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Allya
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| Subject: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 4:33 am | |
| Name: Kuroi, Hinoko Secondary Title: Banana or Hina Age: 17 Gender: Female
Physical Appearance:
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Hinoko is exactly 5’6 and weighs 146 lbs. She has brown-black hair and it’s pulled into a spiked ponytail at the back of her nap. A few strands of her bangs dangle on both sides of her cheeks. She appears rather pale, almost translucent. Hinoko has a 4 inch braid starting from the side of her ear, to the base of her neck; this symbolizes womanhood.
Her attire is complicated but not intricate. A red-hued mask of double layered fishnet covers the lower half of her face; she usually wears a look of melancholy or a frown. She also has a scarf attached to her mask, also of a reddish-hue. She has a thin mail shirt, covered with gray cloth and piping making it looks like a corset.
Hinoko also has a dark purple pair of thigh high shorts. She also has a pair of shoulder high sleeve like wear, with metal plating on the forearms and back-hands. Hinoko has a ration pack and pouch for coins or other odd baubles. She has two knee high open toed boots with her village symbol attached to it just under her knee in a sewing pattern.
A scar can be located along the spine of her back from a incident of youth. It healed easily, but it left leopard like splotches all down her back. She also has her village symbol tattooed into her ankle on the left foot. Hinoko’s canines are also unusually large and can be mistaken as dog’s fangs. She has a slim body, and her face has a heart shape. Her body has a few curves; Her waist being 26 inches, her hips 30 and her bust is 36.
Hinoko’s hands have been callused and scarred from heavy work such as training, farming, and blacksmithing. Aside from her work-worn hands, they are very nimble and can weave or stitch anything within seconds. She usually wears a blue ring around her left middle finger. Hinoko usually stores extra energy in this ring for further use. There isn’t much special about the rest of her body other than her eyes and back. Her eyes usually change slightly with her mood. One minute they can be a solemn dull blue, then next minute deep green with contentness.
Hinoko’s muscles are double jointed and she can spring and bend backwards (Or forwards) to the extreme, this makes her foot work better and her ability to dodge slightly better than normal. Her skin has a soft complexion the opposite of her expression on her face. Her skin is also thick and not penetrated easily. The skin is usually white or pale, and doesn’t have much color, even after sitting in the sun for a long time. Hinoko’s eyes are an almond shape, and her pupils are usually undilated to better see in the dark or shaded areas.
Hinoko also has slightly pointed ears, and several piercings along the sides of them. She also has a tongue piercing with the bulb of a sparrow. Her cheeks are slightly round, giving her a kitten like look. Her chin has only a small cleft, and her eye brows are usually arched and thin without having to pluck them. Hinoko has about 20 freckles on the bridge of her nose, and upper cheeks. Her diaphragm and chest are usually extended because her lungs are larger than a normal person. Her running speed is slightly below normal, but she can run longer than a mile, without becoming tired.
Personality:
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Hinoko’s primary mode of living is focused internally, where she can take things in via her five senses in a literal, concrete fashion. Her secondary mode is external, where she deals with things rationally and logically. Hinoko is a quiet and reserved individual, and is most comfortable in security and peaceful living. She has a strongly-felt internal sense of duty, which lends her a serious air and the motivation to follow through on tasks. Organized and methodical in her approach, Hinoko can generally succeed at any task which she might undertake.
Hinoko is also very loyal, faithful, and dependable. She places great importance on honesty and integrity. She is normally a "good citizen" who can be depended on to do the right thing for her own family or other families and communities. While Hinoko generally take things very seriously, she also usually has an offbeat sense of humor, especially around family or close friends
Hinoko usually tends to believe in laws and traditions, and expect the same from others. She’s not comfortable with breaking laws or going against the rules. If Hinoko is able to see a good reason for stepping outside of the established mode of doing things, her personality will support that effort. However, Hinoko more often than not, tends to believe that things should be done according to procedures and plans. If Hinoko has not developed her Intuitive side sufficiently, she may become overly obsessed with structure, and insist on doing everything "by the book".
