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| Basic Information:
Name: Hiro Taka
Secondary Title: Hawke
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:
Hiro was not born with white hair, it became that way with time, but he doesn't mind. His hair is neither short nor long - something between those two. He doesn't really turn much attention to his haircut, which is why Hiro's hair is often messed up and chaotic. He is, however, proud of his green eyes secretly. They can make him look sinister and evil or just the opposite - calm and dreamy depending on how he feels like, which is why he loves those eyes so much.
As for his clothes - he doesn't have strict dressing laws, but he tends to wear dark clothes, because the contrast between his black clothes and white hair makes him look awesome. He does, however, always wear his silver neck chain thingy which he has grown attached to. Obviously, his profession often forces him to wear Kumo Jounin vest, but by now he is used to it as well. During missions that require him to go to snowy, cold regions, he wears a black windbreaker, but when sunny missions occur, he is happy to wear his black T-shirt. Other colors just don't suit him anyway.
Generally, Hiro Taka is medium weight an height - he doesn't stand out much with his sizes. He tends to keep his stance stately, but he often loosens up as well. It is easy to tell if Hiro has had a bad time - he doesn't shave when he is tired, so if the past few days have been a nuisance to him his cheeks and neck are all covered in dark stubble. Also, he smokes when he is depressed or tired, but that happens rarely.
Personality:
Hiro Taka grew up with a strong belief that he, no matter what, will always succeed, that is the first thing that anybody around him notices regarding Hiro's personality. When taking a mission, he acts as if it was completed already, just that a little time must pass. He starts a fight thinking... no, knowing that he will win. Of course, nobody is perfect and Hiro has also had failures in his life that made him a little bit more realistic and careful. Most of all Hiro dislikes arrogant people - there is nothing wrong with being self-confident, but being arrogant is simply annoying. On the other side, he respects those who use their mind and smart tactics to ensure their victory.
When it comes to Hiro's alignment, he would be best described nor as good, nor evil, but something in between. He loves his country, his village, and wishes only the best for it, the problem is that Hiro only sees the big picture. For Hiro, there is nothing wrong with sacrificing a few to save a lot. Also, Hiro is not exactly sadistic, but he does enjoy a good fight or simply punishing those who have earned it. He doesn't have a strong sense of justice because he just doesn't see the point. Its boring.
He could also be called an emotion sadomasochist - he hates when it gets boring, so he messes something up just for the lulz. He often does something unneeded to "see what happens". Hiro is only satisfied when he feels strong emotions, no matter whether they are positive or negative, he just hates when he feels nothing. Such attitude makes him interesting not only for the first few times of meeting, but for all of his life.
As for Hiro's personality regarding casual social life - he greatly enjoys a good talk. There is nothing more refreshing to one's mind than an interesting, intellectual and calm discussion about whatever. Its even better if there is a sake or something - loosening up from all the stressful ninja life just gives him more dedication to achieve his goals.
Catch Phrase:
"Just as I predicted"
"[Jutsu name] : success"
"So easy It ain't even fun anymore"
Clan: None
Rank Information:
Rank: Jounin
Village Affiliation: Kumogakure no Sato
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Fuuinjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Earth (Doton)
Sub: Wind (Fuuton)
Special Characteristics:
- Quick mind - Hiro's mind works best when it is put under a lot of stress, thus Hiro is capable of creating great tactics quickly during the harshest situations.
- Ninjutsu mastery - From childhood, learning ninjutsu has been Hiro's priority. Over years his chakra control has become superb, to the extent that he can focus on two different jutsus at the same time. Due to being extremely talented at chakra control, Hiro has mastered using one handed seals, that allow him more movement when preparing a jutsu.
- High pain threshold - During his chuunin days Hiro had to overcome tremendous pain for multiple times, which trained him to be able to withstand a lot of pain, resulting in him being able to continue fighting when normal shinobi would be lying on the ground. As long as he can maintain his consciousness and as long as he is psychically capable of it, he can keep on fighting.
