Asagami, Nanaya [Kirigakure Genin]

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Basic Information:

Name: Asagami, Nanaya

Secondary Title: Oyashiro Sama

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Physical Appearance:

Asagami, Nanaya [Kirigakure Genin] Darker-than-black-5

Nanaya looks just like how the picture shows him, but his normal eye colors are grey, and look like the Hyuga eye’s making it harder to distinguish him from the Hyuga Clan and his hair is black. He is 5’4 and weighs 90 pounds, his skin is awfully clear and has attractive skin. His left arm is fake, but he is able to move it around normally because he is able to control it with his own chakra and wiring and its connected to his nerves, he barely uses up any chakra by using his arm, but even though the arm is fake, it looks just like a real arm and functions just like a real one, and his blood type is one negative. Nanaya displays little to no emotion over his face, with no life in them, only smiling when he is faking it, while Satsuki, gives the whole I wouldn't harm a fly angel exspression which can easily fool people, and Hei gives a innocent, childish expression, and Oyashiro gives a complete dark and bloodlust exspressions. When his other personaities take over Nanaya eye's change color, usually Hei's eye's are seen as a blue color, Satsuki's eye's are seen as a purple color, and Oyashiro's is seen as a red color, while Nanaya's stays are the grey color. His body is in increadible atheltic shape, even though he shows no muscle like some may do.

He wears the above type of outfit, but sometimes wears a black cloak over his normal cloths sometimes and wears ankle weights on both his legs and arms, but they are usually hidden. and he wears his clan symbol of his color and the back of his neck, while the clans seal is on his left wrist. Usually Nanaya sometimes wear's a mask to cover his face, in order for his dream to actually one day become an anbu, and merciless killer, while his weapon Rider usally hids within his black cloak hanging on his back, as well as wear black gloves, as well as where black kinds of boots.

Personality:
This is Nanaya’s true personality which is the part of him who has become understandably somewhat distorted and sly, as he seems to an extent to derive pleasure from taunting people with knowledge that he shouldn't know, he also seems to have practically no interest in anything, as he has been through it all many times already in which seem to be one of his few pleasures in life and he welcomes any kind of change, good and bad, he would show no emotions, and only react to something unexpected and sometimes females. He is also considerably bold and sometimes rude to people if not being friendly to them, as well as having a reserved and quiet demeanor, usally he will protect those whom he has grown attached to, or he finds a particular intrest in them.

Hei is sometimes either, quiet, timid, and polite, and is a womanizer. He is easily intimidated or frightened, and will whimper when upset or excited. When angry however, his voice becomes stern and mature like that of a god, he is extremely loving and carries a lot of guilt for the suffering he has done for the people who he has killed and their families, even for killing insects, in addition, he often feels helpless or depressing in his inability to help his teammates or the other personalities when he can’t which makes him feel like all he can do is apologize for his uselessness in protecting the ones he cares about which leads him in the habit of following them and repeatedly saying the words “I’m sorry.” But when his friends or families in danger he will become serious when needed to and is also Nanaya’s first personality that he has created.

Nanaya’s Second personality is Satsuki, who is timid natured and tries to help out others when she can, and generally keeps to herself, but is sometimes is generally outgoing and cheerful when not in battle, and usually handles talking to people and many social events, but in other occasions when the good side fades away, she displays a darker side that in which she’s a ruthless, calculating individual who has no qualms with killing when needed.

Nanaya’s last personality is called Oyashiro Sama and “it” is a rancorous and psychotic distortion of his normal/true self. In this form, his reasoning and emotions are severely impaired and he is indiscriminately destructive to everything around him and sometimes including himself, and is merely filled with a desire to kill, and instinctual knowledge on how to do it, he merely shows up when Nanaya is currently under great stress and possibly near death or his mentality is low.

Mostly all of the personalities have a strange liking towards food and are natural drawn towards both people and death.

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Clan Information:

Clan Name: Asagami

Clan Location: Traveling Clan, but mostly found near Kiri and Konoha

Clan Traits:Clan Traits: The Asagami Clan has been recognized by many different things regarding their abilities and them being highly proficient in the use of taijutsu while being extremely athletic and flexible enabling them to do things that not many humans and do, giving them an inhuman advantages, or a better way at putting things at their physical abilities as them being born and well talented contortionists, and having a high tolerance for pain (ex: if they were diving towards someone preparing to strike with their right hand and had the left arm out in front and if the arm gets twisted around like a screw till all the bones have cracked they would keep going until they having completed the attack.)

