Custom Necromite Jutsu [Done]

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Name: Necromite Style: Banishing
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N\A
Description: A Necromite clan jutsu. This jutsu affects the entire radius of their chakra field. When a Summoning jutsu is used inside the chakra field, the Necromite Clan member has a second where they can cancel out the jutsu being performed be interrupting it with their own chakra. The same applies to Fuuinjutsu. With a few differences, The Necromite member is using their chakra to supress the Fuuinjutsu. Like most Necromite techniques it dosen't require any chakra to use, however it will take several feet of chakra to wrap the technique. The amount of feet used is dependent on the rank of the caster of the Summon or Fuuinjutsu:
E Rank-3ft
D Rank-5ft
C Rank-7ft
B Rank-11ft
A Rank-13ft
S Rank-17ft

Since the user of the Fuuinjutsu ir Summon will use their chakra to resitst the seal there is only a amount of time that the chakra field can suppress the Summon or Fuuinjutsu for:
E Rank-2 posts
D Rank-3 posts
C Rank-4 posts
B Rank-5 posts
A Rank-7posts
S Rank-10 posts

After the chakra is used in this method it takes some time for it to cooldown and restore balence to itself:
E Rank-8 posts
D Rank-7 posts
C Rank-6 posts
B Rank-4 posts
A Rank-2 posts
S Rank-1 post.

Note: This jutsu dosen't effect Bijuu Seals. Seals used by clans will be affected until they mover out of the range of the chakra field.

Name: Vampire Style: Angel Of Darkness
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N\A
Description: A Necromite clan jutsu. The user condenses their chakra into the rough shape of wings. These wings can be used for increased speed, offence and defence. The size of the wings dictates the speed and power of them. The size of the wings is decided by how much of the chakra field size is converted into the wings size. Here is a list to show what rank the wings are at the different sizes.
A gosses wings can break a man's arm with a direct hit. These can be deadly given enough force and oppitinity, the level of attack is given be how long they are. For defense they can wrap around Azien to protect him from incoming blows. Since the wings are made for flight they can only block attacks one letter rank below them.
When used for flight it would work like a ninja of the indicated rank had moved. This speed is added onto the original:

6ft long – C Rank
8ft long- B Rank
10ft long – A Rank
12ft long- S Rank
Note: Since this jutsu needs more physical mass than norm, it requires the extra chakra placed into it. Also the wings can reach past the chakra field size limit and remain uneffected. The reason for this is because the wings themselves are effectivly and extension of the field, just forced to grow outwards not in a cirular direction. Therefore it is possible for clan members can use clan jutsu through the wings.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Age : 33 Posts : 428

First technique, I would have to say denied. I just don't get how can you stop Fuuinjutsu or Summoning by interrupting it with your own chakra...

Second one, please elaborate how can those wings be used for defense and offense. Also, that increase of speed, add how much the speed gets increased on each rank.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Lord Marcus wrote:: First technique, I would have to say denied. I just don't get how can you stop Fuuinjutsu or Summoning by interrupting it with your own chakra...

Second one, please elaborate how can those wings be used for defense and offense. Also, that increase of speed, add how much the speed gets increased on each rank.

Meh...it is simple, since Fuuinjutsu needs quite a lot of chakra control to use right? Well basically the Necromite clan member disrupts that process with their own chakra.

Second. I was getting to that. You know how a gosses wings can break a man's arm? Well imagine being hit by one over double that power.

Age : 33 Posts : 428

Not really, Fuuinjutsu just requires chakra, not chakra control, same with summoning. I still stand by my decision, if you want, you could ask another Mod or Admin to look at it again.

Wings, you forgot to add the speed boost. Also, since there is no wings on D Rank, boost the rank of the Jutsu and make it C-S. Killing a man with a single strike, that is a bit too much.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Lord Marcus wrote:: Not really, Fuuinjutsu just requires chakra, not chakra control, same with summoning. I still stand by my decision, if you want, you could ask another Mod or Admin to look at it again.

Wings, you forgot to add the speed boost. Also, since there is no wings on D Rank, boost the rank of the Jutsu and make it C-S. Killing a man with a single strike, that is a bit too much.

Okay well in short, the Ncromite is using their chakra to directly cancel out the opponents chakra. Since Necromites have double the chakra I won't mind if you want me to double the cost of the jutsu.

Done. Edited and ranked up. Maybe not killing, but you know. Broken bones that sort of thing.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

All right, for the first one. I may see how you would be able to stop seals from activating in your chakra field by disrupting the activation chakra with yours, but I don't see how you can stop them from placing the seals.

Second jutsu: Typo on offense. How would you fly with chakra wings? Chakra in of itself is a 'spiritual energy', so it doesn't 'really' have mass and wouldn't create lift.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Z wrote:: All right, for the first one. I may see how you would be able to stop seals from activating in your chakra field by disrupting the activation chakra with yours, but I don't see how you can stop them from placing the seals.

Second jutsu: Typo on offense. How would you fly with chakra wings? Chakra in of itself is a 'spiritual energy', so it doesn't 'really' have mass and wouldn't create lift.

Okay...
First Jutsu:
That is the magic of it all. I can't, I can only suppresse the activation of it. Once it is out of the chakra field range, it can activate.
I think I won't take chakra, same as all of Necromite jutsu.

Second jutsu:
"Typo"?
Well it condences the chakra, giving it physical mass, same as some of the other clan jutsu. However since it needs more mass than most, it needs to consume some of the chakra.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

All right, just add some mention of it in the jutsu to clarify.

Yep, typo, internet slang for mistype. All right then.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Done
I would also like the rest of the AS jutsu added to my app, I may not be able to use some of them with my KKG on, but when I itsn't I can.
As an after thought I would also like the rest of the Necromite jutsu,I forgot to add them.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

AS jutsu?

Age : 27 Posts : 209

I didn't get to put all of them in... the Admins said I couldn't have them cuz of my KKG...becasue my chakra gets externalized...

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

AS=Academy Student?

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Once the wings block an attack they're destroyed, right?

Age : 27 Posts : 209

If the attack is strong enough...sure.

Age : 30 Posts : 1256

Add the academy jutsu to this app, you'll still need to train the D-rank ones.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

I need the Clone jutsu and Transformation jutsu

Age : 37 Posts : 1136

To clarify a few things about first Jutsu:

1) How long does its affects last?
2) Does the tech require it be done prior to any summing of a summon or creation of a fuu to be of use? Aka is the tech a proactive defensive ability?

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Okay clearing up:
1)The first one lasts until dissmised and the second, well you are giving up some of the chakra field so it stays there until Azien dies or dissactivates his Eyes.

2)Yes correct.

Age : 37 Posts : 1136

Regarding banishing the basis for it is still weak but its allowable on the following conditions. It should cost an amount of chakra equivalent to a fuu/summon it stops. Likewise there should be a post limit for how long this state can be maintained followed by a minimum wait to use it again.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

OKay I can do that....let me edit.

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Bump....

Age : 27 Posts : 209

Dump of the Bump