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| Subject: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 8:38 am | |
| Basic Information: Name: Jax Fenik Secondary Title: "The Pheonix" Age: 19 Gender: Male Physical Appearance: Jax is 6 foot tall (6’1’’ with shoes) fellow, who sports an athletic/lean build and is thus about 170lbs give or take his last meals worth in weight. His skin tone is darker, reflecting his native heritage and his clothes as well as the tattoo of exile reflect the tribal overtone in which his original background was forged. Even his arrangement of ceremonial jewelry, ranging from finger rings to earrings, to the family crest that he wears around his neck, are remnants of the culture he was removed from. However, he did stray from his culture in the sense of his footwear, as his pride in his speed brought him to by footwear that were a bit more sturdy. Seeing as though he is often always in tropical regions, he wears baggy loose fitting pants that cuff at his foot for easy breath-ability, but little else, and isn’t very commonly seen wearing a shirt, which is something of a coincidence simply because of his past line of work in the sun.
It just so happens that the native clan members in Marsh Country also adapted their clothing for the warm humid weather. Topped off with a bush of brown hair and calming green eyes, he appears as if the perfect potential shinobi. While is looks exactly like the picture and explaining the picture itself seems a bit redundant it's easier just to type another paragraph or so and allow the staff to be content with the required typing. He is a lengthy guy; with long wing span as well as long legs. He isn't necessarily thin, but he would be lanky if only for the fact that his body is quite muscular and it would be a mistake to just call him skinny. While he tans seasonally due to exposure to the sun his skin is a pretty constant and obvious shade of brown, something that tends to stick out when you are the minority in the shinobi world.
Personality: Jax has two different poles to his personality. On one hand he is usually an energetic, bright, and almost playful spirit. His positive attitude makes him appear cheerful, and naive in an infectious sort of innocent way that is meant to bring a smile to those around him. His outward appearance is not at all shy, and he is very quick to be flirty and friendly to almost anyone, especially if they are of the same positive temperament or physically attractive. His attitude if also very endearing and brings him to never give up or to keep trying, even if it is a situation that is seemingly impossible. His stubborn attitude brings him to dream big and he sets his goals very high... however...
There is also a very serious side to the otherwise happy-go-luck appearance. He is very analytical, thinking even when he doesn't mean to be. He takes note of small details that he think may be of interest or that he recognizes from different scenarios. He can become visible depressed, as displayed by his physical features. This depression is usually a result of disappointment in people or scenarios. Though he will never admit to such a thing as being upset. He is a deep thinker, and when not in public or in a place where he is by himself, he is constantly organizing thought in his mind; trying to make sense of what he hasn't yet discovered.
His two separate thought patterns also reflects on the field of battle. Though their are many constants. He preaches understanding and rejects the idea of killing. In battle, he will prevent killing and much rather neutralize his opponent. He also believes in forgiveness and redepmtion, and as such, believes there are some acts that are unforgivable. He is either very relaxed in battle, seemingly not taking it seriously as he plays around and teases in a battle, sometimes tauntingly, while in serious situations he assumes a more silent and serious.
Clan: Fenik Clan -- Phoenix Release
Rank Information: Rank: Jounin [With Todd's Permission Pending Application Quality] Village Affiliation: Kumogakure
Special Information: Character Speciality: Main: Ninjutsu Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: Advanced: Phoenix [Fenton] Main: Fire [Katon] Sub: N/A
Background Information History:
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The Miracle Baby~ After the formation of the great nations and the establishment of the hidden villages, the Fenki clan left its original roots in the minor 'Marsh Country' to find it's niche among the great nations. Half of the clan became nomadic for a time, and traveled to the Great Nation Continent for hopes of finding a place to settle. Our hero, Jax, was born about this time to a loving mother and father. However, this being about the time of the war, there was nothing safe about travel. Where battles took place, shinobi attacked any and all, and many of the clan members were seperated and lost within the cross fire of opposing forces. Even where battle wasn't taking place, traps left in their wake would often catch the innocent.
A mine field of underground explosives left at the base of Lightning Countries Territory. While wondering through a field, it was quickly discovered that stepping on certain parts of the ground was potentially fatal... His mother and father both fell victim to the traps and he too would have died at only a few months old if hadn't his mother used the last of her chakra to heal him. It was a miracle that as the clan passed along the area an continued toward Fire Country, the child would be left along in a field of land mines for the next 8hours. It was only by chance that he survived.