(If you are wandering what a contortionist can do and what they are, here is a small list of what they can do... and on another note a user can put their bodies in weird ways that can be used with their acrobatics to reach different momentums and fight using weird grapples and using their flexibility to help influence their movements, making it nearly impossible for opponents to copy their movements.

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Another one of the clans traits are their incredible affinity with the wind element that used to in their fighting abilities, they have the unique ability with their wind element that allows their winds to absorb bits off pieces of chakra from what the winds hit weakening their opponent or target as well as from some jutsu's to make them weaker (think of it like the ability chakra absorption, but with wind).

One of the strange things and confusing thing about their clan are their normal sets of eye’s in which they look awfully similar to the Hyuga type eye’s when their Waikyoku Eye’s aren’t activated, giving confusion into others thinking that they might be from Hyuga, but the reason behind this is because of their blood inheritance from the Hyuga Clan that had affected their eye’s.

One of the last things about their Clan is they can create multiple personalities within themselves (only four personalities exist), the personalities are used to gain multiple skills (i.e.: one for acting normal and one for fighting, another that’s a combination of the two, and the last one is homicidal as well as being suicidal), also their training revolves around refining themselves a self hypnosis skills that enhances their abilities wielding certain types of weapons that they specialize in which is usually a sword and highly in the use of taijutsu. When a child is born into their clan they are given one name written two different ways in kanji, sometimes these personalities make it harder for them and others to get along with them, these personalities are used to try to gain multiple abilities and a higher use of different skills and abilities, verifying that not all of the same clan members have the same abilities, since all the personalities that members have are different they all poses different abilities, but their winds ability are still the same for every member, giving their opponents a hard time predicting the user movements and thoughts (what some of the personalities will do while in battle will sometimes switch off, but may have the same mind sets on their goal, which may be to kill / destroy their target), while one personality may be sufficient in only taijutsu and can’t use any other skill and the enemy may know that, but the other personality is actually skilled in genjutsu, but the opponent may not know that).

Kekkei Genkai: Waikyoku Eye's

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The Waikyoku Eye’s distorts the users vision and gives the user incredible clarity of dexterity, one of the reason behind this is because their eye’s were actually made for tracking fast moving objects and the strange rings around their iris, which is the purplish color, allows them to easily identify things that are unusual and sometimes (or mostly) not possible to be seen with normal sets of eye’s, giving them a special type of vision and be able to quickly identify the enemy and destroy them. It also allows them to sense (see) pain in the opponent / target. The doujutsu could see a human target or animal in a black kind of aura or pitch black body, and from this when or is the person or thing is damaged either physically or mentally the aura / glow of that target changes. I.e. red for physical pain and green for mental, as well as a purple for being posioned or paralized and the darker it gets the worse the damage is, also if their target is bleeding it comes up as a orange color, it also changes the surround color of their surroundings to a blue color helping them to easily identify their target. This way combined with the user with their abilities and taijutsu can pinpoint where the opponent is damaged and can cause optimum damage in return. How they are able to tell where the exacted point of pain the area is coming from is from the vibrations coming from their opponent’s heart and their blood flow sensing irregularities throughout their opponent’s body as also from their opponent’s body temperature.

These eye’s could also be extremely useful to medical nins helping them be able to locate the source of the pain and quickly heal it as well as helping the user know where to target their attacks and use what part of their enemy is damaged to their advantage in battle.

Since Genjutsu is created when a ninja extends their chakra flow through the cerebral nervous system of their opponent to control their minds chakra, thereby affecting the users five senses, a way for them to break out of some of the opponents jutsu’s is to stop the flow of chakra in their body, and then apply an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the casters chakra or in other words using Kai Release by applying a sudden surge of chakra, one of the ways of helping them to achieve this is that they would intentionally inflict pain upon the their own body by affecting one of their senses (touch), to have pain that’s not caused by the Genjutsu and having the pain utilizing the resulting pain to bring their senses back in order therefore breaking them out of the Genjutsu, the Asagami Clan over use this type of technique for breaking out of Genjutsu’s because of their high threshold for pain.

