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Basic Information:

    Name: Ka Surogawa
    Secondary Title:
    Age: 12
    Gender: Male
    Physical Appearance:

    Ka Surogawa has the charastics of a crocodile. His shin tone on certain parts such as his hands, upperback, and face are palish green. His body is parshly scaledwhich provides an extra toughness to all jutsu. His teeth are also long and sharp and resemble that of a crocodile. His fingernails are 1in long and black as the night. Ka wears a long black cloak underneath he has a spandex like shirt with 3 claw marks across the body. His black sweatpants are slightly sagged and reaches jus above his ankles. Through the back of these pants Ka has a tail that is exactly 5ft long that he also tends to use as and offenseive and defensive weapon. This tail is spiky on the tip.

    Ka's hair is nothing more than a black mohawk that runs dawn to his spinalcord. His face is crocish with his extended out jawlines and the yellow palish eyes. Hie eyes hae a second pair of lids that comes down when need to protect them from blindness. Although a Croc hybrid Ka walks on two feet as if he were coomplete human. Also Ka is attemendating to others not because of his scary traits, it's because of his muscular body frame. Ka's weapon is weilded on back for it is heavy and a holder is made to carry this weapon for he created it himself.
    Personality:
    Ka does not do things by halves. He is a very committed individual; always finishing a task he starts. If he knows he cannot complete a task, he will not even begin or attempt it. This attitude also translates into him hard-working attitude when training or on a mission.

    As one might expect, Ka has little time for social events. He does have friends – close ones even – though they are admittedly few in number. Those who dislike him tend to stay well clear, his serious personality frightening them enough to keep them from voicing their dislike. His primary hate is boredom; he is always looking for something to do and cannot cope with an empty timetable. To this end, he is often rallying his close friends to go and train or explore.

    It would be naïve to say or think that Ka is always a serious individual. As long as he is with company that he is comfortable with, he’ll happily chat, joke around and enjoy himself. That is, if it doesn’t involve anything he would consider ‘childish’.

    Catch Phrase:
    -The one who walks the narrow road finds no Salvation
    -Too easy.....
    -hooh....
    -Who are you kidding I am perfection.
    -You cannot be of the same strength as me.


[center]Clan Information:
    Clan Name: Surogawa Clan
    Clan Location: Kirigakure
    Clan Traits: This clan is an animal hybrid clan that has crossed humanity with crocodiles. They are undisputed masters of the swampy marshes outside of Kirigakure, and deadly ninja in their own right. Being possessed of Crocodile traits, they do not appear as human. Though they walk on two legs, all members of this bloodline have thick and scaley skin, claws, and fangs. Their heads are large and extended, possesing a long and dangerous mouth of sharp fangs. Their backs are covered in thick and ridged scales that can resist great attacks, and extend down into their long tails. A surogawa's tail is as long as the clan member is tall, and powerful in it's own right. The clan is possessed of thick, honeycombed bones that can recieve incredible abuse before breaking, and their skulls are twice as thick as a humans. They have thick, knotty muscles, and thinner, but still tough, scales covering the whole of their bodies. The tail can be used for sweeping horizonal attacks, and is capable of dealing massive damage, however they are a little slow on land. Being naturaly at home in the water, this clan moves with an obvious lack of grace on land.

    A Surogawa recieves no innate bonus to strength, though it's toughness is unheard of. The thick scales of the clan allow them to endure great blows with little effect, just as if they were wearing thick armor. It takes a weapon or jutsu attack at least one rank higher than the Surogawa to do any damage at all to it's back side. Attacks of any other rank will have their effective damage reduced to just one quarter of their normal power. That's a 50% reduction in power to anything striking the thick scales on the Surogawa's back. This, combined with their powerful tail, makes getting behind a Surogawa and extremely bad idea, and places their vulnerable side in front of them. The thicker scales all around them also provides them with an all around damage bonus that helps give this clan it's notable toughness. Attacks from weapons, and ninjutsu that deal purely phycial damage, of lesser rank than the Surogawa has it's effectivness reduced by 1/4th. This bonus applies whether or not the Surogawa member is wearing armor or not.

