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| Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] | |
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Rust
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| Subject: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Sat 30 Oct 2010, 1:31 pm | |
| Basic Information: Name: Hanzoui, Rigid (Japanese Format) Secondary Title: Rig, The Red Shadow Age: 15 Gender: Male Physical Appearance: Rigid looks like the average bloke, tall, dark and hansom. His skin tone is quite a pale due to the amount of time he spends in Kiri, where sun doesn't hardly come out. Rigid has dark green eyes, I say dark because people hardly recognise them until they get quite close. The colour of his hair is red, like his eyes the red is quite dark, this helps him when he is on missions because many people wont be able to notice the colour so good.
His clothing is quite dark too. This also gives him the upper edge in missions, which requires to be one with the shadows. Rigid wears the average chunnin vest which is a dark blue colour, underneath that he wears a black suit jumper along with black three quarters, these two match to make it like they are connected. Rigid then wears the average ninja sandals which are also black and then he has all the pouches that every ninja has.He has also got a very noticeable feature on his lip. That is a lip ring, Rigid got this when he first turned Chunnin as a present. Also on his right ear he has several piercings which are rings, then on his left ear he has a stretcher which is 12mm.
Rigid has every slot he needs for every weapon he has on his body.
Personality: Rigid is the average person. He has his good days which he can be very friendly, talkative and a fun guy to be around. Then he has his bad days where he is a very nasty guy, this includes being anti-social and also one of them guys where he takes the mick out of people. But past all these things Rigid, is a little like his name. He is a chipped down guy who doesn't really give a damn about life any more and only just wants to protect his village and kill.
Over time Rigid has built a wall around himself, this allows him to keep his mind to himself. Also this is hard for his team mates to communicate with him because of how difficult talking to him is. Rigid also doesn't speak that much and keeps him self to his self. Also if he was to get captured it would take a very long time to crack Rigid's mind. This makes him a very good asset to be in any team, he can also fit into any team because of his skills. Catch Phrase: Does your character have any catch phrases? Optional.
Clan Information: N/A
Rank Information: Rank: Chunnin (Adam's Permission) Village Affiliation: Kirigakure
Special Information: Character Speciality: Main:Weaponry Sub:Taijutsu Elemental Affinity: Main: Fuuton Sub: Raiton Special Characteristics: Agility: Rigid is very fast with his agility. This allows him to use his weapons in a better way so he can help his team mates in any situation.
Tough Mind Over time he has trained his mind so it does not give in so easy. In short Rigid wont speak and wont crack until a very long time. This makes it hard for the enemy to subtract information.
Strength: Because of all the training he has done with his weapons and how much he has to carry them everyday, he has built up strength where he cant hardly feel the weapons on his back any more so they dont bother him. Also he can pick up things that other shinobi might not be able to.
Skill Information: Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them. Jutsu:
Normal Jutsu
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Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Type: Nin Rank: E Element: N/A Description:Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name:Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Type: Nin Rank: E Element: N/A Description:Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Name:Kai - Release Type: Nin Rank: E-S Element: N/A Description:Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name:Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Type: Nin Rank: E Element: N/A Description:Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name:Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Type: Nin Rank: E Element: N/A Description:Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name:Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Type: Nin Rank: D-S Element: N/A Description:Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.Non Elements
Weapon Template:
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Name: Ones' Quantity: 3 in each battle Rank: B Appearance: The fuuma shuriken can be compacted into one blade, but when the user flicks his wrist that one blade turns into four blades and takes the form of a shurkien, but alot bigger. The shuriken can go at high speeds and even chop down tree's. Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: Rigid usually stocks up on fumma shurikens every time he comes out of a battle. Name: Two Quantity: 1 Rank: B Appearance: The weapon looks like the every day war hammer. The hammer at the top which is the size of an average human head, is made out of silver metal. The grip has criss cross pattern so it grips to the hands easier and wont slip out of the users hand. Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: Again Rigid gets this from the local weapon shop. Many ninja cant get these because the shop owner keeps them behind the till for Rigid only. Name: Three and Four Quantity: 2 Rank: B Appearance: This one is called Three by Rigid. As you can see the two metal bars are connected by a metal chain that is virtually impossible to break. This is Three's sister, also this one is called Four. Four is metal but around the outside is wood which cannot break that easily. Also Four has a pattern to make it look pretty. Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Origin: Again from the same shop as the others. The story behind this is that they are both sisters and have been together since they were made. As Three is silver and plain, Four is creative and decorative. Name: Five Quantity: 1 Rank: B Appearance: Like every brass knuckle, this one is the same. It has four slots for each finger and then the thumb wraps around the bit at the bottom to balance it. Also this is possible to break but very difficult. Special Abilities/Characteristics: Chakra infused. Origin: From the weapon shop.
Average Weapons: Kunai: x10 Shuriken: x15 Smoke Pellets: x3 packets (5 pellets in a packet) Explosive Tags: x5
Background Information History: 0-5 Like most shinobi Rigid was born into the world the same as everyone. He was born into the Kirigakure with his parents, they lived their happily and all was nice in the Mist Village. Rigid's parents were not ninja as they could not control there chakra as well as most shinobi, so they settled as civilians and it wasn't different for Rigid either. His parents gene got passed onto him and he was unable to control his chakra better then his other class mates.
No matter the reason, Rigid's parents put him in the academy at the age of 5 so he could learn how to use his chakra and control it. When he did get in the academy through his year being 5, he was tormented by the other kids because they could do things Rigid was unable to do. But he did not give in and learnt the basic jutsu at the same pace of the other children at the academy.