Secret Clan Jutsu: Faded Death Slash
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Rank: D -- S
Description: The user forms together their own chakra with their wind elements and combining the use of the Asagami Eye’s, the user can direct Kamitachi (slicing winds) along certain wind currents in the air, by using a bladed weapon the damage is an amplifier causing the winds to become sharper and faster when the user thrusts or slashes acting as a conductor and a director for the winds to appear, but the winds actually come from the tip of the blade and either the user has to slash the air or an object causing target to be slashed from unknown directions (such as if the user slashes in front of the opponent from a distance a slice a wind may attack the opponent from directly from behind), this ability usually requires the Eye's of Asagami to help them tell where the wind currents are and when they curve, the Waikyoku Eye’s are also used to help them tell where the enemy’s weak and injured parts are so they could attack them. The user can only create 3 wind slashes at a time.

Name: Eye's of Asagami
Type: Dojustu
Element: N/A
Rank: D -- S
Description: The Eye’s of Asagami are the last and extended as well as confusing ability of the Waikyoku Eye’s that allows the user to see the wind currents in the air, like what the Waikyoku mean’s is distortion, or in better words it allows the user to see certain things that can’t be seen with normal eye’s by distorting their normal eye views, asset from allowing the user to sense where the opponent in injured, the second form of them allows them to see the wind currents to actually help the user with some of their attacks to help them inflict more pain to their opponent.

By being able to see these wind currents in the air they are able to tell how the wind will effect both them and their opponents as well as movements, as well as letting them know when a projectile is going to curve with the wind (like how a sniper must monitor the wind and weather knowing if the wind is going to effect their bullets and how it will, it’ll suck to see a bullet that was supposed to be a head shot miss the target completely, because of a simple gust of wind) but they require quite a good skill in dexterity to be able to be used correctly while in combat, the first part of the eye are the Waikyoku Eye’s, which actually gives the user the status of their target, while the Eye’s of Asagami help give the user the necessary means to help injure the target by monitoring the wind currents to help influence some of their attacks to be closer to the enemy, as well as how the wind moves around the targets body (wind just doesn’t fly through you unless it knocked you down, it might move around you, depending on the force, which is when you feel the wind hit and move around your body to get to the other side, they actually see the wind flows / currents as they move as well as the exact direction wind flows.)

How one gains this ability can very from immense training or involving a near death experience in which the user failed to kill them selves in an intense situation and are put in a coma for an exstended amount of time, after they have awaken they would most likely have already received those eye's, or involving one or more of their personalities, but there is also a problem with this ability of that the eye’s posses, since the human eye’s were not supposed to be perceived this way, if a the user has low mentality it will cause the user to fall unconscious or possibly die after multiple uses without rest (4 post if the user is genin, 6 for chuunin, and they keep going up by 2 each rank they are, that they could keep them activated, if any longer it can be dangerous towards the users life and possibly kill them), but a user with great stamina and training may be able to withstand a lot of stress it can causes upon the users eye’s.

Name: Point of Death
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Rank: C -- S
Description: By focusing and collecting both their wind chakra and their own chakra, they can focus it to the tip or edge of their blade and have the chakra form around it constantly, helping the blade or weapon appear more sharper and stronger by covering the edge of the weapon with a blue type of aura, but that is only a bluff hiding the techniques actual ability and the moment it hits the target the user can choice weather to release it or not when the user does decide to release it, it spreads / explodes out along the opponents body moving in a snake like pattern along the target cutting an slashing what ever it touches as well as implanting their own chakra into the targets chakra pathways, not discerning where their target is but attacking what ever they are able to hit. What happens is the wind and chakra are around they blade and set up as a combustion of wind that attacks in random patterns and its second affect allows it to block or cancel out chakra tranfer. (The chakra pathway will only be blocked for one post. The user will usually have their Eye's of Asagami activated to help tell them where the wind will spread out from, since even though it moves in a snake like patern, it almost alway follows the wind currents in the air, that blow across / around the targets body.

History:
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The origin of the Asagami clan came from a different and small clan, that clan held no special abilities, except for being able to manipulate the wind with being able to see the wind currents and able to create multiple personalities in the selves, the name of that clan was named the Fujou Clan. The leader of that clan was name Kinzo Fujou.

