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Dan
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PostSubject: The Glider Staff The Glider Staff EmptyWed 10 Nov 2010, 10:57 am

Name: Glider Staff
Quantity: 1 [One]
Rank: B
Appearance:
The Glider Staff Avatar_Aang__s_Glider_by_minalei
The Glider Staff is the result of Ahora's free-spirited and super-creative brain making its magic.

The Glider Staff is a 7ft long length of Rosewood roughly 5centimeters in width and 3centimeters high. The design possesses two fans attached to the contraption with a basic seal holding both joints. One of the fans is roughly 5ft in length from tip to tip with a 3ft circumference from point of origin. The smaller fan is only 1ft in circumference and is situated three quarters down the shaft. Both of these fans are made form a tightly woven linen and are foldable to reveal just the normal shaft. The fans are auto-clicked into the shaft using this same seal, so that the fans aren't just flowing around everywhere. The seal used to attach everything is the Forging Seal.

The shaft itself has a special property in that it has two concealed daggers around 8inches in length. These are exposed from each end of the staff and can only be accessed by activating yet another seal placed upon it roughly midway up the shaft. This seal is a basic seal and can be used in conjunction with various other seals.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: Because of the seals, the fans on the shaft can be detached and used as a Wind Medium for techniques requiring the Wind Element.

Quote :
Name: Forging Seal
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: None.
Description: A simplistic seal with a technical background. The Forging seal is unique in that it can have the ability to "staple" or "glue" two objects together using chakra. These objects then must remain stuck together unless Gōkin Kai - Seal Release is used upon it. No amount of force can separate the two objects apart, however due to the simplicity of the seal; everything of the objects but where the spot the seal is located can be destroyed.
Link: I'll train both items when I get the approval.
Medical use/Bastardized use: None.

Origin: As several of her wind techniques required a wind medium and she hated the prospect of having a big huge fan lugging behind her, Ahora decided to find an alternative. Whilst watching a tern by the docks of Kirigakure, she noted how it used the thermal currents to "glide" with ease; using this as a basis, Ahora got stuck into work developing and creating this very Gliding Staff.


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Tony
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PostSubject: Re: The Glider Staff The Glider Staff EmptyWed 10 Nov 2010, 10:25 pm

I'm a bit not used to this... so if I need a bit more analysis on this, another admin could help me out.

1) A bit more in-depth on the origin would be nice. Why did your character create the staff?
2) How did they make the staff? Where did they get the materials?

Secondly, make the larger fan 1ft smaller in length.

Finally, it would be a wise decision to create the jutsu for the detached fans.

Do these small things, otherwise, I do not see a problem.

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PostSubject: Re: The Glider Staff The Glider Staff EmptyThu 11 Nov 2010, 10:35 pm

Completed all of your points, adding in the relevant information to the relevant areas including that seal.
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PostSubject: Re: The Glider Staff The Glider Staff EmptyFri 12 Nov 2010, 11:18 pm

Fine in my eyes. Approved.
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