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Yazu
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 |  Subject: Some Taijutsu - Done Mon 13 Dec 2010, 8:11 pm | |
| Name: Bone Fist
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: Quite a simple technique. Using his calcium manipulation ability, the user manipulates his bones to spread trough his fist, making ti cover his knuckles. This lasts for up to three posts, after which the bones crack and fall off. But, while it lasts, the punches which the user deals will be far more stronger than before. It will seem as if his fist is made out of metal. Drawback is, while the bones are cowering his fist, he is unable to use any kind of hand seals.
Name: Lightning Road
Rank: C-S
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: By stabbing one of his bone swords into the ground and directing his other sword at the lightning, the user is able to guide the lightning from one of his sword, through his body and into the ground. As he does this, the user uses his own lightning chakra to guide the other lightning so that it does not hurt him. But, if he moves, the focus will be lost and lightning will kill him. The strength of the lightning which he can re-direct this way depends on the rank of the user. Example, at C-Rank it works on C-Ranked lightning techniques, so at B-Rank it would work against B-Ranked lightning techniques. So on, so on...
Last edited by Stark on Mon 20 Dec 2010, 1:43 pm; edited 2 times in total |
|   | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Tue 14 Dec 2010, 12:22 am | |
| | Done. |
| | | | Elder Sage
Age : 31
Posts : 1118
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Tue 14 Dec 2010, 4:29 am | |
| - Quote :
- Name: Bone Fist
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: -
Description: Quite a simple technique. Using his calcium manipulation ability, the user manipulates his bones to spread trough his fist, making ti cover his knuckles. This lasts for one post only, after which the bones crack and fall off. But, while it lasts, the punches which the user deals will be far more stronger than before. It will seem as if his fist is made out of metal. Drawback is, while the bones are cowering his fist, he is unable to use any kind of hand seals.
One post for a C ranked technique is underpowered. Given its rank a three post duration would be more adequate eh? |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Tue 14 Dec 2010, 1:46 pm | |
| | Ok, done. |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Tue 14 Dec 2010, 10:37 pm | |
| | Anyone? |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Wed 15 Dec 2010, 12:25 am | |
| - Stark wrote:
Name: Lightning Road
Rank: C-S
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: By stabbing one of his bone swords into the ground and directing his other sword at the lightning, the user is able to guide the lightning from one of his sword, through his body and into the ground. As he does this, the user uses his own lightning chakra to guide the other lightning so that it does not hurt him. But, if he moves, the focus will be lost and lightning will kill him. The strength of the lightning which he can re-direct this way depends on the rank of the user.
Just to make sure, by other sword, do you mean another bone sword? Because to have a sword capable of guiding lightning through it would be B-ranked and you're only a genin. |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Wed 15 Dec 2010, 3:55 pm | |
| | Indeed, that is what I meant. |
| | | | Blaize
Posts : 830
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Wed 15 Dec 2010, 4:49 pm | |
| For Now Approval for "Bone Fist" Is Given for training.
Although I will let C.C fiddle with you other jutsu. Although, this is a in increasing tech because of the increase in rank. Can you describe how much difference is in each rank. |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Wed 15 Dec 2010, 7:54 pm | |
| | Well, at C-Rank it works on C-Ranked lightning techniques, so at B-Rank it would work against B-Ranked lightning techniques. So on, so on... |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Thu 16 Dec 2010, 7:34 pm | |
| | Bump. |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Fri 17 Dec 2010, 6:45 pm | |
| | 23 hours passed, but still, I am going to bump this. It is not nice to keep someone waiting. |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Sat 18 Dec 2010, 8:31 pm | |
| | Is anybody here doing their job? Seriously, bump for the third time. |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Sun 19 Dec 2010, 7:12 pm | |
| | Sorry, but I'm done with this. 4 days without any kind of respond, the staff on this site sure lacks some sense of duty. |
| | | | Dan
Age : 30
Posts : 1236
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Mon 20 Dec 2010, 1:01 am | |
| - Stark wrote:
- Well, at C-Rank it works on C-Ranked lightning techniques, so at B-Rank it would work against B-Ranked lightning techniques. So on, so on...
Well Stark. You need to put this into your description boyo. How else am I, whom may possibly well face you in the future going to know that from reading it. Fair enough your techniques haven't been checked, but you need to fix it better. ^^ Fo that and I'll approve. |
| | | | Yazu
Posts : 107
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Mon 20 Dec 2010, 1:44 pm | |
| | Fixed. Thank you very much. |
| | | | Dan
Age : 30
Posts : 1236
| | Subject: Re: Some Taijutsu - Done Mon 20 Dec 2010, 3:29 pm | |
| | Looks very fair and very good. ^^ You have my approval to train it. |
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