing to talk to them, but he tries to overcome that fear every so often.]

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.вłооđ Άηgєł. wrote:: Rank: Jonin.
Village Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato. Getsugakure no Sato

You have two villages filled in here, the latter being an unavailable village.

.вłооđ Άηgєł. wrote:: Jutsu List

Ultima Ninjutsu

Name: Ninja Art Release • Seal of Stage -Ninpouton • Natsuin Dankai-
Rank: C-S

-First Stage: Seal of Chaos - Natsuin Ranmyaku -
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: The seal of Chaos is set on the ground below the user, glowing with the color of the chakra used to place it down, creating a larger long-range radius for attacks based on the user's performance. The user can channel chakra through the area of the seal and throw small sphere-like chakra blasts through the air. These chakra spheres are normally the size of a Baseball, and do a C rank amount of damage per one.

-Second Stage: Seal of Destruction - Natsuin Toukai -
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the seal of Chaos down, the Seal will enlarge to a farther diameter, doubling power. The ground around the seal will begin to shatter upwards and the user can use them to the advantage of throwing them at the opponent. If the opponent is within the boundaries of the Seal, the user can impact several hits against them when they form a large amount of chakra into their palms.

-Third Stage: Seal of Havoc - Natsuin Sangai -
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the Seal of Destruction down, the seal will further enlarge to a diameter of 30 meters, tripling power, causing major damage to the muscular system and chakra network after the use. Utilizing the abilities of the First stage, the user can cast more powerful channels of chakra blasts, more fierce than the last.

-Fourth Stage: Seal of Annihilation - Natsuin Kaimetsu -
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the seal of Havoc, the user will have 4 more seals of Annihilation around them, setting on the four edges of the seal, keeping it's triple power. After the technique is closed, major harm to the muscular system and chakra network to over half of what the user used in the activation of the technique will happen. Using said massive power in small amounts or large amounts, the Ninja will increase in speed and reflex at will, at the cost of strengthening the effects of the drawbacks, even during the technique. The spheres of chakra blasts will further increase in power as the aim increases as well.

-Fifth Stage: Seal of Oblivion - Natsuin Shitsunen -
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: Natsuin Shitsunen, the Final seal of the Natsuin Dankai is used in only the most dangerous of battles, and would be the last. Natsuin Shitsunen can be Activated only two ways; Activation of Hidden chakra through 7th Yuui Berserk Stage, and Through extreme will to win the battle. The Ninja's Physical and Chakra-related power and Strength is increased 4x, Speed and Reflexes are at their max Capacity that the human body can handle. But during the time that the Seal is activated, the chakra of the Ninja will deplete a fair amount of chakra per post, depending on when it was activated, and how much chakra is left in the body. Upon the end of the Seal's activation, the Ninja's nervous, muscular, and metabolic systems will automatically shut down and tear themselves up into nothing, thus killing the Ninja on close. Without the nervous system telling the heart and lungs to continue their jobs, the flow will stop, along with breathing, Oxygen will fail to get to necessary cells and will deteriorate life within seconds. This Jutsu is only to be used with the two Activation Signals.

Additional Information: When utilizing the chakra sphere function, you cannot just 'hit' an opponent and throw a sphere at him/her. There is a distinct time limitation in which the user can hit and throw a sphere at a time. When using the Hand-to-hand Combat style of the Seals, you cannot use the Function of the spheres unless shifted to a Ninja art stage of the seals, thus separating the amount of chakra usage ad the amount of power bestowed upon the user.

I believe these are all actually Fuuinjutsu techniques, the art of sealing.

All 'S' ranked jutsu need to be taken out, for I believe that is not available at the moment.

You're also missing this jutsu, which would be pretty basic for a Jounin.

Code:: [b]Name:[b] Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
[b]Rank:[/b]C
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b]N/A
[b]Description:[/b] A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.

You've also have a few coding mistakes in your rp sample and you'll need a final approval by the Hokage, Pat.