- Emotional control - For multiple reasons, such as persuasion, Hiro has studied human psychology to not only understand other people's feelings, but to also be familiar with himself. Such studies allowed him to be able to control his emotions [calm his anger etc.], so when genjutsu that control emotions are applied on Hiro, it is easier for him to notice that his emotions are being changed, thus he understands that he is under a genjutsu.
- Chakra sensor - Due to his habit to travel underground during combat, Hiro has learned to sense surrounding chakra up to 20 meters in radius. Hiro's level of chakra sensing isn't very precise, but it can distinguish people and roughly sense how much chakra the opponent has.
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Thu 13 Jan 2011, 3:56 pm | |
| Skill Information: Basic jutsus:- Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Kinjutsu/Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added.
Name: Bunshin Daibakuha - Shadow Clone Jutsu Super Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Kinjutsu/Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.
Doton jutsus:- Spoiler:
Name: Doton: Tabi
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description: Using earth element chakra the user makes all earth around him soft, thus allowing the user to move freely underground. Used for various tactics as well as simply dodging enemy attacks.
Name: Doton: Iwa Tama no jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description: With earth elemental chakra user hardens his own skin, providing great defense against all elements, except Raiton. All B-rank jutsu effectiveness [except Raiton] is lowered by a rank. Lasts 4 turns after activating.
Name: Doton: Doryuu Heki
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description: Doton - Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack. Can block up to B-rank jutsu or at least weaken higher rank jutsus, except for Raiton.
Name: Doton: Eda souken
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description: In extreme situations when a limb has been cut down, this jutsu will recreate this limb from the surrounding ground for three turns. Can also be used to add a new limb [usually an arm] to aid user in combat. Eda Souken arm can be used to create jutsus just as an ordinary arm would.
Name: Doton: Chika Kansei
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C - A
Element: Doton
Description: A variation of Doton: Doryuu Heki - user spits a fast ball of mud from his mouth that expands greatly, and when it hits a target, the mud grows into a large mass of earth, trapping everything inside of it. C-rank creates a mass of earth equal to 5x5 meters, B-rank 15x15 and A-rank 30x30 meters.
Name: Doton Bunshin
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: An evolution of Kage Bunshin no jutsu - the user creates a clone made of earth that is more persistent to damage [ can handle more ]. The clone can use jutsus etc., just like a normal Kage Bunshin. It can handle as much damage as a human body could, meaning it can handle up to C-rank direct damage. When it has reached its limit, the bunshin turns back into mud that quickly hardens into stone, making anyone in direct contact with it trapped.
Name: Sawa no Yomi
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description: An evolution of Doton: Doryū Taiga. Unlike Doryū Taiga, which simply creates a river of mud, Sawa no Yomi makes the surface of the ground/wall liquid and then quickly turns it back to a solid surface, trapping the opponent.
Name: Kujiku
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description: A variation of Doton: Doryuu Heki. With great speed user spits out 12 little balls of mud that quickly grow into earth boulders, resulting in a rain of fast and heavy boulders.
Name: Doton: Daichi Ōkami
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: A technique created by Hiro Taka. From the earth around, the user creates an average sized wolf who's tail is connected to the user's hand. This wolf is incredibly fast and strong, it moves as fast as a ninja and can bash trough trees easily. If needed, techniques that are emitted from user's mouth can be emitted from wolf's mouth too. Daichi Ōkami is hard to be destroyed, except for Raiton techniques. Also, if the tail of the wolf that connects the wolf with the user is cut off, the wolf will die, because he needs constant connection from the user. User can create only up to two wolves. The wolves can go anywhere in 500 meter radius, if it leaves this range it's power drops drastically. User can move while he controls this wolf, but his hand is immobilized [because wolf's tail is attached to it].
Fuuton jutsus:- Spoiler:
Name: Fuuton: Reppushou
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton: Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, user will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Name: Fuuton: Kannonhou
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Fuuton
Description: User molds wind element chakra into his chest and then instantly releases it through his mouth, spewing out a big and fast compressed wind ball that is capable of crushing huge rocks easily.