That night, a ground patrol checking the parameter heard the crying of the young Jax. The shinobi approached slowly only to find that this child was the one making the noise. They even went as far as to avoid the child completely in order to check the surrounding to make sure it wasn't a trap within a trap. They navitaged the mines saftly and retrieves Jax, taking him up toward Kumogakure in which he was presented as an orphan of war, though his story was not yet known. It was curious what to do with orphans of those slain and normally they would be accomidated for by the village itself, however Jax was far too young. As a result they had to put the child in a hospital and leave him up for adoption. It was astonishing that he had no wounds at all and he was reguarded as the miracle child. Little did they know it was his mothers protection that had healed him so completely.
A few days later, he was adopted by an older couple that were themselves refugees from rice country. Their good standing with the Lighting Country came from their profitable business actually selling rice, and thus coming in often with a business visa. Though their farms had been mostly ruined, they still thought it best to take the child in. They stayed at the rice hut shop that they owned in town as a make shift house until the war and its aftermath cooled down. When they left to return to what was left of their home, they took the young Jax with them.
Childhood on the Farm~ He grew up on the farm and for an old couple on a rice farm they actually made a large amount of money; mainly because the father used ninjutsu to do the majority of the work; as if chakra was a machine for growing and picking rice. Jax was one of the many farm hands on the farm and worked for his 'father'. At night his father would tell him stories about his old days as one of the first shinobi; an apprentice of the followers of the Sage of Six Paths themselves. All of the old stories, real or true, inspired a great imagination in the young boy. He was always inacting his own adventures as he worked daily in his head and dreamed himself to be a shinobi. Upon one of the trips to Kumogakure to drop off another shipment, he took young Jax along with him. This was his second time in kumogakure, but the first he would remember.
When the seven year old Jax discovered that not only was this a shinobi village, but also that they trained people to become shinobi themselves, he became childishly obsessed with the romantic ideal of becoming a shinobi. He pleaded to allow him to join the academy, however they explained that only residence of Lighting Country could do such a thing, and that it took a certain talent to become a shinobi. This wouldn't satisfy him, and throwing a fit he threaten to run away, though they were just childish threats. He was scolded and told to forget the idea, and they returned to the rice fields where the subject came up over and over again; his father was just as stubborn with the no's.
However his wife, and Jax's serogate mother, was to remind him that he too was once like that; young and naive and wanting to chase a dream. Seeing as though he was the one to put the thoughts in his head with the stories, it was his fault for that in the first place! She told him that they were old and they took Jax in with the intentions of giving him a life. If they were to do anything with their life it would be giving him a shot at his own dreams. The father relented with the thoughts of his youth and at the age of eight, he began to train Jax with a single motivations; if he showed talent as a shinobi, then they would allow him to enroll at the age of ten.
Thus, they spent the next two years training, and while this was low level shinobi training, it was hard for any normal person; after all throwing a shuriken accuratly as an 8 year old is hard, and doing it consistantly is even harder. He showed him the basic techniques and at first, it would seem as though didn't have much talent on the surface. His father was alittle disappointed, but persisted with the training as young Jax never quit.
And so as he became nine, his father noticed his affinity for Katon, the fire element. He did this with element sensative rice that he grew specifically for the event, however there was some odd quality to it as well that he hadn't seen before. As a result, he attempted to teach him the basics of elemental techniques, however he himself wasn't a fire user, and had to recruit a long friend from the Fire Temple, who apparently owned him a favor.
The man from the fire temple of Fire Country trained him along side his father. He did infact pick up fire release rather quickly by normal standards and where he was otherwise average he made fire release something of a toy, playing with it in his free time. It was impressive to see his progress, and for so young as well, he was already Genin worthy and as his Fire Country friend left he trained him more vigourously then ever to get his form down correctly, a process in which Jax didn't like, but was happy to accept.
Finally, a month before his 10th birthday, his father presented to him that he was ready, and surprised him with the news that they were all packing up and moving to Kumogakure, where they would run his shop, the farm hands would run the farm and Jax would be able to go to the shinobi Academy. Jax rejoiced! It wasn't too long until they were on the Rice wagon and headed to Lightning Country.
A new kind of Fire~ His Father forbid him from using the fire techniques he had used in the academy simply for the simplicity of it all. If he was new, and new to the village the use of fire release techniques would give away that he was in fact trained by an outside source from the village. To avoid the questioning and keep things simple this was the requirement. Of course Jax agreed... however. He went to the Acadmedy and was pretty advanced for his age, he was even put in the accelorated path and was with kids much older then himself, at only ten he was surrounded by individuals that would soon be graduating themselves.