    While on land a Surogawa is able to move in all respects as a normal human does, however will never be able to recieve a bonus to their speed. Their bodies are not made for sprinting, nor for spinning around quickly. Their impressive jaws are a threatening weapon if a Surogawa is able to get close enough to use it, but difficult to manage while fighting. To bite an opponent the Surogawa must first succeed in grappling attempt. If their opponent is unable to get away, the Surogawa can deliver an almost certainly fatal blow, and crush their victim in their impressively strong jaws. Damage dealt when biting is doubled, and will break any normal bones bitten down on. While they bite with an impressive amount of pressure, a Surogawa's mouth can be held closed with only a pair of fingers. The one way effectivness of their muscles gives them a very weak force of around five pounds to opening their dangerous jaws.

    While they are in water, the danger of this clan increases imensly. It's been said by many that the only way to defeat a Surogawa while it's in the water, is to get it out of the water. While their strength and defenses do not increase, their powerful tail becomes a strong propeller for motion. They can move through the water faster than most ninja can run. They recieve a 50% bonus to their speed, and can move in any direction. Their gaping maw becomes much more of a danger and they can assault with their mouth with great ease than on land. They are capable of holding their breath almost indefinatly, and can easily drown most any other opponent. They are known for their great silence when under water, and specialize in ambush tactics near shore lines. At any rank, a Surogawa may remain submerged for up to ten hours at a time, and even go so far as to sleep beneath the surface.

    While underwater a Surogawa's sense of smell is able to locate any source of blood for up to 50meters around them. They can identify what sort of blood it is based on it's taste, and in which direction it lies by it's smell. Their eyes are covered with a thin membrane underwater which keeps their vision perfectly clear. They can see through anything but complete darkness, and brackish water is no obsticle. The Surogawa clan has this swamp sight out to a range of 15 meters, or 45 feet, and can move with perfect vision and speed through even the dirtiest swamp water.

    Lungs The Surogawa clan lungs are in incedible shape for shinobi. Naturally the Surogawa can hold their breath for longer period of times.(AS: 3 Post) (genin: 5 post) (chunnin: 7 post) (jonin: 10 post) (S-Ranked: 12 post). These lungs also keeps the surogawa clan from tiring out as fast.

    D-Ranked= 3
    C-Ranked= 5
    B-Ranked= 7
    A-Ranked= 10
    S-Ranked= 12

    Natural Swimmers While they are in water, the danger of this clan increases imensly. It's been said by many that the only way to defeat a Surogawa while it's in the water, is to get it out of the water. While their strength and defenses do not increase, their powerful tail becomes a strong propeller for motion. They can move through the water faster than most ninja can run. They recieve a 50% bonus to their speed, and can move in any direction. Their gaping maw becomes much more of a danger and they can assault with their mouth with great ease than on land. They are capable of holding their breath almost indefinatly, and can easily drown most any other opponent. They are known for their great silence when under water, and specialize in ambush tactics near shore lines. At any rank, a Surogawa may remain submerged for up to ten hours at a time, and even go so far as to sleep beneath the surface.

    Scaly Skin The thick scales of the clan allow them to endure great blows with little effect, just as if they were wearing thick armor. It takes a weapon or jutsu attack at least one rank higher than the Surogawa to do any damage at all to it's back side. Attacks of any other rank will have their effective damage reduced to just one quarter of their normal power. That's a 50% reduction in power to anything striking the thick scales on the Surogawa's back.

    Sharp Teeth Much like their kind the Surogawa have extreemly sharp teeth. Those fierce teeth however, are not meant for chewing. They are meant for breaking up trees and rocks, or for crushing bones, even hooves and horns, so that they will fit down the Surogawa's throat. The Surogawa 62 teeth are all exactly 1 inch long and are most durable upon man. These teeth do however fall out with a good strike to the mouth. Over short periods of time they tend to grow back.(A few days or so)

    Jaws Their impressive jaws are a threatening weapon if a Surogawa is able to get close enough to use it, but difficult to manage while fighting. To bite an opponent the Surogawa must first succeed in grappling attempt. If their opponent is unable to get away, the Surogawa can deliver an almost certainly fatal blow, and crush their victim in their impressively strong jaws. Damage dealt when biting is doubled, and will break any normal bones bitten down on. While they bite with an impressive amount of pressure, a Surogawa's mouth can be held closed with only a pair of fingers. The one way effectivness of their muscles gives them a very weak force of around five pounds to opening their dangerous jaws.

    Tails Their powerful tail, makes getting behind a Surogawa and extremely bad idea, and places their vulnerable side in front of them. The thicker scales all around them also provides them with an all around damage bonus that helps give this clan it's notable toughness. Attacks from weapons, and ninjutsu that deal purely phycial damage, of lesser rank than the Surogawa has it's effectivness reduced by 1/4th. This bonus applies whether or not the Surogawa member is wearing armor or not.