Kinzo was a type of scientist and researcher, and like a few people and wanted to combine both the Uchiha and Hyuga clan bloodline. He believed that if he combined both of the bloodlines that he would make a dangerous and powerful bloodline that would be used to increase their military power and bring a reputation towards their clan.

After a few years, he tried desperately tried to combine the bloodlines, but no matter what he tried he just couldn’t completely combine the two, he wanted the bloodline to have all of their abilities, including the use of each of the clans special eye’s abilities, mostly all that they were able to gain from this experiment was that they achieved the process of acquiring some of the Byakugan eye’s abilities that allowed them to see through objects, but only up to the users normal field of vision and able to see the chakra pathway systems, but the only way they could interrupt it is by using a blade to help them gain access by focusing their own chakra into the tip of the blades and attack them physically, by doing this, it allows them to cover up that they had inserted their own chakra into their opponents chakra pathways to tamper with, but the Byakugan lost its ability of seeing everything within 360o and the sixty four palm and being able to attack the enemy and damage them internally with their gentle fist, while from the Uchiha Sharingan eye, they managed to still obtain their great clarity of perception of being able to track fast moving objects and give them a chance to be able to tell recognize certain jutsu’s and helping them be able to make the enemy’s movements somewhat predictable, but lost its ability to copy jutsu’s and be able to use their special kind of hypnosis and all of their other types of abilities, Kinzo was greatly angered by this since he wanted a bloodline that had all their abilities in one, as much as he tried he couldn’t completely combine the bloodlines, it seemed the more he tried the more abilities the bloodline lost, but so far it has stayed to only this one was most promising, the bloodlines creator was named Koshite, who held that type of bloodline, but there were also people who weren’t to thrilled with having the two bloodlines combined and sought to destroy it, one of the small named clans that hated the Fujou Clan was the Oyashiro Clan, the leader was Kenchi Oyashiro he waged war and successfully captured Koishite, they were about to execute him, if it weren’t for Oyashiro quickly assembling a small squad of shinobi accompanied by himself, crushed what was left of Kenchi’s Clan, but it was not before Kenichi placed a type of curse upon Koishite, before he was slain that would cause him and what ever bloodline that followed him to have a type of instinct or impulse that caused them to turn into a crazed killer and have a suicidal type of nature that caused them to become a threat to their own bloodline and to others, it made them attack almost anything that came across their path, it was made so that the bloodline would destroy themselves.

Kinzo didn’t want all of his efforts to go in vain and just vanish like that, so he decided to combine that bloodline with that of the Fujou clan since the Fujou Clan’s bloodline aloud them to create multiple personalities’, (only 4 or 3 personalities have ever been noted of to exist in the person’s body) within them selves, he thought that if he did this he might be able to have the cursed side to become part of another personality that would save the user of that bloodline in which it did, but there were still occasions of where that side would appear, but it was still contained by the other personalities come together to help overpower their homicidal and suicidal self , he believed that having a strong mind and power would be able to control one’s self. Kinzo later named this bloodline the Waikyoku bloodline, and named it the Asagami Clan.

After it was created the Asagami Clan became most renowned for its members to be able to create multiple personalities within themselves, and the use of the wind element and their special eye’s after the Fujou Clan had died out (the reasons behind how the Fujou Clan had died out remains a mystery lost in the sands of time). The personalities were later used to gain multiple skills (i.e.: one for acting normal and one for fighting, as well as keeping the cursed side in check). Also their training revolves around refining themselves a self hypnosis skills that enhances their abilities wielding certain types of weapons that they specialize in which is usually a sword and highly in the use of taijutsu. When a child is born into their clan they are given one name written two different ways in kanji, stating that it was the fusion of two separate bloodlines into the combination of the two (the one being there name and the two being the two different ways of writing their name).

But today there aren’t too many of the Asagami Clan and their bloodline left, the reason behind this is because of the curse that Oyashiro put on them that caused them to become rampant and attack their own kind and sometimes others if their mind is too weak for them, but the other personalities help keep it in check, since that personality sometimes only arises when their life is near death when their thoughts and mentality are greatly low or usually when something traumatic happens, where their other self can easily take over in which the other personalities are too weak to help and are too slow to take over that personality in time, or one with the same blood as them is near. In which they remain scattered throughout the land.

