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Clan Name: Kuromizu Clan
Clan Location: Kirigakure no Sato - Hidden Mist Village | The Kuromizu Clan is officially recorded to be located within the Village Hidden in the Mist. However, the only known member of the clan located there is Roxas Kuromizu. However, as the leader of the clan, his location dictates the location of the clan.
Clan Traits: Some distinctive physical features that members of this clan possess are often attributed to water. This includes their wavy black hair and their deep ocean-blue eyes. Furthermore, their skin is an olive-type pale color that looks as if they've never had a tan in their life. Members of the clan much prefer the cold, due to their natural affinity to water, and their pale skin attracts very little sunlight. Another thing is how rather light their build is. This is due to their constant swimming and inhabitance in bodies of water. They have built up more of a dynamic, sleek body rather than a bulky, tough body that would be more resistant to the water when they are swimming.

Traditionally, members of the Kuromizu clan resent the villages and for the most part, any form of government. They will often reject anyone in the clan who affiliates themself with any of the villages. That being said, almost every member of the clan lives outside of a village and are loners. Another thing is their cuisine. They look at fish and other underwater creatures almost as if they were relatives. Because of this, they refrain from eating any fish or the such. However, they still enjoy eating foods such as rice and ramen as their primary source of protein and energy.

Kekkei Genkai: The Kuromizu Clan is a clan that centers primarily around the element of Water, members of this clan are particularly skilled in the usage of this element. They've mastered water techniques to the point where they require absolutely no hand-signs to utilize the technique and shinobi of at least Jounin in rank are able to utilize water-based techniques for half the chakra cost. However, this is far from the only abilities that they possess. Members of the Kuromizu clan are also blessed with a particularly unique type of elemental chakra. Rather than Suiton - Water Release, they're capabilities have further progressed to Buraton - Black Water Release. This means that any and all techniques they utilize of the Water Element will use a special type of water called black water. It is extremely dark and it is unable to be seen through.

Even though they are able to use Black Water, there is still the option to use the normal water element. This Black Water has more special characteristics to it besides being thicker and darker, however. (Though it is thicker, the user can still manipulate and control it just as easily as they could normal water.) This Black Water also has a chakra-sapping property that makes it ideal for combat against fire-based (or fire variations) techniques. Even the flames of Amaterasu would be extinguished by these black waters. Someone drenched in this water would feel themselves losing their chakra as they drift closer to death, making it extremely dangerous. However, the user is completely unaffected by the black water's effects, although other members of the clan still are.

Some more general abilities of the clan members are basically adaptations from excessive water usage and inhabitance. They possess high-speed swimming abilities that are fairly superb for humans. They are also able to breath underwater as long as it is black water. If it is normal water, they are unable to breath underneath it. Furthermore, some members can create and manipulate water at will from the moisture in the air. However, not all members of the clan possess the water manipulation portion of these abilities. The shinobi must be at least of Chuunin rank in skill or a B-class rogue shinobi.

Chakra Sapping- If a person other than the user is touched by the black water they will find that their chakra is being drained by it. Dependant on their rank, it can take a variation of time amounts before their chakra is completely sucked out. A D-rank shinobi takes only two posts to be killed by the chakra-sapping water. A C-rank shinobi takes only three posts to be killed by the chakra-sapping water. A B-rank shinobi takes four posts to be killed by the black water. An A-rank shinobi takes six posts. An S-rank shinobi takes nine entire posts. Despite the post length in order to kill a shinobi with the black water, the longer they are touching it the more it starts to take a toll on them. Even if it doesn't maintain contact long enough to kill, it will still drain chakra from them. It is impossible to drain a Jinchuriki of their chakra with this jutsu.

Weaknesses: Once the water starts to absorb a person's chakra it's effects will gradually diminish the longer it stays in contact. Even if someone were completely drenched in black water, the black water would easily dissolve and evaporate within three consecutive posts.