    Eyes
    Their eyes are covered with a thin membrane underwater which keeps their vision perfectly clear. They can see through anything but complete darkness, and brackish water is no obsticle. The Surogawa clan has this swamp sight out to a range of 15 meters, or 45 feet, and can move with perfect vision and speed through even the dirtiest swamp water.

    Smell On average the Surogawa can smell a dead body because of its descret scent up to 20 meters away. However if a clean shinobi may even make it with 5meters without being detected by this nose. Their nose can also pick up and track scent if needed to hunt other shinobi. [/spoiler]

    Kekkei Genkai: N/A
    Secret Clan Jutsu:
    Name Fake Death Jutsu
    Type Eijutsu
    Rank C
    ElementN/A
    Description The Surogawa just as their counter parts have the ability to slow their heart rate down to one beat every thirty seconds or so. By doing this the Surgawa Cland can Fake their death thus helping them escape some fatal battle in which they didnt stand a chance winning.

    Name Swamp Secret
    Type Ninjutsu
    Rank C
    Element Suiton + Doton
    Description The Surogawa has the ability to create a swamp to better fit their natural habitat. Water already favors the Surogawa but when you add the earth element it is the perfect place for the Surogawa creating a swamp. This kill the enemy ability to see beneath water and temperarly blinds them from seeing when they open their eyes after having this water touch their face.

    Name Crocodile Bite
    Type Taijutsu
    Rank E-S
    Element None
    Description This is a technique known natural by all Surogawa. The force of their bite deals damage as if it were an attack one rank Higher. Furthermore, If this strike does hit, the jaws will remain and place and crush any normal bones beneath them. Prying the jaws open requires about 1,500 pounds of force, and is all but impossible to everyone except the most powerful. Only by killing the Surogawa can a victim be freed, though the crocodile can release thier grip whenever they wish.

    Name Tail Lash
    Type Taijutsu
    Rank E-S
    Element None
    Description This is an attack by the Surogawa made with their tail. Their tail is a very powerful weapon but can only attack the area behind them. If struck by this tail, the attack deals damage as if it were 1 rank higher than the rank the attack was used at. This attack can be used both on land, and under water. The thick scales of the tail keep it from being damage, even if it strikes spiked armor.

    Name Death Roll
    Type Taijutsu
    Rank E-S
    Element None
    Description This attack can only be used after the Surogawa has caught someone in their jaws, and only while in the water. By twirling their tail, the surogawa is able to send their body into a quick spin, tearing off any flesh caught in their mouths. This attack is impossible to defend against, and deals a large amount of damage. Any flesh in the surogawa's mouth will be removed from the body, be it a chunk of side, an arm, a leg, or a head. This attack deals damage as if it were two ranks higher, and anything damaging over S rank is certainly all but fatal.

    History:
    Clan History
    Before the villages formed, when the world was a more dangerous place, a small tribe of aggressive humans dwelled in the deeper regions of swamp. Their land was one of plants and water, full of fish, insects, and the most dangerous force known to those humans. The crocodile was the most imposing force known to the swamp, before the Surogawa clan, and it's efficint and deadly design inspired the tribe's priests. Using their dark magics, the first members of the surogawa clan summoned forth the great cheif of the crocodiles. The clan dropped before it offerings of hundreds of fish and a thousand rabbits, racoons, and birds. They gave it their praise and their worship, and pleaded for it's protection and help. The Surogawa clan keeps his history secret, and is only passed down through their generations by word or mouth.

    The great crocodile consumed the offered feast in one bite, then tore through half the present clan members with the another. It swallowed the great group of people whole, then returned to the swamp, laughing. The great bubbles of it's decending breath stirred up the waters of their swamp, and the clan though for a moment that all was lost. When they returned home to their thatch hut village, they lamented over their situation, but then the great beast struck again. The cheif crocodile was said to be two hundred feet long, and akin to a moving mountain of power and weight. It tore into the center of their small village and tore a great hole into the earth. The swamp waters flooded the village, killing another half of the clain. Their numbers were reduced to a mere handful when the beast turned on them. It spoke in a low and grinding voice, instructing them to tend to it's eggs, if they wanted to survive.