Another thing about the Asagami Clan are their eye’s, when a member is born they have similar eye’s to that of the Hyuga clan eye’s this is probably because of the Hyuga bloodline in them, and that their Waikyoku Eye’s activate just like the Uchiha’s Sharingan does, but instead of receiving them from a life threatening situation that could be used to save their life, how they developed their eye’s are when the user tries to kill them selves, but if they fail to kill themselves they are put in a type of coma for and unknown period of time, and when they awaken they receive their Waikyoku Eye’s, this part was probably the result of the curse that was put on them by Oyashiro that tried to kill them, and instead of dying they lived and gained the eye’s, to signify their battle between life and death.

Another note about their clan is that their clan symbol is also a seal that must be carried or near (can be tattoed on their bodies) the members to try to help prevent them from attacking each other the Kinzo had made, just in case the personalities weren't strong enough to hold back the negative personality, when the negative personality does arise, the negative side will only be consuisos for 10 minutes before the other personalites take over, or the user falls unconsiuse, but there has been some cases in which the negative personality would actually help the clan member other than trying to kill them.

Clan Details: Open, but ask for details

Rank Information:

Rank: Genin

Village Affiliation: Kiri

Special Information:

Character Speciality:

Main: Weaponry
(Wire, and Swords)
Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:

Main: Wind
Sub: Water
Special Characteristics:
He can quickly learn and figure out the enemy, is highly intellect when he tries not too, while Satsuki is used for infiltration and speaking sitications, but in battle uses mostly close range fighting, the personalites allow him to try to blend in into soiciety. even though he dosen't have enough muscles, he uses both his weight, flexiblity and acrbactics to help him move his body in battles and in assaination, he was called a prodigy in his clan, when removing his weights his speed is increased by 10%.

Skill Information:

Basic Jutsu

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Wind Jutsu:

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Water Jutsu

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Weapon Template:

Name: Rider
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance:ooc: sorry i couldn't post the pix )..... https://media.photobucket.com/image/rider%20weapon/Mitsukai_Kansei/Rider/32738237.jpg?o=1
Special Abilities: the bade has a chain and a steel guard to help protect his hand and also use the chain to drag the enemy towards him. The chain reaches up to 20 feet.
Origin: A friend of the clan had made this weapon for Nanaya when he had turned 11, the friend who had made the blade, seeming disappeared without a trace, and gave it to him hoping that he would not ever come to the point of using the blade, because it is a virgin blade and had net yet, tasted blood yet.

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Background Information

History:

Birth Arc and Early Childhood Arc:

Kentoishi was a traveling doctor and stopped upon a old ruined and seeming less destroyed village that went down do to old pass wars, when he walked along the river bed that was east of the village he saw a kid staring blankly at the fallen bodies of warriors and innocents that had washed up on shore. Kentoishi was somewhat amazed at seeing someone at such a age staring blankly at them not displaying any emotion in the middle of all this dissolution and how someone his age, would have survived this long, and had slash marks all over his body, when Kentoishi walked a little closer he noticed that the kid was blind and also bleeding and was stabbing himself over and over again in the arm displaying no emotions and saying the words “I’m sorry” all over again, Kentoishi stopped the kid from further injuring himself and quickly sought medical attention and brought him to his Clan, all the kid knew was his name and age, nothing else when the kid was question about why he was trying to kill himself, he committed saying he had nothing better to do and he thought that it would be fun. Kentoishi tried to search for the kid’s family but he couldn’t find them anywhere, and already knowing that the kid’s parents were already dead. Kentoishi was about to leave the kid to his fate or kill the kid to put him out of his misery, but the kid reminded him of his own son that had when he was younger that died a long time in a war, the kid appeared to have the eye’s of an Hyuga Clan member but he wasn’t too sure because of the other eye’s he had. Kentoishi recognized the clan symbol from somewhere and soon released that he had an old friend that was also part of the same clan who wore the same symbol, during the time the kid stayed with him, Kentoishi taught him all that he knew about medicine and the human body. Kentoishi brought the kid to his friend who was from the Asagami Clan, his friend was Azuma. Azuma easily identified that the kid had the same blood as he did, and had already developed a second personality, or maybe he was already born with the second personality, and it was called Hei and Azuma gladly decided to take the kid under his wing and adopted him and gave him the name Nanaya stating that this is his new name now and that his other name was of that as of the past.