6-10 When Rigid knew that his speciality wasn't going to be ninjutsu as he was finding it quite difficult, he began to train up his weaponry skills so he could match against the other ninja around him. Every time he would arrive back home from academy, he would go outside and train until it was dark with weapons. This also built up his strength and so he became quite muscular after a little bit.
When in the exam for the academy, he was quite smart at all the theory stuff and passed that. But when it came up to the jutsu part, he started to struggle but he was just about to pass and earned him self the title as genin and also the fore head protector. Rigid's parents was very proud of him because he was able to do something that no one in their family was able to do before, because of this they treated him to his very own weapons.
11-14 After being passed to Genin, Rigid was put into a team which his ability's would help with the team as their ability's would help him as well. At first the mission's were quite boring, but after a bit of D-Rank Missions, his team was bumped up to C-Rank Missions which helped Rigid hone his skills more and help him become a better mission. Also when he wasn't on mission's, he was at home training with his weapons for the Chunnin Exams that were coming close very soon.
It came to the Chunnin Exam. Rigid and his team was put into it. First was the written exam which they passed with flying colours. Then the second test came which made the team work harder then before but they reached the tower in the end. This was the time that Rigid could show his real skills, as the team was split up into 1 on 1 battles. At the end Rigid beat his fight and so did one of his other team mates. It now came to the last test. Rigid and his team mate were put together to face off. Rigid didnt hold back and beat his team mate, they were both promoted to Chunnin for their amazing skills.
15-16 To be continued...
Role-Play Sample: This is from my other character on Ingoo
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Kyran just came out of the mission building. He had a scroll in his hand with the letter D all over the outside paper. Unrolling the piece of paper, he read it. After a few minutes of reading, he went home to get his stuff packed. He grabbed his bag and put everything he needed such as traps etc. Kyran also packed a few packets of crisps to re-fuel his energy when he was out. After he was pre-pared for the mission. He went to eat his dinner, when he finished it was almost night so Kyran would wait until the morning to do the mission.
The mission was to capture a cat from the outskirts of Sukiagakure. He would then have to report them to the vets, to get them checked out and give them a home so they could be happy. Beeping went off and Kyran’s hand appeared from underneath his sheets and slammed on the clock. He got up and yawned, still half asleep, he got dressed and then went for his breakfast. The sun was shining brightly over the village, he smiled and then grabbed his bag, also his mission and walked out the door.
Kyran made his way towards the entrance which led to the outskirts. The gate was already opened and no chunnin were needed to guard the entrance. A smirk appeared on Kyran’s face as he ran out the entrance into the wilderness, to capture the cat and get his reward. When he stepped into the outskirts, he heard a cat meow from some distance away. Being the person he was, Kyran bent his knees and jumped onto a tree, then from there he jumped to another tree and continued doing that until he arrived at where the cat was located.
He was kneeling on one of the branch’s as he looked down on the cat. Meanwhile the cat looked up and saw Kyran, then began to run away. “Crap” Kyran said quietly to himself. He then began to jumped tree to tree again after the cat. When Kyran catched up to it, he was on the tree’s as the cat was on the ground. Kyran jumped onto one more branch and then jumped diagonally towards the cat. He put out his hand to catch it, the cat then ran to the left and dodged Kyran. He landed on the floor and gambolled over a couple of times, he stopped sitting down. Dirt was all over his clothes and a few scratches over his face, he looked the direction the cat was running as it disappeared in a few hedges.
Kyran sighed, he then put his hands on the floor and shifted his weight so he would stand back up again and continue with the mission. When he was on his feet, he looked at the hedges the cat retreated to, his eyes narrowed and his eyebrows curved in. Dust went flying in the air as Kyran went running after the cat. When he was half way to the hedges, he jumped onto a tree and then rebounded backwards and landed on a tree branch.
Last edited by Drew on Tue 02 Nov 2010, 12:09 am; edited 4 times in total |
| | | Rust
Age : 29 Posts : 463
| Subject: Re: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Mon 01 Nov 2010, 11:38 pm | |
| Could you check this please and I will finish the rest after thankyou. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Mon 01 Nov 2010, 11:51 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Elemental Affinity:
What element(s) your character possesses, no more than two
Character Speciality: You may pick 2 skills: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Weaponry, Medical, Puppetry, Fuuinjutsu Remove the bolded parts.
If you want any jutsu what so ever, put them in now. This includes any taijutsu or weaponry techniques.
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- Tactics:
Rigid is very good at tactics, even in a dodgy situation he can think of a tactic that will give his team an upper hand.
Weaponry Knowledge: Rigid knows nearly any weapon in the world and how to use them. Weaponry Knowledge: At the age of 15, you would have nowhere near that amount of knowledge nor proficiency, nor would you be able to use the weapons you have with even expert proficiency.
Tactics: Dont metagame. This will be the only warning given.
Bump once the history and RP samples are finished and I will judge for the rank being asked for. |
| | | Rust
Age : 29 Posts : 463
| Subject: Re: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Tue 02 Nov 2010, 12:10 am | |
| Edited and Completion Bump |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Tue 02 Nov 2010, 12:18 am | |
| Alright, thats good for a Chuunin description wise, but you would be quite weak compared to others given the no jutsu portion. If you wanna go for it, sure, just post here again and Ill approve it. |
| | | Rust
Age : 29 Posts : 463
| Subject: Re: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Tue 02 Nov 2010, 12:19 am | |
| Yehh Ill give it a try |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Tue 02 Nov 2010, 12:20 am | |
| Alrighty then, approved |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Hanzoui, Rigid [Kiri Chuunin] Sun 12 Dec 2010, 11:05 am | |
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