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kenshiki naito
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PostSubject: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptyTue 09 Mar 2010, 9:15 pm

Name: Kaji Sword of Fire
Quantity: 1
Rank: B
Appearance: the right one is Kaji. Yochi is just longer then Kaji
https://i.servimg.com/u/f77/12/97/32/63/pic110.jpg
Special Ability: these swords have the ability to add user’s chakra to them to give them elemental attribute. The more chakra add the stronger the element.
-When you add chakra to Kaji it has red chakra going around it and it has the power to safely cut through at most 4 inches of most metals. Any more and it could break. Kaji is also able to cut through wood, bamboo, ice and various other things, but canNOT but through stone, gems, such as diamonds, rubies, etc.

Length is 3.9 ft.
Width is .5 ft by 1.5 ft
weight 20 lbs.

Origin: They both have a signature from a sword smith named Auron G. According to history Auron lived about 350 years ago in Konoha Village during a war with a small country. It is assumed the swords were made to aid Konoha but no records of swords with their abilities were ever found. The swords made their way back into modern day when Kenshiki found them after defeating some bandits. Then they were old and rusted, but after a few days of work Kenshiki made them useable. It wasn't until Kenshiki was returning to Konoha that he found out about their abilities. Ever since then they barely left his side.

Name: Yochi Sword of Earth
Quantity: 1
Rank: B
Appearance: The one on the left is Yochi the sword of Earth. Yochi is just longer then Kaji
https://i.servimg.com/u/f77/12/97/32/63/pic110.jpg
Special Ability: these swords have the ability to add user’s chakra to them to give them elemental attribute. The more chakra add the stronger the element. Yochi is a katana
and yochi is hard to break, and can go through the ground, rocks, etc. also it has the ability to increase or decrease in length, width, and thickness. the bigger it gets the heavier it is

Length is 4 ft.
Width is .5 ft by 1.5 ft
weight 25 lbs.

Max Length is 8 ft.
Max Width is 2 ft by 4 ft
Max weight 80 lbs.

Origin: They both have a signature from a sword smith named Auron G. According to history Auron lived about 350 years ago in Konoha Village during a war with a small country. It is assumed the swords were made to aid Konoha but no records of swords with their abilities were ever found. The swords made their way back into modern day when Kenshiki found them after defeating some bandits. Then they were old and rusted, but after a few days of work Kenshiki made them useable. It wasn't until Kenshiki was returning to Konoha that he found out about their abilities. Ever since then they barely left his side.


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Uchiha Osore
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptyTue 09 Mar 2010, 9:25 pm

Chaka conductive weapons are B Rank or higher, denied.
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptyTue 16 Mar 2010, 10:04 pm

Edited
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptyTue 16 Mar 2010, 10:49 pm

Cutting through seven inches of metal is a definite no, and each ability is going to need at least three lines of detail describing what it does, how it does, etc. Yochi needs limits, how much can it grow? how far can it reach? etc.
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptySat 03 Apr 2010, 8:49 pm

Think I Got it right now
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Uchiha Osore
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptyTue 13 Apr 2010, 2:31 pm

The weapons need more detail and you'll need to try and correct the grammar and spelling.
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptySat 15 May 2010, 9:25 pm

-spelling, & grammar checked

-detail added
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptyFri 21 May 2010, 1:32 pm

Needs chakra cost
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptyWed 09 Jun 2010, 1:31 am

The ability to increase cutting power via chakra is done with elemental chakra (either wind or lightning), simply pumping chakra through a weapon isn't going to have that desired effect.

Similarly, if you want a weapon of variable geometry you are going to need a better description then it simply growing due to chakra. Same goes for the density increase. Also, there is already a technique that add length to a blade used by Asuma Sarutobi in naruto. You might consider learning it and creating varients as it makes more sense then the actual weapon changing shape at will.
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshiki's swords Kenshiki's swords EmptySun 11 Jul 2010, 2:03 am

Archived due to application inactivity.
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