Azuma’s family consisted of both him, his wife, his son and daughter as well as a few other members of the Asagami Clan, he stated that the rest of the clan’s member were spread out from each other and this family was one of the main families and also the largest.

Asagami Clan Training Arc:

A Few years later when Nanaya was 8yrs old, he had surpassed both of his two siblings in acquiring a third personality and easily have them switch in and out at their own will due to immense training, at such an early age he displayed promising and extraordinary abilities with both his body and skill with the blade and use of wire, but his mind was still unstable and his mind and body required more training, but Nanaya also wanted to learn all the techniques he could, but was sometimes very impatient to take the necessary time to perfect them.

He soon finally able to be able to see after undergoing a processger in order to regain his sight, in which it was his brother whose eye's he took because his brother had feel out of favor from their father, in which he thought that it would be better for Nanaya to have them and put them to better use. He easily entered into the Ninja Academy and quickly distanced himself from people and almost all human contact, because his personalities or other selves made it difficult for him to bond with people. During his time in the academy he studied the human body and as well as its functions and which part does what, he studied this and well as his abilities at school while after school he went home to even better his abilities and to where he trained with his father who taught him how to reach past the pain, but during one training he had lost his right arm in a dual with his father and was soon given an artificial limb that looked completely identical to a real limb as well as displaying fake blood. Even after that incident it seemed to have sparked a switch that made Nanaya push him self harder to the point he didn’t ever want to loose to anyone. When he had reached the age of 11 he was given his first assignment from his family to test his worth to the clan and kill someone and use all the skills that he has learned, since their clan was somewhat made for assignation and killing purposes for hire, but unknown to Nanaya his target was actually Kentoishi, the man who had found Nanaya and brought him to his new home the man who saved him from killing himself, his sister knew about his mission and who he was sent to kill by his father who wanted to actually awaken his other Asagami abilities, but before she was able to warn Nanaya about who his target was she was put under house arrest and locked in her room for the remainder of Nanaya’s assignment, and was soon released after he had completed it, but she ended up breaking out of her holdings and went after her brother.

During that night at midnight he had successfully entered into Kentoishi’s camp with little difficulty and killed most of the guards that protected Kentoishi, when Nanaya got to the place where Kentoishi was resting, he killed the person who was resting while in the dark, when light had shown inside the room, he realized that his target was actually Kentoishi, which greatly shocked Nanaya in which his dark personality easily took advantage of and attempted to kill himself and nearly succeeded if his sister didn’t arrive their in time and take him away from the area and hell fainted from shock from killing Kentoishi. For a few months Nanaya was in a self induced type of coma not awaking to any responses made from family or others, the medical doctors couldn’t find anything wrong with him, that he was just asleep, while he was asleep he had developed his last personality (his third) that went by the name Oyashiro which was actually the combination of his personalities that had all of their abilities and strengths) while he was asleep in his coma inside his mind, from what looked to be a self hypnosis, that made its self unknown to the other two personalities that Nanaya had. When he came to he had achieved his Asagami Eye’s that were the extended ability of his Waikyoku Eye’s when he had awoken.

Awakening and Academy Arc:

It took him a year till he had finally awoken from his coma and accidently spent a year away from the Ninja Academy which gave him a little draw back from his goal of becoming an Anbu, why he wanted to become an Anbu was unknown to even him, but he wanted to make good use of his abilities and held his sister in high regards because she was going to participate in a test to see if she was worthy of become Anbu in some village, but he had to first tie up some loose ends with his father, for which he had done to him and both his sister who had mysteriously left the clan and his mother took her life for reason unknown, and revenge for Kentoishi’s death, that was caused by Nanaya’s hand, but by the time he went to find his father to exact his revenge, his father had already been killed by his brother how became the clan’s next head, but his brother didn’t posses the necessary skill to be head and had only one personality and originally his sister was supposed to be the next head, but she left and Nanaya was in a coma so he couldn’t claim to be under those circumstances, he soon found out that his brother was actually the one who requested Nanaya to kill Kentoishi, Nanaya soon became furious and decided to lay out a trap for his brother for all his lies about him conning his way into things. He made a way for all his lies to catch up to him which resulted in his brothers death, after he went on a quest to find his sister, after finding her in Kiri, he decided to stay with and enlist to finish the Ninja Academy, but the other members of the clan call him by the name of Oyashiro, the man who wanted to destroy their bloodline in the first place, as he put it in chaos to where they made his sister the head, but despises Nanaya and his name, when he had entered into the Ninja Academy he became somewhat different only protecting those he wanted and barely trusted no one and was almost always near his sister at all times, while he was in the Academy he studied the human body, but decided to not become a Medical Nin and use it for his goal of becoming an Anbu and protect his sister.

