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₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Byakugan Transplant Tue 04 Jan 2011, 12:36 am | |
| Body Retrieval
Transplant Topic
Clan below, gentle fists crossed out because character doesn't meet prerequisites to use it.
- Spoiler:
Clan Name: Hyuuga Clan Location: Konoha Clan Traits: The gentle fist - The Gentle Fist style of combat is based on palm strikes and generally aims to damage the body's Chakra Pathway System, thus creating difficulty by inhibiting an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user will forcefully insert a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The chakra can then be used to rupture or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu. Any chakra based substance can be countered/destroyed by using the gentle fist style to force chakra into it. This is done by using the chakra openings in ones hands to shape their own chakra into needles which can cut through chakra itself. It can also be used to attack the opponent's internal organs, to which the chakra pathway system is closely tied. Even the slightest tap from this style can cause major damage, hence the name "gentle fist." Because the chakra pathway system is invisible, the Byakugan is required for this style to be used effectively. Since the Byakugan is unique to the Hyūga clan, it has become their signature style of combat.
*Must have Taijutsu as a specialty, preferably main.
Kekkei Genkai: The Byakugan is a Dōjutsu Kekkei Genkai, a genetic trait, that is shared amongst the members of the Hyūga Clan. Those that inherit the blood of this clan have almost featureless white eyes. It has two different settings, dormant and activated, both of which take a slightly different appearance from the other form. The normal eye for a Hyuuga clan member differs from a normal human eye. The iris and pupil are barely discernable with both appearing a milky white in color. The pupil itself is larger than a typical humans and it is outlined by a black region. The sclera remains normal except the larger size of the pupil reduces ones ability to view it. Once the eye is fully activated, the hidden iris becomes more apparent. Also when providing blood and chakra for the eyes' bloodline vision, veins will bulge lateral to each eye.
The first ability of the Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra. The second ability is having the ability to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from person to person. This is often determined by both rank and skill. At the genin level it can reach up to 100 meters. At Chunin this increases drastically reaching out to 400 meters. At jounin this goes up even more to 800 meters. A Kage level Hyuuga is capable of seeing up to 2km in all directions. However, the third and one of the greatest uses of the Byakugan is the ability to see chakra, as well as the chakra circulation system inside another's body. It is from this particular ability that they are able to employ their ultimate attack style: Gentle Fist. (see Clan Traits above).
Special Characteristic:
Eye Metamorphosis Failure
After performing his Hyuuga eye transplant, Kakougan is unable to perform eye metamorphosis jutsu that his clan would normally be able to perform. If he were to do one of these jutsu, Kakougan's eyes would mutate uncontrollably and be rendered useless.
Last edited by Camisado on Sat 08 Jan 2011, 4:12 am; edited 3 times in total |
| | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Tue 04 Jan 2011, 2:31 am | |
| Adam said that he would properly like to review this James. So, has he done so yet?
After confirmation I will approve and add to your character application. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Tue 04 Jan 2011, 3:38 am | |
| I didn't hear him say he was going to do that sooooo, I don't think so? |
| | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Tue 04 Jan 2011, 9:41 am | |
| This is a quote from your transplant topic by Adam;
- Quote :
- Secondary post; John said he gave you permission for the way you did this, but I'd still like to review it.
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| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Tue 04 Jan 2011, 12:56 pm | |
| Ah, didn't see that.
EDIT:
- Adam wrote:
Restrictions need to be inserted because you won't be able to just attain all the abilities of the Hyuuga Clan. Well, all I have is the dojutsu which is, well, what would come with the eyes. Even if I had taijutsu the gentle fist wouldn't be something to learn over night or ever learn because it's clan exclusive training. Especially the gentle fist jutsu. |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Tue 04 Jan 2011, 1:44 pm | |
| The Taijutsu style is not ALL the abilities of the Hyuuga Clan. The Byakugan itself has multiple abilities such the ability to see the chakra system, 360 vision and the ability to see through things. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Tue 04 Jan 2011, 2:04 pm | |
| I didn't say it was, I'm just saying that I don't have ALL of the abilities of the clan. The 360 vision and what not are all the dojutsu at work, it's part of the eye and not something that is really taught and learned. Which is why it is the only part of the KKG I have, no ability to strike chakra points, just able to see them. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Wed 05 Jan 2011, 10:41 pm | |
| Added a haltering SC since it made since to point out a conflict between the Kaiku KKG. Still waiting for approval. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Fri 07 Jan 2011, 2:38 pm | |
| bump |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Fri 07 Jan 2011, 3:29 pm | |
| I need to talk to you about it, since I have problems regarding how you did it. As in, in my opinion. The procedure should have been performed by another shinobi which makes it risky because you have to have somebody else, you should still be wearing bandages, right after eye surgery you wouldn't be able to see again. So on and so forth. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Fri 07 Jan 2011, 6:58 pm | |
| All righty, how about this. I'll edit the ending so that I still have bandages on and am pretty much blind and then I will travel to Bird (since thats wher I'm going after this is approved) still in that condition. That should reflect the time it takes to heal since traveling over a desert isn't a one night ordeal.
As for the other shinobi thing, the clone method was some what of a desperation measure but it still works all the same. The clone has the skills of my character and can therefore perform the procedure since hes an A+ rank medic. I did this because A) Well, who better to trust than yourself and B) There are no other high ranked medics in Suna, only genin. Also, John gave me an okay for it so it should be okay.
So is this fine? |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Sat 08 Jan 2011, 4:04 am | |
| I do realize your problem regarding the clone and I was aware of what a Shadow Clone does, thanks for enlightening me anyway. o.o The point is, with doing it yourself your going to have it as a success rate no matter what because there is absolutely no way would get betrayed by yourself, and as I said it's best with a bit of risk. But I'll allow this.
However I have a request your not going to like after conferring with multiple moderators. We believe your surgery/transplant should be 1k words. You didn't even mention it because obviously you went under so we suggest you roleplay as your clone performed the surgery too. The post has to be largely based on the surgery itself and not what you had for lunch or how sandy it is outside.
Lastly, another request your not going to like. The moderators I conferred with wanted to push for consistent excessive training with counts going up. Suggested Count: First Post: 2k Second Post: 4k Third Post: 6k Fourth Post: 8k Fifth Post: 10k
I however think this is a little far-fetched to say the least. I suggest over a long period of time in roleplay, you have five posts of 800+ words. The one should be recovering from the surgery and training to properly open your eyes and regain proper vision, the next two should be training to activate it. The fourth should be activating it and adapting to it's abilities, and the fifth one should be a final adaption. Even still with this training your eyes would be weak to a point, you also stole eyes from a Genin; so that is where your abilities would be at, you couldn't see as far as a Hyuuga Chuunin for example. Also, exhaustion. You aren't a descendant of the Hyuuga clan and you will be quickly exhausted using the Doujutsu because you haven't had it for long at all. It's brand new so you wouldn't be able to fight for long, like Kakashi but even shorter. Before you use Ao as an example, just noting that his had the Byakugan a lot longer than Kakashi's had the Sharingan.
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| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Byakugan Transplant Sat 08 Jan 2011, 4:11 am | |
| All right, so a 1k transplant topic and then 5 800+ word posts afterwards? Fair enough. However, I disagree with the exhaustion thing. Since Kakashi only got exhausted when using mangekyo, which makes sense, and not from just using his sharingan. He lasted pretty long during the bell test (Shippuuden) . I'm going to cross out all of the other lengths besides genin to emphasis that I only have sight to a genin length.
Edit: I would also like to reserve the ability to train the Byakuugan to higher levels. Perhaps an X amount of word topic per month or something to that effect? |
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