Hinoko is extremely dependable on following through with things which she has promised. Since she has such a strong sense of duty, she may have a difficult time saying "no" when she is given more work than she can reasonably handle. For this reason she often works long hours and can be taken advantage of a lot.
She will work for long periods of time and put tremendous amounts of energy into doing any task which she may see as important to fulfilling a goal. However, she will resist putting energy into things which does not make sense to her, or for which she can't see a practical application. Hinoko prefers to work alone, but works well in teams when the situation demands it. She likes to be accountable for their actions and enjoy being in positions of authority.
She has little use for theory or abstract thinking, unless the practical application is clear. She also has tremendous respect for facts. Hinoko holds a large store of facts within herself, which she has roped in through out her life. She may have difficulty understanding a theory or idea which may be odd from her own perspective. However, if she has shown the value or relevance of the idea to someone who she respects/cares about, the idea becomes a fact, which the Hinoko will remember/support. Once she supports an idea, she will stop at no lengths to ensure that she is performing her duty of support where support is needed.
Hinoko is not usually in tune with her own feelings and the feelings of others. She may have difficulty picking up on emotional needs immediately, when they presented. Being a perfectionist, she has a tendency to take other people's efforts for granted, like she takes her own efforts for granted. She might need a compliment from people once in a while.
Hinoko is unsure about expressing affection and emotion to others. However, her strong sense of duty and the ability to see what needs to be done in any situation usually allows her to overcome her natural reservations, and she is usually busy supporting and caring individuals with the people that she loves. Once Hinoko realized the emotional needs of those who are close to her, which does take quite a long time, she puts forth an effort to meet their needs.
Hinoko is very loyal., traditional and family-minded. She will put forth great amounts of effort at making her home and family run smoothly. She is usually a good provider to her family. Hinoko cares deeply about those close to her, though she usually is not comfortable with expressing her love. She will likely express her affections through action rather than words.
Catch Phrase: Turn off the camera...
Clan Information:
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Clan Name: N/a Clan Location: N/a Clan Traits: N/a Kekkei Genkai: N/a Secret Clan Jutsu: N/a History: N/a Clan Details: N/a
Rank Information:
Rank: Chuunin, Approval from Hugh Village Affiliation: Sunagakure.
Special Information:
Character Speciality: Main: Weaponry: Kenjutsu/Ranged. (I.e. Shuriken, and Kunai, adding to longer throwing range) Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Main: Raiton Sub: N/a
Special Characteristics: Oddly, Hinoko does not have a color in her eyes most of the time, and are simply gray. Only when strong emotions come to the front, like hate or excitment do they change color.
Skill Information:
Jutsu:
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Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) Rank: E Type: Ninjuts Element: N/A Description: A substitution jutsu which involves switching the ninja's body for another object of the same weight, usually a piece of wood. This can create an opening to attack the enemy or to escape. This can only be used when there is an escape way for the ninja (not trapped in a prison, nor unable to move). This can only be used three times in a battle. Range is short, 0-20 feet.
Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu) Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Allows the user to transform physically, and completely, into another person or object, as long as it doesn't surpass the person's size by 50 lbs or more. Range is short, 0-12 feet.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu) Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic Genjutsu on which the user creates up to 5 copies of his or herself. The clones aren't real and are mainly used as a diversion. The clones can be destroyed like Kage Bunshin but they cannot hit a target. Range is medium, 10-15 feet.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Escape Technique) Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Ninja academy. When a ninja is tied with rope, he or she can undo the knots and escape using this technique. This jutsu usually takes about 1 to 4 minutes, (One turn) to take effect, so it's not that good for deadlines. Range is short, 0-15 feet.