Role-Play Sample:
There was a gentle breeze that lightly blew the leaves across the ground that fell from the trees, the actual time was around midnight, with the moon barely being visible. Two guards, one tall and the other one short and a bit overweight, stood guard next to the villages entrance, “Hey, did you hear about what’s going on in the village that’s Far East of here? They’re having some famous women singer, staying in one of the inns, I hear that she’s incredibly hot!” the tall guard spoke to the fat guard as he took a sip of his drink, as he admired the cool breeze. This was an inn town, in which travelers would come to stay for a short amount of time after long travels, the village wasn’t that big and all they had were samurai, because they didn’t have the money to hire them and they didn’t even want to deal with them at all, and they would barely even let them stay, currently they had three ninja’s that were genin level staying in one of the inns in the village for a short while and would be leaving first thing in the morning.

The tall guard began to stretch for a short while with a small yawn and looked out over the pathway that led to the village, to see that there was a thick fog coming in, it was quite normal for there to be a thick fog in this kind of season after it had heavily rained for days on in, “Wow, how long have we been standing watch?” the guard muttered as he turned to notice that his partner was leaning against the wall with his hat down covering his face and looked to be seemingly asleep. He was about to hit him, when he heard a twig break from in front of him, he looked over to see what looked to be a girl that was limping towards them and looked to be greatly injured. The guard’s eye’s widened as he quickly ran towards her to see what was wrong, the girl feel into the guards arms from which looked to be from exhaustion, and was bleeding from some unknown wounds.

“What happened?! Are you alright?! Who did this too you?” the guard asked as he put his arms around the girl to try to comfort her, he looked over to see what his partner was doing, he still just stood there sleeping, “Hey go get some help…!” the guard stared as his friend fell over, in which he appeared to be dead with some needles through his throat.
His eye’s widen as he felt a sudden surge of pain thrust through his abdomen, and looked down to she that the girl had just impaled him with a small blade into his abdomen, “What are you..” he spoke as blood splattered from his mouth as he felt someone light body sit on his shoulders with his head in between their legs, he was about to scream when he felt something quickly shoot up into his throat, to stop him from speaking or calling out for some help, “I’m sorry...” A young male voice spoke as he used his entire body weight and momentum to twist his body around to help him snap the guards’ neck in a matter of seconds, and jumping off to let the body hit the ground, there was a young lady that was accompanied by her young daughter, that had just come out of the gate entrance to go search for some herbs when they saw all this that had transpired in front of their eye’s of the killing of the guard, which was also her husband. Nanaya stared at them both, and his water doppelganger waved at them both as it melted back down into a water puddle. The lady and the little girl were about to screamed as load as they could as Nanaya quickly ended up behind them and knocked them out, he stared at them and pulled out his knife and was about to kill both of them when he decided that they weren’t worth the effort and quickly decided to continue with the mission that he was given, which was to carry out a assignation, that was part of his test while being in the Asagami Clan, and decided to quickly jump up on the walls edge and flipped over the ledge to the other side, and dropped down on top of a wheel barrel behind a building, and used his transformation jutsu to turn into a young looking girl and let Satsuki take over, so he could have her deal with was next to come to help him get inside a specific inn where his target was, she walked from behind the building with not much care for by now almost anyone would be sleeping at this time. “Hey you! What are you doing out so late?” a deep voice said from behind her, she looked over to see two guards come up to her wanting to know what a young person is doing at this time at night, she spun around to face them and gave them a little embarrassed smile, “I’m sorry, I was just about to go back home, I just came from the doctor place, because that’s where my father works.” She replied walking up to them, as she noticed that there weren’t any people around to see what was about to happen to the guards, as a knife gleamed from behind her back.