Name: Kazekon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Fuuton
Description: A devastating technique that uses the element of Wind, created by Hiro Taka. This technique wraps user's hand with highly concentrated wind chakra. The wind focused in the hand of the ninja has superb cutting power, making this jutsu a real danger. Kazekon is extendable up to 20 meters, but the more it is stretched, the less cutting power it has. (Max stretch would make it 50%)
Fuuinjutsu:- Spoiler:
Name: Heru jutsu
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: A sealing technique created by Hiro Taka. By carefully controlling chakra, a kanji "Hell" is placed on either enemy's or friend's skin. With this special jutsu Hiro links the chakra source with someone else. This jutsu can work both as an attack and as an aid. As an attack, Hiro can use any amount of chakra to destroy equal amount of opponent's chakra. As an aid, Hiro can "send" chakra to the ally, however, this is an unstable connection, so only half of the sent chakra will be "delivered". (It happens instantly.) Putting the Seal on is hard and takes about an hour, so it requires the target to be either unconscious or voluntary. This technique can be stopped with other sealing techniques that could interrupt the connection or if the user is killed. Also, to cancel this technique, the target can change his chakra structure (going into Cursed Seal Mode, Sage mode or anything else that changes chakra extremely, or if a Kekkei Genkai is gained or lost). This is, however unknown, so it takes a really educated person in Fuuinjutsu to figure this out.
Name: Omoi Shouheki no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: A simple yet hard-to-perform sealing jutsu. After forming the required hand-seals and kanji "Shield" will appear on the skin. The chakra is paid at the time when the seal is made. Then, any time in the next 20 turns of a battle user can activate it once instantly, without hand-seals or anything else. When it is released, a pyramid form shield is formed around the user, just big enough to cover entire user's body. It works as a shield - its so hard and dense that it can protect from any up to B-rank jutsu. It lasts for up to 10 seconds, unless user dispels it. This jutsu can be both used on an ally or user himself. Only the user can activate the shield.
Name: Kiga jutsu
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: C - A
Element: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals, a kanji "Hunger" will appear on user's left palm. After that, the first object that the kanji comes into contact with will be sealed away. The seal absorbs only up to 3x3 meters of mass [or 10x10 meters in case of B-rank jutsu or 20x20 if A-rank]. In case it comes into contact with a larger object, it seals away as much as it can. Cannot absorb plasma or biological stuff.
Combination jutsus:- Spoiler:
Name: Taka no jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Doton; Fuuton
Description: After performing the needed seals, from the surrounding earth a big Hawk appears, that is capable of flying and carrying the user. It is infused with air to make it fly easier. Lasts for 5 turns.
Name: Higure Zansatsu
Type: Ninjutsu; Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: A trapping technique utilizing Fuuinjutsu and Doton - an earth coffin bursts from the ground, quickly trapping the opponent/ally in it. The coffin has a kanji "Judgement" on it. The coffin "seals" the opponent, immobilizing them. If used on summons, than they can't be summoned. Also, the target's current condition is sealed as well, meaning that if an injured person would be sealed, his condition wouldn't get worse. The coffin is not attached to the ground and can be carried around.
Name: Bakuha no Fuu
Type: Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Fuuton
Description: The jutsus creates a ball of compressed air, seals it away into a little kanji, that can be placed anywhere and detonated whenever the user wants. When released, it burst into an explosion [no fire, ofc] equal to an exploding tag in terms of power.
Equipment:- Spoiler:
Name: Hachi [Bee]
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance: A normal wakizashi [short katana] with a white blade and black hilt.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Nothing.
Origin: Was simply purchased from a Blacksmith.
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Thu 13 Jan 2011, 3:57 pm | |
| Background Information
History:Birth Arc:
The Lands of Lightning, the huge mountains, the never-ending blue sky with the white, puffy clouds, the cool wind breeze - after being born, this was what Hiro saw and felt. His family, mother, father and elder sister, weren't living near any civilized place. They were out in the wilds, but none of them minded. It was beautiful and calm. Of course there were downsides for living in a little house in the mountains with no other people, but everyone in the family were open-minded and hard to be traumatized.