Name:Shunshin no Jutsu (Transport Jutsu) Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. Range is medium, 15-30 feet. Depends on chakra capacity
b]Name:[/b] Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Raiton kaihou: Shingai Genkotsu (Lightning Release; Shock Fist) Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu Element: Lightning Description: Another fairly simple jutsu, with possible side effects. The user would channel her/his lightning element chakra into their fists or arms to increase their taijutsu or weapondry impact. If this jutsu is not used correctly it can paralyze the users arm for a certain amount of time, usuallly 1 to 4 minutes (1 turn). Requires concentration, and accuracy. It's easy to miss targets with this jutsu. Range is Medium-Short, 5 to 30 feet.
Name: Raikou hibana no jutsu (Lightning Spark Jutsu) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning - Raiton Description: A simple jutsu utilizing the lightning element to be used for shocking or paralysing a foe. If the user is strong enough it could leave burns, or scars. The paralysis could last about 5 to 8 minutes (2 turns) depending on the rank of the user. Causes light damage, and doesn't use much chakra. Range is short, 10-20 feet.
Name: Raiton kaihou: Raikou shikon (Lightning Release; Lightning Fang) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning - Raiton Description:Raikou Shikon is a Lightning Release type ninjutsu. It surrounds the limbs of the user with lightning chakra, increasing their offensive power. Can be used as a weak shield, but only against a certain amount of damage. Range is short, 0-10 meters.
Weapon Techniques:
Name: Swords Technique: Flourish Rank: E-S Type: Kenjutsu Description: A simple D rank swords technique, of flourishing. Mostly uses the power in a persons dominate arm to pull their sword around, or into a spin to give a painful blow to a foe, it can't kill unless he/she is a very high rank such as Anbu, or Kage. Range is however long the sword is, from hilt to tip, a small sword would usually have a 18 inch radius, and a large sword, would usually have a 28 inch radius.
Name: Swords Technique: Swirl Rank: C-B Type: Kenjutsu Description: The user would either use chakra as an enhancer, orr their own body strength to preform Swirl. It involved jumping pretty high, about 10 feet, and dive bombing in a twister like fashion, if this hits it's deadly, if it misses it still creates a small scale quake, if the foe is within 10 feet, the quake hits them and usually knocks them out.
Name: Swords Ability: Hide and Show Rank: C-B Type: None Description: An ability learned only through training, he/she can effectivly hide any trace of a weapon inside clothing, or an object like a staff or walking stick. This ability can also allow the user to reveal and use the sword in a matter of nanoseconds. A very useful ability when trying an ambush or assasination.
Weapon Template:
Name: Shikomizune, (Prepared Cane) Rank: C-B Quantity: One, 18 inch blade, One smaller dagger-type Shikomizune, 7 inch blade, hidden inside a sake bottle.
Description: Literally a hidden sword placed in a cane or walking stick. The hilt is usually bamboo, and the blade a silvery gray. The blade is about 18 inches long, it's quite sharp and cut clean through a glass bottle without a crack. Just use enough force...If this blade is used on a hard object such as rock or trees however; it can splinter or dull quickly. Special Abilities/Characteristics: The hilt has chakra metals, which can channel chakra through out the blade, directly from the users body. Goes hand in hand with Shock Fist.
Origin: The sword has been through 3 generations in Hinoko's family. Her great grandfather was a Master Blacksmith and often made weapons for members of the family. The Shikomizune was used for Genin and new Chuunin memebers. The sword was given to her by her mother. Hinoko made the encasing herself, out of blackened bamboo, and carved in the village symbol on the bottom.
