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PostSubject: The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation EmptySun 29 Aug 2010, 9:46 am

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Local Lore According to witness of the Snappy turtle mission:
"The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation. Its a legend the resort seems to have here. There is a legend saying when the valley was first established that there were these Suna villagers wanting to make something more of the land of wind. To create a place of Living creatures can survive, A valley if you will. The Valley was made with Suna Citizen and Shinobi alike. The shinobi possessed amazing ninjutsu skills that was able to help create the valley. There was a legend that says these shinobi had key items to amplify their own Shinobi skills that they have learned. And at the end of the completion of the valley these shinobi gave up their items and sealed some of their own skills into the valley for if the valley was ever to be destroyed the powers will help resurrect the valley once more. There was four of these items and they said that 3 of the items were recovered except for this one Amulet. The amulet symbolized a Shinobi help change Temperature with the area so they will be able cool down the environment when Suna was at its hottest and Heat things up when Suna was at its Coldest. This was to help the workers of suna stay calm as well as to make sure nothing has died until the completion of the valley. This shinobi left some of its skills on it. The amulet is said to help change the temperature and Increase the range a shinobi can change this temperature... Blaize if it is located it could make sense of why the turtle was trying to find it Or protect it. The turtle could have been alive when this shinobi was up and alive and found its hiding place. It must of been mad at the changes the valley went through and destroyed the resorts that hinder within the Valley. Blaize i think you could have some use for it don't you think?"

Name: The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation

The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation Amulet
Red Amulet For the heated Amulet of Cool Sensation. The others are what it would look like if it would join together
Rank: C
Type: Enhancer
Natural Abilities: An Amulet that resemble one of the few shinobi that helped build this city a while ago. The amulet is said to have powers of a shinobi that was one of the founders of the valley in Suna. He specialized in Temperature based ninjutsu and Blaize wants its abilities because it is to be used as something that a person of this generation can do with the item then some punks that would steal it.
This amulet is said to amplify jutsu that deals with temperature like heat. Blaize, who has now have full possession of the amulet decided to help amplify the heat temperature. This amulet is said to change anywhere in a range to 10 Degree F. This intrigued Blaize because of his jutsu that allows him to change a temperature in a certain area can be heated more or cooled off depending on the how the user wants to use it. This amulet gets to amplify the Range of how long it a distance a temperature based jutsu by 15 meters .The amulet can be used is up to three post and the time the amulet can be used again is in four posts.

(3 turn use, but take a full turn after that to be active, making the total wait to reuse this jutsu four turns. This is so one can not resuse the jutsu to change the usage time. For example. Using it once again during the second turn to reset the time to use the jutsu)

During this time the user will get to use two free C rank Temperature based Jutsu this amulet can only be used twice in a thread/day unless half a day has passed then it is uses are reset.
Secret Use: it is legend that when the Valley is destroyed this Amulet can bring ¼ of the Valley back from destruction if Suna’s valley is ever in danger. Once the amulet is used then the amulet will destroy itself. It was made for the purpose of rebuilding Suna’s valley if the day ever came for that. For all of the valley to be brought up it would need the three other artifacts that Suna hides and use those to help rebuild Suna’s Valley if the time ever needed it.
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PostSubject: Re: The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation EmptySun 07 Nov 2010, 2:22 am

*Bump*?
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PostSubject: Re: The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation EmptyMon 15 Nov 2010, 9:26 pm

The only problems I see with this are the following:

1) Make the temperature change to 10 degrees.
2) And also change the range of a temperature based jutsu to 10-15 meters.

Secondly,
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With the Location of the Ryuzaki jutsu Blaize is able to use his Flames to scope out an area or to found out were an ally is. Then when the range of detection needs to be located the amulet can be used is up to three post and the time the amulet can be used again is in four posts.

Word this a bit differently. It doesn't flow very well, and, quite frankly, it makes hardly any sense.
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PostSubject: Re: The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation EmptyThu 02 Dec 2010, 3:23 am

Edit Complete.

Edit Nerf the temp to 10Degrees, and Nerf the range to 15meters.

Also took out the highlighted section. I don't know why I wrote that
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PostSubject: Re: The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation EmptyFri 03 Dec 2010, 9:27 pm

Well.... seems fine to me. But since I can't move or anything like that, you'll have to wait for another mod to edit it. My global mod got rescinded. :'(
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PostSubject: Re: The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation The heated Amulet of Cool Sensation EmptyMon 20 Dec 2010, 4:56 pm

I don't see nothing wrong with it. I will say approved.
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