They were living in the mountains because Hiro's father, Kaosu Taka was a missing nin. He was being hunted because he had done some forbidden fuuinjutsu. Kaosu had no choice but to take his family and run, and that is exactly what he did.
Until the age of 6 years Hiro's life was calm and productive - his parents educated him as well as actually taught him basics of ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu. Of course, all good things come to an end.
Kumo scout ninjas found out Kaosu's hideout. Soon after that, 3 Kumo jōnins confronted Kaosu in front of the little house. Hiro, his mother and sister were just standing aside, powerless and pitiful, crying and screaming as Kaosu was murdered. Soon after that Hiro's black hair changed to completely white. He had never witnessed such violence.
Since the rest of the family had not actually done anything wrong, they were spared. After that, for many minor reasons Taka family had to move to Kumogakure, the ninja village.
Academy - Genin Arc:
Without a father, Taka family was really poor. On top of that, life in the village isn't one of the cheapest ones. Hiro's mother tried as much as she could to earn enough money, but it wasn't enough.
The village authorities gave money to those families, who had at least one child put into ninja academy. Hiro's sister was too old, but it was just the perfect time for Hiro himself. It was a hard decision for his mother, but in the end it was decided to put Hiro into the Academy.
Hiro knew that he mustn't blame ninjas for his father's destiny - he understood that Kaosu was a missing nin that had done a crime. He was dangerous.
Hiro himself didn't mind becoming a ninja, he was really interested into learning ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu. And because he already knew the basics, he had no major problems finishing the Academy. As for friends - he did have a problem with some social skills, but he got the hang of it in first few years.
During those years he developed great sense of responsibility and swore to take care of his family in his father's place.
As he officially became a genin he got appointed as an apprentice to one of Kumo's best jounins the time of his training started. They spent less time on missions, but more time for training. Since Hiro's sensei wasn't familiar with fuuinjutsu, Hiro had to learn that on his own. He did, however, learn Doton and Fuuton basics as well as all the other stuff that a shinobi should know.
He himself didn't notice how he had grown attached to his sensei, he started to see him as a mentor or something. Sensei himself had lots of faith into Hiro, which was why Hiro joined the soonest Chuunin Exams.
Chuunin - Jounin Arc:
The exams were hard for sure, but not hard enough to break Hiro. The authorities noticed Hiro's ability to take responsibility over his team as well as his talent with ninjutsu. Even tough Hiro lost in one versus one matches, he was still promoted to Chuunin.
Afterward missions, assassinations and pure duty were the only stuff he did, his growth in ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu as well as his mind were improved trough harsh situations. If in Chuunin exams experience was what he lacked, then now he had more experience than most other Chuunins.
He was a chuunin for seven years straight, he was often close to death, but never failed a mission. Unfortunately that is nothing rare, because in most cases failure would mean death to a shinobi, but Hiro is still very proud of his achievement.
Only at the age of 20 years he decided to go for the title of Jounin. It was harder than Hiro thought it would be, but still, with his excellent ninjutsu skills he was once again noticed by authorities. Also, this time, Hiro won one versus one matches, proving that his battle skills have grown as well.
And just recently a notice came from the Raikage himself - Hiro had been approved as a Jounin. A newbie in the ranks of jounins, but not a weakling.
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Thu 13 Jan 2011, 11:01 pm | |
| Role-Play Sample:- Training for Kage Bunshin no jutsu on NWoTN2:
The huge hills of the Lightening Country were piercing trough the thick white clouds, creating the feeling as if he was a true angel from Miyavi's viewpoint - at the top of Unraikyo Mountain it was impossible to see the ground trough all the clouds. This scenerey might stun a lot of people, but since Miyavi was here for 15 long years... It didn't bother him much. He did, however, care for his new epic jutsu.
In a fight with another Jounin some time ago, he had noticed his lack of Bunshin Techniques, since the enemy did use suicide-bomb clones, Miyavi was in a bad situation. At that moment he had decided to learn a bunshin technique, he is sure that it will become useful in the future.