    The crocodile laid almost 200 eggs in the hole that it tore, each about a foot and a half long and covered in a slimy, leathery shell. For two full months the eggs remained dormant, and sat in the great mound the croc had burried them in. When they finaly did hatch, the clan found inside something very different than a clutch of large crocodiles. The people the beast had eatten had been changed, taking on the horrific shape of the crocodile, yet also remaining arguably human. The new creations were going to be the masters of their swamp, and had the favor of the great crocodile. They retained all the memories of their human days, however eventually the clan fell apart. Over the course of a few decades the fully human population of this clan died off, and only the hybrids remained.

    The clan was born a new, and from that day on became the masters of their own fates. Though they fought amongst them selves, no other force dared to challange them in their natural domain. The clan began to perfect their new shapes, and learned to use their new forms to great effect. They took over the swamps, and formed their own territory. The clan has little use for buildings, and lives exclusivly in the swamps near present day Kirigakure. Their city is unrecognisable by almost anyone, just a brackish swamp stretching to the ocean, full of grass, reeds and mounds of dirt. Crocodiles thrive in this area, and even most explorers dare not enter this dangerous territory, known as the Drowned Swamp.

    After Kirigakure was founded, the elders were quick to make peace with this clan, and activly seek out new recruits from it's line. They are known to be the best force for protecting the wet lands around Kiri from invasion. As ninjas the Surogawa are only grudgingly accepted within Kiri city limits, as their monsterous appearance often frieghtens children, and grown men a like. They look like predators made to kill, and their great claws and teeth do nothing to help. Only because of their legendary toughness and great loyalty to Kiri do they remain an accepted and hesitantly welcomed force for Kiri. The Surogawa themselves have reamained loyal to Kiri since it's inception, agreeing to protect the swamps so long as their domain is left alone. Their secret place is mostly built of underwater chambers and hollowed out meeting places. For hours on end a group of Surogawa can meet beneath the waves, and talk to eachother undetected.
    Clan Details: Open [Kiri Only]


Rank Information:

    Rank:Genin
    Village Affiliation:Kirigakure


Special Information:

    Character Speciality:
    Main: Weaponry (Kenjutsu/Archry)
    Sub: Ninjutsu
    Elemental Affinity:
    Main: Water
    Sub: Earth
    Special Characteristics: Ka is Physically fit among others in is clan. Through his many years of hard work and dedication he new one of the clan's weakness is that they didn't stay in shape. Ka put forth the effort 3x as hard as anyone else just to equally physical fit and the normal shinobi. Also Ka's stealth is unimaginable. He creeps and crawls into any place and is harldy ever noticed. Ka' has the stealt capabilities of ninja with many years os experience above him.


Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.

    Jutsu Template:

    Clan Jutsu:

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    Name Fake Death Jutsu
    Type Eijutsu
    Rank C
    ElementN/A
    Description The Surogawa just as their counter parts have the ability to slow their heart rate down to one beat every thirty seconds or so. By doing this the Surgawa Cland can Fake their death thus helping them escape some fatal battle in which they didnt stand a chance winning.

    Name Swamp Secret
    Type Ninjutsu
    Rank C
    Element Suiton + Doton
    Description The Surogawa has the ability to create a swamp to better fit their natural habitat. Water already favors the Surogawa but when you add the earth element it is the perfect place for the Surogawa creating a swamp. This kill the enemy ability to see beneath water and temperarly blinds them from seeing when they open their eyes after having this water touch their face.

    Name Crocodile Bite
    Type Taijutsu
    Rank E-S
    Element None
    Description This is a technique known natural by all Surogawa. The force of their bite deals damage as if it were an attack one rank Higher. Furthermore, If this strike does hit, the jaws will remain and place and crush any normal bones beneath them. Prying the jaws open requires about 1,500 pounds of force, and is all but impossible to everyone except the most powerful. Only by killing the Surogawa can a victim be freed, though the crocodile can release thier grip whenever they wish.

    Name Tail Lash
    Type Taijutsu
    Rank E-S
    Element None
    Description This is an attack by the Surogawa made with their tail. Their tail is a very powerful weapon but can only attack the area behind them. If struck by this tail, the attack deals damage as if it were 1 rank higher than the rank the attack was used at. This attack can be used both on land, and under water. The thick scales of the tail keep it from being damage, even if it strikes spiked armor.

    Name Death Roll
    Type Taijutsu
    Rank E-S
    Element None
    Description This attack can only be used after the Surogawa has caught someone in their jaws, and only while in the water. By twirling their tail, the surogawa is able to send their body into a quick spin, tearing off any flesh caught in their mouths. This attack is impossible to defend against, and deals a large amount of damage. Any flesh in the surogawa's mouth will be removed from the body, be it a chunk of side, an arm, a leg, or a head. This attack deals damage as if it were two ranks higher, and anything damaging over S rank is certainly all but fatal.