Appearance: [spoiler]http://www.nihonswords.com/wp-content/uploads/P1100574.jpg
Item Template:
Name: Basic Ninja tools: Shuriken, Kunai, Caltrops, Bomb Tags. Rank: E = Shuriken, E = Kunai, C = Caltrops D = Bomb Tags. Type: Other; Support
Natural Abilities: Basic ninja tools and weapondry. Shuriken and Kunai are used for medium range combat, usually a simple way to injure someone. Caltrops are traps, used for taking someone down stealthily and, quite possibly; painfully. Caltops come in many different sizes, they look a little like animal traps. Bomb Tags are pieces of paper with a bomb seal on the front. They are usually sticky, and found on certain areas like trees. Motion detonates them, a good way to land an ambush without getting involved. Med Packs negate any damage done by a level D rank jutsu or lower. Contains bandages or all sizes, medical tape, ointments for burns or infections, and drops for eye or ear fuzzyness, and liquid bandages. (Gluing a small cut together.)
Quantity: Shuriken: 8x, Kunai: 10x, Caltrops: 3x, Bomb Tags: 4x, Med Packs: 3x
History:
--Pre-academy Arc--
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Hinoko was born in outside the main cities of Suna, in October, harvest season, Her family was working class, and she spent most of her early years working onher fathers farm. Hinoko has 2 older brothers, and one younger sister. Her eldest brother Raiki left to join the ninja acamdey when she was about 4. Living in small town taught Hinoko the value of family, and contributed to her developing personality. She oftend ran errands for the elders of the village with her youngest sister, who died of some unknown malady when she was 3.
Hinoko's father was a very heavy drinker, and often pushed her mother around a lot, including Hinoko herself, when she got older. In one of her fathers raging drunk fits, he accidently threw a hot iron at Hinoko's back while she was working near the stove, hence the long scar on her spine. When Hinoko turned 8, Her mother, Karin worked up the courage to gather everyones belongings while Hinoko's father was away, and hustle everyone off to the main city. This is where Hinoko's second youngest sister was born, named Rika, the last remnants of her fathers existance ended there.
Living in the city was pretty difficult for Hinoko and her family, since they all had small town ethics, and were used to a tight nit group of villagers. Here almost everyone bustled about without giving a single nod. But none of this changed their views, they still made friends, and Hinoko still ran errands whenever she could, in between working with her mother in a general store down the road. Eventually Hinoko decided to join the Academy, like her brother and best friend Niata did. Niata who was now 13 had been recruited as a new genin, and Hinoko was not to be out done.
--Academy Arc--
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During Hinoko's time at the Academy, she had many pre-teen problems. Pimples, boys and girls, teachers who didn't understand her way of thinking...But she would never let Niata get the best of her. She worked diligently, though her hard work seemed to attract the attention of teasing and mock insults from the other girls at the Academy. She hated not fitting in, but she also wanted to be the best she could be, and get Genin as fast as possible, and shove it in peoples faces.
Now entering 6 months Hinoko had made plenty of friends, and had started to learn more and more about herself by the day, the teachers liked her now, and after some discussions with her mother Karin, they now understood the way her brain worked. It was unusually abstract, and she thought outside the box almost constantly, though she did follow most of the rules that she thought were fair.
At the nearing end of the Academy, she hated to leave her new friends and travel back to Suna, but her heart tugged at her, always making her look South towards the sandy dunes. Her new friends assured her that they would get as many missions in Suna as possible, and come visit her. Hinoko was thrilled that her friends would do something like that, but it did turn out that none of them were able to come to Suna after being promoted to Genin. Hinoko did graduate 5th in her class, not the best she wanted, but the top five got her hopes up.
--Genin Arc--
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It seemed like the Genin years came and went in Hinoko's life. It wasn't very short ofcourse, but it wasn't long either. She still helped her mother around the city whenever she could, in between her D and C rank missions. Her sensei Rikashi wasn't the nicest person either, so helping her family was difficult. The members of her team were pretty friendly, though the only female in the group, it was kinda awkward for her. But being the only girl made her want to prove herself, and make sure that they boys knew what she could do.
