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Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Renjiro

Senju, Renjiro

THE INFO.

Name: Renjiro Senju
Nickname: Renji
Age: Actual – 16, Looks 22
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Hair: Long dark brown hair which falls down to mid back length
Skin Tone: Slightly tanned - Ever so slightly brown
Eyes: Dark Brown
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 88kg
Body Build: Athletic build, bulky though and very little body fat which means his muscle definition is at its peak
Scars or markers: A single inch long scar across his left cheek

Usual Clothing
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His typically clothes are a typical white judo gi top (with a Senju clan symbol behind the back of the neck) with a hakama around his waist. He also wears a black sash (embroidered with gold like thread Senju symbols) tied around his hakamas to keep it on tight and keep his gi top closed.

Personality:
General:Wise, caring and considerate but always looks out for his team-mates and his village. He looks at everyone as equals but does look down upon those who don’t conform to the social norms. Also he is usually up beat and happy but always keeps a straight and stern face. However being a Senior Senju means that a ninja cannot show any emotion as it is a sign of weakness and means when dealing with official Senju business he can be a right hard-arse. Being a Senju brought up with strict guidelines and protocols to follow allows Renjiro to maintain his composed state even if in the most scariest of times and whilst in immense pain.

His eyebrows are normal but when annoyed or angry they furrow extremely. However he is quite easily prone to mood swings and flashes of anger. This is because of the constant pressure of being in a position of power and responsibility. Renjiro’s one and only fear is that he will become the last of his clan and thus the Senju’s kekkei genkai will die out. Renjiro, if crossed, can become a very horrid sight releasing his wood KKG to his fullest power.

When in battle his personality completely changes from a kind and caring person to a monster. He takes control and is unforgiving to all who do not follow his orders (unless they make sense). He makes sure every attack, offence and defence is well planned and compliments the combined power of the attack to ensure victory or a waste of an attack. Renjiro is one of the last remaining Senju with he wood manipulation kekkei genkai and as such is very cautious of his actions and engagements due to the massive bounty on his head.

Likes: Children's laugher, Defending the village and maintaining his perfect role model image
Dislikes: People who disobey him, The Shantakai and anything/anyone who threatens to disrupt the peace Kusagakure has

Clan: Senju Clan
Ninpō: 'A tree is grown from a single seed. That seed grows into a tree with nourishment from those around it. When it matures it produces seeds to produce more trees. This is the circle of the Senju Clan.'

THE NINJA.

Origin: Kusagakure
Affiliation:Kusagakure
Rank: Chuunin
Specialties:
Main Ninjutsu
Sub Fuinjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Water, Earth and Wood (KKG)
Combat Style: Long range 10 - 25m, prefers to attack from shadows using clan jutsu. If long range stealth is not available then close range doton jutsus will be used with suiton support. His signature jutsu is his Mokuton No Jutsu.

Special Characteristics:

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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

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Role-play Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu total 25/25

Non Elemental Jutsus
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Water Jutsus - 4
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Earth Jutsus - 3
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Funinjutsus - 3
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Cannon KKG jutsus not listed in clan jutsu list 7 in clan list 1 here - total 8
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Custom KKG Jutsus Custom kkg - 7
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Items
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] EmptyFri 25 Mar 2011, 3:35 am

Range of water clone is 10m

Rising stone spears needs a lengthier description

Mud is a combination element, I believe, so you'll need to change many of your earth based jutsu

EDIT IN BY ADAM: You cannot start as Exp.Chuunin it is not a starter rank, please alter to Chuunin.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] EmptyFri 25 Mar 2011, 10:44 pm

Redone - completely editted jutsus so use cannon list except for mokuton jutsus
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] EmptySat 26 Mar 2011, 8:29 pm

Lol, sneaky edit, Adam xP

I wouldn't mind seeing a little bit more in your personality, as a chunin
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Done but added 2 special characteristics due to update in rules
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] EmptySat 26 Mar 2011, 9:00 pm

Chunin must be within the 16-24 age range.

More description on Combat Style: Include strength, weaknesses, tragedy, how they fight, etc. Should be in paragraph form.

Remove all your A-Rank techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] EmptySat 26 Mar 2011, 9:01 pm

Is your roleplay sample always going to be that long? Remember we want an average, there is no need to impress =]
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Chuunin's main arsenal are C with B ranks however can utilise A ranks just like how Konins can use B ranks.

As for age range ... Its acceptable to be 14 and a chuunin if its explained in your history

Combat style expansion ... done
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] EmptySat 26 Mar 2011, 9:08 pm

Pattycakes wrote:
Is your roleplay sample always going to be that long? Remember we want an average, there is no need to impress =]

sarcasm? Or serious?
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Serious, I don't know how large you post, if that's not the usual length, don't post it. Alot of people tailor their RP sample to look larger than normal. I'm just wondering if that's your average.
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500 - 700/750 words ... give or take the topic I'm in ...
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Chuunin's main arsenal are C with B ranks however can utilise A ranks just like how Konins can use B ranks.

As for age range ... Its acceptable to be 14 and a chuunin if its explained in your history

Combat style expansion ... done

I suspect you didn't read the guides.

Konin can only utilize one B rank because they are in between Genin and Chunin and thus are permitted one. The only type of Chunin that can use A ranks are Experienced Chuunin, which you are not. You are a pure Chunin, and according to our Ranking System you are only permitted up to B-Rank Techniques.

As for age, don't mean to prude but we do have an age system for a reason. Chunin must be 16-24, if your history doesn't abide to that, I suggest slightly altering it.
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Good find ES, I'm not sure how I missed that
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Changed ... replaced A ranks with new jutsus of B rank or lower
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] Senju, Renjiro [Kusa Chunin] EmptySat 26 Mar 2011, 10:10 pm

I appreciate that Renj, thanks for removing the A-Ranks like we've requested. But I fear you didn't respond to my second issue which is your age. Correct that.
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done sorry forgo to do that - editted three places in history to accommodate the change in age
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Unapproved, I'm seriously upset with the lack of reading the systems, you have more jutsu that the system permits.
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I have 17 jutsus excluding Kkg and academy jutsus. By my reading of the rules academy jutsus and kkg jutsus didn't count towards the 25 (chuunin) jutsu limit ... sorry if i have misunderstood
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Done and editted
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