Six months passed until... a disaster! The 8tailed released itself from its host and was raging in the heart of the hidden village. The academy was caught in the attack and as a result the building collapse over him and many others. He had to use fire release to burst his way form the wreckage and while it was under the cover of the building itself, he was badly burned by his own attack, and the flames caught fire to the surrounding wreckage, quickly bringing attention to himself as well, but the oddest thing happened. He burned an odd blue color and the burns themselves weren't getting worse but... getting better. At this time, many had attented to the first and now attempted to rescue jax who appeared to be ablaze. When he was dosed, he was taken to the hospital for treatment. He was admitted with the many others that were caught in the attack and thus kept over night, thought there was nothing wrong with him
He stayed over night, unable to go home and worried about his mother and father he was up pretty late. He was soon visited by a strange individual who appeared to be a doctor. He commented on how it was interesting on how they admitted a person for burns when he was obviously fine. When he was question, Jax simply responded with ignorance, which was expected when in truth Jax wasn't sure. He dragged out the conversation until Jax was defensive before explaining everything; he had seen him use the fire element technique and what had happened to him after was a survival instinct. He had survived with what the man called a "new kind of fire" and it was something he would approach him about later. The man disappeared without a trace and the next day he was released to his fathter and mother, as it was found that he did infact have nothing wrong with him.
It was a mystery, however he kept it to himself as he continued to go to the Academy. Two years later, he was finally graduated. 12 years old as a Genin in Kumogakure. Almost the same week as he was advanced he was assigned to a platoon and began running missions; mostly small scale domestic needs and manual labor. This wasn't necessarily what he wanted in his grand ideal of a shinobi and knew that if he wanted more responsiblity he would have to prove his power by eventually becoming a chunnin. Two long years passed and he would be 14 and still a genin, looking to become a chunnin. At this point he was old enough to do more complex mission and thus was sent on many patrols to set up defenses as well as check the boarders.
It was on one of these adventures that him and his four team members were ambushed at one of their camps by an unknown source and himself knocked out and abuducted. When he came to, he wasn't restrained, and in fact, in a rather festive place. He wandered about until someone greeted him; as though a friend and continued to introduce him to people; even knowing his name and where he was from. It was odd and it wasn't soon until he was demanding answers and ready to fight for his life from this odd situation, however he was calmed and insisted that he would explain.
It was explained that there are opperatives in every nation of the great nations continent belonging to an old fraternaty. These opperatives were all sleeper cells in wait for signs of other members of their fraternaty; members of their old clan born with the ability to use the 'other flame' known as the flame of the phoenix. They had been following him and gathering information about him for quite some time now and could confirm many things about him, including his capacity to use the clans hidden and presumed lost element.
Order of the Phoenix~ Reaonsably so, Jax was still taken back by the situation. He wanted to leave and was granted his wish to return to Kumogakure as soon as possible. They gave him a scroll, saying that he would be curious about this later and when he was to use the information in the scroll to find them once again to learn the secrets of the phoenix. Before he knew it, he was knocked out again and woke up at the gate of Kumogakure. Even sooner he was found and transported not to the hospital, but to an interigation room...
After all, its not every day that someone disappears; assumed to be kid napped and then returned. They were curious if he was somehow comprimised or brainwashed; powerful mind based weapons could set triggers in the mind and for a past foreigner it was important to have a full mental analysis before he was released for duty. After a grueling 6 hour session it was confirmed that there was no remnant of chakra nor evidence of tampering with his memories or mental state, and he was discharged.
He was curiously shaken by the ordeal and was something paranoid as if he was being watched. He began trying to simulate what he accomplished and test if he could on his own conjure something other then just his own fire release; this 'other fire' he kept hearing about from these others. At the same time he questioned his parents about his past which he himself couldn't remember. He was asked questions that would have hinted to some special abilities or even something that would have led to it, though the only thing he discovered was a bit different; the fact that he was adopted. This lead to a very interesting story about how and where his real parents might be, but even they could only supply information about how he was found, as his origins were a mystery lost in the fog of war.
Faced with unquenched curiosity, the 15 year old genin opened the scroll he was giving, only to be sucked into it as though it were a reverse summon scroll. He poofed into existance in a large house, and was confronted by those saying they were expecting him. Here he follows them to a room with a few individuals drinking and enjoying themselves, he was told that the five individuals simply lounging about could answer his questions and he was quick to ask them. They were surprised that he was there and laughed in responce, only asking him to calm down so that he could put his words together better. He attempted once more and was greeted with information and advice.
They were in a secret location; a mansion that was in some place that was always night time so that not even the members knew where they were. The scroll was the only way in and out of the mansion itself. It was the House of the Faternity of the Phoenix and they were the cummulative remnant of the old clan of the Fenik, his real last name. He was told the history of the clan, more or less accuratly by the men collectivley and when he purposed the idea of the 'other flame' he was instead given a demonstration. It was the same blue flame from five years ago that he had been engulfed it. They explained it as the life giving flame of the phoenix; a fire that could heal instead of burn, and that if he stuck around for long enough, he could learn its secrets...