A few months near the end of her Genin years, her mother Karin fell ill, and it was to the upmost difficulty to get permission from Rikashi to go to her mothers side while she was sick. Sadly the illness started getting worse even after regular treatments of herbs and poultices made by Hinoko herself, taught to her by her grandmother. A medical ninja was called into the home, and couldn't, for the like of her, figure out what was wrong with Hinoko's mother. A week later Hinoko found another Medical ninja at her door. This one however, looked much older than the first, and had a faint fornw in his face as he looked over Karin, but he too couldn't find much wrong, other than the faint trace of copper in her arteries.
When the news came of her team being promoted to Chuunin, everything seemed to brighten, and the day seemed much more friendly than usual. Rikashi was unusually happy that day, and seemed to be genuinly happy for the three in his team. In the same day as the accouncement of Chuunin, her mother was up and about the house, doing some light housework. The best time in life was now, when everything seemed to go right, except when her father came back into her life.
--Chuunin Arc--
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Chuunin exams were pretty hard, lots of writing and battles, training and schedules. All this added to the stress of Hinoko's day. When the day for the battles arrived, Hinoko's mother had come all the way from Suna to watch her in her fight against another Chuunin hopeful. Just the thought of her mother being proud gave her so much momentum, that the fight was over in 15 minutes. Hinoko had almost gone over her own physical limit. Though it proves that even the slightest inspiration can make Hinoko go a long way.
The start of Hinoko's Chuunin years would be far from happy, or peaceful. Her father came back into her life, everything went back down hill. Hardly anyone knew them in this big city, and they couldn't rely on small town support against Hinoko's father. Though Hinoko's mother was slowly getting stronger, Hinoko didn't think that her mother could take her father on anymore. So, the worse case scenario, Hinoko was forced to hunt down, and murder her father...
Roleplay Sample:
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Everything was fuzzy, having a watery like texture. A soft voice was near, but the words were like Hinoko’s vision. She moved her head, tilting it to the side, to look over at the nightstand; an empty bottle of sake lay on its side. She let out a soft groan, her head spinning as she tried to lift it up. Something was pushing down on her torso, saying something urgently. Hinoko opened one eye and looked down at her stomach. A person was leaning down against her side, and talking to her, its eyes wide with worry.
Hinoko muttered something, and pushed a weak hand against the person on her, cutting off her circulation. She then pushed her left side up and turned over slowly, facing towards the left wall. Everything was dark, and smelled damp. A few candles scattered around the room casted shadows on two others in the room.
Quiet footsteps sounded from somewhere in the room, light and fleeting. She looked up to see a man in black motioning a woman in traditional healers clothing to go to her bed. Hinoko’s vision had cleared somewhat, as she regained consciousness. The woman touched her forehead and murmured a few words. The pain in her head and body disappeared, and her vision cleared up a lot more. She rubbed her eyes, propping herself up with her right hand, looking around the room.
A piece of string with a black rock tied to it swung very near her face, she blinked, a bit startled. She batted irritably at the thing, hissing a bit. “Wha-? Cut that out…’’ The woman healer holding the string dropped it onto the bed, and checked off something on a clipboard, she muttered to herself. ‘’She is regaining consciousness, vitals improving, and senses okay…’’ The woman nodded her head in approval and lifted her hand at the man in black, it looked like a thumbs up to Hinoko, but her vision was still a bit off.
Hinoko heard a quiet whooshing sound to the left of her head; she jerked her head back and lifted her hand just in time to catch something in her hand. She looked down at it, narrowing her eyes. It was her black and purple lighter, which she almost never let out of her sight... Hinoko frowned and looked up at the man in black who apparently threw the object at her. ‘’Don’t throw things at me jackass…’’ She picked up the sake bottle next to her on the nightstand and threw the bottle at the man’s head, hitting a little off of where she intended. Whether he meant to dodge or not was beyond her.