    Ninjutsu

    Basic :

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    Name:: Kawarimi no Jutsu
    Rank:: E
    Type:: Ninjutsu
    Element:: N/A
    Description:: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

    Name:: Bunshin no Jutsu
    Rank:: E
    Type:: Ninjutsu
    Element:: N/A
    Description:: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

    Name:: Nawanuke no Jutsu
    Rank: E
    Type:: Ninjutsu
    Element:: N/A
    Description:: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

    Name: Transformation Technique
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

    Name:: Kai Release
    Rank:: E-S
    Type:: Ninjutsu
    Element:: N/A
    Description:: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

    Name: 3 blade clones jutsu
    Rank:C
    Type:ninjutsu
    Element:N/A
    Description: This jutsu allow Ka to create 3 clones of his own blade,Croc. Each of these clones levitate in a circle around Ka body with the blade facing up vertically. Using up to 4 handseals that take about 1 second each. These blades can be used for one block only. Ka can parry attacks sent from his opponent.Though if they are hit physically the blades will not touch the opponent they will just get punched through like their not even their
    Elemental :
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    Name: Basic Water Control
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: Suiton
    Description: Ka immediately has limited control over liquids and moisture, such as manipulating small amounts of water or making something wet or dry. The most useful application of this weak jutsu is probably drying clothes and othe minor things.

    Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu
    Rank: D
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: Suiton
    Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target. This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it.

    Name: Mizu Shuugou no Jutsu
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: D
    Element: Water
    Description: This jutsu allows the user to gather water from the environment around him, like from the air, soil, etc. Even gathering this jutsu doesnt gather very much. (Maybe 5 liters or such.) However this jutsu is useless in dry areas.

    Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Jutsu
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Water
    Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

    Name: Water Clone Technique
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Suiton
    Description: The Water Clone Technique like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power.

    Name: Water Release: Water Blast
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Suiton
    Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases.

    Name: Starch Syrup Capture Field
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Suiton
    Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the shinobi will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance.
    Kenjutsu
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    Name: Crush
    Rank: D
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Description: By using sheer force, a kenjutsu fighter will bring their blade down after raising it above their head. Depending on the strength of the user and the weight of the weapon, damage that can occur from this move varies from a destructive swing to a little slash. This can be easily blocked by a kenjutsu fighter at C rank.

    Name: Stab
    Rank: D
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Description: By using sheer force, a kenjutsu fighter will puncture an opponent with their blade. By swinging their blade behind their back, the user will swipe or stab their blade into the target, causing severe damage to organs, but little damage to armor. This will not work if the weapon is dull.

    Name: Fearless Assault
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Rank: C
    Description:Ka attacks an enemy repeatedly with his sword, giving them almost no time to dodge or counter-attack (can be blocked though). This style requires concentration on the single target and leaves Ka open to attack.

    Name: Ka's Supprise
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Rank: C
    Description: This technique is a sudden attack so the oponent has little to no time to react. Ka will submerge, and without a ripple in the water, it will cruise towards its prey. He knows exactly when and where his opponent is in the water, and at that precise moment, Ka strikes. Ka's powerful tail drives him forwards and explodes out of the water like a missile. Ka spring forth from beneath water at extreem speed to deliver a devestating strike with his sword. There is little chance of escape.

    Name: Pummel
    Rank: C
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: A more powerful version or crush. By getting into an elevated position over a target, the user raises their blade into the sky and strikes it down unto the target. While the strength of the user and weight of the blade make the arced swing more powerful, a hit on the skull could be fatal. This can be easily blocked by another kenjutsu fighter at B rank.

    Name: Puncture
    Rank: C
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Element: N/A
    Description: A more powerful version of puncture.By taking a few running steps towards an opponent, the user will swing or stab their blade into the target more often then not causing lethal damage to organs. While this move can be very fatal, after its use the user will be stuck to the target, leaving them vulnerable after use.

    Name: Battojutsu
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Rank: C
    Element: Any (if chakra sensitive blade)
    Description: The user sheaths their sword, and takes a customary stance with their shoulder turned toward the opponent and the sword/sheath on the back side facing away from the opponent. This technique is an instant sword draw. The user waits in the stance and then draws their sword at extreme speed with a twist of the waist. This attack is done with extreme speed, and as such, has alot of power and is hard to block. This jutsu Can't be used to target specific points of the body considering the user doesn't ain they just strike.