Six months later, and repeated training sessions in the fraternaties massion, he was using and manipulating both forms of fire; destructive and creative, though was prompted that for as long as he was a member of the fraternaty he was to keep the fire a secret. It was then that he denied the fraternaty and was banned form returning. He continued to use and train on his own, even becoming a Chunnin when his new abilities were discovered. After awhile he became known as 'the phoenix' and many members of the fraternaty would attempted to kill him to keep their abilities a secret. To this day, he was promoted to the level of Jounin and has to deal with the the secrets stubborn organization that he was once involved in as well as the duties of being a powerful shinobi.
Role-Play Sample:
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It seemed as though this little street brawl wasn't going to yield anything in the way of production in his view. Like a scavenger; a vulture, he would watch and wait to clean up whatever was left to take with him, however it was a bit obvious that the majority of people fighting were enraged civilians simply exerting their own frustrations out on each other. It was interesting to see how much negative emotions came along with the idea of the corrupting World Noble, who himself was above the Justice that the marines so wildly promoted. He had almost decided to leave and be on his way to begin his own personal journey, when the glint of something caught his eye. Not because it was particularly interesting, but rather because it seemed to come his way.
A person, no... a cyborg had noticed him and shouted at him. He couldn't necessarily hear him only because the brawl itself muffled all sound into a number of yells, both in rage and in anguish. Hew knew the man was a cyborg when he noticed the many weapons, starting with the bazooka in his arm, that he had wielded straight from his body. It hadn't even crossed his mind that this could be the result of a devil fruit ability, as his first hypothesis was most likely the most correct. But why did he point Jax out of a crowd of people fighting? He leaned forward to respond with a tentative yell back to see what he had wanted, however before he could say anything substantial, the marines scurried onto the scene.
What a quick response from them, considering the marine base wasn't exactly close. No doubt they too were in a tizzy about the World Noble; some of them probably pumped up to protect them, and others wanting to avoid the summoning of an Admiral and many other marines to the island in some broad scale event just because one of the World Nobles happens to over react. It would quickly have an impact on those bellow the hill, and if the street fight wasn't already dying down it would most likely result in the death of many basically innocent peoples. Even the person that had called him out turned his attention toward the mass of white coats charging down the hill. It was only then, with the World Noble scoffing in his laughter that he had a great idea... or at least what he considered to be a great idea.
Here, the world noble, was in fact one of the least powerful things in this area; he was practically a big teasing target of a man. And laying just a finger on him was enough to provoke and distract the attention of the marines forces and rumor has it, an Admiral as well? Certainly being the cause of such an inconvenience for the marines would be enough to catch their attention; or at least have his name known, and the world noble would want that he be found and arrested. Pirates only take other pirates seriously if they have a bounty on their head, so he would be killing multiple birds with one stone. It was really a curious question as to what would happen if he had... killed a World Noble? But no, that wouldn't accomplish anything here. Jax decided to provoke the situation, and as the marines made contact with the brawl, breaking it up he casually brought himself form the porch, leaving his things on the wooden rail, and walked toward the scuffle.
"The calvary I assume you called to needlessly punish these good people? Well then...that is war against the king's people, and that means you are an enemy of mine."
He could hear; words spoken from the man that had pointed him out earlier. He was close enough to the action that he too had caught some attention, but honestly looked none-threatening as he walked directly toward the World Nobles; especially with this individual having gunned down many marines and also stabbed a marine right in front of him. The Noble look to him as he drew closer. Little did anyone but a few baffled marines knew, he had actually taken a few bullet shot that had hit his Logia clay body and now rested within the mass of clay that made up his form. The Noble was naive to his appearance, looking at him with an uppity smirk, "Who do you think you are getting this close to me? Do you know who I am? Keep you distance trash and if you want to live you will bow down to me, a Celestial Dragon no doubt!"
A few marines stopped fighting to look upon the scene. They were curious as to what would happen next, then all of a sudden... he would ball his fist, wind up, and deliver a driven punch straight to the gut of the World Noble with enough force to lift him into the air about above him. The Marines faces looked on in horror as they couldn't believe him to be so bold. They scrambled to catch the falling 'noble' as gravity eventually brought him back down to earth while many others looked to arm themselves to defend the Noble from further attack, he spoke to anyone with in ear shot.
"THE NAME IS JAX FENIK! I DON'T CARE WHO YOU ARE SO SHUT UP ALREADY!"
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 10:07 am | |
| Skill Information: Basic Techniques
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Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu - Summoning Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. There are many ways in which the ninja can sign a contract with a summon but it is usually done with the ninja signing a blood contract with the animal species. This allows the user to summon different size and skilled animals to fight along side them, or on their behalf.
Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
Phoenix Release Techniques
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Name: Soul of the Fire Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Phoenix [Fenton] Description: This is a basic Phoenix Release Technique in which the user infuses a portion of their chakra into a physical object to temporarily bring it to life. Like the shadow clone jutsu, the portion of chakra given to the object is temporarily subtracted from the users over all capacity (So giving a statue 10% leaves the user with 90% over all.)
Also, like the shadow clone jutsu, any remaining chakra chakra used to bring the object to life is returned to the user when the user cancels the technique. The object granted life never 'dies', however can be neutralized and made useless. Unlike the shadow clone technique, one doesn't retain the memories of the object brought to life.
Name: Life-Giving Warmth Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Pheonix [Fenton] Description: The basic Phoenix release technique in which the user uses the healing flame to heal themselves of another. The fire itself seems to burn away wounds to return the body to normalcy; thus healing at the same rate that someone would otherwise be burned and is often a faster and easier alternative to medical ninjutsu.
Name: Radiation Purification Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Pheonix [Fenton] Description: The user generates a heat from the flame of phoenix release. This heat can penetrate the skin into the body to not only heal internal injuries but also 'boil away' harmful poisons and bacteria in the same way that boiling water sterilizes it.
Name: Birth by Flames Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Phoenix [Fenton] Description: This is a technique in which the user covers themselves in an aura of the Phoenix Release Flame. While doing so, they are incapable of taijutsu of physical fighting, as they cannot do damage with the phoenix flames. However, they can sustain none physical wounds and heal within a posts time; this doesn't make them immortal however, and serious blow to a vital organ or the head may still be fatal. Can last for up to 4 posts, however has a cool down equal to the amount of posts used.
Name: Fire Inspiration Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fenton [Phoenix] Description: This is a technique in which the user can adapt any Fire Release Technique to Phoenix release in which the effect will be equally healing where it would otherwise be destructive.
Fire Release Techniques
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Name: Thermal Optic Sense Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: A technique in which the user can sense the objects around them via the radiation of heat. In which case, the use can tell the location of heat based on its deviation from the surrounding temperature and how close it is to the user.
Name: Heat Seaking Kunai Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: A technique in which the user imbues his chakra to seek out sources of heat once tossed. It will curve toward sources of heat and thus is best used in cooler situation where a persons body heat will dramatically stand out. It cannot however curve a complete 360 at any time and thus damage to the user form their own toss is minimul. B-ranked but only requires a C-ranked equivalent of chakra.
Name: Flash Shot Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: A simple technique in which the heat from a fire is harness into light energy instead. The user creates a increadibly bright flame in their palm facing away from them in order to prevent looking at it. Those who look into the bright light will be temporarily blinded. More effective at closer ranges.
Name: Raining Embers Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: The user creates a multitude of small embers and either releases them from his hands or his mouth. They can then control these individual embers in the air to land upon objects and settle. Upon releasing the technique, each ember will burst into a small flame; by covering an object in embers, they can ignite them into flame in at an instant.
Name: Great Rising Fire Bird Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: A techinque based upon "Great Dragon Fire Technique". In this variant, a fireball is once again shot from the mouth of the user and quickly takes the shape of a bird, however, this bird of fire seemingly has it's own consciousness and is able to change direction and even avoid oncoming attacks in it's attempt to hit a targeted opponent. A direct hit is fatal as like the "Great Dragon Fire Technique", they are solid fire is powerful fireballs can punch through thick concrete.
Name: Armor of Volcan Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: A technique in which the body is enveloped in fire element chakra; this dramatically heats the surface of the body to the point that simply touching a combustable surface and light it ablaze. The heat is controlled to radiate outward; away from the user only, thus not burning the self. Those attacking at close promixaty will be severly burned upon making contact with an attack. A technique that can last up to 4 posts, however has a cool down equal to the amount of time used.
Name: Katon Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Fire Shadow Clone Technique Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: This is a technique in which the user creates a Kage Bushin form the fire release chakra. One can only create one of these at a time because of the focus needed to solidify none-solid matter. Exactly the same as a normal Kage Bushin with the single exception that when destroyed, the Bushin burst into a firey inferno that extends about 5meters in radius.
Name: Supernova Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: This is a Fire release technique in which fire element charka is charged at the tips of the middle and index fingers and released like a gun. The technique can be used right away, or charged to increasing destructive potential. With ever turn that passes while charging it increases a single rank however because this takes at least one hand to charge the chakra to a single point, one cannot use other techniques in this charging period.
C- A fire ball with the strength equal to the Fire ball technique. B- A concentrated fire ball, that not only hits objects but barrels through them like a canon ball of fire. A- A super concentrated fire ball that has been compressed to the size of a golf ball; When shot it explodes on contact; errupting into an explosion with a 30meter radius. S- A flame so compact it appears only to be a small glimmering light; not even hot to the touch. It can be shot with increadible speed and expands into a catestrophic inferno that can reduce a 50meter radius to ash.