Secret Clan Jutsu:
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History:
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The clan first originated in the village known as Mizugakure no Sato. However, when the village began to exterminate dangerous clans with powerful Kekkei Genkais they effectively killed off a minority of the clan. However, the clan members fought back and managed to escape with their lives. From then on, they became a group of rogues that resented the villages, especially the village hidden in the mist. However, the Hidden Mist Village along with many allied villages hunted down the clan, deeming them as a 'threat' to the shinobi world, despite their peaceful nature.

They were repeatedly assassinated and hunted down like animals, leaving only 6 shinobi left who scattered across the map. Some went back to a village life, others simply remained living as rogues. It is unknown precisely whom these 6 are, with the exception of one. Roxas Kuromizu is widely known as the leader of the 'disbanded' clan, thus is very well known. Although currently the clan is scattered and separated, it is possible for them to come back together and reform the old clan under a single group of leaders and reproduce until the clan is revitalized.

Despite being the leader of the clan, Roxas disagreed with the fact that they should all live a rogue life-style. Instead, he lives as a loyal shinobi of the Hidden Mist Village. He returned after the onslaught of the powerful bloodlines ended and peace was restored among the remaining clans. He now hopes to bring all of his clan-mates back to Kirigakure no Sato so that they can once more become powerful weapons to be used by the Mizukage in future wars and to defend the village.

Clan Details: Open to Six


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PostSubject: Re: |- Kuromizu Clan -|- Black Water Clan -| |- Kuromizu Clan -|- Black Water Clan -| EmptyTue 25 Jan 2011, 12:15 pm

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Even the flames of Amaterasu would be extinguished by these black waters due to the fact that it would easily sap the chakra from the flames, weakening them, before putting them out.

Nope, remove please. You cannot absorb techniques with this unless it is water overcoming fire.

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Someone drenched in this water would feel themselves losing their chakra as they drift closer to death, making it extremely dangerous. However, the user is completely unaffected by the black water's effects, although other members of the clan still are.

Needs to be toned down, this seems a lot more powerful that the Aburame's techniques and considered it's water too makes the quantity a lot more overwhelming.

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They possess high-speed swimming abilities that are unmatched by almost any other human or animal.


Tone down, you cannot have all this and claim to be the fastest swimmers.

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They are also able to breath underwater just as easily as they would be able to outside of it, this includes black water, and are able to conjure and manipulate normal water and black water skillfully. However, not all members of the clan possess the water manipulation portion of these abilities. The shinobi must be at least of Chuunin rank in skill or a B-class rogue shinobi.

Tones, restrictions? Etc.

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Chakra Sapping- If a person other than the user is touched by the black water they will find that their chakra is being drained by it. Dependant on their rank, it can take a variation of time amounts before their chakra is completely sucked out. A D-rank shinobi takes only two posts to be killed by the chakra-sapping water. A C-rank shinobi takes only three posts to be killed by the chakra-sapping water. A B-rank shinobi takes four posts to be killed by the black water. An A-rank shinobi takes six posts. An S-rank shinobi takes nine entire posts. Despite the post length in order to kill a shinobi with the black water, the longer they are touching it the more it starts to take a toll on them. Even if it doesn't maintain contact long enough to kill, it will still drain chakra from them. A Jinchuriki takes six more posts added to the amount of their rank. Meaning that a D-rank Jinchuriki would take eight posts.

Jinchuuriki comment is unacceptable, this is way more powerful than the Aburame bugs because you left no alternative if you have been drenched, you cannot just dry off, one attack hits and you practically just let them die off, maximum tone down!

You need to explain HOW the water has this ability, because it's black isn't a substantial reason. You also need to explain the water, surely you'd need to carry it around in a gourd because you cannot create water out of thin air, you need some form of black water source, regular water cannot be formed into black water.

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They've mastered water techniques to the point where they require absolutely no hand-signs to utilize the technique and decreases the technique's chakra usage to half.


At Jounin rank, maybe it would be permitted to have a decrease, but not up to half. This clashes with my clans abilities which states practically the same thing.
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PostSubject: Re: |- Kuromizu Clan -|- Black Water Clan -| |- Kuromizu Clan -|- Black Water Clan -| EmptyThu 03 Feb 2011, 12:18 am

Just delete this topic, I've decided to go with something else.
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Very well.

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