Fenik Clan [Complete]

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Clan Name: Fenik Clan
Clan Location: Kumo, Kiri, Iwa, Suna, Konoha
Clan Traits:
Must have Ninjutsu
Must have Fire Release
Must have darker tone of skin
Limited to Fire Release

Kekkei Genkai:

The Kekkei Genkai of the Fenik Clan allows for a abnormal use of fire whose flame, instead of burning and destroying, heals and creates. This is known as 'Phoenix Release' or Fenton and uses the Yang affinity of fire to gives life through flame. The Phoenix fire is a very distinct greenish blue color, almost similar to that of the medical chakra. In this way, elemental ninjutsu can be used to heal. It can also be used to breathe life into otherwise inanimate objects for brief periods of time, endowing the life of the flame into an object. The release seems to have the same strengths and weaknesses as what would be normal fire with the single exception of it's not being lethal.

The healing potential of a flame does depend on the power of the flame itself, and thus a certain amount of chakra is exaughstable depending on the severity of the wound. The scale ranges by rank such as;

E-C: Surface wounds and Flesh wounds
B: Fracture, Tears, and Minor Breakage
A: Major Breakage, Minor organ damage
S: Revival of removed Limbs, Major organ damage

In such cases, 'C' ranked techniques can use as little as an 'E' ranks amount of chakra to heal something like a skin cut or blister. However, Fatal Blows are usually not recoverable. This includes a strike to the heart or brain; and removal of head. One cannot bring the dead back to life. While performing what is considered a medical miracle is normal, things such as Gaara's Sand Coffin technique, that crushes the body, are almost impossible to recover from and thus also considered a Fatal Blow. Because fires weakness is water, it is also expected that if one cannot logically burn, they cannot also heal. Being soaked in water prevents one from readily burning and thus dramatically slows the healing effect.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Soul of the Fire
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Phoenix [Fenton]
Description: This is a basic Phoenix Release Technique in which the user infuses a portion of their chakra into a physical object to temporarily bring it to life. Like the shadow clone jutsu, the portion of chakra given to the object is temporarily subtracted from the users over all capacity (So giving a statue 10% leaves the user with 90% over all.)

Also, like the shadow clone jutsu, any remaining chakra chakra used to bring the object to life is returned to the user when the user cancels the technique. The object granted life never 'dies', however can be neutralized and made useless. Unlike the shadow clone technique, one doesn't retain the memories of the object brought to life.

Name: Life-Giving Warmth
Rank: C-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Pheonix [Fenton]
Description: The basic Phoenix release technique in which the user uses the healing flame to heal themselves of another. The fire itself seems to burn away wounds to return the body to normalcy; thus healing at the same rate that someone would otherwise be burned and is often a faster and easier alternative to medical ninjutsu.

Name: Radiation Purification
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Pheonix [Fenton]
Description: The user generates a heat from the flame of phoenix release. This heat can penetrate the skin into the body to not only heal internal injuries but also 'boil away' harmful poisons and bacteria in the same way that boiling water sterilizes it.

Name: Birth by Flames
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Phoenix [Fenton]
Description: This is a technique in which the user covers themselves in an aura of the Phoenix Release Flame. While doing so, they are incapable of taijutsu of physical fighting, as they cannot do damage with the phoenix flames. However, they can sustain none physical wounds and heal within a posts time; this doesn't make them immortal however, and serious blow to a vital organ or the head may still be fatal.

History: This is a clan that originated a clan of mystics and witch doctors. It was thought that they could steal souls through their ability and many would either respect or fear their abilities as super humans or channelers of demonic power. This however, was an ancient truth, prior to event he Sage of Six Paths, as the clans oddities became more and more explained as ninjutsu became more and more prevalent and the workings of chakra understood. The evil nature of the clan wasn't forgotten however, and their reputation as warlock and voodooists stuck with them within the confines of Marsh Country.

As hidden villages became more popular and militarization swept the world of shinobi, Marsh Country created the Hidden Swamp Village. The Fenik clan was very happy to use whatever authority fear commanded to take their part in this militarization and integrated the majority of their resources into the hidden swamp village. Almost as soon as they did so, the small country decided that the militarization effort was a flop; and that in order to avoid future complication, they should demilitarize and fly under the radar. This was much to the disappointment of the Fenik clan, who had already invested heavily into this project and was now losing their investment. Unable to simply return to their more humble estates, many packed up and left Marsh Country all together, while others stayed in order to take advantage of the now booming Coal industry in the country.

Those who became nomadic and left, looked to find a home in the Great Nations. Not out of blood thirst, but rather to fill what they felt was their generational niche. This was about the time of the second Great Ninja war; an event that would scatter it's members about the Great Nations due to getting separated and becoming fugitives on many fronts. As the war settled, individuals were scattered all over the map; carrying only traces of the culture that they had brought with them. Today, a fraternal chapter exists in which member from over the great nations will continue to meet as a sort of reunion; loyal to their respective nations, but allegiance ever toward their clan and bloodline.