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Çγαηide Çαηdγ ♥ wrote:

.вłооđ Άηgєł. wrote:: Rank: Jonin.
Village Affiliation: Konohagakure no Sato. Getsugakure no Sato

You have two villages filled in here, the latter being an unavailable village.

Fixed that. Put a line through the Getsugakure to Signal he's out of it.

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.вłооđ Άηgєł. wrote:: Jutsu List

Ultima Ninjutsu

Name: Ninja Art Release • Seal of Stage -Ninpouton • Natsuin Dankai-
Rank: C-S

-First Stage: Seal of Chaos - Natsuin Ranmyaku -
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: The seal of Chaos is set on the ground below the user, glowing with the color of the chakra used to place it down, creating a larger long-range radius for attacks based on the user's performance. The user can channel chakra through the area of the seal and throw small sphere-like chakra blasts through the air. These chakra spheres are normally the size of a Baseball, and do a C rank amount of damage per one.

-Second Stage: Seal of Destruction - Natsuin Toukai -
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the seal of Chaos down, the Seal will enlarge to a farther diameter, doubling power. The ground around the seal will begin to shatter upwards and the user can use them to the advantage of throwing them at the opponent. If the opponent is within the boundaries of the Seal, the user can impact several hits against them when they form a large amount of chakra into their palms.

-Third Stage: Seal of Havoc - Natsuin Sangai -
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the Seal of Destruction down, the seal will further enlarge to a diameter of 30 meters, tripling power, causing major damage to the muscular system and chakra network after the use. Utilizing the abilities of the First stage, the user can cast more powerful channels of chakra blasts, more fierce than the last.

-Fourth Stage: Seal of Annihilation - Natsuin Kaimetsu -
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the seal of Havoc, the user will have 4 more seals of Annihilation around them, setting on the four edges of the seal, keeping it's triple power. After the technique is closed, major harm to the muscular system and chakra network to over half of what the user used in the activation of the technique will happen. Using said massive power in small amounts or large amounts, the Ninja will increase in speed and reflex at will, at the cost of strengthening the effects of the drawbacks, even during the technique. The spheres of chakra blasts will further increase in power as the aim increases as well.

-Fifth Stage: Seal of Oblivion - Natsuin Shitsunen -
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: Natsuin Shitsunen, the Final seal of the Natsuin Dankai is used in only the most dangerous of battles, and would be the last. Natsuin Shitsunen can be Activated only two ways; Activation of Hidden chakra through 7th Yuui Berserk Stage, and Through extreme will to win the battle. The Ninja's Physical and Chakra-related power and Strength is increased 4x, Speed and Reflexes are at their max Capacity that the human body can handle. But during the time that the Seal is activated, the chakra of the Ninja will deplete a fair amount of chakra per post, depending on when it was activated, and how much chakra is left in the body. Upon the end of the Seal's activation, the Ninja's nervous, muscular, and metabolic systems will automatically shut down and tear themselves up into nothing, thus killing the Ninja on close. Without the nervous system telling the heart and lungs to continue their jobs, the flow will stop, along with breathing, Oxygen will fail to get to necessary cells and will deteriorate life within seconds. This Jutsu is only to be used with the two Activation Signals.

Additional Information: When utilizing the chakra sphere function, you cannot just 'hit' an opponent and throw a sphere at him/her. There is a distinct time limitation in which the user can hit and throw a sphere at a time. When using the Hand-to-hand Combat style of the Seals, you cannot use the Function of the spheres unless shifted to a Ninja art stage of the seals, thus separating the amount of chakra usage ad the amount of power bestowed upon the user.

I believe these are all actually Fuuinjutsu techniques, the art of sealing.

That is Ninjutsu. Not Fuuinjutsu. We've had a huge argument over it and It's been considered Ninjutsu. It utilizes mostly Ninjutsu attributes along with some Physical strength properties, with little in "Sealing" And you did state the meaning of Fuuinjutsu. "Sealing Arts" This Jutsu does not seal anything, in fact it does the opposite. So it'd be Ninjutsu.

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All 'S' ranked jutsu need to be taken out, for I believe that is not available at the moment.

You're also missing this jutsu, which would be pretty basic for a Jounin.