Even thou lower rank shinobi in Kumogakure aren't allowed to view Forbidden Techniques, such as Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, Miyavi was an Elite Jounin, he had some privilegies. And so, without much touble, Miyavi got the description of the technique "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu". It was a long and complex one, but not a problem for Miyavi Negewa.
As he was standing in front of the epic temple "Unraikyo" he repeatedly shouted out:
"Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" but nothing more than a puff of smoke, and, at best, a crippled thingy on the ground, appeared.
While Miyavi was patient at the beginning, knowing that no one ever gets a jutsu right with the first time, he did become annoyed as that continued for the whole day. The best progress he achieved was a single clone without problems, but he clearly knew that it wasn't even near the goal - he had to be capable of creating at least five clones, wich seemed to be almost impossible for Miyavi at that time.
It got dark soon, so he had no other choice but to spend the night inside the Unraikyo. It was incredibly spacious, but no wonder - this place was once used for the legendary Killer Bee's training. Miyavi slowly became jealous as he remembered the multiple legends about such legendary people - everything seemed to be so easy for these legends. It seemed that Miyavi was the only one who had to work hard to achieve such great goals. True, Miyavi had gotten quite strong, but it wasn't near the level he dreams of. As Miyavi slept, he saw in his dream how he defeats raging demons, saves the world and so on, but once he woke up, he forgot everything he had seen in the five minutes.
Miyavi was amased to see that he had gotten up at 5AM, wich was quite extreme for a slumber-lover like Miyavi. There was some weird motivation flowing trough his veins, something inside of his heart pushed Miyavi out of the Unraikyo, making Miyavi train more.
Trough the long night he had cleared his mind, wich allowed him to create two completely perfect Bunshins with the first try. Such success motivated him even more.
Even thou it took more then eight hours, Miyavi successfully mastered Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, now he made fun out of the jutsu just to get used to using it in everyday life. He even danced with the clones!
He smiled to himself as he had again successfully mastered another Forbidden jutsu. So what if it was just B-ranked? It did allow Miyavi to get out of many harsh situations, a situation like in the fight with the Jounin will never repeat again - Miyavi was now even closer to his goals.
Miyavi was pateintly sitting on the ground, examining the scroll he had taken with him to the training. There were Kage Bunshin dancing tecktonic in the background. So, whats next?
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Sun 16 Jan 2011, 9:36 pm | |
| FINALLY! Mwuahahaha!
I have finished my character. I gotta say, the disapproval of my Ikiga clan did make me confused, which was why this took so long, but after a little planning I'm even close to think that this is even better. So yeah, I got Raikage's permission for Jounin spot [in case if my character is good enough].
EDIT: Oh wait, no, there is stuff I havent done. But itll be done today! MWuahaahaha...  |
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Mon 17 Jan 2011, 4:44 pm | |
| Ok, NOW I'm done.
Come approve. |
| | | | Brad
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Mon 17 Jan 2011, 5:47 pm | |
| Before I take this application seriously could you please remove..
Clan: None, 'because Adam hates me'
I'd appreciate it ^^
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Mon 17 Jan 2011, 5:59 pm | |
| | No offense intended. Its gone now. |
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Mon 17 Jan 2011, 6:11 pm | |
| | While Im not sure, but am looking into it, the Heru seal has two different names, one being Kaosu. Given that, Im talking to the member who I know had the name Kaosu on multiple RP sites to see if it is his. If it is I will let you know and you can talk to him. |
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Mon 17 Jan 2011, 8:25 pm | |
| Don't. One of my characters on NWoTN2 was Kaosu, he had this jutsu. I copied the description, probably missed the spot where it mentioned his name. I'll edit it.
EDIT: Done. You can see the jutsu on my NWoTN2 Kaosu jutsu list here if you want to make sure. Also, in my history I have mentioned Kaosu as Hiro's father, that is because I like making references to my previous characters. In future you might see me creating NPCs named Miyavi or Hronus or something like that.