Kicking Taijutsu
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Name: Spartan Kick Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: A simple technique in which the user stands and asserts their dominant leg into a collapsed position before extending it with force to deliver the soul of their shoe to the opponents chest or adbnomine
Name: Avian Gait Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: The primary stance of the user. They stand with both hands to their side, one dominant to be slightly infront of the other while one leg is hoisted at almost a 90 degree angle, from the ground as one stands upon the other leg; slightly bent. This allows one to deliver kicks quickly from either extending their knee or swinging their entire leg. The user can also move short distances or jump with their single planted leg.
Name: Switch-Sidle Kick Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: A fast horizontal kick in which the user plants their left foot and swings across their body with their dominant foot to deliver the foot and shin to the opponent. The user can abandon the attack mid-swing by pushing back with their planted foot and thus retreating a few meters.
Name: Mountain Gust Kick Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: A technique used to counter incoming attacks from weapons; the user enables a swift well timed kick to the blunt side of an object such as a sword to effectivly parry the object. They follow through to land on the same kicking foot and then completely the turn by delivering the opposite heel to the defenseless side of the opponent.
Name: Guillotine Kick Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: A technique where one jumps toward an opponent into the air while lifting a foot and extending it into the air. They then snap their foot down to hit the target with the heel of their foot; crashing them into the ground bellow.
Name: Spring Kick Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: A technique in which the user hurdles themselves quickly at an opponenet with their foot extended to deliver a lancing blow with the foot; upon hitting the opponent, they collapse their foot and push off, sending the opponent flying as if launched from a spring.
Name: Screw bit kick Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: An advanced kicking technique in which the user delivers both feet into the opponent at the same time; usually prompted by a jump or lunge at the opponent. As they strike the opponent they turn their torso to spin themselves once; the energy translating down to their legs and through the opponent, sending them into a spiral as they are repelled by the kick.
Name: Pin drop combo Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: A combination of powerful kicks in which the user jumps into the air over the opponent and attempts to contact with many stabbing downward kicks; the force of a kick being blocked allows one to remain bound in the air by pushing off of the blocking devices; otherwise one will be landed with up for four punishing kicks to the head and torso.
Name: Catapult Kick Rank: B Type: Taijutsu Element: N/A Description: The user steps forward while leaning backward into a back hand spring. The foot they are stepping with becomes the the plant foot as the dominant foot kicks much like a 'bicycle kick' only with ones hands planted into the ground. This is good for kicking individuals directly behind the user, or launching people like a catapult with the kick.
Name: Falcon Kick Rank: A Type: Taijutsu Element: Fire [Katon] Description: A kick using the fire release in which the user will propell themselves like a rocket with fire in a quick burst while extending their foot to deliver a deadly lancing kick to the opponent catching the opponent not only with the powerful bone shattering lance, but also engulfing them in the driving flame.
Name: Hyper Friction Rank: A Type: Taijutsu Element: Fire [Katon] Description: A technique in which a combination of muscle tensing and fire release chakra hardens a part of the body temporarily as well as dramatically increases the friction of solid objects when they interact. As a result a kick delivered while Hyper Friction is active will burst into a firey explosion in which the user is exempt from damage. Taking a direct kick is most likely fatal. Lasts 3 posts before reverting to a 3 post cool down phase.
Armor:
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Name: Fairywood Bracer Quantity: A pair; one for each foot Rank: A Appearance: They are as seen worn by the character above. They consist of protection for the skins and the side of the shins, a jointed ankle for protection and stability and a form fitting soul. Polished black and refined to a more stylish quality, the bracers are top notch in leg protection technology.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: Made from what is known as 'Fairywood', it is believed that such trees have been inhabited by Wood Nymphs themselves and the spirit has allowed the trees to grow hearty and strong. In truth, they are simply the cores of hundred year old trees in which the wood itself has formed a new fourth spongy layer. The bracers aren't traditional armor, instead they absorb the force of impact to an extreme point. One could catch the swing of a blade with a kick and not be cut; allowing one to fight on even terms with a weapon wielding opponent of equal or lesser rank. S-ranked techniques or weapons, however, are strong enough to overcome even this threshold, and can break the bracers as well as damage their wearer, and trauma from more then three A-ranked techniques will break them. Origin: Giving to him by his surrogate father, the bracers were a parting gift to him once becoming a chunnin. Apparently they were the same that he used when he was once a shinobi.