    Name: Bladed Death Roll
    Rank:C
    Type:Kenjutsu
    Description: This jutsu is a justu created by Ka himself. When the opponent is within 9m range of Ka, he extends out his blade wrapping it around his opponent and himself(all but 1 arm) clamping the together as 1. When together Ka bites down on his opponent ensuring they don't get away. With his loose arm Ka jurks his sword like a winding pin and drops on the ground to futher ensure his oponent doesn't escape. Ka starts to roll his body the opposite direction in which he jerk his sword causing the blade to tear into him and his opponents backside. This jutsu causes damage to both shinobi but since Ka has thick armored scales on his backside the jutsu isn't nearly as effective. While on the other hand can put the opponent in a critical state.


    [b]Weapon Template:


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    Name: Croc
    Quantity: 1
    Rank: C-S
    Appearance:
    Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Ivy-blade
    Special Abilities/Characteristics: Ka's weapon is an altered version of the Ivy Blade. The blades of this sword are dangersouly sharp. They will cut through anything that is of D Rank and below. This blade is extremely dense causing it to resist more damage than a normal sword.
    Origin: The sword has an unknown origin but there are many legends about it, one particular legend would say that this sword curses whoever wields it, particularly the Water country ANBU wielders since this blade is made from the finest steel, though most ANBU's die a horrific death, the blade itself passing to another ANBU user, and so, it was passed on to Otomichi when he has become an ANBU, serving him well since it was wielded by him in every single missions he carried out as an ANBU, always stained in blood when Otomichi would return to his village, bringing along the new legend about it. "Whoever wields the horrid blade will be successful in his journey of bloodshed lest he becomes this accursed blade's victim.", implying that in order to get keep the "supposed" curse in bay, Otomichi will have to kill, kill and kill, having to stain it in the blood of his victims.
    Some speculate that Ka was the reason Otomichi betrayed his village and become a Missing nin, others speculate further that Otomichi reason of becoming a Missing nin is to kill people without a limit he had when he used to be an ANBU.

    ]Name: Bow
    Quantity: 1
    Rank: D
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    [td]Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Wood_Bow_and_Arrow
    Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
    Origin: Simple oak wood bow carved by Ka's father as a momento of him.

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    Name:Arrows
    Quanity 20
    Rank: N/A
    Type: N/A
    Natural Abilities: Single shot arrows. Carved by wood with a sharp metal tip.

    Name: Concealed Mouth Ember
    Quanity 5
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Fire
    Natural Abilities: When going into battle, a ninja may store a small combustible ember in their mouth. The ember must be bitten to be activated. The ninja can then spit the ember at a combustible substance to help ignite it

    Name: Exploding Pouch
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Fire
    Natural Abilities: A variation on the exploding note, these small pouches can be attached to a target and then explode a few seconds later.

    Name: Exploding Smoke Grenade
    Rank: N/A
    Type:
    Natural Abilities: When the pin is pulled on this grenade, the result is a large explosion and the release of smoke. This allows the ninja to carry out their manuevers in secret.



Background Information

    History:
    Pre-Academy
    Ka was born in the Village of Iwagakure. There, he learned everything he knew, and still is. He has sworn to protect his village even though if it meant risking his life. That seemed to be a tradition in the Surogawa family. During the birth of Ka, his Parents had promised to raise him up to be a great Shinobi, one that knew the laws of a Shinobi, and would never think to break them. One that would never betray his village, and hopefully the next kage; Ka Surogawa

    At a tender age, (3) Ka was taken to his Father's training grounds by his Mother to watch. Ka was just a child, and knew nothing of what his Father was always doing there. All what his Father did at that time never seemed to gain his interest. Nothing but his Father's vicious techniques. The stab, pummblle, and puncture and so on. It seemed Ka was often interested in swords. Why he was interested in this harmful substance was unknown to those around him, but would soon be revealed later in his future.

    Academy
    Today, was the day Ka was to be enrolled in the Shinobi academy. Where he would learn the rules, and ways of the Shinobi. Today, Ka turned Seven years old, and his Father thought now was a good time for him to be enrolled in the Academy. After all, he was already Talented, and could defeat most of the students who were already enrolled in the Academy thanks to the teachings of his Father.

