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PostSubject: Could i get some feed back? Could i get some feed back? EmptyFri 07 Jan 2011, 11:37 pm
Now i made a fan fic and i want some feed back on it. Now the new chapter with spelling corrections is being made but for now this is up.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6632134/2/Love_Hina_a_Change_of_Power
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PostSubject: Re: Could i get some feed back? Could i get some feed back? EmptyFri 07 Jan 2011, 11:41 pm
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PostSubject: Re: Could i get some feed back? Could i get some feed back? EmptySat 08 Jan 2011, 12:35 am
Really it works for me? What does it say when you open it?
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The Joker
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PostSubject: Re: Could i get some feed back? Could i get some feed back? EmptySat 08 Jan 2011, 1:54 am
works for me.
Its alright kei
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PostSubject: Re: Could i get some feed back? Could i get some feed back? EmptySat 08 Jan 2011, 5:50 am
As fine of quality as my favorite work of Fan Fiction, Doom Repercussions of Evil.
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PostSubject: Re: Could i get some feed back? Could i get some feed back? EmptySat 08 Jan 2011, 7:53 am
Master Exploder wrote:
As fine of quality as my favorite work of Fan Fiction, Doom Repercussions of Evil.

COOKIE! Older than the sun.
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