Status: Open

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You will need to state more clearly the boundries of the phoenix release, such as;

1. Making it more clear about the healing abilities of the "flame". Are they able to heal others or just yourself, and if so how?

2. There would need to be some sort of recognition between the level of healing abilities that your fenton has compared with basic medical ninjutsu. I would suspect it would be superior but this needs to be labelled perhaps by rank?

3. With your resistance to damage I understand how it can come about but it needs to be better detailed. So if you wrap your body with fenton chakra does that allow you to become intangible? and when not you are tangible? Also, to say you had received damage in your normal state you would be able to use this chakra to completely heal yourself instantly? This seems a little OP as there is no visible consequence other than the time taken to regenerate.

4. Regenerating wounds with your flame. There has to be some sort of chakra drained attached to individual amounts of healing your body physically. This needs to be labelled as it is quite vague in this regard.

5. Also, you say members have to have katon element which makes sense. Even though fenton doesn't generate any heat and has no burning ability, are clan members able to generate normal katon based elemental techniques?

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Thanks for looking into this Todd, you express reasonable questions I'll answer them here before editting so that we can better come to an agreement as to the end result of the clan.

1. As stated in naruto, Yang affinity, or Yang release, is the affinity of chakra that gives life. By taking this extreme and applying it to fire, we form a flame that heals instead of burns, thus the unique gravity of this technique. This is for myself, or others.

2. I will put a tangeble scale as to what is possible to heal per rank via phoenix release. Something like this

C- Surface wounds and Flesh wounds
B- Fracture, Tears, and Minor Breakage
A- Major Breakage, Minor organ damage
S- Revival of removed Limbs, Major organ damage

3. Fenton chakra heals, it doesn't preserve. So logically, I would first need to be wounded before I can heal myself. Covering myself in Fenton chakra would be like pre-emptive healing, and once I sustain damage I quickly heal from it. However, if the damage is fatal, I would die before healing is possible. Not at all intangible. It's like... in COD how after getting shot a few times and your screen gets bloody you can just hide out for a few moments and return to health. LOL

4. I would assume that the chakra loss is reflected in the rank of the technique, though in the finishing product I will be sure to explain.

5. Yes, they could still use Katon, but the two are distinguished from each other simply because the color of the flames are so radically different. I will also limit that they can ONLY have Katon, as to not have any conflict with other elements being potentially used along side.

How's this sound?

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Quote :: 1. As stated in naruto, Yang affinity, or Yang release, is the affinity of chakra that gives life. By taking this extreme and applying it to fire, we form a flame that heals instead of burns, thus the unique gravity of this technique. This is for myself, or others.

2. I will put a tangeble scale as to what is possible to heal per rank via phoenix release. Something like this

C- Surface wounds and Flesh wounds
B- Fracture, Tears, and Minor Breakage
A- Major Breakage, Minor organ damage
S- Revival of removed Limbs, Major organ damage

This is all good.

Quote :: 3. Fenton chakra heals, it doesn't preserve. So logically, I would first need to be wounded before I can heal myself. Covering myself in Fenton chakra would be like pre-emptive healing, and once I sustain damage I quickly heal from it. However, if the damage is fatal, I would die before healing is possible. Not at all intangible. It's like... in COD how after getting shot a few times and your screen gets bloody you can just hide out for a few moments and return to health. LOL

Perhaps even longer with last stand? haha. Then you would need to describe what the word "fatal" means in regards to this clan as they are a superior based medical clan.

Quote :: 4. I would assume that the chakra loss is reflected in the rank of the technique, though in the finishing product I will be sure to explain

But surely in battle if you were to sustain a minor injury whilst in the midst of an assault the user would most likely send fenton chakra to the area to heal it? I know these things usually are none recordable in normal aspect but it could become quite troublesome with the use of fenton.

Quote :: 5. Yes, they could still use Katon, but the two are distinguished from each other simply because the color of the flames are so radically different. I will also limit that they can ONLY have Katon, as to not have any conflict with other elements being potentially used along side.

How's this sound?

Yeah I think limiting to Katon affinity only would be appropriate. Also, seeing as this is classed as ninjutsu (I agree with you) then what is their relationship with normal medical ninjutsu? are they capable?

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3. Alright, I explained the 'fatal' clause and even explained how the weakness of water prevents healing.

4. Ahh I see what your saying and it's a good point, I'll explain that the C-ranked version can require less chakra if one is only say... healing a scratch.

5. I'm sure they could use medical ninjustu but with the exception of all the weird experimental stuff, Phoenix release pretty much makes traditional healing obsolete.

And with those last edits I should have taken care of all the details needed to get this sucker passed!

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Ok nice clan approved. GO MARCO! Wink