    Ka was beaming with joy. Today, would be the day he would prove to everyone in the village that he had what it took to become a great leader, and the next Mizukage; a powerful Shinobi. He took his first step into the classroom, sat down, and listened to what the Teacher had to teach him. He was intrigued by all the teachings. It seemed his Father had been holding back on a lot, but that didn't matter, that was what he was here for. If his Father had told him all he knew about being a Shinobi, then there would be no need of going to the Academy. It would just be a repetition of all what he had been thought at home, and he was glad his Father had held back.

    Ka was a good listener. He listened very well to all what the Teacher had to say. He took notes down, and practiced all what he had been thought at school at home, and even learned more about what he had been thought at home whenever he asked his Father. He was now ready for the next step of becoming a great shinobi; The Genin Exams.

    Genin
    The Genin Exams was an Exam, as already known as. It was the time when an academy student matured into an even great Shinobi. A Genin, the second least rank in the Shinobi rankings. Ka participated in it, and passed with flying colors. His Father, mother, and relatives were proud of him. He was the first in the line of the Ka family to pass the Genin exams in one try, already making him a prodigy in his family. He was going to be the one that would surpass his Father, the strongest Family member at the time.

    After obtaining the rank as a Genin at the age of Eleven, Ka's Father knew it was time for Ka to be given training. Prepare him for the next big step of completing his (Ka's) dream to become the next Mizukage. The Chuunin exams. Now, was also the time when his Father, Mother, relatives would find out why Maraku was interested in the substance fire, and more. Ka was taking the Elemental test. The Elemental test was when a Shinobi was to find out which Element, out of the five; Wind, Fire, Water, Earth, and Lightning, the Shinobi held within him. The Shinobi could also hold two of the five elements within him, and ONLY two if Lucky. Those who held one at Genin were of no difference. It just meant they would find out their second element at a higher rank; Jounin. Ka found out he held only one element within him. Water element. A destructive combination. This element could destroy an entire village if the shinobi who held them weren't careful with it. Ka's Father was happy his son had this same element as he did, and thus proceeded to teach Ka all the techniques he knew for his rank. (Maraku's rank.)

    Role-Play Sample:
    Xylo had passed the first two tests beautifalily and his next test would be his hardest. His opponent would be one of the more talented genin in the exam. Yuki is the genins name, and Xylo expected the ninja to fight her best. The injuries from the last exam had slowly healed but the scars and the pain would never leave. The rest had been good for Xylo, the hype had not affected his sleep after spending his days day in Konoha.

    On his entrance into the exam battle field he felt an all too familiar chill down his spine, Xylo had done his research on the battle field and the history of it was enough to unnerve any man. Any man who didnt know how to steal his mind from fear. The rusted metal parts lying around the the field froom a previous fight and the suspecious walls that are supposed to have spikes inside them, Konoha had been incredible in the exams so far and he didnt expect to crap out now. Whatever happened in this test, Xylo knew that he had to make sure his emotions and frustration didnt get ahold of him and make him lose control.

    It's was then when a sudden chill ran down his spine and his knees buckled. The world suddenly went defeningly quiet. Each step was measured and carried a sense of purpose. Each echo ripped mercilessly across the virgin void of the silent world like a spiteful demon from the darkest depths of hell. The crowd was so intense the wall of the arena were shaking as if it was an earthquake.

    The young genin calmly scanned the area with no haste. There wasn't much to see really and it was obvious what the holes in the walls were for. He then stopped, his view rested in the eyes of his opponent. Time stopped. Xylo and Yuki were in a world of their own now. Round two of the chunnin fighting exams. One person had to win, but neither were looking to lose. Both eargly wanted to be chunnin and prove to their new kage they were worthy shinobi and had even the possibilities to become Jonin.

    Xylo broke eye contact for a moment and then put his hands in his pockets. In them he held some kunai, a few scrolls, and explosive tag. Then their eyes met again. Xylo would then try to sent images of Yuki's brutal death into her mind, which would only serve to further fuel the mindbulging terror and intensify the fight even more.

    He would then pull out a scroll and prepair it just in case of any soon incoming danger. One of his puppets were on his back already to go, but Xylo decided to start the match with out it. Holding one scroll within his hand he raised the other to solute his opponent. Congradulations on making it to the second round. I wish you the best. Xylo infromed this to his opponent considering they were both from Suna. He then would hold a single handsign and prepair for the worst. I know we're from the same village but I still must try to advance to the next round. Therefore I'm not going to take it easy and I must defeat you Xylo then waited holding his handsign. He was waiting for his opponent to retaliate.