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 8:03 pm | |
| Name: Stymphalian Secretary Bird Rank: A Appearance: A majestic mainly terrrestrial bird, the Stymphalian Secretery Bird has Alternating black and white feathers, a head crowned in black feathers and feirce fire red shadow around their black eyes and yellow beak. The bird itself stands on long skinny stork like legs that give it a definant height advantage when standing at its maximum 13 foot height. Even with it's size and land bird structure it is still very capable of flight, which is surprising to many others Contract Type: Blood Contract Species: Secretary Bird Speciality: Taijutsu Elemental Affinity: N/A Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A Personal Information: His interest in mythical birds due to his own personal ability modelling that of the phoenix. In his surrogate home in rice country a flock of these savanah birds roam the abandoned rice fields eating the free growing rice in the flooded savannah plains. However, rumor had it that a select few mimiced a mythical bird themselves, and this perked his interest. He thus spent some time at home tracking these birds until he found one that was exactly what he had heard. He challenged the bird in a race, in which the swift bird laughed and excepted, however little did he know he was dealing with a shinobi. When he won the race, he took the bird himself as his prize and in his pride he had to accept his defeat.
They slowly grew on each other, him and his personal summon, though he is well aware that the majority of their meeting is in a combat situation, and thus is usually pretty serious upon first being summoned though has a more relaxed and even slap stick relationship with his rival and summoner Jax.
Summons Jutsu:
Name: Stymphalian Kunai Type: Taijutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: The user infuses their feathers with chakra to harden them into steel like blades. They flap their wings and launch these feathers at a target with the same deadly quality as a kunai.
Name: Tailwind Sprint Type: Taijutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: A classic Trample effect technique in which the users runs while flapping their wings to generate a backward gust to propell themselves and increase their speed, then run through a number of opponents.
Name: Snake Slayer Type: Taijutsu Rank: C Element: N/A Description: An attack with the talons where the user jumps and flaps to hover while slashing vertically when their legs; keeping themselves out of range of close attack while using their long legs to attack at mid-range length.
Name: Stymphalian Armor Type: Taijutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: The user infuses their feathers with chakra as well as tensing the muscles to to ruffle the feathers; making them hard as steel. This not only makes a temporary armor, but also a powerful weapon, as the sharpened feathers make blades as well.
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 8:03 pm | |
| Complete! |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 8:54 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Name: Fire Inspiration
Rank: C-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fenton [Phoenix] Description: This is a technique in which the user can adapt any Fire Release Technique to Phoenix release in which the effect will be equally healing where it would otherwise be destructive.
Name: Flame Immersion Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fenton [Phoenix] Description: A Fenton technique in which the user will purposefully intercept an incoming fire technique used by an opponent. In doing so, they can absorb the fire with the pheonix flame and rejuvinate an amount of chakra equal to the rank of the incoming attack. These two jutsu have not been approved in your Clan Application. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 9:48 pm | |
| I am aware. Unless I am mistaken, clan jutsu can be customized further then just the clan application. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 9:59 pm | |
| Are you saying that these jutsu are exclusive to your character, then? |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 10:19 pm | |
| Yessir. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Tue 04 Jan 2011, 11:07 pm | |
| Okay then, I was just making sure, 'cuz it was a little confusing. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 1:14 am | |
| Haha, I understand! Sooo... does Everything check out otherwise? |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 2:24 am | |
| - Your personality and appearance need to be more detailed. We have a two paragraph minimum but I would suspect a jounin would be able to produce more.
- Not too sure about the fairy back story with nymphs etc with your armour. Perhaps you would be able to find a more suitable explanation. The actual wood itself is fine, just the fantasy side of things is a little far-fetched. Also, even though they are A-ranked I would like you to put in a number of accumulated "hits" in which the armour faces at an A-ranked level e.g c an withstand 'x' amount of hits instead of an A-rank impenetrable defense as you do not have weaponry as a spec.
- Also, your summon must have the same elemental affinity that you do so please edit. This is to make sure that people do not try and gain a 'cheap' extra element from making a summon, or specialty in that regard.
-- Other than that everything here looks good.
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 3:29 am | |
| -Adequate information applied
-Summon stripped of element, Limited to three A-ranked blows, though I dont necessarily mean that block techniques. You are correct that I dont have weaponry, but I do have taijutsu!
-And the thing about the nymph was just the mythic side story, not the reality of the woods origin.
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 3:44 am | |
| Caranore's Input which is granted;
- First off is the 'Birth by Flame' jutsu. the main thing I see wrong with this is that there is no post duration. For an A-Rank of chakra, you ges a cloack of chakra that heals you within a posts time, for an undefined amount of time. If you starts that at the beginning of a fight, anything excluding a killing blow is essentially disregarded. Please note duration
- The second problem I found is 'Flame Immersion'. While the idea of the jutsu is grand, by expending the same amount of chakra as a Katon jutsu that he is being targeted with, he can absorb said jutsu and replenish his chakra, both negating an attack and not wasting any chakra to do so.
- Heat Seeking Kunai should be B-Rank since he is imbuing chakra into a weapon, making the weapon B-Rank in classification due to the chakra conductive rules.