Code:: [b]Name:[b] Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique
[b]Rank:[/b]C
[b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu
[b]Element:[/b]N/A
[b]Description:[/b] A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.

You've also have a few coding mistakes in your rp sample and you'll need a final approval by the Hokage, Pat.

M'kay, and M'kay. Added the Jutsu, fixed the mistake and M'kay. :3

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Nice history. I'd love you to be my Jounin ;D

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Aw, thank you. :3

I feel so special now. x3

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Despite the fact I promised myself I would stay away from this application due to the implications it possesses; I'm here. :3

Uhmm, about your clans wings; can you fly with them and stuff? Because that's kinda too supernatural. o.o

Your coding has broke in Kuchiyose no Jutsu - fix that. (:

You're missing these basic jutsu also:

Quote :: Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu
Type: General Skill
Rank: E
Element: -
Description: This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible. It is a basic disguise technique which require basically no chakra and is more of a skill than a jutsu overall. Most academy students know this technique.

Considering you have weaponry as a specialty, I would suggest you have this basic weaponry jutsu:

Name: Shadow Makibishi Technique
Type: General Skill
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: A simple technique where a smoke bomb is used and makibishi spikes are placed under its cover. Or, makibishi are placed at slow rate, so that the enemy will not notice. These spikes are very small and quite sharp so will most likely not be seens and cut into the feet of the opponent if they step on them.

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Aaron wrote:

Despite the fact I promised myself I would stay away from this application due to the implications it possesses; I'm here. :3

Uhmm, about your clans wings; can you fly with them and stuff? Because that's kinda too supernatural. o.o

Your coding has broke in Kuchiyose no Jutsu - fix that. (:

You're missing these basic jutsu also:

Quote :: Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu
Type: General Skill
Rank: E
Element: -
Description: This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible. It is a basic disguise technique which require basically no chakra and is more of a skill than a jutsu overall. Most academy students know this technique.

Considering you have weaponry as a specialty, I would suggest you have this basic weaponry jutsu:

Name: Shadow Makibishi Technique
Type: General Skill
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: A simple technique where a smoke bomb is used and makibishi spikes are placed under its cover. Or, makibishi are placed at slow rate, so that the enemy will not notice. These spikes are very small and quite sharp so will most likely not be seens and cut into the feet of the opponent if they step on them.

Fixing that.

And with the wings.

They can fly, but at the cost of chakra per post. :/

If I have to make a chart explaining how much chakra is depleted per post of flight, I can. Ask, I will.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Yeah, add a chart. :3

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Chart added.

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The chakra cost for your wings/flying... The lowest being smiliar to an 'E' ranked and so on so on, or what?

.вłооđ Άηgєł wrote:: -First Stage: Seal of Chaos - Natsuin Ranmyaku -
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: The seal of Chaos is set on the ground below the user, glowing with the color of the chakra used to place it down, creating a larger long-range radius for attacks based on the user's performance. The user can channel chakra through the area of the seal and throw small sphere-like chakra blasts through the air. These chakra spheres are normally the size of a Baseball, and do a C rank amount of damage per one.

-Second Stage: Seal of Destruction - Natsuin Toukai -
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the seal of Chaos down, the Seal will enlarge to a farther diameter, doubling power. The ground around the seal will begin to shatter upwards and the user can use them to the advantage of throwing them at the opponent. If the opponent is within the boundaries of the Seal, the user can impact several hits against them when they form a large amount of chakra into their palms.

-Fourth Stage: Seal of Annihilation - Natsuin Kaimetsu -
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: -
Description: After setting the seal of Havoc, the user will have 4 more seals of Annihilation around them, setting on the four edges of the seal, keeping it's triple power. After the technique is closed, major harm to the muscular system and chakra network to over half of what the user used in the activation of the technique will happen. Using said massive power in small amounts or large amounts, the Ninja will increase in speed and reflex at will, at the cost of strengthening the effects of the drawbacks, even during the technique. The spheres of chakra blasts will further increase in power as the aim increases as well.

What's the range of these jutsu?