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Mon 17 Jan 2011, 8:33 pm | |
| | Ahhh ok. Just making sure haha. I did get in contact with my friend and he said nope, so I was just waiting on your response. Alrighty, Ill leave the rest to Brad cause hec alled it. Thanks ^^ |
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Tue 18 Jan 2011, 2:44 am | |
| I've been really busy, if it's not done by 4:30pm i'll be online to do it. Sorry things keep coming up in real.
Hawke it wasn't so much offensive but it would send off the wrong signals to anyone reading your application in future and there was no need for it to be there :S pretty much. Anyway thank you for removing it. I'll look over your application ASAP. |
| | | | Brad
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| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Tue 18 Jan 2011, 10:49 pm | |
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- Name: Doton: Daichi Ōkami
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: A technique created by Hiro Taka. From the earth around, the user creates a wolf who's tail is connected to the user's hand. This wolf is incredibly fast and strong, it moves as fast as a ninja and can bash trough trees easily. If needed, techniques that are emitted from user's mouth can be emitted from wolf's mouth too. Daichi Ōkami is highly resistant to all elements, except for Raiton. Also, if the tail of the wolf that connects the wolf with the user is cut off, the wolf will die, because he needs constant connection from the user. User can create only two wolves at one time.
How can it be highly resistant to all elements when it's only Doton based? Change the description please.
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- Name: Fuuton: Jurei no jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Element: Fuuton
Description: With wind element chakra the user creates oxygen in his lungs so that he doesn't have to breathe. Used for underwater actions, situations when no oxygen is around etc.
That jutsu should be way higher than E rank, it takes constant chakra and element control. Make take up a B rank worth of chakra every post.
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- Name: Kazekon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Fuuton
Description: A devastating technique that uses the element of Wind. The creator of the Jutsu, Hiro Taka, was inspired by legends about "Chidori", this technique also creates a highly dense, concentrated beam of wind in user's hand.
It also creates a loud screetching-like sound which clearly gives away user's location. However, this jutsu is a lot different from Chidori, only the first look at Kazekon may remind of the lightening current.
Since wind is easier to manipulate, Kazekon's form can be changed in the heat of combat, to the max of twenty meters in length.
The Kazekon stays active for three turns max, or when all the power of the wind is spent.
Simply put, its like this: Kazekon has got three charges. Every form manipulation costs one charge, every hit with Kazekon costs one charge.
Could you make the description more clear please? I'm having trouble picturing exactly what your trying to explain.
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- Name: Heru jutsu
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: A sealing technique created by Hiro Taka. By carefully controlling chakra, a kanji "Hell" is placed on either enemy's or friend's skin. With this special jutsu Hiro links the chakra source with someone else. This jutsu can work both as an attack and as an aid. As an attack, Hiro can use any amount of chakra to destroy equal amount of opponent's chakra. As an aid, Hiro can "send" chakra to the ally, however, this is an unstable connection, so only half of the sent chakra will be "delivered". (It happens instantly.) Putting the Seal on is hard and takes about an hour, after putting this Seal on the target he will feel great pain and won't be able to fight further, however, the connection works forever, until it is cancelled by Hiro.
Change the last line of the description please, you cannot state that you know for sure weather a person wouldnt be able to fight further. If it lasts forever and cannot be stopped once used then this jutsu could only be S rank.
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- Name: Omoi Shouheki no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: A simple yet hard-to-perform sealing jutsu. After forming the required hand-seals and kanji "Shield" will appear on the skin. The chakra is paid at the time when the seal is made. Then, any time in the next 20 turns of a battle user can activate it once instantly, without hand-seals or anything else. When it is released, a pyramid form shield is formed around the user. It works as a shield - its so hard and dense that it can protect from any up to B-rank jutsu. It lasts for up to 10 seconds. Also, if enemy touched the pyramid he will get a little burned. This jutsu can be both used on an ally or user himself. Only the user can activate the shield.
How can it burn someone without having an element? Fire? Lightning? Acid?