- Supernova's A-Rank/S-Rank radius should be limited. 100 meter diameter instantly combusting after 1 post charge period is a tiny bit unbelievable. Even Amaretsu didnt have that range, and if it did, well, its Amaretsu. Decrease the range to at the most 50m.
- Armor of Vulcan, unless extra chakra is expended to prevent the body from overheating and dehydrating at an exponential rate needs to be removed in my opinion. By the description, he is heating up his body to the point of combustion on any surface such as paper or wood. Instant combustion I might add. That technique also needs a post limit, otherwise he can again use it at the start of the battle and and negate any Taijutsu or Close Range Weaponry the entire battle, preventing also killing by use of Genjutsu since one would need to get close to him to kill him while in Genjutsu just from the examples shown in the manga.
Please fix these aspects. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 4:42 am | |
| -Birth By Flames was given a limit/cool down.
-Flame Immersion was removed
-Heat Seeker = B-rankedified
-I apologizing if it sounded wrong, the technique progresses with every turn that passes, meaning that it will reach A-ranked form on the 3rd post and S-ranked form on the 4th post. Waiting 3 posts without using ninjutsu is quite the disadvantage so an S-ranked technique.
-A limit/cool down was awarded to 'Armor of Vulcan', however I disagree that it would have any negative effects on the user. Plenty of elemental techniques alter the body in offensive and defensive ways without logistical penalty to the user. It was also downgraded to B-ranked so that the defensive qualities is trumped by A-ranked techniques by virtue of the ranking system. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 5:03 am | |
| - Quote :
- -I apologizing if it sounded wrong, the technique progresses with every turn that passes, meaning that it will reach A-ranked form on the 3rd post and S-ranked form on the 4th post. Waiting 3 posts without using ninjutsu is quite the disadvantage so an S-ranked technique.
Ahh I get it now, all good brutha.
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- -A limit/cool down was awarded to 'Armor of Vulcan', however I disagree that it would have any negative effects on the user. Plenty of elemental techniques alter the body in offensive and defensive ways without logistical penalty to the user. It was also downgraded to B-ranked so that the defensive qualities is trumped by A-ranked techniques by virtue of the ranking system.
For you to raise your own bodies temperature above the normal there would definitely be some consequence's from that for sure. When the body is above its natural temperature many things happen e.g incr sweating, dizziness, balance problems etc. But, perhaps there should be a limit to once per thread of the use to counter this? |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 5:57 am | |
| The Earth Spear technique allows the user to petrify themselves into stone seemingly at will to make themselves indestructible. As far as the science behind petrified, the physiological changes of being turned to stone is much more extreme, though the user isn't fossilized by it.
Hell, there is someone with a clan who has immunity to lightning and fire and skin as harder then most metals and that without any draw backs.
So heating the surface of the body without effecting ones self isn't unreasonable. I mean, how do people erupt fire from their lungs without burning.. everything? |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 6:05 am | |
| Goukayuu no jutsu and related Katon techniques do not create the fire in the lungs and then emit it. The chakra is molded in the lungs and then when exhaled is turned into fire. If you watch Sasuke carefully in the anime when he uses this technique, you will see the fire start near the entrance to his mouth, not coming from the back of it.
The main problem with this technique is as follows:
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- this dramatically heats the body to the point that simply touching a combustable surface and light it ablaze.
You are not, based on your description, heating up the surface of your skin, but your entire body. THAT makes this jutsu unstable for yourself, since by the entire body you include organs, muscles, bones, arteries, brain, everything.
Earth Spear technique does not affect the entire body, just the surface, which is hardened by the chakra. That essentially means that the arm or limb is covered in the earth chakra, but is not changed on a cellular level.
- Leaf Ninja wrote:
- Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 6:12 am | |
| Thank you Caranore,
Alright, I've reworded is as such to make up for my previous poor description;
Name: Armor of Volcan Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Katon [Fire] Description: A technique in which the body is enveloped in fire element chakra; this dramatically heats the surface of the body to the point that simply touching a combustable surface and light it ablaze. The heat is controlled to radiate outward; away from the user only, thus not burning the self. Those attacking at close promixaty will be severly burned upon making contact with an attack. A technique that can last up to 4 posts, however has a cool down equal to the amount of time used. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Wed 05 Jan 2011, 9:47 pm | |
| Alrighty, since thats all been taken care of...
Supernova requires charging... Vulcans been redone... Alrighty, that looks good to me.
Approved by me, but it is still going to require Todds approval for your rank. |
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| Subject: Re: Fenik, Jax [Kumo Jonin] Thu 06 Jan 2011, 2:52 am | |
| Approved. Welcome to Kumo the greatest nation of all! |
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