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Quote :: Regural Jutsu

Name: Armor of Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Rank: D -- S
Description: Allows the user to create a large gust of wind that circles around their body (stretching four feet away from their body when its activated) for a few seconds that could be used to protect them selves from some projectiles and sometimes close range fighting if they have time to activate it, its a type of defensive technique, it can be combined with different elements to help provide multiple uses.

I meant remove this from your clan in general not make a seperate title for it. I removed it from your clan and I want you to remove it from your clan on your character. It is just a normal/basic wind jutsu which isn't necessarily clan related, thus, add it to your wind jutsu please.

Quote :: Sub: Ninjutsu?

Ninjutsu or not? You need to choose my friend. ^^

Quote :: Since Nanaya used to be blind, he has learned to use his other senses, such as hearing, and can quickly learn and figure out the enemy

Is this explained anywhere liek your history? (sorry I dont read them xD). If so you would need to state the degree at which his other senses are enhanced. This shouldnt be a major boost at all.

- Regarding your weapons if you want a weapon higher than D rank for your rank then you will need to edit the ranks on yours accordingly. Also there are some bolding issues you might want to sort.

Quote :: Name: Posion
Rank: C
Type: Enhance?
Natural Abilites: Posion that you can add to a weapon, that can envenom the enemy.

There is a proper template that poison needs to be under. It is found in the equipment section on the forum, you the code given and read the guide. It will need to be explained a lot better than this.

Quote :: Name: Posion Medicine
Rank: C
Type: Medicine
Natural Abilities: Medicine to cure the posion he uses.

Once again this will need to be explained a lot better. It should be tied in with your poison and others.

- There are sections on your app that still have the 'helper' text given on the template at the start. That needs to be removed. This is an example of one of them;

Quote :: Rank: Genin
What is the current rank of your character.

I am sure you can find the rest. please remove them.

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Edited and here is the thing about the blind thing

Quote :: He soon finally able to be able to see after undergoing a processger in order to regain his sight, in which it was his brother whose eye's he took because his brother had feel out of favor from their father, in which he thought that it would be better for Nanaya to have them and put them to better use

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You need Kugutsu or Eijutsu to utilize a poison, you have neither.

You need the appropriate Weaponry skill or you can't have above D Rank weapons.

Your Konoha Taijutsu will have to be removed, those are Konoha specific and you're in Kiri.

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Nanaya wrote:: Weapon Template:

Name: Rider
Quantity: 2
Rank: C
Appearance:ooc: sorry i couldn't post the pix )..... https://media.photobucket.com/image/rider%20weapon/Mitsukai_Kansei/Rider/32738237.jpg?o=1
Special Abilities: the bade has a chain and a steel guard to help protect his hand and also use the chain to drag the enemy towards him. The chain reaches up to 20 feet.
Origin: A friend of the clan had made this weapon for Nanaya when he had turned 11, the friend who had made the blade, seeming disappeared without a trace, and gave it to him hoping that he would not ever come to the point of using the blade, because it is a virgin blade and had net yet, tasted blood yet.

Through out Special Abilities and Origins, you speak as if it is only one weapon, yet the number of Quantity is two. I just want to make sure that you do, infact, have two of them and not one.

Nanaya wrote:: Common Weapons:
Kunai: 30
Shuriken: 10
Senbon: 10
Exploding Tags: 30
Exploding Pouch: 5
Smoke Gernade: 6
Makibushi: 2
Flash Bombs: 5
Smoke Bombs: 2
Sleeping Gas Bombs: 2
Razor Wire: 100feet, 2 rolls

They're actually called Makabishi. 'Thought you should know.

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sorry forgot to change that, but editied

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Some of those are not common weapons, please check the list in the weaponry guide.

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edititd

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Appearance could be just a little longer. A few sentences.

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made a little longer

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I think that if you used to be blind, you wouldn't still have those sensory increases, and if you did, you'd have a decreased reliance on vision (at least 50%, for sake of balance) You have the options of removing the sensory increases on those, or adding the sensory decrease to vision

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Approved. Have another Admin put your rank and color up, I've got to go ^_^