Check it out! B) Over all, nice work. I'd like a second mod or admin to just check over your work :3 two heads are better than one 
~luff L33 |
| | | | Hawke
Posts : 50
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Wed 19 Jan 2011, 4:55 pm | |
| About Daichi Ōkami, I figured that its obvious that Earth element is hard to be destroyed. Anyways, I changed the description from "highly resistant to all elements" to "hard to destroy", to not cause long debates. Its just normal for Doton techniques to be quite hard, it is the only element that is not a liquid, air or plasma after all.
As for Fuuton: Jurei no jutsu, I do not believe that it is such a complex technique. It might sound so from my description, but I've seen this technique elsewhere and it was also low-rank. After taking a look around, I found this:- Spoiler:
Fuuton Kyou Iki no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
CP cost: 2
A jutsu on which user makes the chakra circulate in his lungs, creating air inside of them. Basically, given extra oxygen during a little period, for some reasons like being under water.
This if from my old character Kaosu on NWoTN2, as I see now I did overdo it with the ranking, it is D rank here. However I understand that other sites do not matter, this is a different site after all, so I looked around more.- Spoiler:
Name:Fūton: Kyō Iki no Jutsu • Lung Inflation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Rank: D
Effects:A jutsu on which user makes the chakra circulate in his lungs, creating air inside of them. Basically, given extra oxygen during a little period, for some reasons like being under water.
This is basically the same thing, except that this one I found on this site, in Kiri Exp. Jounin's Ahora Sousakaras profile, its also D-rank and was approved. Since it is practically the same thing, I'll edit mine to be D-rank. I gotta say, paying B-rank chakra just to be able to hold your breath a little longer isn't worth it [except when its life-or-death of course].
Aaaaand Kazekon now. I'll try to make it more understandable, I was kinda in a hurry when I wrote that after all. - Quote :
- A devastating technique that uses the element of Wind, created by Hiro Taka. This technique wraps user's hand with highly concentrated wind chakra. The wind focused in the hand of the ninja has superb cutting power, making this jutsu a real danger. Kazekon is extendable up to 20 meters, but the more it is stretched, the less cutting power it has. (Max stretch would make it 50%)
Would this work?
Heru jutsu. With "won't be able to fight further" I meant that this technique really hurts the one that it is applied to. I'll edit it to "Putting the Seal on is hard and takes about an hour, so it requires the target to be either unconscious or voluntary." to explain it better. As for the undispellability ( xD ), I changed it to "This technique can be stopped with other sealing techniques that could interrupt the connection or if the user is killed. Also, to cancel this technique, the target can change his chakra structure (going into Cursed Seal Mode, Sage mode or anything else that changes chakra extremely, or if a Kekkei Genkai is gained or lost). This is, however unknown, so it takes a really educated person in Fuuinjutsu to figure this out." Other sealing techniques such as the famous Cursed Seal are also permanent, but they are not S-rank, so I think this is ok. It is, after all, hard to put this seal on anyone.
Omoi Shouheki no Jutsu... Ahh, I'm tired, I'll just delete that part out. xD |
| | | | Brad
Posts : 509
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Wed 19 Jan 2011, 7:38 pm | |
| About Daichi Ōkami. I refuse to approve that jutsu at D rank. In order for someone to have such chakra control that they can turn it into oxygen is higer than a D rank. Either change it to B like i've ask or get another mod/admin to check your app because i won't approve it (Even if another mod/admin has allowed it before).
Apart from that, the other jutsu I picked up on are now to my satisfaction :3
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| | | | Hawke
Posts : 50
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Wed 19 Jan 2011, 9:16 pm | |
| | I deleted the Fuuton Jutsu. ^_^ |
| | | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Thu 20 Jan 2011, 1:26 am | |
| - Appearance and Personality are a little thin...
- I do like my jounin to be unique with clans etc but that is fine. 
Other than that it looks all good from me.