The woman healer checked another thing off her list, and nodded again, flicking her glance to the man, then back again. The woman leaned down and spoke softly. ‘’Hinoko-san? Hinoko-san can you hear me…? There is someone here, who wants to talk to you…’’ The woman motioned to the man in black whom Hinoko threw the sake bottle. An indent and some bloodstains were visible on his chest. He cam into the light and Hinoko studied his features. He had a striking youthful face, sorrowful deep blue eyes, and broad shoulders. He opened his mouth slightly to speak but a rambunctious rapping on the door interrupted him.
The lady healer frowned deeply and shook her head; she ignored the rapping, and motioned for the man to continue. But the sound continued, very consistently and a loud voice sounded from behind the think mahogany door. ‘’Let me in this INSTANT! Don’t you keep me from my daughter!!’’ The healer sighed and unhitched the door slowly of its heavy iron locks. The door swung open to reveal a sickly, thin woman with worry lines on her face. ‘’Hinoko, thank goodness…you blacked out again, that’s what the doctors said…’’, her mother started babbling about something and moving quickly to her side. Hinoko frowned and stared at the door, it was dim outside too, but lighter than her room…
The healer intervened and motioned at the man to try and continue, again. The man in black coughed slightly, pulling a face. ‘’Finally… I’m Char, your team leader.’’ The lady healer nodded in approval and glared at Hinoko’s mother, who was fidgeting over at the end of the bed. The healer turned her face back. “Well, I’m Emi. And, I do think you need some rest, Char please stay here and fill her in on the going ons, and she’s been out for days, just as a reminder.’’ Emi hustled out the door, pushing a reluctant Karin out with her
‘’Well then…I guess I should fill you in.’’ Char moved slowly to a desk chair next to Hinoko’s bed, folding a leg over the other, leaning an elbow on the night stand. Hinoko leaned up against the headboard of the bed, and listened intently to the update. He mentioned something about the caves up north, and about her old team and how they were, but nothing that seemed to alarm Hinoko. Somehow Char’s voice drifted her slowly into sleep, but he didn’t seem to notice. A soft black wave crashed over her eyes, pulling her into a dreamless state.
When Hinoko awakened, no one was in the room, and the door, was slightly ajar. She had a slight pain in her left side, but she was not longer nauseous. Hinoko lifted herself up and moved her legs over to the left side of the bed, letting them dangle, her toes brushing a soft faux fur rug. She pushed off, the sheets crinkling and forming around her hands. A slight dizziness came over her as she steadied herself on the nightstand. Hinoko shook her head and took small light steps towards the door, easing it open slowly. The bottom brushed against the carpet, but the door didn’t make a sound.
When Hinoko stepped into the hall way, she saw several doors, and heard faint beeping. Shuffling of blankets could be heard from the other rooms, and shifting shadows in the darkness. Moonlight shone from the high up windows, giving things a silvery glaze. Hinoko was almost too enraptured in the moonlight to notice the footsteps behind her, becoming louder and louder. Startled her head whipped around quickly, looking for a hiding place. She spotted a dirty laundry basket and an open door nearby, maybe 20 feet or so. But the footsteps were too close to make a run for it. ‘’Shunshin no Jutsu…!’’ She performed 3 hand seals, whispering the name of the Transportation jutsu, and a small puff of smoke replaced her body as she travelled quickly to the door, slipping inside, just in time to see a staff member trot up to the cart, look around quickly and wheel it away.
Hinoko whipped her forehead, and whispered gratitude to the gods. She poked her head around the corner of the door and started forward slowly, rounding the edge smoothly, keeping her ears alert for more footsteps. She stepped quietly, peeking in a few rooms and supply closets; the hall way seemed to go on forever… Hinoko stopped near one door with the number fourteen engraved on it. It just happened to her favorite number, and birth day. ‘’Hrm…I’ll just take a quick peek…’’. She opened the already ajar door and poked her head in. It was warm in the room, and dark than the others, but not all that interesting. As she turned to leave, something sounded near her ear. Something very, very familiar…’’Hello Dear…, I’ve been waiting for you…’’
Jutsu Used:
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Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Transport Jutsu) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E-S Range: Medium, 15-30 feet. Depends on the user. Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. ````````````
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| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 4:59 am | |
| Shock Fist: Use the correct site template. Also, a turn isn't 5-10 minutes, its far less then that.