.вłооđ Άηgєł wrote:: Name: Chaos Oblivion! -Ranmyaku Shitsunen-
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release.]
Description: Utilizing his advantage of high chakra control, Saruno can move his hands in a variety of ways, without the use of hand signs, to summon chakra-based lightning from the ground or sky, and control it by the motions of his hands. This can be watched and be predicted from the constant flow of his hands. Using other Jutsu will not affect the flow of Lightning, but will also stop the control, and allow it to continue until broken. The sky lightning will only work when clouds are overhead, and during a Thunderstorm. These bolts are also Chakra-based, but can come in high numbers. Swaying his hand 'down' can cause Lightning to come down from the clouds, as if lightning were by his control. But it is not. It is not a Weather-controlling Jutsu.

I'm a little conflicted over this jutsu. I'm going to get another mod or admin's opinion.

.вłооđ Άηgєł wrote:: Name: Shadow Wave! -Aneinami!-
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Utilizing the ability to condense chakra into various patterns and shapes, he can condense a small sphere into the palm of his left or right hand and utilize it to it's fullest potential. He can smash his other hand, or smash it against an object or person and send a massive surge of dark lightning towards that area. Since it is a lightning elemental release technique, it takes a large amount of chakra to use. The rate of pulse is around Two meters per second, and goes only as far as 15m. The destructive power is immense at close range, and lessened at a farther range.

How much damage can this cause?

.вłооđ Άηgєł wrote:: Name: Summon Lightning
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Raising his palms to the sky, Saruno can summon bolts of lightning from nearby thunderclouds, causing his Raiton techniques to become more powerful in strength and power with the charge of actual lightning in his grasp. Yet, in some cases, the lightning can miss and hit Saruno, but the chances are slim enough to medium. a 50-50 chance of error. Within controlling the lightning, he needs to manipulate the lightning in his body, so none of it will damage his nervous system.
Note: I will not G-mod with this. I can decide whether it can Miss and hit Saruno or not, or a 'Fair' mod/admin can decide that. It can cause serious if not Fatal harm to his body is missed and hits him. Or the ground around him.

I'm also conflicted over this jutsu and I'm going to need another admin or mod's opinion.

Posts : 2032

Quote :: Altitude - Chakra Usage
0 to 100 meters. ||| .5% of chakra per post.
101 to 500 meters. ||| .6% to 1.5% of chakra per post.
501 meters higher. ||| 1.6% of chakra or higher per post.

There would need to be a maximum height at which you can go regardless of how much chakra it uses. I would say limit it at 500-600m.

- Is the clan already approved?

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Yes, yes the clan is. Putting down the Limit.

Also. Link to Previously Bashed profile.

It was bashed by James. You KNOW it's thorough.

http://narutor.forumotion.com/missing-ninja-f85/saruno-s-update-done-t8853.htm

Posts : 1084

Zane, I'm going to tell you something and I mean it from a professional level with no aggression attached. I do not care if this James person bashed your profile and if he believes he did a thorough job. I do not care if you believe he did a thorough job. When I ask you about something on your app that I believe needs fixing, you either fix it, or tell me why you believe you don't have to fix it. Should it be the latter, I will get a second or third opinion from a different mod or admin and we'll talk it over to see if it's just my opinion or if it's a valid concern over something that needs to be fixed. Do not give me a link of your app that has been moderated and approved somewhere else, believing that if one mod did what he/you believe a thorough job and approved it, means it will change my mind and I'll approve you. I still question about things because I still think it's a valid concern over something on your app. It's my job. Now, if it turns out that what may be my valid concern, is not so much a concern by several mods or admins opinion, then I will no longer pursue what I believe needs to be fixed or changed. Do you understand my point, Zane?

Now that I have said that... I will continue to check your application...