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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptySun 28 Feb 2010, 10:46 pm

You need to get your clan approved before your charry can be, it will need to be more involved then it stands now. Post in the Clan app section. Please also remove unnecessary code
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done and no clan
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptySun 28 Feb 2010, 11:04 pm

I noted that you have that your main specialty is Kenjutsu while your sub is Ninjutsu, but it appears to be the other way around. You have a lot more Ninjutsu than Kenjutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 01 Mar 2010, 6:09 pm

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Ka has the traits of a crocodile. He can see in the dark, through muddy waters, swim at increadible speed, and has increadible strength. Bright lights will not blind him cuz of his extra layer he has upon his eyeballs. He can hold is breath beneth water for extreem long periods of time(20 post). His jaws and teeth are strong enought to bite through the toughest tree. The scales on his body provide an extra source defense. Ka is also exrteemly stealthy when he lurks he is hardly every noticed. Ka can also sense heat

Grammar. Commas are missing, and "cuz" is not an actual word.

Your clan itself needs to be posted in the clan application area for approval if it has not been done already.

Your weapon needs an origin. If it dries out, does the weapon get weaker?

Physical appearance needs ATLEAST 2 Paragraphs if there is no picture, as stated in the template.
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyFri 05 Mar 2010, 11:35 pm

DONE
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptySat 06 Mar 2010, 3:35 am

Clan still needs to be placed in the clan applicatin center and approved the first.
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptySat 06 Mar 2010, 4:14 am

done

No clan jutsu

all the more reason for me to train
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 2:46 pm

With your sword, it makes no sense. It can extend up to 5m at Genin rank, and becme sharper and dense. That makes sense. The following doesnt.

The more dense the sword gets, and the longer it gets, the heavier it gets. By the time you reach 15 ft (5m), with how dense im assuming you plan on making the sword, just because you added that little tid bit in there, the Genin, even with your enhnaced strength, would not be able to lift the sword. Or if you could, you would not be able to swing the sword, as it would be too unbalanced.

As for S-Rank, no. 25 meters is 75 feet. Chakra enhanced, super strength, whatever you wanna throw, noone will be able to cntrol that sword.

Since its going to be brought up, Tsunade only picked up Gamabunta's sword and brought it down. No swinging or normal swordplay involved.
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 8:32 pm

ok ok I shortened the blade for all ranks

also i took out the dense part for that was a complete mistake. I didn't even know it was there.

Btw my blade isn't as heavy as the normal blade because it's not solid all the way through.
(look at the link you can see what i'm talking about.) So lifting it wouldn't be as much of a problem as you make it seem.

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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 8:42 pm

A hollow blade will cause many problems in battle... just saying.
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 8:44 pm

yes i kno but it's ok that why it is dense

(it doesn't get sny more dense than it is

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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 8:54 pm

Well, Density isn't the issue here... you see, that gap in it, where it's hallow is going to cause some pressural damage to the blade. If you hit something really really hard with it, the blade would probably crack in half. Beyond that, something of such high density is going to weigh an aweful lot, hallow or not.
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 8:56 pm

Oh, needs 2 paragraphs looks

Your KKG isn't anywhere near well enough explained, and you have to broad a range of kkg abilities. They're all basic, but theres nothing that relates them.
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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 8:59 pm

ok Pat ur telling everyone about the secret to my weapon stop it now please ^_^

also my kkg is more well put in my clan app

shud i erase the one on this app

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PostSubject: Re: Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) Surogawa, Ka [Kirigakure Genin] (finished) EmptyMon 08 Mar 2010, 9:17 pm

yes. use teh one on your clan app.

and they cant use the secret intentionally. that would be metagaming
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ok so this character is approved right
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"Oh, needs 2 paragraphs looks"
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DONE again
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This hasnt been fully approved. Take out the soldier pills, and wait for someone to actually say approved before requesting rank change.
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ok done sorry I'm erasing my rank request now
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Link your clan, which was approved, under the clan section of the template.
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Ka's weapon is an altered version of the Ivy Blade. The blades of this sword are dangersouly sharp. They will cut through anything that is of C rank and below (w/o added water).If water ia added this sword sharpness starts to cut through that of B rank. This sword also extends itself with flexibility(Think snake like) from 3ft to a length of 3meters depening on rank.( This sword gets sharper and more water touches it.) However when dry this weapon is just a normal blade. This blade is also extremely dense causing it to resist more damage than a nornal sword

If water is added to a weapon, it shouldnt get sharper. Thats a wind attribute.
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