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| | | | Hawke
Posts : 50
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Thu 20 Jan 2011, 9:50 pm | |
| To say the truth, I really dislike writing appearances and personalities, Its just too boring, no action makes my imagination disappear. However I did enlarge them a little bit, just to show that I am willing to do the boring part for the sake of getting the good part later xD
As for clan, I did plan making Hiro an Ikiga, but mods seem to distrust chakra absorbing techniques, so I decided to make a flexible ninjutsu master (one handed seals ftw) with some pretty handy Sealing Jutsus. Hiro has got a lot of growth possibilities. |
| | | | Adam
Age : 31
Posts : 8965
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Fri 21 Jan 2011, 3:32 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Name: Doton Bunshin
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: An evolution of Kage Bunshin no jutsu - the user creates a clone made of earth that is more persistent to damage [ can handle more ]. The clone can use jutsus etc., just like a normal Kage Bunshin.
The description needs more, if you go to my application and find the Lightning Clone version you will see how it kind of should be. How much more damage can this clone take? If it is destroyed, does it melt to mud, or become hard like rock, therefore trapping the opponents hand unless force is applied? Specify. I believe a technique like this was used in a recent anime filler and they turned to mud, but still had a trapping effect.
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- - High pain threshold - During his chuunin days Hiro had to overcome tremendous pain for multiple times, which trained him to be able to withstand a lot of pain, resulting in him being able to continue fighting when normal shinobi would be lying on the ground.
As said in the chatbox, this needs a better example.
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- Name: Doton: Daichi Ōkami
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Description: A technique created by Hiro Taka. From the earth around, the user creates a wolf who's tail is connected to the user's hand. This wolf is incredibly fast and strong, it moves as fast as a ninja and can bash trough trees easily. If needed, techniques that are emitted from user's mouth can be emitted from wolf's mouth too. Daichi Ōkami is hard to be destroyed, except for Raiton techniques. Also, if the tail of the wolf that connects the wolf with the user is cut off, the wolf will die, because he needs constant connection from the user. User can create only two wolves at one time.
Is the wolf average sized? How far can it go from the user? How vulnerable are you while the wolf or wolves are active? I'd suspect extremely vulnerable.
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- Name: Doton: Iwa Tama no jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description: With earth elemental chakra user hardens his own skin, providing great defense against all elements, except Raiton. Lasts 4 turns after activating.
At B-rank the description should state it weakens B-rank Ninjutsu to C-rank and C-rank Taijutsu and Ninjutsu to D-rank, as you said excluding Raiton. A-S techniques of any nature or type would penetrate your defense.
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- Name: Doton: Doryuu Heki
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Description: Doton - Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.
Refer to my comment above.
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- Name: Shinkuu Kiga
Type: Ninjutsu; Fuuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Fuuton
Description: The user combines wind element and Kiga Jutsu - after the seals the user starts sucking everything into his mouth with great pressure (even trees are pulled out of ground.) As it is sucked in it is absorbed by Kiga jutsu. This is a high A-rank jutsu, because unlike normal Kiga jutsu, it also can absorb biologic stuff. It is, however, still incapable of absorbing plazma, such as fire. Costs more chakra than normal A-ranks. This needs a range, a fire technique used to counter would piratically blow your face up.
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- Name: Omoi Shouheki no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: A simple yet hard-to-perform sealing jutsu. After forming the required hand-seals and kanji "Shield" will appear on the skin. The chakra is paid at the time when the seal is made. Then, any time in the next 20 turns of a battle user can activate it once instantly, without hand-seals or anything else. When it is released, a pyramid form shield is formed around the user. It works as a shield - its so hard and dense that it can protect from any up to B-rank jutsu. It lasts for up to 10 seconds. This jutsu can be both used on an ally or user himself. Only the user can activate the shield. Bump to B-rank if it's capable of blocking B-ranks. How big is the pyramid? |
| | | | Hawke
Posts : 50
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Sat 22 Jan 2011, 6:41 pm | |
| All done, but as for the "Shinkuu Kiga", I just deleted it. It has a little too obvious weak point.
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| | | | Adam
Age : 31
Posts : 8965
| | Subject: Re: Taka, Hiro [Kumo Jounin] Sun 23 Jan 2011, 3:13 am | |
| Enjoy your shitty village.  |
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