Lightning Spark: Use the correct site template. Needs to be fleshed out.
Lightning Fang: Use the correct site template. How much damage can this jutsu inflict/defend? How big is it.
Shikomizune: Chakra conductivity is for B-rank weapons.
Remember that we expect you to post at least 100 words within your RP sample on average. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 4:33 pm | |
| Also, as a note, turn the time into posts, it makes it easier for everyone to stay on the same page with jutsu lengths |
| | | Hugh
Age : 37 Posts : 1136
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 5:48 pm | |
| Approved for Chuunin Slot. Still needs regular approval though |
| | | Allya
Age : 31 Posts : 152
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 8:01 pm | |
| Can't you approve it? . .; Eh, nevermind. You're too busy for stupid things like this... |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 8:19 pm | |
| Gotta edit your Weaponry specialty first to correspond with the weaponry rules.
Also, as a Chuunin, your jutsu list is far to small. Id suggest adding some weaponry techniques, more elemental jutsu, and even choose another element |
| | | Rail
Age : 33 Posts : 428
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 17 Aug 2010, 9:08 pm | |
| Not only that, you are missing a Chuunin Arc. |
| | | Allya
Age : 31 Posts : 152
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Wed 18 Aug 2010, 1:01 am | |
| Mkay...Working on the Chuunin Arc, and specs... |
| | | Allya
Age : 31 Posts : 152
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Mon 23 Aug 2010, 9:30 pm | |
| BUMP! O.O''' |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Mon 23 Aug 2010, 10:58 pm | |
| - AmayaHikari wrote:
Name: Genjutsu Kai (Genjutsu Release) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Dispels a Genjutsu of rank C or less. Also dispels any kind of Genjutsu of rank B and lower from an ally. This requires basic Genjutsu resistance to perform. The range is short, about 10-15 feet. Please remove that technique and replace it with this jutsu. They both do the same thing, but this one just has more detail and what everyone here uses -
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[b]Name:[/b] Kai - Release [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Element:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
You have Shunshin no Jutsu listed twice. Only one is needed.
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[b]Name:[/b] Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking [b]Rank:[/b] E [b]Type:[/b] N/A [b]Element:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
[b]Name:[/b] Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing [b]Rank:[/b] E [b]Type:[/b] N/A [b]Element:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
[b]Name:[/b] Explosion Tag: Activate [b]Rank:[/b] E [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Element:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it. Please include these jutsu into your application. They're basic.
You also have your weapon specialty listed as Kenjutsu (swords). You are allowed two specialties in the weaponry category.
Also, you may want to think about adding a few more techniques since you're going for Chuunin rank and all.
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| | | Allya
Age : 31 Posts : 152
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 24 Aug 2010, 11:44 pm | |
| Done Cyanide :3 Added two Weapon Techniques, and one Weapon Ability, added to basic ninja tools; Med Packs: 3x |
| | | Allya
Age : 31 Posts : 152
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 31 Aug 2010, 6:40 pm | |
| .....Bump......... |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Tue 31 Aug 2010, 7:50 pm | |
| For your weaponry spec, put this in:
Weaponry: Kenjutsu/Ranged (thats swords and ranged projectiles).
Also, if you wish to add more jutsu do so now since you still have a limited amount for the rank you are applying for. Otherwise your app looks good. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Thu 02 Sep 2010, 5:34 pm | |
| Since This hasnt been edited or said it was edited within the past two days, I will assume more techniques will not be added. With that assumation:
Approved |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko [Suna Chuunin] Sun 12 Dec 2010, 11:17 am | |
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