.Нєανєηłу Άηgєl wrote:: Name: Chaos Oblivion! -Ranmyaku Shitsunen-
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release.]
Description: Utilizing his advantage of high chakra control, Saruno can move his hands in a variety of ways, without the use of hand signs, to summon chakra-based lightning from the ground or sky, and control it by the motions of his hands. This can be watched and be predicted from the constant flow of his hands. Using other Jutsu will not affect the flow of Lightning, but will also stop the control, and allow it to continue until broken. The sky lightning will only work when clouds are overhead, and during a Thunderstorm. These bolts are also Chakra-based, but can come in high numbers. Swaying his hand 'down' can cause Lightning to come down from the clouds, as if lightning were by his control. But it is not. It is not a Weather-controlling Jutsu.

Where would chakra-based lightning from the ground and sky come from? Also, the sky lightning...If it's chakra-based and I'm assuming the chakra-based lightning is caused by him, then why can't he control it? If you believe this makes sense, then please just explain it to be better, so that I may understand.

.Нєανєηłу Άηgєl wrote:: Name: Shadow Pulse! -Aneiparusu!-
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Utilizing the ability to condense chakra into many patterns and formats, Saruno can channel a small amount of Raiton chakra into his left or right palm and release it in massive streams of chain-like patterns. This pattern can knock back other types of techniques, equal or lesser to the rank of this technique. But if charged with higher amounts of chakra, the rank can double and block higher amounts of attacks with just a simple Pulse. Since this is condensed chakra, it will look like black waves of energies, instead of the regular blue and yellow coloring.

C rank: Up to 20m. Lessened Damage at Distance. Half meter Width. 2m Circumference.
B Rank: Up to 30m. Lessened Damage at Distance. One meter Width. 3m Circumference.
A Rank: Up to 45m. Lessened Damage at Distance. One and one half meter Width. 3.5m Circumference.

I believe the maximum lengths are a little too high. Cut them all by eight or so.

.Нєανєηłу Άηgєl wrote:: Name: Shadow Wave! -Aneinami!-
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Utilizing the ability to condense chakra into various patterns and shapes, he can condense a small sphere into the palm of his left or right hand and utilize it to it's fullest potential. He can smash his other hand, or smash it against an object or person and send a massive surge of dark lightning towards that area. Since it is a lightning elemental release technique, it takes a large amount of chakra to use. The rate of pulse is around Two meters per second, and goes only as far as 15m. The destructive power is immense at close range, and lessened at a farther range.

What's the maximum damage of this jutsu should it hit someone or something? Like, the maximum being able to break a persons bone and being able to cut a tree in half.

.Нєανєηłу Άηgєl wrote:: Name: Summon Lightning
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton[Lightning Release]
Description: Raising his palms to the sky, Saruno can summon bolts of lightning from nearby thunderclouds, causing his Raiton techniques to become more powerful in strength and power with the charge of actual lightning in his grasp. Yet, in some cases, the lightning can miss and hit Saruno, but the chances are slim enough to medium. a 50-50 chance of error. Within controlling the lightning, he needs to manipulate the lightning in his body, so none of it will damage his nervous system.
Note: I will not G-mod with this. I can decide whether it can Miss and hit Saruno or not, or a 'Fair' mod/admin can decide that. It can cause serious if not Fatal harm to his body is missed and hits him. Or the ground around him.

I believe it would make more sense if you simply put-- "Yet, in some cases, the lightning can miss and hit Saruno, but the chances are 50-50."

It will make it easier to read, lessening the chance that someone will have to read it more than once to understand. Other than that, I believe that if this jutsu looks alright with another mod or admin, then whenever you use it, a 'fair' mod/admin will decide if the chances of it missing and hitting you occur. Even if you claim you will not god-mod with it, it would prevent anyone from accusing you of doing so, preventing needless-drama.

Also, your weapon is still being looked over, but when it is approved would you like it to be added onto your application?

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Done, Done, Done.

And Naw. It can stay in the weapon section. Unless it's required to be in my app, lets keep it there.

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Everything is required to be added to the application.

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Fine. >> Add it in once it's approved.

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Explain your characteristics in more detail, especially Keen Eyes.

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Edited in.

