Dorokimo,Takumi [Sand Genin]

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Basic Information:

Name: Dorokimo,Takumi
Secondary Title:
Age: 13

Gender:Male

Physical Appearance:Has red hair and light green eyes and a black mark across his face with two lines comeing down from his left eye.His outfit is red and black and his gloves are all black with dark red skulls on them he has bandages under his outfit and gloves from the chuunin exams.He has grey pants and a black holster some times he wears a black and dark red robe over his outfit and puts a mask over his mouth and nose so he doesn't breath in sand.He always carrys his puppet scrolls in his pocket.He wears a black belt aswell.

Kokaku Kidotai - Clothes by ~boyoftears on deviant ART

Personality:Usually he doesnt like to talk much he is lazy but intelligent.When in a fight he gives it his all he makes a plan in his mind while fighting others.He doesnt like challenges much.He cant say no to a challenge also which means he accepts any challenge almost but he will always not like it.He's at his strongest when he is wielding his sword for some reason.He doesnt like certain people with certain Personality.
Hard working wants to gain power and become the strongest ninja no matter the cost.He wants to learn and defeat all villages that try to stop the path that sunagakure must take.He wants to do what ever is best for his village.

Rank Information:

Rank:Genin

Village Affiliation:Sunagakure

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
Main:Puppetry
Sub:Medical
Elemental Affinity:none
Special Characteristics:

Skill Information:

Jutsu Template:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Weapon Template:
Name:Takata
Rank:C
Description:Looks like Takumi with the red hair and the black mark across his face but he wears the normal chuunin outfit of the hidden sand village.But its sleeveless so it can use its weapons properly it has fake human skin on it to give it that human look.Its headband is around its stomach like Takumi's.It wears a mask over its mouth and nose when not in battle if in battle he would take it off and put it in his pocket.Like takumi his eyes are green but they are actually small smoke bombs painted on.His headband is black and his clothes under its chuunin vest are also black.Its hair is not just the same color but looks the same as Takumi's hair.This puppet could pass off as Takumi's twin brother since it has fake human skin on it aswell.
Body Slots:4
Slot 1:This slot is in the hand.When the puppet takes its hand off a katana blade comes out its just a normal katana.The katana blade is 3 feet long and is black.It shoots out till the entire blade is seen.
Slot 2:Eyes.Both eyes are two little smoke bombs that would only be used if he would need to get away from his enemy. (*)
Slot 3:In its mouth.There is a slingshot like thing that shoot out senbon it only uses senbon because you cant fit alot of anything else in there.In the head there are 3 shelves two in the upper part and one in the mouth.The ones in the mouth are the ones being shot and when it runs out it rotates and a new box is set up in the mouth.The boxes are very small and only can hold 50 senbon each for a total of 150 senbon all together.With the weight of the senbon and the force of the slingshot it can shoot senbon off very fast and can shoot 5 at a time so after shooting 10 rounds it would have to rotate to a new box of them until each box has none left (*)
Slot 4:In the left arm.It opens up and a bunch of kunai with explosive tags on then so it can take them and throw them anywhere at any time needed.20 explosive tags can be fit in to the arm and sometimes are tied to kunai.But he can also take this arm off entirely and it would blast off into the sky and then drop down onto the target and once hit would explode the entire arm but he would only do this if he was in trouble because it would mean he would have to remake this arm
History:Had gotten it as a boy from his father who made it for him.Ever since that day he wanted to become a ninja and has he grew older and started to become a ninja he has upgraded it and made it stronger faster and better any chance he had got and he had enough material's at the moment to make 5 weapons for it and so he did.

Item Template:

BackgroundInformation

History:
Birth Arc:Dorokimo,Takumi was being born as his father was on a mission.When he was born in the hospital his mother was by his side she was stareing at him.She picked him up and gentely caressed him in her arms.He had a little bit of red hair on his head but barely any he was so small and tiny she was so happy.The hospital said that he had to stay in the hospital for a week and then he can be with the family.1 week later he had arrived at the house finally he was being walked home by his mother and father.He was in the arms of his mother wraped up in a blanket.His mother started to play with him she took her finger and put it out and he tried to grab it.He started to giggle and laugh.His mother and father were told to feed him certain foods.
Childhood ArcIn this arc Takumi is 5 years old and is able to talk.He is being taught how to use a kunai shuriken and senbon by his father.His father would begin to demonstrate for his son.He would take the kunai grabing it in a certain spot and throwing it at the target.With his fathers years of training he hit the target right in the middle.Takumi took a kunai and grabed it at the same spot his father did and threw it at the target it hit the target but it hit all the way at the top of the target.He then tried agein and agein getting closer and closer to the target each try.His dad then started to say "Keep practiceing till you get it" but when he ended the sentence he hit the middle of the target with it.
Academy ArcThis arc is a year later after the ChildHood Arc Takumi is 6 years old.This is were Takumi learns the three basic jutsus Bunshin,Kawa,and Henge but only shows him learning Bunshin.The Chuunin teacher would do a example of Bunshin no jutsu he would make a sign and hold it and power chakra through out his body and then in a puff of smoke a copy of him appears and then disappears.He then said "Now i will call you by name when you come up i want you to try this jutsu" then he called out the name "Dorokimo,Takumi."He ran down and then did the hand sign and tried to do it he sent chakra throughout his body and then a duplicate of him appeared and disappeared like the teachers.The teacher then says "Good Job".
Role-Play Sample:Dorokimo,Takumi was on a mission in charge of a squad of chuunin there were two other squads they were all spread out.Some of the chuunin on the other teams went ahead of them but ended in failure as they ran to the cave where the fight would begin explosions came as explosive tags exploded killing some of there team members.But getting rid of all traps for them.They ran faster when they got to the cave Takumi told his squad to go in.After that all he looked in and they were dead.Takumi and all the ones who were left came in there was a bunch of leaf jounin inside killing the last member of the squad sent in.He took out his puppet and had it take out its katana.He sent it in to the part where the leaf ninjas are he made him go and slash at one but it took out a kunai.He had it shoot kunai out of its mouth killing the one man.He told the others to go out and kill the other two.He put his puppet back and they proceeded into the cave.

As they proceeded they ran into more leaf ninjas but handled them easily.They entered a building that was in the cave and killed 4 guards inside easily since they were genin.They got to the up stairs when they found 5 jounin.He took his puppet and threw a explosive tag to the top of them makeing the ceiling collapse on them killing the 4 of the 5 jounin.He took his puppets katana and stabed the last right in the back of the last.He took a scroll which was there objective and got outside the cave and lined the entire cave with explosive tags makeing it all fall killing the rest of the ninja inside.They then ran back to the village to complete there mission.

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Approval given.

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Unapproved.

Your puppet needs more details.

Slot 1: How long is the blade? How far does it eject?

Slot 2: A Chainsaw is not fit for a C Rank puppet, remove.

Slot 3: How much ammunition does the puppet hold? How fast does it fire?

Slot 4: How many explosive tags? Can it fire them or are they only there to be extracted for other techniques?

Slot 5: How much ammunition? How fast?

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Edited

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Too much ammo, a low ranking puppet couldn't hold all that. Think about a human being, how could you fit all of that in one? You couldn't, so please make it more realistic.

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EDITED!

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Fix the coding please.

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Okay done

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No its not, the whole front portion of your app is bolded and some other parts are bold when they shouldn't be.

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There edited

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Im waiting

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I would warn against rushing and putting comments like that an hour after you edit, its incredibly rude and I would just leave this here for a few more hours. Don't do it again. Approved.

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