No name clan done.

Age : 30 Posts : 267

Clan Name:Un named

Clan Location:Roaming

Clan Traits:Cant use nin or gen jutsu. Most have silver eyes.

Kekkei Genkai:
Superhuman Abilities

All of the clan's physical abilities have been enhanced to superhuman levels.

Members's physical strength allows him to lift cars, the destroyed remains of APCs, tanks, and helicopters with ease. They can throw such objects great distances. They can kill a untrained human [aka bandit npc's] with a single, glancing blow, and is capable of punching holes through flesh, bone, and body armor if necessary.

The clan's speed and agility is likewise enhanced. They can achieve running speeds surpassing cars, around 40 mph, and can perform flips and rolls and maneuvers over and around vehicles and debris with little trouble. The leg strength allows them to leap nearly ten stories into the air.

Members of the clan can run up sheer vertical surfaces and cling to walls for an indefinite period of time. They are also capable of gliding, by making their biomass lighter in the air and ejecting small amounts of mass for further propulsion.

Members's vision is also enhanced, allowing them to see beyond the visible spectrum. They also have thermal vision which allows them to locate heat signatures.

Offensive Powers

http://prototype.wikia.com/wiki/Offensive_Powers

Members can form their biomass into a variety of weapons, mostly slicing or crushing tools. They can quickly transform their arms and hands into razor-sharp claws, the strength-augmenting mussle mass, the bolder-like hammer fists, the huge, double edged razor sword, or a telescoping whipfist that is topped with razor-sharp blades. The claws can also be used to send spikes through the ground, which come up and impale anyone in the way. The whipfist is also capable of grabbing faraway objects such as people or cars, and it is used to zipline to flying summons and commence a fight midair.

Defensive Powers

http://prototype.wikia.com/wiki/Defensive_Powers

The clan can use two defensive powers, guarding them against enemy attacks and weapons. They have two forms of defense, the Armor, and the Shield. The Armor greatly reduces the amount of damage recevied, but sacrifices agility and jumping abilities. The Shield protects the user from all damage unless it recieves a great amount of damage in a short period. When this happens, it breaks, and the user must wait a few seconds for it to regenerate. While sprinting with either Armor or Shield enabled, The user with smash through most of his obstacles instead of doing parkour over them.

Disguise Power

http://prototype.wikia.com/wiki/Disguise

The user has the ability to assume the physical form of any human they've consumed. In this manner, The user can infiltrate the enemy bases as one of them, duck out of sight and emerge as someone else to evade pursuit, and in general avoid drawing attention by disguising themself as someone else. It seems they are also able to recreate things besides the consumed's personal form, including non organic objects such as clothing and gasmasks they may have been wearing. It is unknown if these objects can be removed, as they are likely simply an imitation created by the user's biomass. [this may only be used on NPC's]

[any thing like cars and apc's are used to just show the limit to the users raw strength]

Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A

History:

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The clan is a rather odd one. By the fact it was created instead of being a mix of two genetics. A rouge shinobi was tampering with gods work. Trying to make a body to place his soul into. But the body was diffirent. It was made for raw strength and speed. Along with the fact it could take on other forms and make weapons,armors and sheilds from its own body.

There were two created. One main and one back up incase the first one wound up destroyed. But one night when no one was in the lab. Prototype 1 AKA project Zeus had broken out of his containment chamber and freed his fellow prototype's. They all escaped together and went their seprete ways. Each heading to its own village. Becoming a shinobi there.

Clan Details: Open only for 4 people how ever.

Age : 26 Posts : 239

Absolutely not. Denied. I would like to see this toned down a LOT.

Age : 30 Posts : 267

I knew it would. I would just like to know how much is all =/.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Quote :: Absolutely not. Denied. I would like to see this toned down a LOT.

Not quite. Given his rather 'blunt' system of wording its quite easy to say his clan is rather OP (which it is) but it still retains its relative simplicity. And please when modding give just a little 'reason' as to why you think its OP and maybe help the member tone it down to a more approvals level, because they may not know. Rather then just saying "TONE THIS MUTHA EFFA DOWN!"

But any-who ; Hey Keitaro

Okay, this clan needs some work. Given its nature its easy to assume that its a clan counterpart of the main character in the famed 'Prototype' game, which is fine, but keep in mind that when your doing that transition you must make some drastic edits in order to fit that ability into a clans perspective and limit, which you have failed to do so. Given that the clan is not able to perform both Ninjutsu and Genjutsu, having them have increased physical capabilities to counteract that downfall is no problem by me. I will try my absolute best to 'break down' my post to a more easily readable manner by you.

Whats wrong with this application;

1. The references to helicopters and tanks don't fit into narutoverse, and thus all references that ties into non-narutoverse subjects that isn't subject to OOC should be removed.

2. Using websites that link to prototype (which to me didn't work) isn't good enough to get ones understanding of the abilities. You need to translate those abilities onto the application and give reasons as to why members of this clan are able to do so.

3. Quite a few more, but hopefully(prays) you get the idea.

How you can fix your application;

1. Tone down your 'raw' strength and speed in which clan members are able to do. Make sure you take out the tank, helicopter etc out of the description. Add something more of "Is able to life twice that if a shinobi of its rank" or "speed is increased 30%". Make a list if you want, just be specific.

2. "Superhuman abiltiies" Isn't a good description as to why your clan has these traits. From my understanding a more suitable name would be 'bio-kinesis' or somewhere around shapeshifting. But anyway edit your description and provide distinct details as to why and how the clan members can do what they do.

3. For offensive and defensive techniques put those into Jutsu templates.

Thats all I'm going to say for now. You may not agree with everything I said in this post but I really do hope you understand where I'm coming from. This clan needs some slight originality and major edits.

Age : 30 Posts : 267

Ehh...Perhaps i shall just try something else...That isint as op xD.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Well do you want to just edit this clan are you doing another application in total?