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

I'm not satisfied with your special characteristics, whether they are in your history or not you need to provide a description for each one of them.
Keen Eyes, this needs even more of a thorough description too, please note some people will be able to move at a quicker speed than your eye movement, your eyes might be a bit more in focus than that of a regular eye, but it isn't a doujutsu ability, you cannot see everything that moves at a fast pace.
Altitude - Chakra Usage, it confuses me can you please elaborate on this.
You need to put the 'Lesser' Amizaru chain into a proper template and explanation any abilities it has.
Narame Crystal • Narusu. Denied, chakra absorption via a weapon/item isn't permitted. Please remove it.
Five Stage seals are Fuuinjutsu, doesn't matter what you say, the art of sealing is Fuuinjutsu, not Ninjutsu. Remove them.
Your clan states you need Katon and Fuuton to use it's abilities, yet you have Raiton and Fuuton. Please note you cannot use your clan correctly unless you have this two elements as your speciality, I suggest you change Raiton to Katon or remove your clan, choice is yours.

If I get a reply that I found unacceptable your application will be locked for 48 hours.

Age : 32 Posts : 276

Here's what I did do far: Working on it though.

• Fucked off the wings. Had Aaron move my clan so I can remove the shit about the wings in the history.
• He is now Wingless. But MAY... MAY! HAVE SOME FORM OF WINGED ATTIRE! >>!
• Removed all Raiton Jutsu, and Natsuin Dankai (Damn you.)
• Will be making new Custom Katon and a new Last-Resort Jutsu.
• Gave him an absolutely epic picture. >>
• Removed the Narusu Crystal.
• Changed Description of both Personality and Looks.
• F***ed your girlfriend.
• Removed 'Altitude - Chakra' thing.
• Last but not least, I put in links towards the approved things that are in the Weapon section. Click on the name and you'll get the link to it.

So far that's all I remember editing. >>

Age : 28 Posts : 2538

Are you aware that you can no longer condense chakra because you removed your character's states?

You state that your character must be in at least first or second stage to condense chakra and you no longer have the stages.

This will need editing in that case. :]

Posts : 509

Quote :: Condensed Fuuton Chakra
Condensing Fuuton Chakra is a basic form of the Kazura's ability to condense such substances. Utilizing a set amount of chakra per condensation, can result in powerful fluxes of wind in one area, if not combined with Katon. These "Pushes" of wind can be caused in many ways.

E Rank: D Rank Push.
D Rank: C Rank Push.
C Rank: B Rank Push.
B Rank: A Rank Push.
A Rank: A Rank Push.
S Rank: S Rank Push.

Condensed Katon Chakra
Condensing Katon Chakra is a more Advanced way of the Kazura's ability to condense such substances. The ability to manipulate the chakra to Condense Katon chakra can create an explosion beneath the fire that is condensed. With enough force of the Condensation, along with Fuuton, can create an explosion with enough power to....You get the rest.

E Rank Chakra: D Rank Burn.
D Rank Chakra: C Rank Burn.
C Rank Chakra: B Rank Burn.
B Rank Chakra: A Rank Burn.
A Rank Chakra: A Rank Burn.
S Rank Chakra: S Rank Burn.

E Rank Combination: C Rank Explosion. (I think this should be D Rank Explosion.)
D Rank Combination: C Rank Explosion.
C Rank Combination: B Rank Explosion.
B Rank Combination: A Rank Explosion.
A Rank Combination: S Rank Explosion.
S Rank Combination: S+ Rank Explosion.

This method of chakra condensing seems extremely powerful, although i do like the idea behind it. I see you have taken that into some consideration already however i still believe you require a negative effect by using it. For example:- Pein's cool down/recharge time. I think it would be satisfactry if you provided a cool down/recharge time(s) for any/all over B rank Explosion or B rank Push. That way you'll still be able to peform a weaker version should you need to however should you perform a more powerful version, i'd expect the recharge time to be a minimum of one post to three posts (S rank version). During these recharge time(s) i think it fair that you cannot perform any jutsu over C rank, although you may still maintane your characters mobility. Unless of course you perform your S+ Rank Explosion inwhich case i think it fair that you not be able to perform any jutsu in your re-charge period.